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Post by Fisi on Jul 31, 2009 21:30:25 GMT -5
Chapter :1
On the birth of Maria she was born in Africa and ever since that day she had an animal spirit and transformation a wolf and a hyena.But after a while the Humans took her away cause she can talk to animal's.Now she came with city cloth's but doesn't know what to do so she went to her treehouse which is really a big house and decided to look for an animal in danger but sadly there hasn't been.
"Man I wish I can at least save an animal just for once,"Maria said holding her goggles to see anything.
Then she heard laughing but not in a good way she saw a hyena trying to get out from a trap.Maria came out of her treehouse and ran to the hyena.It started to growl.
"Its ok I'm kind I can help you," she said making it calm down.
The hyena growled again but then it trust her.She opened the trap widely to free him then let go.The hyena was so happy it started licking it's face.
"Your welcome(giggling) so what's your name," she's said with a grin.
The hyena laugh she guessed that either his name was Ed or Fred .
"You don't talk like those other animal's do you ," Maria asked.
He shooked his head but sadly she felt bad but then she gave him something.
"Well it's ok my names Maria here have this bone," she said givving the bone to him.He grab it with his mouth.
"Are you lost ?,"Maria asked.
He nodded to the response.
"Well let me help you," she said walking towards to what he told her where he lives well tries to.
So the Ed that what she guessed and Maria head to his den.Meanwhile at the cave.
" Where is he,"Shenzi yelled.
"I told you we can't leave Ed by himself," Banzai said.
"Shutup c'mon he can't be far he is probably out there already finding prey but don't wanna share," Shenzi said heading out.
Sometime Shenzi is a pain in Banzai's behind but she loves it how a hyena gets mad and that the fact he loves her so the two started heading out looking for Ed.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 1, 2009 20:29:03 GMT -5
Chapter :2
Maria and Ed came to a cave it was full of bones she guessed that Ed must have eat this all by himself yesterday.Ed laugh telling her that he won't eat her.She was relief cause she didn't wanted to use her martial arts on him or the other.
"Ed do you live by yourself or,"Maria began almost finishing her sentence when she heard a femal voice yelling his name.
We guessed that was one of his friends he pushed her out of the way into the pile of bones.He make sured that she was hiden.
"There you are that's it no more hunting alone," Shenzi said .
"Yeah man do you know we've been looking for you everywhere espicially places we are not proud of," Banzai said.
The hyenas kept talking on how he should never be left alone.It ruined the conversation when Shenzi sniffed the air.
"You smell that," Shenzi said sniffing to the direction of the smell.
"Yeah in fact I do," Banzai said going ahead of Shenzi.
They went closer and closer until Maria jumped out of the pile and ran away but went to a dead end.
"Well,well,well Banzai I guessed that Ed did a good job," Shenzi said with her chop's drulling.
The other hyena did the same thing.Ed came infront of them and start talking well more like a hyena languege.
"So your telling me that this "kind" human saved your life,"Shenzi asked.
Ed nodded to the responsed then moved out of Maria's way.
"Not to mention he told me about you guy's,"Maria said.
Shenzi and Banzai looked at eachother for a minute looking confused.
"Wait hold on a sec you speak hyena,"she asked.
"Most of the time only when I'm talking to a hyena such as yourself's and of course other animal's,"Maria said.
"Hmm impressed but not enough ,"she said ready to pounce.
"Wait I could help you guys get food,"She said.
"Like you expect us to believe that,"Banzai said.
"No it's true I hunted a hazel before and I can do it again,"She said.
The hyenas huddled up were whispering to something then they've stopped.
"Ok kid if you can prove you can hunt you can join the clan,"Shenzi said trying to make it clear.
"Yeah sure ok,"Maria said.
It was almost night time the hyena's started to sleep but when it was night time it was a little cold but they can't know since they had fur.Maria was moving her body around like she has a nightmare First Shenzi came and slept next to her then Ed then Banzai.
"You know kid I might just met you but I have a feeling I'm going to like you as a friend,"Shenzi said .
The hyenas agreed she might have met her but have a feeling they were going to like her.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 3, 2009 3:41:15 GMT -5
It is good so far. Forgive me for replying so late, my friend.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 3, 2009 6:16:02 GMT -5
It's ok no prob.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 5, 2009 11:12:04 GMT -5
Chapter:3
It was morning and the hyenas and the girl woke up which was dumb cause here's what happened.Shenzi woke up first grabbed the bone scratch it on her hyena hump then hit Banzai, Banzai woke up and started getting mad but then saw Ed's bone so he grabbed it swallow whole then licked his choppe's ,Ed then woke up find out that his bone was gone and Banzai ate it so he pounce on him and it became a fight, and as for Maria who just woke up looked at both at them then at Shenzi who looked back then started giggling.
In the meadows of the Pridelands there was a bunch of antelopes today it was perfect for them.
"Um can I use my strategy with you guy's?,"Maria asked.
They look at eachother then back at Maria who looked confused.
"You didn't say anything about not using strategy with others,"she said.
It was true Shenzi didn't say that but she has a feeling that probably it would work since she thinks that humans are smart.
The plan was simple it was like a game called hide and go seek but except someone dies in the end.Shenzi and Ed who were behind the seperates bushes.Banzai was hiding in the grass which Maria was too.Maria gave the signal then they both chased the antelopes to the bushes.There was more antelopes coming so Shenzi pounced on the first antelope then Ed pounced on the next antelope it kept moving until finally it stopped and died.The hyenas were there eating the antelope.
"I gotta say kid not bad now I'm impress,"Shenzi said with her mouth full then took another bite.
"Well thank you I guess it was in my blood ,Oh I forgot to thank you,"Maria said.
"For what?,"Shenzi asked who then swallowed her food.
"For helping me sleep last night Ed told me about it and I think we are going to be best friends too,"she explained.
Ed nodded then backed up a when Shenzi was done eating her food then started chasing Ed aroundthe fields.Banzai was done eating then came to Maria.
"So what else he told you?,"Banzai asked giggling.
"That and that you got like Shenzi,"Maria answered who giggled.
Banzai then blushed then started to join Shenzi chasing Ed.Maria was laughing herself to death as she enjoys the hilariouse chased but it ended when she made a hyena laugh.She closed her mouth hoping no one heard.Zazu came.
"Excuse me pardon my interupptions of your happiness but the kingand Rafiki wanted to see you,"Zazu said.
Maria understood she came running to where she must be needed.Zazu watch the hyena chased then mumbled about saying how the world would be peaceful without hyenas.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 5, 2009 11:43:47 GMT -5
Chapter:4
Maria came to the biggest tree ever call a babaobab tree there was one reason why they call him Rafiki he is yet old and wise but also in Swahili means "friend" and it was true she trusted him with her life.And Simba was too was a good friend.There both were there in the inside of the tree looking at her.
"So everything ok ,"Maria asked.
"Yes everythings fine we just want you for this,"Rafiki replied to her answer.
Rafiki held a necklace which was a ruby that forms into a half moon and the black strings.He gave it to her around her neck.
"It helps you form into an animal when your needed even though you know martial arts,"Rafiki said.
"Yes it also helps you not to be in your evil form,"Simba said.
"What evil form?,"she asked confused.
"Im afraid that when in full moon you will turn into something we are afraid of but thank goodness this necklace helps you,"Rafiki said.
Maria understood that no one should take this off.Meanwhile when she came back to the cave the hyenas were waiting for her.
"There you are where you been,"Shenzi asked.
"I was visiting a friend,"Maria said.
"Whats that on your neck?,"she asked again pointing to her neck.
"Oh that's my necklace it's supposed to help me,"Maria said.
Shenzi nodded pretending to understand even though she doesn't know why it can help.
"Well then welcome to the clan,"Shenzi said.
Maria was accepted now but for now she feels something is missing.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 5, 2009 12:42:56 GMT -5
Chapter:5
The hyenas followed by Maria on their way to her Treehouse or as she calls it "Home".
"Well this is it,"Maria said looking up at the tallest tree.
"Um did you forgot were hyenas not birds,"Shenzi said looking at her confused.
"I know,"she said bringing down the rope that she made as an elevator she told them to go inside the bamboo elevator she hold on to the rope.
"Going up,"she said letting the rope go which send them up.
They went up until finally it stopped.There was a bamboo house with a giant leaf as her door there was even a bridge and a slide or a pole which ever transportation is fast.
"You did all this,"Shenzi said.
"Yeah took me a week to finish this,"Maria said.
"What do you do when you are tired from constructing this?,"she asked.
"Well I did remember I was sleeping on the roof when I didn't notice,"Maria said.
They went inside what they have saw was a livving room a sofa,television,not to mention the kitchen.She showed them her room where was next to where the waterhole was so she can see the sunset.
"Wow comfy,"Banzai said jumping on his back on her bed.
"Whats that?,"Banzai then asked pointing to the big screen thingy.
"That call a television but tv for short,"she answered.
Turning the tv on there was people and cartoons that what she calls it .There was noise coming from the kitchen.Maria went to the kitchen with her broom and the hyenas followed.They were about to be ready for an attack until they saw a Dalmatian puppy who looks like a hyena by it's spots and it's tail.But fur color white and ears are doggy ears.
"Whats up homie,"he said crossing his paws.Whats funny was his accent was a New York.
"Oh my Killer what you doing here?,"she asked.
"I followed you when you said you wanna come back here,"Killer answered eating a cookie leaning on the wall.
"And who is he,"Banzai asked.
"Thats Killer,"Maria said in annoyanced.
"My names Killer I'm the awsomest and coolest stray ever,"Killer said.
"I found him on my trash when I heard something so I decided I keep him,"she said.
"Put it there ,"he said givving his down low paw.
Ed was givving him a down low but then Killer took his paw out of the way.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 6, 2009 12:21:55 GMT -5
Chapter:6
Maria ,Killer,and the hyena trio were still in her house she still didn't know what to do with him.He doesn't belong in here he belongs in New York as a stray but she knew she could not leave him after the dog catcher still is looking for him cause Killers a stray.Some scienctest might look for him and experiment him back at the AHP which stands for (Animal Helping Place)and she knows they do not help at all.
"Ok if you stay will you be a good dog,"Maria said.
"Hmm I don't know it's probably gonna ruined my reputation,"Killer said.
"Yeah how since your gonna stay here,"She said.
"Alright take a chill pill girl,"Killer said making her calm in his way.
"Good,"Maria said then facing the hyenas.
"You should probably stay since the sun is down,"Maria said.
"I guessed you are right what about you guys?,"Shenzi asked.
"Fine with me,"Banzai said not caring.
Ed laugh which in Maria guess was an ok .They agreed to stay for the night.Maria went to bed with Killer on the edge of her bed sleeping while the hyenas were sleeping in bed with her too.
Night time came and Shenzi was dreaming.She had a dream about her past back at Nigeria when the humans murdered her moher named Linka for tresspassing in a village.Back at her time humans didn't like hyenas cause they believe there evil and how annoy they get whn hearing a hyena laugh.Shenzi was there as a hyena cub hiding under a porch but a human found her.
"Dont worry I'll take care of you,"the mysterious person said carrying baby Shenzi inside.
Shenzi quickly woke up seeing that Ed,Banzai,and Killer woke up but turning there heads at Maria.Shenzi came close to see whats up and she see Maria glowing in some sort of angel colors like gold.
"Whats up with her?,"Shenzi asked.
"I don't know,"Banzai said it in a worry way.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 6, 2009 13:03:14 GMT -5
That's right.In the Lionking though.
I'm a fan of Toon Patrol too.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 6, 2009 16:40:04 GMT -5
Very good. ^_^ Get a good pic of Killer in this, too. ^_^
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Post by Fisi on Aug 6, 2009 16:41:23 GMT -5
Yeah he is sort of a Hot Dog XD.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 6, 2009 17:00:33 GMT -5
XD I'm so using that joke in my fanfic. XD
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Post by Fisi on Aug 6, 2009 19:20:35 GMT -5
Yeeeeeeaaaaaah.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 6, 2009 21:11:48 GMT -5
Chapter:7
Morning arrived and Maria was there with a dead Wildebeast she carried who just already woke up.She walked and was almost coming home to feed her hyena friends.
"I can't wait to see the looks on their faces when they see this huge,"Maria said almost finishing her sentence when she heard a scream.
She didn't know what to do except run after the scream.The Wildebeast on her back was too heavy making her slow down.She digged the dead Wildebeast next to the tree and ran.
When she came close to the screamer she was shocked at two cheetahs and a teenaged girl which she realized she wasn't alone.Her hair was sort of a darker blonde which to her guess she's a dirty blond but for some reason there was blue highlight on her bangs, she had blue eyes and her skin was pale,and she wore a grey shirt with black pants and shoes,and also a fingerless glove.
Maria threw a stick at the two cheetahs and they both looked.
"HEY YOU TWO BEEN A BAD KITTY,"Maria yelled.
The two cheetahs did not like what she said so they both ran to her.Maria jumped round kick on the first one then the other one.They been knocked out and Maria grabbed some sort of needle to calm them down and injected it on them.
"C'mon I don't know how long it will take for them to wake up,"Maria yelled then grabbed her hand.
They both escaped the two girls were both tired and stopped for a moment.
"You ok?,"she asked making sure she was.
"Ok I've been chased by two hungry looking cheetahs and you think I'm "OK","the pale girl said.
Maria paused at her for a minute.The girl sigh and look at her.
"Look I'm sorry I get angry easily I guess I'm not used to here,my names Shelbi,"Shelbi said putting her hand out for a hand shake.
"No prob it will take awhile to get used to here ,my names Maria,"Maria said taking out her dried blood hands.
Shelbi looked at it then looked at Maria confused.
"Um I hunted a Wildebeast and I guessed the blood dried off,"Maria said.
Shelbi understood and shook her hand anyway.
"Oh my gosh I forgot about the died Wildebeast,"Maria realized.
"Can I come with you it looks like you know this place better then me,"Shelbi asked.
"Sure c'mon it's this way,"she said pointing to the direction.
The two teenaged girls ran to the direction.
Meanwhile back at the treehouse or Maria's house the hyenas just woke up and were shock to see Maria not there.They checked downstairs and saw Killer eating his bowl with his name on it.The hyenas also have bowls on there's with therenames on it.
"Hey where's Maria little man?,"Banzai asked.
"She out hunting for you guys to eat something,"Killed responded with his mouth full then swallowed.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 7, 2009 0:15:28 GMT -5
I would say that. XD
This is awesome, Lol. ^_^
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