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Post by Syrup on Jun 22, 2010 13:53:23 GMT -5
Hm, a secret of Wheezy's. Nice chapter.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 22, 2010 14:11:05 GMT -5
thanks and yeah wheezy was apart of the mob before he was arrested.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 22, 2010 15:02:09 GMT -5
*gasp* THAT NO GOOD!!! SMARTGUY IS SUCH AN A**!!!
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Post by psychojr on Jun 23, 2010 9:56:28 GMT -5
yeah he is. but then agian he wouldnt be called smartA$$ if he wasnt.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 28, 2010 7:10:38 GMT -5
chapter 3
its been afew hours since then and my brother was just getting the leak fix after afew problems we maneged to stop it and open the mian restroom. wheezy came back after awhile and got right to work since he now gets paid for his hard work, im glad he decided to stay. he even put in a good word for us to the don, witch helped us out big now since alot of his men stay here. although mike our engineer was fixing the bioler so there could be hot water on the south side of the hotel everthing was great.
jon. junior sir.
as i turned around to see jon coverd in greese
me. jon!! what happen? as the guests look at us.
jon. the oven blew, its not serious but i cant cook in it till we get a new one.
me. ok, go get cleaned up and ill see what i can do.
jon. yes sir. as he runs up the stairs to his room.
i walked over to the main desk to help guests find there way around. as i was doing it Soo came up to me.
Soo. have you seen jon?
me. up in his room he had a problem with the oven.
soo. is he ok?
me. i think so but can you go check on him and make sure he doesnt have any burn marks on him?
soo. sure thing.
i went back to work untill psycho yelled for me. i ran over to him and saw that the leak busted agian and this time it was bad.
me. call a plumber.
psycho. ok will do, try to slow it down if you can.
me. ill try
i jump in the water and realize just how hot it was, i burned but i knew if i couldnt slow it down and it reaches the biolers this hotel could go boom. so i acted fast and grabed the ripped pants floating in the water, i used it the to wrap around the leak then i tied it off hoping it would hold till the plumber gets here.
psycho. plumber is on his way.
me. good now help me out.
he gives me a hand and pulls me out.
me. thanks,... man
psycho your welcome. as we look at the flooding.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 28, 2010 13:09:44 GMT -5
XD!!! How did ripp pants get in there?!?
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Post by psychojr on Jun 28, 2010 13:16:57 GMT -5
ah machanic tools and stuff are stored in ia clset next the toilot stalls.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 28, 2010 13:22:02 GMT -5
XD.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 28, 2010 23:07:42 GMT -5
Nice chapter.
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Post by psychojr on Jul 14, 2010 11:57:58 GMT -5
chapter4
september 11, 1941
it was about 3pm on friday but this was differnt cuase today was wheezy permotion and birth day. so while we kept it to our selves for the moment, my brother came by to tell me that smarty and a new guy was here for the rent. now that we had our reputation up the don cut the rent by 50%, witch was nice do to the hard times of the depression. so we had to cut back on prices and stuff. the don was even nice enough to cut us a deal by paying us 10% of the stock that we sold in the bars from his ware house. oh sure we had to cut back on what we sold but 10% these days is pretty hard to come by. smarty even gave us a small token of gratitude and helped us out and put out a good word to all the town witch really drew in the crowds even around the holidays.
psycho. wheezy i need you to go and pick up some things if its ok with you. as he came up to him.
wheezy. not at all, what do you need?
psycho. handed him a note and the keys to the hotel truck
i was in the bar doing double shifts for the bar maids who were out sick today. it wasnt bad i liked it but wished they gave me a heads up notice so i could call in some one else to fill in but it was alright.
psycho. hows it going over here bro?
me. just fine nothing to much but,... but befor i could say the rest i was interupted by a tall elderly man.
Don. ah.. its nice to be here agian junior and psycho.
psycho. don... right over here we have a table ready for you.
me. you want anything sir.
don. sure ill have a canadiean whisky on the rocks.
me. coming right up.
as the don sat down i noticed this was no ordenarly visit, this was bussiness. as walked over to him i handed him his drink. a man came over dressed in white and he had another guy beside him carring a siut case. they sat down at the dons table and started to talk as i was cleaning up the bar. i couldnt help but over hear there conversation.
don. so what do i have the pleasure of you here.
scar. i want you to surrender your territory.
don. what makes you think i will surrender my territory to you.
scar. cuase your life is on the line. i got men all over this hotel and well this. his man hands him the siut case and he opens it and reaveals 900K. i think you would reconsider.
of course i new he wouldnt so i reached under the bar to grab my gun. but before i could grab it the kitchen doors flew open as two guys were thrown out by the chef.
chef. holding a rifle. get out of my kit....
just then ever one pulled out there guns and what was a peace talk now turned into a stand off. as scar looked at the don he pulled the trigger and let out a signal round as i pulled mine and shot him dead. bullets started flying every where, with no where to hide. smarty and the new guy tried to get the don out but was trapped. i jumped over the bar and ran over to them.
me. i got a armourd truck out back.
smarty. can we get to there.
me. yes, brother give me cover.
he nodded and started to shoot as we ran passed him. we went through the loading bay doors and found a crap load of enemy mobsters arround us
me. smarty here. as i gave him the keys he went over to the truck and started it up and drove over to us. i reloaded my gun and started to shoot back as the don got in the truck along with me and psycho. as we drove off i shot the propane tank witch blocked the entrence. as we made our excape.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 14, 2010 12:05:32 GMT -5
OH SNAP!!!
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Post by psychojr on Jul 14, 2010 12:07:22 GMT -5
im good aint i?
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Post by Fisi on Jul 14, 2010 12:14:32 GMT -5
Heehee, yuuuupppers.
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Post by psychojr on Jul 14, 2010 15:23:15 GMT -5
all i really need is rest and time with a good song and i can write this and be able to be detialed .
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Post by Fisi on Jul 14, 2010 18:08:57 GMT -5
La la la labamba? ;D
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