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Post by KrazyRandomness on Nov 14, 2009 20:56:50 GMT -5
Really nice chapters yet again; the new character (the alien guy) seem interesting. His name is Martin Torres. It's pronounced Mar-Teen Tour-Rez. It's Spanish. His name is copyright of a real person I know and *cough* have a crush on.
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Cobrawolf
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Post by Cobrawolf on Nov 20, 2009 0:24:23 GMT -5
This fanfic anyways. I hope more comes
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Post by Fisi on Nov 20, 2009 6:27:24 GMT -5
Thanx Cobrawolf. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 21, 2009 6:59:22 GMT -5
Chapter: 18
"NEXT STOP!!!" Vidia yelled.
Everyone heads shot up and looked at the land. As the ship stopped, everyone got off.
"Iraq." said Vidia.
"Seriously, how is she doing that?" Jeff asked.
"I told mate, talent." said Vidia.
Maria then heard something. They stared at her with their brow cocked.
"Uh, is your friend, ok?" Martin asked.
Shelbi shrugged. She then began to run to where it was coming from. Confused, but they followed her anyway. When she stopped, they hid behind the trash before they saw a couple of thieves threatning this poor old lady and the little boy.
"Man, we have to do something." Banzai trying his best to whisper.
"But what can we do?" Meg asked.
"I know what I'm going to do." Logan said, then ran to the thieves and then he form into a Wild dog.
He snarled at them making them taking steps back. They groaned and some slapped their foreheads, as they watched Logan who is about to attack.
"THAT IDIOT!!!" Shelbi yelled.
"No wonder you called him "Wild dog boy"." said Martin.
"HEY! WE SHOULDNT BE AFRAID IT'S JUST A WILD DOG!!!" one of them yelled, then bravely swung his sword at him.
Logan jumped, making him miss. Then one came and swung his sword at him. Logan then yelled in pain as one of the thieves swung their sword at his arm. All of them came up to Logan and roped him to the ground so he wouldn't stand. Maria gasped, and then she formed into a hyena.
"C'mon, we gotta save him." said Maria.
They nodded. Jeff form into a cheetah, and ran as fast as he could to them and pounced. The hyenas did the same thing. Maria pushed one of the thieves away and scared them. She looked at Logan with eyes worry.
"Logan?" Maria asked.
"I'm ok." said Logan.
"No your not." said Maria.
She transform back to herself and began to untieing him. As she was almost done, Logan gasped.
"LOOK OUT!!!" Logan yelled.
She turned and saw one of them raising his sword at her, but then, the hyenas pounced on him. Shelbi quickly grabbed her dagger out and cut the rope. The hyenas growled at them and Jeff hissed.
"RETREAT!!!" one of them yelled, and soon they were all running away.
Logan began to transform back to himself, and so did Jeff. Jeff and Martin came and helped Logan up. The old lady and the little boy came.
"Thank you for saving me and my grandson." the old lady said.
"Your welcome." said Maria.
"Yeah, we're*wheezed* happy to help." said Vidia.
They then walked back to the ship.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 21, 2009 10:53:38 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 21, 2009 12:27:45 GMT -5
WOW good chapter that almost got bad for all them!
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Post by Fisi on Nov 21, 2009 14:01:33 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 22, 2009 8:20:43 GMT -5
Chapter: 19
"OW!!!" Logan yelled, as Maria was tapped his arm with a wet paper towel, washing the blood off of his arm in his bed.
"Calm down, it wouldn't have happened if you would have stayed put." said Shenzi.
"I got some of these fruits, but what does that help?" Shelbi asked, when she entered.
"It helps him heal his wound, Rafiki taught me this." said Maria.
Shelbi nodded and left the room. Maria took the bowl out on her lap, she then grabbed the grapefruits and began mashing it, then did the same with the bananas. She then puts her finger in it and then puts some on his arm.
"Logan why did you even do that in the first place?" Maria asked.
"Well...I just felt like it." said Logan.
"Well, that was stupid of you." said Shenzi.
"Yeah man." said Banzai.
As she was done, he sighed, as a sign that it was healed. Maria opened the door, letting Shenzi and Banzai out.
"Wait." said Logan.
Maria stopped and turned, then shut the door.
"Yeah?" Maria asked.
He stood up, walks towards Maria, puts his arms around her waist, bringing her closer to him.
"Thanks." Logan whispered on her ear, then kissed Maria on her neck.
Maria giggled a little, then both began embracing eachother. At the same time, Techna was licking him on the cheek. Shenzi and Banzai came to them. Ed laughed.
"Yeah, Maria and Logan are inside the ship." said Banzai.
He then lied down. Shenzi did the same as well.
"I still don't trust him though." Banzai muttered.
"Relax Banzai, he maybe used to be with those Wild dogs, but that doesn't mean he's a bad guy." said Shenzi.
"I know that, it's just that I don't trust him hanging with Maria." said Banzai.
Ed began laughing.
"Ed's right, you should hang out with Logan more, to understand him." said Techna, before she nodded.
Banzai rolled his eyes. Shenzi punched him on his shoulder.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 22, 2009 14:04:57 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 22, 2009 15:45:21 GMT -5
Great chapter LoL hats off to you!
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Post by Fisi on Nov 22, 2009 15:46:26 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 22, 2009 15:49:17 GMT -5
Chapter: 20
As the ship began to sail, Banzai began asking Killer for some advice.
"Yo, man, if you wanna talk to him just be cool." said Killer.
"You sure?" Banzai asked.
"Sure, dude, and you gotta have to talk cool too." said Killer.
They heard the door open. Maria and Logan came out and looked at eachother. She smiled while she crossed her arms, while Logan smiled too but was putting his hands on his back pockets. Banzai began to growl under his breath. Logan then began to look at the water.
"Now's your chance homie, now go man, go, go, go." said Killer.
Banzai walked to Logan. He noticed Banzai came, but didn't say anything.
"So whats up with the 411, man, I mean like I totally understand that your a little mad at me and all, and I also understand if I'm all up on your space, but you see, when Maria told me she went to the darkside of the Pridelands I was like "Oh no she didn't", then when she told me your the guy that can form into a Wild dog, I was like "Oh no he ain't". You get what I mean?" Banzai asked.
Logan eyes widen. He then made a sheepish grin, then turn to see if anyone heard all of that. They did. They looked at Banzai with their brows cocked. Killer closed his eyes and groaned.
"I'm not going to ask." said Maria.
He then turned to Logan.
"What I'm trying to say is-." Banzai began.
"That your sorry for judging me and you wish to know me better." said Logan.
"Uh, yeah man, that." said Banzai.
"Well, apologies accepted but I can't tell you EVERTHING about me." said Logan.
"Ok, but why?" Banzai asked.
"Lets just say, something about me is personal." said Logan.
As they were talking, Maria and Shelbi looked at them, then at eachother.
"At least they're talking." said Maria.
Shelbi shrugged, not saying anything.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 22, 2009 15:59:51 GMT -5
Very nice chapter it's nice to Banzai talking to Logan
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Post by Fisi on Nov 22, 2009 16:03:51 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
Yup, it is nice for Banzai to talk to Logan.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 22, 2009 17:54:49 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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