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Post by disneyplease on Nov 12, 2010 11:59:59 GMT -5
for a future chapter, I think Dorothy will be going to the Pirates lair attraction (not the Pirate of the carribean boat ride, I mean the new island attraction that replaced Tom Sawyor's Island) where she see's not only the characters from 'Pirates of the Carribean', but every Pirate in disney history
Captain Hook from Peter Pan, John Silver and his Alien Pirate crew from Treasure Planet, and Captain Barbosso and Davy Jones from Pirates of the Carribean
and through this, Dorothy's only ali ( atleast on this Island) is none other than Captain Jack Sparrow!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 12, 2010 12:56:21 GMT -5
Kewl.
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 26, 2010 22:12:33 GMT -5
okay, just to let you guys know, I changed Dorothy's age from 8 in a half years old to 10 years old
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 26, 2010 23:15:48 GMT -5
Cool. That's fine.
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 27, 2010 20:59:31 GMT -5
Chapter 9
For 30 minutes, Dorothy and Bruno have been wondering around the forrest remains of the old mine train ride. Then Dorothy stopped and gasped when at what she saw
"Look Bruno" said Dorothy
Infront of the children stood the wrecked and aged train that used to take the parks guests on the mine train ride.
"Woah" said Bruno in awe
Out of all the things in DisneyLand, seeing a ride in this kind of condition almost made Dorothy want to cry.
"Are you alright?" asked Bruno
"huh, oh yeah" said Dorothy as she snapped back into reality, "um, lets keep going".
But then Dorothy heard something coming towards her and Bruno, and knowing that maitnence and imagineers do'nt usaully come by this area of Frontier land, there's only one guess of who would be
"Someones coming, I think it might be the villains, quick hide" panicked Dorothy as she and Bruno hid behind a tree.
Dorothy then found that she got dirt on herself. 'Wait, dirt, thats it' she thought to herself remembering what Mr.Finster said, so she picked up a hand full of dirt.
"quickly Bruno, put the dirt on" said Dorothy
"why?" asked Bruno
" because, the Villains can smell a kid 12 feet away, but if you're dirty they can't smell you"
"oh, well alright" said Bruno as he did as ordered, "but my mom wo'nt be to happy when she finds dirt on my face"
"do'nt worry, once we get to safer grounds, we'll wash up" assured Dorothy, " Now shhhhh, here they come".
The two children kept quiet in their hiding spot, and carefully peeked to see who it was. The villains that passed by were none other than Gaston and Lefou, who both seemed to be proud about something.
"I tell you Lefou, once we're incharge, the castle will be easy to conquer, I just hope Maleficent lets us have it when we-" bragged Gaston, but then he paused, then sniffed
The Dorothy and Bruno layed lower in their hiding spots, hoping that it was'nt them that he was smelling.
"What is it Gaston?" asked Lefou
Gaston sniffed, but then he stopped and shrugged, "ah I thought I smelled something". Lefou then sniffed.
"I do'nt smell anything" he said
Dorothy and Bruno were relieved.
"well enough, lets get back to the mountain" said Gaston
"yeah, say Gaston, what do you think Maleficents going to do to that kid we caught at the meeting, you know, the girl who's parents are imagineers here, what do you think Maleficents going to do to her after we obserb her?" asked Lefou
" Ah, I do'nt know Lefou, but one things for sure, we'll be showing those fools what happens when they take away our break" said Gaston, who then kicked the aged train, which made Dorothy ever so angry.
Once Gaston and Lefou were nowhere in sight, the children came out of their hiding place.
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 27, 2010 21:14:09 GMT -5
Cool.
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Post by disneyplease on Dec 2, 2010 13:47:45 GMT -5
Chapter 10
"That insensative jerk" said Dorothy as she rushed over to the train, where she found a dent from the kick given by Gaston, "abusing an old ride"
"it's just an old train, Dorothy" said Bruno
Dorothy just sighed and said, "yeah, I know, Im just not used to seeing a ride go through something like this, despite living in the park my whole life".
"Well now do'nt worry 'bout it Darl'in, I've seen a whole bunch'a old rides go through things worse than this" said a southern accented voice.
The startled children quickly turned around, only to find seven bears, one of them being female. One bear was wearing a white collar and bow tie and a top hat, the female bear was wearing a blue skirt with a matching hairbow on her head, and the rest of the bears were clad in hillbilly like clothing. Dorthy began to recognize them.
" Hey I remember you, you're the bears from the Country Bear jamborie show, Henry, Zeke, Zeb, Ted, Fred, Tennesse, and Trixie" said Dorothy as she named and pointed to each bear correctly.
The bear with the top hat, who was henry, chuckled then bowed, " that be right lil' lady, and you know, you look very familiar yourself, what be your names?"
"well, Im Dorothy, Dorothy Archer, and this is my friend, Bruno" said Dorothy.
The moment the little human girl said her name, a wide smile grew on Henry's face, " Dorothy Archer, as in Rick Archer's daughter?" he asked in a happy face
"Yes sir" said Dorothy
"Well in that very case, it's a pleasure to meet'cha" said Henry as he shook Dorothy's hand with his paw
" Now what're you 2 kids be doin' out in these parts" asked Zeb
"Well you see sirs, my friend and I have just escaped from the Villains and their mountain, and we-"
"You kids just say y'all escaped from that there Villain Mountain" asked Zeke in surprize
Then Dorothy said "Yes, and we need to find our way out of these parts and-"
"Well then we'd be glad to help you" claimed Henry
"Why thank you" said Dorothy
"Oh, shucks" said fred as he blushed
"Yeah, anythin' for Archer's kid" said Henry, "now how's 'bout a song while we head our way"
"Sure thing Henry" said Zeke, as he and the other bears got out their instruments.
Then they began to play one of their well known songs as they were leading the children to the right way
Zeb: If you've just been wishin' 'bout goin' fishin' while you're still by the shore
Fred: Bring yer campin' gear and meet us right here we got all kinds'o fun in store
Zeke: It's time for a vacation for rest an' relaxation
All bears: so join us bears in the great out doors
Aint nothin' like the great outdoors to ease your soul
aint nothin' like great outdoors to keep ya from growin' old
Zeb: If your minds been hazy an' your feelin' lazy an' down on all fours
All bears: Then join us bears an' suck up some air in the great out doors
Then the female bear, Trixie, turned to the 2 human children, saw the dirt on their faces and said, " My, you two lil' darlin's look like y'all been rollin' on the ground in a pile of hey".
With that said, Trixie got out her hankerchief, and she wiped the dirt off of Bruno and Dorothy's face.
" There, that's much better" said Trixie as the bears continued to sing
Henry: Us bears we do love nature and tramplin through the woods
us bears we do love fishin' every hour if we could
All bears: Us bears we do love singin' in country harmony....
And if y'all wo'nt join us, we'll chase you up a tree
Aint nothin' like the great outdoors to ease your soul
Aint nothin' like the great out doors to keep you from growin' old
Zeb: If your minds been hazy an' your feelin' lazy an' down on all fours
All bears: Then join us bears an' suck up some air in the great out doors
so join us bears an' suck up some air in the great outdoors....
Zeke: YEAH HAH!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 2, 2010 20:20:11 GMT -5
Neat.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 6, 2010 12:53:42 GMT -5
not bad
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Post by disneyplease on Dec 6, 2010 21:21:24 GMT -5
why thank you Jnt737!!! ^_^ if you want to see more of what I got on this story, check out my DisneyLand secrets chat thread in the Idea's and comments section! DisneyPlease!
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 3, 2011 13:45:38 GMT -5
Chapter 11
Meanwhile, back at the Villain Mountain, Dorothy and Bruno's escape was soon discovered.
"GONE?!" roared Maleficent in anger as she was told that the two human children she and the other villains captured were no longer in the dungeon.
" How could they have escaped?" Yzma yelled as well
" well, I- I do'nt know, all I do know was that they were both in there when we brought the girl in, and the next hour when I went to see what was goin' on, they were both gone" explained the Sheriff of Nottingham
The Villains were now angry for many reasons. For the first time a child escaped the mountain, that child being a witness to their plot, and it was a child of an imagineer.
" Do we atleast know which imagineer this child belongs to?" asked Maleficent
" I could always ask my mirror" said the evil Queen, who had changed back to her queen form after the meeting
So the queen walked up to her mirror and asked "magic mirror on the wall, which imagineer is the parent of that girl, the one with hair like gold and eyes like saphires"
" The child that you have descibed is the daughter of the imagineer whose last name means one who holds the bow and arrow" said the Mirror
The villains immediately figured out whose child they were dealing with, Archer, the imagineer that disapeared 5 years ago, and the second imagineer the villains disliked the most.
" Well, this is quite a pleasant surprize" commented Maleficent
" Heh, No kidding, I did'nt even know the guy had a kid" said Hades
" Indeed" said Shere Khan
"Yes, but the girl is still a problem, after all, she is a witness to our meeting" said Jafar
" True, but atleast the child has no knowlege of our other plan" said Maleficent
" Right, so..whadda we do now?" asked Kronk
" For now, we'll continue with our plan, but if any of you see that girl again, do'nt hesitate to catch her and bring her back here" said Maleficent, "this goes to each and everyone of you".
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 3, 2011 18:28:11 GMT -5
Wow cool.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 3, 2011 19:47:07 GMT -5
Thanks AM !!! ^_^
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 3, 2011 19:49:10 GMT -5
(blushing) <3
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 5, 2011 12:54:05 GMT -5
Chapter 12
It was already 4 o'clock in the evening, and the bears got Dorothy and Bruno to Frontier land safe and sound.
" Thanks alot you bears" said Dorothy
" Why your mighty welcome, Dorothy" said Henry as he tipped his hat
As everyone waved and said goodbye, they went to their destinations.
"Alright Bruno, off to Mr. Finster's apartment in the New Orleans Square" claimed Dorothy, " but lets be careful, the villains probably know that we escaped and could be anywhere"
So the children made their way to the New Orleans square, and if they spotted a villain, they would hide.
Soon enough, they made it to the building where Mr. Finsters apartment was. They entered, and took the elevator up to the right floor. They entered the apartment, but Dorothy turned worried when she saw that the chair that Mr. Finster was sleeping in was empty.
" Mr. Finster" called Dorothy, but no respond
" Mr. Finster" she called louder
" Just a minute Dorothy, I'll be right there" said Mr. Finster
" phew, thank heaven" said Dorothy to herself
Then Mr. Finster came into the living room, with that same smile on his old face.
" I knew you'd be back sometime soon, oh, and I see you brought your friend with you" said the old man
" Mr. Finster, this is Bruno Perkins" said Dorothy
" she said you have cookies" said Bruno
"oh sure" said Mr. Finster as he went into the kitchen and got the cookies, " have as many as you want, I can't have them, not anymore"
Then Dorothy began to tell Mr. Finster everything that happened, the villains and their meeting, and Dorothy and her friend got captured and escaped the Villain mountain
" and thats another thing, I found that passage that you were looking for, it was in the abandoned tracks of the old mind train ride" said Dorothy
"You mean the train for The Natures wonderland attraction?"
"yeah"
Mr. Finster was now quiet in thought, for years he looked in all the possible places where it could be, how could he have missed this one?
" did you here what was said in that meeting?" asked Mr. Finster
"yeah, the villains now came up with a new way to abduct more kids, they now have candy bars with a potion in them, and anybody who eats them will go to sleep, like the posion apple in SnowWhite, only with the bars it only lasts for an hour, and when the kid is asleep, the villains will take them to the mountain, and Maleficent announced that the goal is to abduct every single kid in the park, and they plan to strike on friday, at the time of the Halloween Parade, we must stop them!" said Dorothy
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