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Post by psychojr on Jun 17, 2010 12:11:12 GMT -5
i thought of this awhile back. its about how the gangs starts out before the war. like how they met and and what they did befor they formed the toon patrol. im ganna play the part of junior who is a rich weasel and brother of psycho.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 17, 2010 12:30:36 GMT -5
prollog
it was Jan 5 1941 and i just in herited the family, luxery hotel. my brother Psycho was to be my assitent and partner in the bussiness, but he had other plans. you see he was insane, so we had to treat him with reaspect, so i made him my partner. we hired afew wokers one that stood out was a weasel named Wheezy, he came from a family who had an act in crime. he was givin a second chance and he chose to work for me. it was good times back then, but like back then there were gangs taking over terretories. the one in my district was Don Salarie and his right hand man or should i say weasel called Smarty and his partner in the MAFIA Greasy. good men, and good friends, if you paid up that is. but in the end the war came and i was shiped out to serve my time and the hotel sat in ruins.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 17, 2010 14:48:02 GMT -5
Cool start. It makes me curious.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 17, 2010 14:58:42 GMT -5
Keeeeeeeewwwlllll.  . |
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Post by psychojr on Jun 17, 2010 17:01:33 GMT -5
thanks you two ill post more on monday maybe.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 20, 2010 9:53:43 GMT -5
chapter 1
it was 10am sat jan 5 1941, i woke up to find a note saying that i and my brother psycho should head over to the old hotel when we got up. it was alittle foggy that mornin and it was silent all you could hear was the birds chirping and crikets. we got ready and headed over the the hotel, it was just down the raod. you see i didnt own a car but that was all about to change, you see it was my brothers andmines birthday to day, and i didnt say a word to him about it either. as we wlked down the raod we passed the new luxary hotel, our fathers latest dream has yet to come true.
me. hey brother, uh happy birthday.
psycho. you two. as he put his arm around me
me. it looks like the hotel is finaly done
psycho. yeah it is.
we walked passed it and turned the corner and saw that we had campany over at the old hotel. as we walked into the hotel father was talking the the biulding instuctore.
reaper. ah boys!, happy birthday. oh this is tom the biulding instuctore.
tom. nice to meet you two.
me. thanks you two.
psycho hey dad, um so whats our gift if you dont mind.
psycho was always jumpy when it came to pressents. but neither less our father was good to him as he told us.
reaper. this hotel
me and psycho. huh?
reaper. this hotel is now yours you two so i hope you share it 50% each.
me. i was stuuned to hear him say that this hotel was in the family for a long time.
psycho. what your kiding
reaper. no im not, i just got handed the keys to the new hotel.
me. oh wow your dream has finaly come true.
reaper. oh um i took the liberty and hired 4 new workers for you. oh here they are now.
4 gental man walked in and stood at attention witch means they must be military as well. i took a good look at them as i noticed one of them was also a weasel.
reaper. ok state your names starting with you.
soo. names soo, im a registerd nurse and im a nurse on a navy medical ship.
mike. Sergeant Mike U.S army 1st infantry. engineer
jon. PVT jon Navy chef.
reaper. this one is here only to work hard labore. he was givin a choice work or go to jail.
a blue weasel stepped up.
wheezy. names wheezy, used to be in the Mafia but was arrest and charged with holding a tommy gun. i was the don's body gaurd. also i was a lagal assitent as well.
me. well nice to meet all of you.
reaper. ok listen up these two are my sons theyr your boss's.
workers. yes sir.
reaper. oh boys um just so you know if two other weasels come in here asking for the payment give them a share of 20k ok its for pertection they usely come in here every month.
me. ok
as every one went to work i asked if my brother could come up the office so that we could discuss who gets what part of the hotel.
me. brother what half do you want?
psycho. back half that way i get half the causino
me. ok fiar enough. and the 4 VIP suites 2 we'll take and the other two rent out.
psycho. ok we have a deal. as he gets up and leaves.
i look over the paper work to verify our changes and make sure we have guests coming.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 20, 2010 18:37:32 GMT -5
crap now comes the hard part. chapter 2 oh yeah.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 20, 2010 19:27:37 GMT -5
Ooooh, it's getting interesting.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 20, 2010 19:30:48 GMT -5
How interesting. So far, so good. Nice chapter.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 20, 2010 19:36:50 GMT -5
thanks ill post ch2 tomorrow maybe.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 20, 2010 20:03:31 GMT -5
Cool nice chapter, got the hotel.
This makes me think that there's gonna be some conflict. Don't know why, but it does.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 20, 2010 20:04:24 GMT -5
Ditto, syrup, ditto.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 20, 2010 20:08:22 GMT -5
oh it will between the mafia gangs.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 22, 2010 8:58:01 GMT -5
if wodering about what type of hotel it is heres a pic of it.  |
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Post by psychojr on Jun 22, 2010 9:30:39 GMT -5
chapter 2
"its been a month since that day, and i have made millions, well me and my brother have. the hotel was doing great we had rich and some poor families stay here, and we even had famouse HollyWood actors stay here witch realy ment alot to us here. although we havent seen the two gang members yet i assume we will see them somday in the next week. oh and there a small leak in the boys bathroom do you know anything about it? your two boys junior and psycho"
i wrote to my fther just so he would know how we were doing. we hardly saw each other any more do to the hotels. my brothe came up to me and asked what i was doing.
psycho. brtother whats that?
me. ah just writting a letter to father so he knows how were doing.
psycho. i see. as he pickes up a razore off his desk and uses it to open the maile he recieved. oh brother i almost forgot, the weasel called wheezy is do for his permotion and he's off paroll now.
me. thats good now he can get piad for his work if he wants to work here still.
just then there was a knock at the door as i walked over and opened it. two tall weasels one in green and the other in a pinkish white suties stood beore me.
me. can i help you.
boss. im here for the rent.
psycho. ah your the two weasels our father told us about.
2nd weasel. your father, let me gues your new here.
me. yeah.
boss. well then im smarty and he's greasy. we work for the don. every motnh about this time one of us will come and pick up the rent. the rent is 20k and no less but if you have trouble just tell us and we'll see what we can do.
greasy. so your reapers kids huh. so whats your names
me. my name is junior and his is psycho.
smarty. ok we will be back in one month.
they leave with the money as i and my brother go back to work. we thought we would talk to wheezy but on the way down smarty came up to us.
smarty. oh just so you know. we do offer pertection agianst other gangs. so if you need help with a sertnet guy or group just call.
me. will do and thanks.
just then wheezy came up behind smarty and pulled out a tommy gun.
wheezy. well if it aint my old boss.
smarty turns around and see him. well wheezy this is a surprize. what are you doing here.
wheezy. i was put on paroll
me. interrups. not any more your paroll officer called your free to go unless you want to work here as our legal advisory
wheezy. ill think about it but now im taking a break. lets go smarty.
as they leave i start to question myself about wheezy does this mean he was in the mafia before. as i thought my brother was fixing the leak in the bathroom. i went over there to lend him a hand.
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