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Post by animeweaselgirl101 on Dec 31, 2007 4:23:47 GMT -5
ok i m doing the real thing now i just tried it out but i thhought id tell you about the characters i made!
Tracy(Hoodie) A tomboy who can get mean with green eyes, red orange hair ,and a tail
Larrisa(biscuit) A ferret with brown hair with pink ends.Black eyes and lots of hyperness
and of course the toon patrol yippeeee!
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Post by animeweaselgirl101 on Dec 31, 2007 5:42:00 GMT -5
PROLUGE
We know the toon patrol died in 1947 but theyve come back now the toons and humans are in danger of exintion!! With help from 5 girl weasels who will try to mend thier ways can they save the earth with weapons of mass destruction? Read to find out!
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Post by animeweaselgirl101 on Dec 31, 2007 5:55:58 GMT -5
chapter one (we're back!)
5 weasels have just entered heaven in 1947.
" where are we?" a crazy looking one asked.
"heck if i know!" the grayish blue growled.
Then an angel desended " You have come to heaven follow me for God must wiegh your heart..." she said almost as a song...
The weasel follow and see God himself.He looks at them and calmly says" These weasel are of to much evil in thre hearts.They shall be sent to the under World"
Then a lighting bolt strikes the weasels carries them to the Under World.They are among a man with horns and hoofs and red.He is painting his hoofs with pink nail polish.
"ooo! pink goes good with my skin color!"he cries.
"what in world!the devils a gayfard!!" the pink dressed one yells.The break up laughing..
"WHO! WHAT! WHERE! WHEN!"the devil yells in suprise.
"GAAA!!Its the weasels!They are unbeatable!!"he shrieks.
"You are going back to earth!"he yells.Then they are sucked up in a hole and pop up in Tokyo Japan.
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Post by animeweaselgirl101 on Dec 31, 2007 6:10:44 GMT -5
chapter two (we're where?!)
"man this sushi is good"I said shoveling it in my mouth three at a time.
"eww..Hoodie can you at least chew your food with your mouth closed!"my sis Harmony moans covering her eyes.I stick my tonge out and show here my chewed up food.
"im chewing see?"I taunted.
"oh gross Hoodie! Stop it Im gonna puke!"she shrieks.I closed my mouth again and my twin(unidentical)throws her chop sticks away and shoves her face in her ramen and pie.I laughed and couldnt stop."ha ha ha!!hee hee hee !oh!thats funny HA HA HA!"I kept laughing and started rolling on the ground.then some guy landed on me.
"GAA! Harassment!harassment!GAA!!!Get him off eee!"I started failing my arms wildly
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Post by animeweaselgirl101 on Dec 31, 2007 7:09:38 GMT -5
(opps pressed the button !)
I wiggled like a worm in a frying pan of hot oil.
"ahh! offender GAA!"i screamed.he rolled off me and kept lying the ground.Then 4 more weasels fell from the sky(they were blasted in the air and now are falling down)
"AH!Its raining weasels"Blair yelled covering her head.
"hey when you jump of a plane you need a parachute!"Bisciut scloded.
"grr! You idiot they didnt jump from a plane they fell from the tree!"Harmony yelled.
then harmony and Biscuit started a slap fight ."sorry we dont get along all to well..
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Post by animeweaselgirl101 on Dec 31, 2007 8:54:37 GMT -5
"WHA??~!!!!"the other weasels cried really confused.I slapped my face .
"your new arent you"i sighed heavily.
"NEW! We dont know where we freaking are!"the pink dressed one yelled.
"WHOA JEEZ!take it easy your in Japan!"i said.
"soo... whats your names?"i asked smiling sweetly.
Harmony slapped me.I slapped her back only much harder.I turned and said "names"
The weasel from the sky stared at me confused and completly shocked.They exchanged glances and the weasel that looked crazy spoke up.
"Im Physco.."he said pointing to him self.
"nice of you to drop in!"i laughed joking of thier desendance.
He laughed too .i tilted my head and smiled ear to ear.
then the weasel dressed in green and golf shoes said"Greasy.." I held out a paw and shook his. Then I shook hands with Wise Guy Stupid Wheezy.I stared at Wheezy .HES CUTE i thought.I went pink in my cheeks in my cheeks.
"Biscuit and Physco yelled. They both laughed at each other."ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXY And Z now now myABCs next time wont you 5!!!!!"they sang .I laughed to. Then called out ."LETS SING THE HAPPY JOY JOY SONG!" I yelled.
we sang and I laughed and rolled on the ground.the others looked at me .
"What ?!" I said.
they just stared.
"your a freak!" Wise Guy yelled.
I flipped him a bird "@#$%*&" i said cooly.
His eye twiched.
"so you me to show you around?" I waited for no anwser and moved on
UP NEXT TOKYO!
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Post by animeweaselgirl101 on Jan 1, 2008 6:48:24 GMT -5
chapter 2 (TOKYO)
"This here is the Tokyo Dome" I said .I held up a hand showing them.
" Then to the north of it is the old temple"I said.
"So is all this up for tourism?"Wheezy asked.
"Well the temple isnt it a scared temple" I said.
"There's a speacil ruby in there and they're afriad people will try to steal it"I pointed out.
"Do you know how much it would cost?"he asked cocking his head to one side.
"I don't , but Joy works in it.She polishes the ruby."I said pointing to her.
" it's about 3,000 dollars"she sighed waving her paw.
"this is the airport " I smiled.
" yeah but there's been missing valuble luggage ."Joy said.
"have you had your valubles missing?"Wise Guy asked.
"Harmony has,when we visited Grandma her pearl necklace was gone " Joy said
"well why dont we try to find out whos doing it and can get probably get it back"Wise Guy suggessted.
"Sweet a mystery !! I love mysterys!"Biscuit cried jumping up and down.
So we split up.5 of us each.I got stuck with Joy,Greasy ,Physco,and Biscuit.
I was on my hands and knees looking for anything that might give a clue.
Then I noticed prints on the ground.I followed them to a metal box.On it a sticker said Italy.
I scrammbled in and found Harmonys pearl necklace!I was about to get out when suddenly someone pushed me back and shut the lid! I could get thetop to lift!
"Hey anyone out there hello!!"I cried baeting on the box . Some one lifted the lid it was Physco .
"what are you doing in there?" said angryly.
"someone pushed me in when I tried to get out!" said. I lift ed my leg to get out .
"Hey what are you doing in that box Hoodie "JOy asked.
"I got trapped!" I cried.
"Hee hee hee "some one laughed evily."now your all trapped..."
Then all went dark the evil person had shut the door and turned the lights off.It was pitch black.My eyes tried to adjust but they didnt see a thing.WE'RE DOOMED! I thought.
then some punched me in the face and I hit the ground.
that's the end of chapter twwo and up next comes PLANE RIDE!
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Post by Sodapop on Jan 26, 2008 10:43:34 GMT -5
When are you gonna post the next chapter?
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Jan 27, 2008 16:34:41 GMT -5
sam!!!! u spelt my name wrong!!!!!!!!!! -_-
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Jan 27, 2008 16:40:26 GMT -5
dude this so kool go me!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^u^
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Post by poptart1 on Jan 29, 2008 17:30:02 GMT -5
umm.. soon i have to day dream it (i do that a lot ask biscuit..
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 1, 2008 20:23:43 GMT -5
yep yep yep =-)
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Apr 8, 2008 14:08:06 GMT -5
ok how many months has it been?  ? |
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