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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 5:03:10 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 5:36:22 GMT -5
Chapter:8
Maria and Shelbi found a tree.Maria came close the tree and sniff it to see if it was the right one.It was.So she digger away all the dirt and found her dead Wildebeast.Shelbi watched as the Wildebeast was carried on her back but she had a disgusted face on.
"Dont worry I carry the front you just carry the back,"Maria said trying to make her not disgusted.
Shelbi picked the back up and it was heavy but at least she has help.Maria looked back at Shelbi for a minute then she just realized she have something like a case on her back a guitar case.
"Whats that on your back?,"Maria asked.
"Oh that's my tommy gun,"Shelbi said.
"YOU OWE A FREAGEN TOMMY GUN?,"she asked again.
"Yeah I do my parents wouldn't mind anyway,"Shelbi said showing out her Tommy Gun.Maria was surprised she had never seen a gun like that before.
She was amazed how the gun look but she snapped out of it and move on.Shelbi put her gun away and did the same.
"So exactly where do you live?,"Shelbi asked this time.
"Up there,"Maria said pointing up at her home.
Shelbi was amazed at what she is seeing.They both came to the bamboo elevator and went up.When the elevator stopped there was a bamboo house, a bridge,and a slide.
They both went inside and Shelbi saw the inside of her house .She let go of the meat and as for Maria.She brought the meat to her hyena friends.The hyenas saw Maria and was happy when they saw there breakfest.
"Finally,"Banzai said.
"What been holding you guys back?,"Shenzi asked:
"Guys I want you to meet Shelbi,"Maria said pointing to her smoking.
The hyenas didn't say anything for a minute until all three broke into laughter.Shelbi got angry.
"Guys don't laugh it's not funny,"Maria said trying to make them stopped.
But they continued.Maria came to Shelbi with Killer in her arms.
"Sorry there hyenas they can't help themselves,"Maria apologized to Shelbi.
"Its ok it's not going to be funny anyway when there done,"Shelbi said calming down.
The hyenas stopped laughing and calmed down.
"Sorry about that my names Shenzi,this is Banzai,and Ed,"Shenzi said pointing to the other hyenas next to her.
Once they all stopped they started laughing.It ended when Marias laugh became a hyenas laugh.She covered her mouth.And everyone was watching her.
"Um I gotta go upstairs for something,"Maria said going up.
"Ok that was weird,"said Shelbi taking out another cigarette smoking.
Shenzi knocked her cigarette to the floor and look at her.
"Hey that was my last cigarette,"Shelbi said
"It doesn't matter you shouldn't be smoking you could kill us,"Shenzi said trying to make it clear.
Shelbi watched the female go backto her friends.She thought for awhile .
"Man I better get used to here if I wanna live,"Shelbi thoughted.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 8:03:58 GMT -5
Chapter:9 Maria went to her room to the batheroom where she can check out whats wrong.So far nothing she checks her tongue just to make sure but so far nothing. "Whats happening to me?,"Maria asked herself. Then she realized what Rafiki just said maybe the necklace was for tranformation and untransformation but the question with no answer is. "HOW DO I CONTROL MYSELF!!,"Mafia yelled. Shelbi was worry and ran upstairs to check if she was ok.But when she did she saw Maria sticking her tongue out and looking at the miror.Shelbi thought that was also weird . "Um you ok?,"Shelbi asked. Maria looked and there was Shelbi looking at her like she did something weird. "Uh yeah just making sure,"Maria said getting out of the batheroom. The two teenagers head out of Maria's room and started walking. "So how did you ended in here?,"Maria asked. "I was in the batheroom putting my silver earings on when the plane was going to crash so then there was another door open in the batheroom which sender me off here so then I crashed into something furry and then I realized that the furry thing I landed were the two hungry cheetahs that were after me,"Shelbi explained. She stopped and checked her ears to make sure and one of her silver earings were gone. "Ah man my parents are going to kill me ,"Shelbi said . "Uh how since we are here and there probably like waaaay over there,"said Maria. Shelbi realized that and began walking downstairs.The two girls went downstairs and were shocked when they saw already lots of bones in the livving room and Killer chewing one. "Man that was good,"Banzai said licking his chopes. Maria and Shelbi looked at them then Maria looked back at them. "Oh my gosh where do you get all of these bones?,"Maria asked the hyenas while picking up a piece of bone. "Oh sorry since we are gonna visit here we are gonna make ourselves at home you know like a envoirment thing I think,"Shenzi said still having a bone on her paws. "Shenzi,Banzai,and Ed you'll learn to love them,"Maria said. "Yup,"Shelbi agreed. ............................................................ Sort of like a Maria and Shelbi friendship bonding thing.  |
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 9:02:56 GMT -5
Omg I'm an experienced member .
Oh yeah Oh yeah.(Singing the cocaracha song).
Smartguy:Ok if this keeps up I'll twist you with this rugwrench.
Shenzi:Let her have her fun.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 10:38:12 GMT -5
Chapter:10
It became night time and the two girls,Killer,and the hyenas were out making a circle around the fire while Maria was telling stories.
"WoW,"Everyone said.
"And that's how the hyena got it's laugh,"Maria said ended the story.
"So do you know the joke that made the hyena laugh,"Killer asked.
"Nope but legend has it that only hyenas know cause they pass it on to generation to generation,"Maria said putting out a piece of stick and a marshmellow.
"Yeah right ,they only said that cause anyone who made that story up is supersticious and thinks hyenas are the only one that knows the joke,"Shenzi said then eating her marshmellow.
"Well hyenas aren't the only ones,villagers in Africa say that the joke that they once told was so funny but they didn't know that the hyena was their behind them when they were resting on a tree,"Maria explained.
"And whats the joke,"Killer asked.
Everyone came close for this one for Maria is about to tell the joke that will blow their minds.
"Why did the chicken cross the road?,"she said.
They all were not surprised like anyone could laugh that hard at that joke the three hyenas left while Killer and Shelbi still looked at her.
"Thats it why would that be funny?,"Shelbi asked confused.
"Yeah that joke is so old even someone as an old person wouldn't laugh at it,"Killer said.
"Well don't ask me ask the,WAIT where they go,"Maria asked looking for the hyena's.
Maria,Shelbi,and Killer heard some laughing behind the bushes.They came to the bushes and found Shenzi,Banzai,and Ed laughing.
"Well well I guessed that story was true,"Maria said putting a smirk on her face.
"(Laughing)Yeah yeah yeah I know you were right and I was wrong(laughing),"said Shenzi still laughing.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 10:43:27 GMT -5
Just in case the in YouTube go to the Joke and if you see a hyena then go there and watch the story.For some who don't know the story.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 7, 2009 10:45:00 GMT -5
This is great! Keep going with the awesome chapters. ^_^
XD, my parents wouldn't care about an earring. To tell the truth, I was a spoiled child, but I was polite. If I liked you. ^_^ Good job, though.
YAY!!!!!! Experince member!!!! Party!!!!
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 10:48:53 GMT -5
Yeah but I hope you'll forgive shenzi for the cigarette thing.
Btw-- you know Killer is a hyena/Dalmatian just in case.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 7, 2009 11:06:15 GMT -5
I know. ^_^
I would, at most, kill her, but I'll let her slide. XD
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 11:13:41 GMT -5
Chapter:11
In somewhere in the night there was a panther but this panther had red eyes.The panther ran towards a cave then slide on the ground until she made it to the red lair where she is listening the arguments of the three dogs with bat wings.
"No I'm telling her,"said the first one who is a brown dog with pink bows.
"No I am,"said the second one who is a white poodle with blue bows.
"Uh guys Karlatas back,"said the third one who is a brown Pomeranian with a red bow.
The three dogs turned as they see their panther boss coming back.
"Oh hi boss,"the second one said.
"Silence you had disappointed again,"Karlata said transforming into a girl with a southern red hat a dress and a black boots and gloves.
"But we did what you said we even got the girl fall off an airplane,"the first one said.
"But did she live exactly you couldn't even to the simpliest task like first off you wouldn't had kill the first girl victim name Maria in the first place but no she lived and I even sended alot of monsters to her and they couldn't even do it,"Karlata said it in anger.
"We will do better next time,"the second one said.
Karlata rolled her eyes like they would have done it better.All three dogs flew off into the sky while the third dog was flying in another direction.
"You coming Techna?,"the second dog asked.
"No I'm just gonna look around,"Techna said.
"Alright you better come back or the boss will kill you,"the first one said.
Techna landed on the ground and transforming into a regular brown Pomeranian with a red bow.She feeler that somewhere someone must have love her.
Meanwhile Maria heard something that was coming closer it was more of a howl.
"Whats up,"Shelbi asked.
"Someones coming,"Maria said.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 12:36:30 GMT -5
Chapter:12
It came closer and closer until Shelbi shrieked Maria grabbed a stick and was ready to fight until there was another dog out of the bushes.
"Please don't be alarmed I'm just a kind dog,"Techna said.
"Where are all of these dogs coming from,"Shenzi said.
"Hi my names Techna,"she introduced herself.
"Um hi I'm Maria and this is ,Shelbi,Killer,Shenzi,Banzai,and Ed,"Maria introduced.
Ed looked at Techna who he thought she was beautiful.Techna look away and blushed.
"Ok um how did you got here and why are you here,"Maria asked Techna.
"Well I got here when my owner lost me and I'm here to,"Techna was about to finish her sentence when suddenly there was two flying dogs after them.
"RUUUUN!!,"Techna said pushing Ed out of their way.
Everyone ran to the treehouse and Maria shut down all of the door and windows and to make sure everyone was ok she checked .Everyone was ok.But their was still outside throwing thunders at the house.
"WHY ARE THEY TRYING TO KILL US!!,"Maria asked.
"I don't know I just saw them coming,"Techna said.
Techna fetched something behind her and it was Shelbi's Tommy gun.
"Here this will work it has a special equitment to make them go away,"Techna explained.
Shelbi grabbed the Tommy gun and went outside shooting the two devil dogs.One of them got hurt and they could not take it so they flew off.
Everyone came out Maria unlocked the doors and windows and head outside as well.
"What was that about,"Maria said.
They looked out with silence then Shenzi broked the silence.
"Seriously where are these dogs coming from,"Shenzi asked.
Everyone looked at her with a look that is like a really look.
"Really after all that really?,"Shelbi asked.
Shenzi shrugged then left back inside.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 14:03:08 GMT -5
Chapter:13
Late at night Shelbi was out smoking until she saw Shenzi looking out.
"What you doing here?,"Shelbi asked.
"None of your buisness ,"Shenzi said.
Shelbi was mad at her and put her cigarette down.
"Thats it Shenzi you are the most unkindest ,meanest,and selfish hyena EVER!! What is up with you,"Shelbi yelled at Shenzi.
Shenzi was stunned she never heard those words before she was about to attack but she calmed herself down.
"Ill tell you why but once I tell you will you not tell anyone else,"Shenzi said .
"Ok,"Shelbi said.
"Good,it's my mom she loved me very much but I didn't have the chance to say goodbye when she died and when I was a hyena cub,"Shenzi said looking down.
"Sorry to hear that and I'll take back what I said,"Shelbi said.
"I guess I'm sorry to,you know you can't tell anyone,"Shenzi said.
"Um even Maria,"Shelbi said.
"Nah you can tell her besides I have a feeling that she knew,"Shenzi said then looking up.
Meanwhile Maria's room was Banzai and Killer sleeping together and Ed and Techna sleeping together.Maria was writing something about her day,her friends,and the hyenas.She turned off the light and went to bed.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 14:34:42 GMT -5
Thanks Spikey. |
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Post by Fisi on Aug 7, 2009 14:56:12 GMT -5
Chapter:13
Morning arrived and Ed was out picking flowers for Techna he ran to the elevator pulled the rope and went up.He ran to Maria's room where she is still asleep.Ed ran towards Techna and crashed.Techna was ontop of his head.
"Ed what in the world?,"Techna said in her usually British voice.
Techna jumped off and saw the flowers he had on his mouth Ed pushed it towards Techna then looked at her.Ed laughed even she couldn't speak his langueged she pulled out her animal languege book.And blushed when she found out that he said he really loved her.Techna jumped on him and licked his face.
"Oh Ed I love you to,"Techna said then kissing him.
Killer woke up at the sound of that then made a disgust face and then Banzai woke up.
"Eww yawk yo that's sissy stuff dude,"Killer said then sticking his tongue out making a disgust face.
"What you talking about it's great that Ed found a mate man besides I wish that I would have the couraged to say I love her,"Banzai said then sighing.
"And who the heck she is?,"Killer asked looking at Banzai confused.
"He he um I wouldn't want to mention names,"Banzai said.
"I know who he likes,"said Maria behind them who just woke up.
"Uh Maria please don't,"Banzai begged.
"OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH SHHHHHEEEEENNNNZZZZZIII !!!!!,"Maria yelled running downstairs.
"Oh No,"Banzai said running after her.
Shenzi saw Maria and look at her.
"Shenzi Banzai,"Maria began until she got knocked down by Banzai.
"Forget what she said,"Banzai said.
Shenzi shrugged and left.Maria giggled making Banzai turning his head to Maria.
"You know your being a little stubborn you know,"Banzai said making Maria giggled more.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 7, 2009 17:23:18 GMT -5
Aww, poor Banzai. XD
Good chapters, mon ami. ^_^
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