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Post by Fisi on Aug 9, 2009 21:17:35 GMT -5
I know Techna maybe smart and Ed is well you know but she loves him very much.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 9, 2009 21:51:07 GMT -5
Chapter:20
Techna came back and was already night time Ed was there waiting for her.He ran up to her and gave her a lick on the cheeks.Techna stopped him.Ed was saying something.She knew what he said.
"Yes Ed everything is alright it's just that part of me is something you don't know,"said Techna.
Ed made a confused look Techna sigh and look at him.
"Ed I'm a witch dog I can cast a spell and magic stuff but I also wanted to say that,"said Techna who was about to finish her explaination until there was a loud noise and sounded a bit monsterouse like.
"Oh no, Ed RUN!!," she said pushing Ed to make him run.
He ran and look back at Techna.
"Go and tell the others don't look BACK!!,"Techna said.
Ed ran towards the others who were in the living room.Ed began speaking to them but when he was done they just go all WHAAAT?.
"Oh he's saying we are being under attack,"Banzai said.
Everyone understood then started screaming heading out but the whole area was covered with scary looking things.They had eyes glowing red while their teeth was sharp.Their paws were bigger and so was their claws.They look like panthers but were Red ugly looking Panthers and they were called the Sinners.
"Oh no we can't escape,"Maria said.
They came up grabbing the girls,the hyenas,and the dogs bringing them to their master.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 9, 2009 21:53:29 GMT -5
DUN, DUN, DUNN!!!!
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Post by Fisi on Aug 9, 2009 22:02:24 GMT -5
DUUUUUUUUUNNNNN.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 10, 2009 10:07:53 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey .
I heard a out you being sick just now or yesterday I don't know I was busy for coming back yesterday and I hope you feel better.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 10, 2009 10:10:14 GMT -5
Ditto for me.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 10, 2009 10:26:09 GMT -5
Chapter:21
They made it to the red cave and to pretty much tell you it wasn't pretty.The sinners were starving and you can tell cause there drulling while dragging Maria and her friends.
"Hey let me go you Stupid CAT!!,"said Shelbi.
The Sinner did a roar at her which made Shelbi shut.They went inside and all they see was bones and some lava and little steam coming there way.Up there was a throne with bones and someone wearing a southern red dress with black boots.
"Finally I can finally see my enemy,"Karleta said.
"Who are you ?,"Maria asked.
"Im Karleta,"Karleta said standing up.
She was a dark brown hair with red eye's that you can see that she was in the dark side.
"And I've been waiting for this day Maria,Sinners take them to the duguen and as for Maria take her to a cage I need to share a personal thing with her,"she said snapping her fingers.
The Sinners took Maria's friends to the dunguen while they took Maria to her cage.She had no flu why she was here but she knew it was something bad.Karleta came in.
"Sooo having fun?,"Karleta asked.
"What you want,"Maria asked.
"Oh nothing just your death and your Ruby necklace,"Karleta said charging at the necklace.
She grabbed the necklace and place up high as she was laughing evilly Maria saw the fullmoon and began to grow pain.She found sharp clawson her hand her body was beggining to grow fur and her mouth was growing aswell.She began to scream until finally her transformation was done and she became a part were hyena/wolf.
"YES VICTORY IS MIIIINEE!!," Karleta scream finally getting her revenged on her.
"Now Sinners bring her to the dunguen I think its time to meet her friends,"Karleta said leaving.
It was hard to control Maria but they took her downstairs to the dunguen.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 10, 2009 10:48:46 GMT -5
Give me my Tommy gun, I'll show her.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 10, 2009 10:51:34 GMT -5
Yeah you would.XD.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 10, 2009 11:14:46 GMT -5
Chapter:22
Meanwhile back at the dunguen the hyenas and Shelbi and the dogs were still in the dunguen.
"Get us OUT OF HERE!!,"Shelbi yelled.
"Theres no use we have to find a way out or Karleta well come and find some surprises for us,"Techna said who was infront of the scared Ed.
There was noises and the Sinners was there but a shadow lurk showing a bigger monster then them.
"What the heck is that,"Shelbi asked.
The shadow lurk showing a were hyena/wolf and it was not pretty.They scream as they knew try were about to get eaten by a were hyena/wolf.The Sinners brung the monster inside and let her go when they left.The monster ran towards them.It was trying to catch them but so far they were quick.It ran towards Shenzi.Shenzi was about to attack until Banzai jumped on it's back biting it until he stopped.It grabbed Banzai throwing him at the wall.Banzai made a recovery but then Killer jumped on it and did as well while Shelbi grabbed a near by huge stick and swung it at it's head.The monster was knocked out on the ground.
"Boy wait till the guys see this back home,"Killer said.
"Im right here and I don't believe,"said a mysteriouse voice.
"Whos there,"Shelbi said.
A dog came and it was a cocker spaniel with messy hair and shaved legs and paws.The cocker spaniel had spots on her and her eye's aswell.
"Oh greats another dog,"Shelbi said rolling her eye's.
"Meg what you doing here,"Killer said.
"Well I was about to ask the same thing,"Meg said holding a key.
"You know this dog?,"Banzai asked.
"Yeah back at New York she helps me get away from all kinds of trouble,"Killer said.
"And trust me he's already in enough already,"Meg said narrowing his eyes at Killer while opening the door.
"Ok let's go,"Shelbi said.
"Wait you can't go without Maria,"said Meg.
"We are going to Maria,"Shenzi said.
"But why when she is over their knocked out,"Meg said pointing at the knocked out were hyena/wolf.
Everyone was shocked they had knocked out there friend so now they had to turn her back but one question how and how to bring that huge thing up.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 10, 2009 11:27:30 GMT -5
Funny that I hit her with a stick. XD I have a bo staff at home, so I do know how to use one. XD
Omg...werehyena/wolf....a...werewona....or werehyolf...
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Post by Fisi on Aug 10, 2009 11:48:01 GMT -5
I like hyolf better XD you hit me with a stick.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 10, 2009 12:39:19 GMT -5
Chapter:23
"Oh my gosh Maria you're heavy,"Shelbi said carrying Maria.
But lucky for Shelbi she wasn't the only one carrying her friend.
"Be quiet we don't wanna be caught,"said Shenzi quietly trying to carry Maria.
Someone was coming and there were footsteps.
"Thats it I'm ending these what ya call it,"Shelbi said pulling out her Tommy gun.
She shotted the Sinners that were coming.She shotted them until there were no more.
"You had a freagen Tommy gun all this time and you didn't even use it ,"Shenzi said.
"What my Tommy gun needed to be loaded,"said Shelbi.
They finally got out and they heard a huge groan.Maria was awake and she looks mad and Karleta was there behind her.
"How dare you escape ,"Karleta said.
"How dare you be so ugly,"said Killer pouncing on Karleta.
Karleta shotted Killer with her red bolt.Killer was onto the ground with pain.
"Uh man there's no use,"Killer said getting up.
"Wait Karletas got Maria's necklace maybe if we put it on her neck maybe we can get it and put it on her neck to make her herself again,"Shelbi said having a idea.
"Not on my watch,"Karleta said making Maria charging at them.
Techna said some magic word to make Shelbi jump on Maria's back.
"Give me that NECKLACE!!,"Shelbi said already having enough.
"NEVER!!,"Karleta scream at her trying to get her off.
Shelbi pushed Karleta out of the way and grabbed the necklace Maria was hard to control but she got the neck but someone got hers.
"I won't let you ruined my plan,"Karleta said.
Karleta was strangeling her neck but Shelbi got the necklace on and jumped off.Maria was transforming back to herself with her usual clothing and her usual self.
"What happened?,"Maria asked.
"We will explain later now shouldn't we be finishing this?,"Shenzi said.
"Ok,"Maria said.
Then all of a sudden Maria turned into a hyena and charged at Karleta who she turned into a panther.They were both fighting.Both were biting and scratching butno one knows who was winning.Karleta got a hold of Maria then she found a liquid glass that was steam she grabbed it and poured it on her face.Karleta was screaming and melting and as soon as you know she was gone.
"Ready to go home,"Maria asked turning back to herself.
"YES,"everyone said.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 10, 2009 13:13:16 GMT -5
Chapter:24
The girls,hyenas,and dog were at the bababoa tree where Rafiki ,Simba and every animal in the Pride Lands.
"Thank you for bringing peace back to our home,"Rafiki said.
"Dont just thank me thank them for turning into myself "Maria said pointing to her friends.
"You hyenas help these girls and dogs,"Rafiki said.
"Yeah you got a problem with that?,"Banzai said.
"Well no I'm surprised well we are sorry for the things we said,"Simba said.
"Its ok now everythings back to normal,"Shenzi said looking at Banzai.
Banzai blushed and Techna looked at Ed which he blushed aswell.
"Shelbi the plane with you're parents are there waiting to head off to Austrailia,you dogs I'll bring you back home but this time with a home,and Maria here is you're lost family,"Rafiki said pointing to the two humans.
"There last names are Valiant and you will be going home,"Rafiki said.
Maria thought for a minute then turned to the Valiants.
"Only if I visit here to meet my hyena friends ,"Maria requested.
"Its ok you will come here everyday ,"her dad name Eddie said.
"And I wanna stay here with Ed,"Techna said.
"And I wanna stay here with my dad Banzai,"said Killer.
"Dad?,"said Shenzi.
"What he asked,"Banzai said.
"I like a Familyguy,"said Shenzi putting her head in his shoulder.
"You can take me back home Bye Killer I'll meet you back at New York,"Meg said going back to New York by Rafiki spells.
"Bye Meg,"Killer said.
"Bye Maria I'll see you sometime,"said Shelbi going to her next flight with her parents.
"Bye Shelbi,"Maria said waving her hand.
"Maria you may become a hero but you will learn some trick, a secret that you don't know, a favorite family member,love,and Kids but also you're worst enemy but you will soon become the next warior of Africa,"Rafiki explained.
"I can handle anything just like back there as long as I got my friends Im ok,"Maria said hugging her hyena friends.
Everyone laugh knowing that everthing will be alright for now as Maria will have more adventures with her family and friends.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 10, 2009 13:14:46 GMT -5
The End.
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