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Post by julayla on Jul 2, 2006 19:33:37 GMT -5
A/N: I finally got a chance to write this chapter down. And yes, this is part of the Mickey and Friends fanfic series I'm planning to do with Clint Hoyt (aka King Cobra Clint), though he'll probably write different fanfics that still involve Mickey and friends, though in different situations. Anyway, this fanfic takes place in the early 1980s (mainly 1983 since it was the year I was born). Enjoy!
Ch 1: A clue?
Mickey, Minnie, Donald, Goofy, and Daisy had just come out of the movie theater featuring "The Fox and the Hound".
Mickey: That was a great movie.
Minnie: Oh, it's such ashame our other friends didn't have time to visit.
Daisy: Well, they're busy trying to find normal jobs while going through their real names, not their aliases.
Goofy: Yeah, uh, plus they're under our protection.
Donald: I still say they don't look like someone to trust.
Daisy: (glares) Donald! How can you say that?
They then bumped into a mustached weasel, dropping a picture of someone.
Donald: (angrily) Hey, watch where you're going!
Weasel: Look, it's none of your business. I'm just heading to the store to get a drink!
He left the group as Mickey looked at him.
Mickey: Boy, was he stubborn.
Donald: Tell me about it...
Minnie then noticed the picture that he dropped. She then looked at it closely, noticing that the weasel in the picture next to the mustache weasel, a female blonde weasel, a young adult weasel, and a little girl weasel. She then noticed a small familiarity on the pre-teen weasel.
Minnie: (confused) Psycho?
The weasel, coming back, snatched the picture.
Weasel: Don't you know stealing from a priest weasel is an offense?
He left them again as Daisy glared at him.
Daisy: If he's the priest, I hate to see the sinners.
Minnie: Guys, that weasel in the picture...
As they walked toward the Weasel Territory, Minnie continued.
Minnie: That boy in the picture...the one next to the young adult that the priest had...he almost looked like Psycho.
Just as Psycho was walking past them, looking sadly at his pink slip that was slapped to his face earlier, he heard them.
Psycho: (thinking) Eh? Someone that looked like...could it be?
Daisy: It's probably a coincidence, Minnie.
He walked backwards a bit, trying to listen to them carefully.
Minnie: Maybe, but that boy almost looked like Psycho, maybe we should tell him about it.
Donald: Why should we? (sighs) Psycho said to Mickey that he would rather die than go back and face his own family and that's the truth!
Mickey: (confused) I don't know what you just said, Donald, but the point is to ask Psycho what's going on...my guess is this: he probably left them before he became what he was.
Psycho: That's not true at all!
Donald, not knowing Psycho was there near him, turned to Goofy.
Donald: (glares) Goofy, how can you be so negative?
Goofy: It wasn't me saying it, Donald!
Then, Psycho tripped, landing on the five.
Six: Whoa!
They fell near the steps of the hideout as Mickey looked.
Mickey: Psycho? What are you doing? And how much of it did you listen to?
Psycho: (narrows) Long enough.
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 2, 2006 22:35:21 GMT -5
Aww, poor Psycho. Anyway, this is a good chapter and it really makes you think what connection this priest weasel has with Psycho. Keep it up! ;D
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Post by julayla on Jul 2, 2006 23:26:25 GMT -5
Ch 2: A Simple Discussion and Surprise
Meanwhile, inside the old apartment building, Sarah was looking through the old photo album, then sighed sadly at a few pictures when they were all really happy together. The first one had a picture of a couple from their wedding day. The second one had a picture of her parents in the hospital with herself as a baby and her twin brother, although he did not have pink hair like she did.
Sarah: Domonic...
She then looked at the picture of a raven-haired female weasel with her cousin, Greasy, when he was only about seven or so years old along with a one year old of herself. Then, the last one with herself as a three-year-old with the whole family being together. She began to sniff on the picture and hugged it.
Sarah: Mommy...Daddy...I miss you and Mama Rosa.*
*A/N: That's who I usually call my aunt from my mom's side since I like her so much.
Tears formed from her beautiful eyes as she hugged the picture of the whole family.
Voice: No way, no how am I ever going back! I mean look what I did back in 1947!
She wiped the tears off as she looked curiously at the window. There, she saw Psycho looking angrily at her other friends aka Mickey's Gang.
Psycho: Besides, why would they want me?
Minnie: Now, Psycho, I'm sure your father must be very worried.
Psycho: (sighs) You don't know the other reason why I hate him...he's a priest to a church, which the other kids considered me a freak.
Goofy: Now that's not true, some priests and pastors live normal lives.
Mickey: (smiles) Goofy's right, and besides, I am sure that if you need help facing this problem, we'll be there for you.
Sarah then opened the window and looked outside.
Sarah: Minnie, what's going on?
Minnie: Psycho doesn't want to go back to his family.
The other weasels, exiting the black van, overheard Minnie as the pink cladded weasel spoke.
Wise Guy: You're telling me Psycho don't want to go back to his family too?
Donald: Of course he doesn't want to...
Sarah: Well...maybe we can get you guys back together.
Psycho: Hmph! As if that'll ever happen. I looked at the old house before they moved in 1953 and it's completely empty.
Wheezy: (coughs) Now come on! It's not like he's the only one who doesn't know where his parents are...my parents probably stopped looking for me years ago.
Stupid: Duh, what about mines?
Greasy: (to the leader weasel) Don't forget your mother and brother, Boss.
Goofy: Garsh! You guys don't seem like it, but you're all acting like you miss your own families.
Psycho: (sighs) Don't talk to me about dad or my siblings, Andrew and Angelica.
Mickey: (looks seriously) Now come on! I say we go look for your parents! I mean Weasel Territory can't be the only place where weasels roam!
Sarah: (looks at Greasy) Alex, wasn't there a place called Weasel Town that you visited one time?
Greasy: (nodding) I believe so...we might as well check there.
Minnie: (smiles) Good. Now, the first family member we have to especially look for is-
Voice: Justin!?
They turned as Psycho looked furious.
Psycho: My name's Psycho you stupid-(shocked) What the!?
He saw the mustached weasel that Mickey with his friends bumped into earlier. Psycho looked very surprised as he backed away a bit.
Psycho: D...D...Dad?
A/N: I know it's not much now, but I will make sure the next chapter's interesting and they go to Weasel Town...heck, I even got a certain former vizer of the sultan's as this fic's main villain.
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 2, 2006 23:33:58 GMT -5
Okay, looks like Psycho finally found his dad. I hope the others find their families too. And I don't believe that Wheezy's parents had stopped looking for him.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 2, 2006 23:37:16 GMT -5
This chapter reminds me of something, but I can't really put my finger on it. *Stupid grabs finger and places it on screen*
STUPID: Duh, there you go.
Any way's great chapter, this is soo cool!
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Post by julayla on Jul 3, 2006 0:00:15 GMT -5
A/N: Yeah, me neither...he just thinks they did.
Ch 3: The Vizer of Weasel Town
The mustached weasel hugged him tightly as a tear shed from his eye.
Weasel: I had missed you so much...why didn't you come back?
Psycho: You know my three reasons why I couldn't go back to you...
Mickey: Excuse me, sir, just who are you?
Weasel: My name is Arnold Weaselis, a priest to a church I run.
Donald: (glares) You better have a good excuse for just showing up again without saying "sorry"!
Arnold (Weasel): Look, I was trying to make sure that the vizer doesn't know that I escaped to here.
Psycho then slapped his father, shocking everyone.
Psycho: (angrily) You jerk...after all this time, now you had the guts to come back just to make it up by a lie?
Arnold: Please, son. You have to understand...we thought we'd be happy in Weasel Town...unfortunately, it didn't seem to last when he came.
Daisy: Tell us, what's this stupid vizer like?
Arnold looked seriously at them, then sat down on the stairway.
Arnold: All right, but please, if he finds out I'm here, then I'd be chopped sushi.
Sarah: So tell us, Mr. Justin's dad, can you tell us what happened?
He nodded slightly, then began speaking.
Arnold: After we arrived in Weasel Town, hoping to find my son there, we met the vizer and looked nice...but he turned us all to slaves without us realizing it...it's been like that for years, then one day...as I was getting my drink of water, I noticed the other weasels being controlled...by that monster's staff!
Wise Guy: Well that stinks!
Stupid: Duh, is there anyone else you know there?
Arnold: So far, I only knew Trina Weaselstock and her son, Kevin.
Wheezy: Hmph, that doesn't impress up.
Wise Guy: Wait...Trina's my mom's name! That jerk's got my mom! (angrily) I'll kill him for this!
He struggled as Donald, Goofy, and Mickey held him down.
Goofy: Don't boil yourself!
Sarah: That's not very good.
Minnie: (looks at them) Well, what do you think? It's all up to you, Mickey.
Mickey: I say we go there!
Psycho: (sighs) Fine...I'll go, but I'm not forgiving you for calling me Justin all the time or being a priest!
They headed inside the van as Arnold looked up, hoping no one would notice. Then, he went into the van. Little did he knew was that a familiar red parrot was watching the van head to the town, which was a few hours from where they were.
Parrot: Uh oh! Looks like Jafar's not gonna be happy about this! (flies away) I better warn him!
A/N: In case you can't tell, Iago hasn't become a good guy yet in this story...anyway, hope you liked this chapter.
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 3, 2006 0:08:28 GMT -5
Jafar has Smart Guy's mom as a slave?! Dang, that stupid Jafar! Keep writing, it's getting interesting!
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 3, 2006 0:09:55 GMT -5
Ooh, intresting. Um, one question though, what's a vizer?
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Post by julayla on Jul 3, 2006 0:11:23 GMT -5
Oh, a vizer (I'm not sure if it's spelled that) is kinda like an assistant and advisor to a sultan, I think.
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 3, 2006 0:13:13 GMT -5
You mean adviser.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 3, 2006 0:13:14 GMT -5
Oh, ok. Thanx! ^_^
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Post by julayla on Jul 4, 2006 0:13:52 GMT -5
A/N: If you're wondering when Maleficent will be the villain of one of the Mickey and Friends fanfic Eps, you'll have to wait.
Ch 4: Hypnotic Weasels
Some time later, in Weasel Town, the van arrived, then the group of Toons got out as Mickey looked shocked at the area where it was completely deserted.
Minnie: (seeing it) Oh my, where is everyone?
Arnold: Probably unknowingly working for Jafar right about now.
Psycho: Using weasels to do their dirty work! (angrily) That is so low...
Voice: Hey Arnold, you there?
He turned and saw a weasel approach him as he sighed in relief.
Arnold: (sighs) Zachery, I'm glad you're here.
Daisy: (concerned) You know this guy?
Arnold: Yes, I freed him from the vizer's control a couple of days ago.
Zachery: (smiles) We have a problem...he's plotting to take over all of Toon Town while having us under his control.
Donald: What!? Take over Toon Town? (angrily) Why that no good-
Goofy: So, what's the name of this vizer fella anyway?
Zachery: You will not believe it...
Sarah: Please...we have to know.
Voice: Calm yourself, Iago. I'm sure I'll get him back and erase his memory of ever thinking of plotting against me.
Wise Guy: Hide!
They hid quickly as they saw a familiar vizer with his parrot flying next to him.
All (but Arnold and Zachery): (quietly) Jafar and Iago!?
Iago (Parrot): But Jafar, they got that stupid mouse with his friends along with him. And not just that, I also saw those weasels that were suppose to be dead from 1947.
Jafar: I knew that pathetic weasel couldn't get rid of them after all...he's just as useless as all of these pathetic weasels.
Sarah then sneezed a bit as the others gasped.
Iago: (notices) Uh, Jafar...
Jafar: Not now, I am busy plotting...we'll eventually find them.
Iago: But Jafar-
Jafar: (angrily) Remember, I'm not a very patient sorceror!
They then left. Once the two were gone, they sighed as they came out.
Sarah: That was too close.
Mickey: Now the question is...how do we break them out of the spell?
Then, they saw a group of weasel guards marching as they patrolled the town streets. They looked shocked as Sarah looked frightened.
Sarah: Guys...I'm scared.
Stupid: Duh, me too, Boss!
Wheezy then looked at the gray hypnotized weasel marching down last as he gasped and recognized him.
Wheezy: Dad!? Oh no...not you too!
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 4, 2006 0:50:55 GMT -5
Oh boy, that does not look good for Wheezy. I wonder where his mother is. I hope she's not hypnotized! Keep it up! I'm dying for another chapter!
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 4, 2006 0:55:01 GMT -5
Wheezy's dad is under the spell, uh-oh, that's not good!
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Post by julayla on Jul 26, 2006 0:30:49 GMT -5
A/N: Yay! I finally got to update my fic. Here it is, enjoy.
Ch 5: Into the Palace
As soon as the weasel guards were gone, Wheezy struggled as he looked furious.
Wheezy: Let me go! (coughs) Dad needs me! So does mom!
Zachery: Calm down, Wheezy. We'll get your father out of there.
Wheezy: (narrows) No...no waiting...the last time Greasy and I did that, it wasn't pretty!
Greasy: (standing up) He's right, before we learned of what Judge Doom really wanted, well...these people that claimed to be developers threatened Marvin Acme! They threatened him by doing something that we'll never regret!
Donald: (glares) What? What did they do? What's so important that they do to any of you?
Then, the pink cladded leader turned sadly to Donald.
Wise Guy: (sheds one tear) They killed my father...
Mickey, Minnie, Donald, Goofy, Daisy, Sarah, Arnold, and Zachery looked shocked at what he had just said about his father.
Sarah: I'm so sorry...(sniffs) If only I knew-
Psycho: (pats her back) Hey, both he and Marvin knew they tried to do it...besides, those two were real good friends to each other.
Arnold: He was friends with me too...
Mickey: I see...now I understand...come on, we're going to the palace!
Zachery: (shocked) Are you nuts!? There's guards all over the place.
Donald: (glares) That's not gonna stop us from rescuing every weasel held hostage!
Goofy: Now you're talking, Donald!
A bit later, the group were near the palace, where several guards were surrounding the area. The group snuck around, making sure they weren't being followed.
Daisy: (quietly) Are you sure this will work?
Arnold: (quietly) Of course...once we get in, we'll be able to find out more of Jafar's plan and stop him before he accomplishes it as well as free our comrades.
Donald then noticed one of the bricks he was leaning on was pushed. The group then screamed as they were now inside the castle walls.
Goofy: Nice job, Donald.
Wheezy: (sarcastically) Yeah, thanks.
Mickey: Hmmm...
They looked at the room they were in as they saw a few female weasels chatting and one of them reading.
Female Weasel 1: What if they make us do that awful dance again?
Female Weasel 2: I don't want to do that!
They then looked at them as the gray female gasped and recognized Arnold and Zachery.
Female Weasel 3: Zachery! Arnold!
She hugged them both as Arnold sighed. The other weasels looked surprised as Donald shushed them.
Minnie: We're here to free you.
Arnold: Tia, Araina, Selene, Christina...
He then turned his attention to the girl weasel reading.
Arnold: (smiles) And my daughter, Angelica. It's nice to see all of you again.
Zachery: Yeah, Arnold's managed to come set you girls free.
Then, they heard a noise, sounding like Jafar.
Daisy: Uh oh, sounds like Jafar's coming this way.
Donald: (glares) Let that big palooka come! I'll show him!
Goofy: Donald, are you sure you want to go through with this?
Donald: (nods) Of course, Goofy! If we don't free any of these weasels, then no one can!
Mickey: Donald, I agree with you. So let's help them out!
They prepared as they saw the figure's shadow coming their way.
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