|
Post by netske on Jun 15, 2008 7:13:08 GMT -5
BEACH SERIES: SURF'S UP
This is my 12th fic about weasels and 2nd fic of Beach series. Sarah belongs to Julayla. Vile, Reva, Tatiana, Denisse, Hiladino and Elijah belong to weaselsrock. Hester and Chelsea belong to Veggirl. Kijana and Jemadari belong to Spikey.
CHAPTER 1
July the 10th, 7:00 PM. Zeke, Garret and Tzitianno were sitting on the beach and telling jokes to each other. - Guys, do you know how many beads can go in the cup? - asked Zeke - I dont know. And you, Garret? - asked Tzitzianno - No. - said Garret - Beads cant go in the cup 'cause they dont have legs.- said Zeke The company laughed. - Hey, look at this big guy! - said Garret poiting at a big tiger with surfing ball. - Its Yan Hoggens. He's surfing champion. - said Zeke - Ha, champion! I can surf better. - said Tzitziano with a little sarcasm. - He cant surf. Champion-accordion. And the company laughed again. At this moment Yan heard Tzitzianno's jokes about him and came to the friends. They stopped laughing. - You said that you can surf better than me, smart boy, dont you? - asked Yan evily - We'll look at it. What about a surf competition in three days? If you win I'll publicly acknowledge that you're the best surfer on the beach. If you loose - I'll beat you. Ok? - Oooo..ok. - said Tzitzianno - Good. Mett you in three days. - said Yan and left the company - Are you mad? - asked Garret - What shall I do? - asked Tzitzianno sadly - Dont worry, we'll invent anything. - said Zeke At this time Peggy came to the friends. - Hi, Garret, Tzitzianno! Hi, honey. - said Peggy - Hi, dear. - said Zeke - Hey, Peggy, Tzitzianno made a pari with surfing champion Yan Hoggens. Do you have any ideas how to help him? - said Garret - Made a pari wih surfing champion. Well, you can ask my dad to help you. He was the best surfer when he was 16. - said Peggy - Thanks. Peggy. Im your debtor. - Tzitzianno smiled. - Dont mention it. Lets come to my father together. - said Peggy
TO BE CONTUNED...
|
|
|
Post by Eternity on Jun 15, 2008 10:06:29 GMT -5
Good story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
|
|
|
Post by netske on Jun 17, 2008 10:00:04 GMT -5
Im sprry that I made you waiting.
CHAPTER 2
Peggy and Tzitzianno came to the weasels. - Hi, dad, uncle David, uncle Charlie, uncle Diego and uncle Albert. - said Peggy - Hi! - said Tzitzianno - Hello! - said Smartass - Hola! - said Greasy with Spanish accent - Privet! - said Psycho with Russian accent - Noshikirukuchi! - said Stupid with Japan accent - Hallo! - said Wheezy with German accent - Tzitzianno needs your help, dad. He made a pari with Yann Hoggins. - started Peggy - This scary surfing champion? - asked Psycho - Yes, uncle Charlie. - contuned Peggy - And Id like to ask you, dad, to teach him to surf. - Please. - said Tzitzianno - Or he'll beat me. - Dont worry, we'll help you. - said Stupid - You'll be the best surfer as me in my teenager years. - Thank you very much! - said Tzitzianno - How can I thank you? - We'll see. Well, how many days we have? - asked Stupid - Three days. - said Tzitzianno - Three days? - asked Stupid - So we start our training right now. Stupid gave to Tzitzianno his lucky board and weasels started to train him. But Tzitzianno always failed. On the next day in the middle of the training Stupid asked Tzitzianno. - Tzitzianno, please, say, why are you unlucky? - Simply, I...I...I...Im afraid of water. - said Tzitzianno and blushed. - And Im afraid of it sinse childhood. Suddanly he saw a tiger girl in the water. - Help! Help! - she was yelling Tzitzianno took Stupid's lucky board and swam to the girl. He took her but a wawe come. So Tzitzianno started to surf. - Hey, he's surfing! - said Smartass - He could handle with his fear! - said Psycho - He'll won! - said Greasy - Stupid, you're a good teacher. - said Albert - And he's my best pupil. - said Stupid Tzitzianno swam to the bank with the tiger girl. - Hooray! - yelled the weasels - Thank you. What is the name of you, the braver? - asked the tiger - Tzitzianno. - said Tzitzianno and added - Marriarti. - You have Italian roots? - asked the tiger - Yes. - said Tzitzianno - And my name is Miss Vivika Nelson. - sad the tiger - And Im an animator and an organisator of surfing competition. We'll you take a part? - Yes. - said Tzitzianno. it seemed that he was ready. Weasels looked at each other brightely. - And who will be in your Support Group? - asked Vivika - My teachers - they're here. Also my friends, my wife and my daughter. - said Tzitzianno - Ok, meet you in two days on the competition. - said Vivika - See you. - Tzitzianno turned to weasels - Lets contune our training. And they were training the rest of the day. On the next day after the last training Tzitzianno said to the weasels: - Im ready to the tomorrow competition. I'll bring you the victory. - You've brung the victory. - said Stupid - You brang it yesterday when you overcame your fear of water and rescued Vivika. The victory over you is the greates victory. - Yes, believe him. - said Smartass - I see you're sure in your victory. - said Wheezy - Ok, have a rest 'cause it will be a difficult day tomorrow. - said Greasy - But we believe in you. - said Psycho - Thank you. - said Tzitzianno
TO BE CONTUNED...
PS There will be a surprise in my next chapter.
|
|
|
Post by Eternity on Jun 17, 2008 10:58:01 GMT -5
Oooh...I can't wait for the surprise!
|
|
|
Post by netske on Jun 18, 2008 10:17:01 GMT -5
CHAPTER 3
July, the 13th, the day of the competiton, 10: 00 AM. Tzitzianno was putting gel on his surfing board (which was Stupid's lucky board), and Mutya and Marissa were watching at him. - Today is the 13th. Are you sure you'll win? - asked Mutya - Sure. And no superstition can prevent me. By the way, say thank you that today is not a Friday. - said Tzitzianno - Dad, you're the best. You'll shame Yan and win. - said Marissa - Sure, Marissa. - Tzitzianno hugged his daughter. - Good luck. - said Mutya and kissed her husband. At this time a horn sounded. - Dear vacantioners! Ladies and gentelmen! Welcome to the 9th annual surfing competition. - started Vivika - Im Vivika Nelson, the organisator of the competition. Meet our Jury: Cody Maverick, Big Z, Chicken Joe and Lani Aliikai! All of the Jury stood up and everybody applaused. - Meet our participants: champion - Yan Hoggins! - said Vivika Yan bowed and all the beach exploded applause. - And applicant - Tzitzianno Marriarti! - said Vivika Tzitzianno shook his left amr and the vacationers apllaused. Liza, Marianna, Peggy, Nina, Dacia, Eva, Mutya, Linda, Fifi and Kate, who were cheerleaders, were dancing and shouting:
Tzitzianno is our chamion, He'll win the competition, And Yan will be shamed, Lets say Hey-Ho!
- Be ready to loose. I hope you made your testament. - said Yan with sarcasm - Time will show. - said Tzitzianno - And if the partisipants will need help, they can wait it from pur rescuer - Splendip! - said Vivika All applaused. - Dear partisipants, today the 13th day will be lucky for one of you. - said Vivika - Are you ready? - Im always ready. - said Tzitzianno - The winner is obvious, so Im ready. - said Yan haughtily - So, lets start. Five, four, three, two, one, go! - ordered Vivika and whisteled And the competition started. During the competition Yan tryed to push Tzitzianno, but at this time, when he was close to him, he suddanly fell in the water. Tzitzianno saw sinking Yan, swam to him, took his on the board and swam to the bank. - Help! He needs help! - he yelled Splendip flew to Yan and made him an artificial respiration. Cody, Big Z, Laney and Joe looked at each other, wrote their verdict on a list of paper and gave it to Vivika. - Its time to say the name of the winner. And the winner is.... TZITZIANNO MARRIARTI! - yelled Vivika - Hooray! - yeeled Tito, Reva, Hiladino, Elijah, Tatiana and Denisse - Well done! - yelled Jemadari and Kijana - Great job! - said Hester and Chelsea - Tzitzianno is the best surfer, quod erat demonstrandum - said Kira to Ginger, Rose, Bailey, Sarah and Vile with Latin accent. Yan took a microphone. - Id like to make an annousment. Tzitzianno, I recognize you as the best surfer on the beach. - said Yan and put a medal on Tzitzianno's neck. At this time Lifty and Shifty came to Yan, took they board and ran away. - Hey, you, come back here! - yelled Yan and tryed to catch them. - Id like to say thank you all my support team: my wife Mutya, my daughter Marissa, my friends. But the main thank you Id like to say to my teachers: David Smartass Sanders, Diego Greasy Sanchez, Charles Psycho Fleshier, Michael Stupid Newman and Albert Wheezy Foray. I couldnt handle without their help. - said Tzitzianno After that he left the stage and Liza, Marianna, Peggy, Nina and Dacia came on it: - We'd like to devote this song to todays winner and the new champion. - said Liza And the girls started singing ABBA's song:
I've been cheated by you since I don't know when So I made up my mind, it must come to an end Look at me now, will I ever learn? I don't know how but I suddenly lose control There's a fire within my soul Just one look and I can hear a bell ring One more look and I forget everything, w-o-o-o-oh
Mamma mia, here I go again My my, how can I resist you? Mamma mia, does it show again? My my, just how much I've missed you Yes, I've been brokenhearted Blue since the day we parted Why, why did I ever let you go? Mamma mia, now I really know, My my, I could never let you go.
THE END
Keep an eye for my next Beach series!
|
|
|
Post by netske on Jun 18, 2008 12:24:04 GMT -5
Using of HTF characters (Lifty, Shifty and Spledip) was the surprise.
|
|
|
Post by Just Plain Rydell on Jun 18, 2008 14:18:49 GMT -5
Sweet chapter!!!! ^^ Great interpretation!
|
|