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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 7, 2010 19:51:23 GMT -5
Oh, sure. (imitating Flower from Bambi) I don't mind.
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 8, 2010 10:50:35 GMT -5
Chapter 7
Dorothy was thrust into a chair. She tried to get up and run again, but this time the Villains were faster. They got a good tight grip on her and pinned her down to the chair while some got her to open her mouth. As she was being restrained, Dorothy suddenly felt some sort a liquid being poured into her mouth. Dorothy realized that she was being given the potion itself.
Once she forcfully drank it, the Villains released her and pushed her out of the chair. Dorothy could feel the said effect coming to her. She stared growing weak, then she Collasped on the floor fast asleep. and the last thing she heard was the their evil laughter.
When Dorothy woke up, remembering what happened. Then she looked up, only to find herself in a dark dungeon. She immediatly knew that she was in Villain mountain. Then she remembered that someone else she knew was here too.
"Bruno" she called out, but no replies. " BRUNO" she called out loudly as an echo was heard.
"who's that?" asked the familiar britsh accent.
" Bruno it's me, Dorothy, where are you"
"over here"
"where I can't see you"
"over here"
Dorothy then found him eating a candy bar that he was saving for later.
"are you alright" she asked
"the flavor in this bar is terrificly rich" he said, "but they never did give me the seventeen bars of the parks chocolates that they promised"
Dorothy could'nt help but to laugh at this, "Bruno, I doubt that they would get that much candy, they're the REAL villains after all, and now were their prisoners here in the Villain mountain ride".
Then Dorothy noticed something about the dungeon wall and walked over to it, and she noticed that a huge brick on the wall, a few inches abouve the ground, was loose, and she began to push it, and was in luck.
"well Im not very keen about being kept in this closed ride" said Bruno as he stood up, " how long do you think it'll be till the Disney Heroes come to rescue us?"
"um, I do'nt think they even know we're in here Bruno, so I do'nt think they will" answered Dorothy
"oh silly girl, of course they will" responded Bruno as he approuched Dorothy to see what she was doing.
"well til then, were on our own on the escaping part" she said as she continued to push the huge brick.
Then the brick fell out of where it was being pushed. and it revealed a hole where there was some light coming out.
"Bruno I think we found our way out of here" said Dorothy as she studied the hole and knew it was big enough for her and bruno to crawl through.
"now we gottah get to Mr.Finster, the old imagineer, Im real worried about him, maybe it was Maleficent or his diabetes or BOTH, all I know is that he did'nt wake up when I got to him, and he's got some cookies too"
"mm, Chocolate chip?" asked Bruno as Dorothy nodded
"alright then" said Bruno, "lets go"
"come on Bruno this way" said Dorothy as she and Bruno went through the hole.
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 8, 2010 17:49:03 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Cool.[/glow]
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 9, 2010 11:12:18 GMT -5
Thanks again AM!!!
It makes me very happy knowing that you like this story alot!!! ^_^
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 9, 2010 13:07:48 GMT -5
You're welcome.
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 9, 2010 19:23:37 GMT -5
One thing that I forgot to mention is that In this fic, there will be Actual hidden facts about a few attractions of DisneyLands Past that can be found if you're guided properly on where to look. And the next Chapter is guaranteed to feature one of them!!!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 9, 2010 19:46:36 GMT -5
Cool.
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 22, 2010 10:01:28 GMT -5
Chapter 8
As Dorothy and Bruno crawled through the hole, they found themselves in a cave like tunnel where there was a stream of fast moving water.
"stay against wall, so that way we wo'nt fall in the water" said Dorothy
"I agree" said Bruno, "I can't swim all that well"
The children moved while staying as close to the wall as possible. Then Dorothy spotted another hole big enough for her and Bruno to crawl out of
"come on Bruno, lets see where that hole leads to" said Dorothy as she and Bruno began to crawl out of the hole, and they found themselves in a large cave like tunnel.
"Wow, what is this this place" said Bruno
"I do'nt know, but I have a feeling that this was'nt built as part of the Villain mountain ride" said Dorothy
The children kept walking and walking through the tunnel, it starting to get darker, but then they saw a light up ahead. As they headed towards it, Dorothy noticed what looked like train track marks on the ground. They soon found themselves outside in a forrest area and were surprised to see what looked like abandoned train tracks.
"where are we?" asked Bruno
"This- This is the one of the tracks to the old Mine Train ride, the ride that was here in the mid and late fifties, long before the Thunder mountain ride replaced it" said Dorothy in amazment
Then she looked back at the tunnel they just came out of.
"This is probably the passage way Mr.Finster was searching for, the Villains must've created it, leading all the way from Villain mountain to the abandoned Mine train ride tracks, so that way nobody will see them entering OR leaving the mountain"
(yes, this was a real ride, infact the first part of the Thunder mountain ride was built over a part of the Mine train ride, y'all can look it up, and it's true that these tracks belonging to that ride still remain in DisneyLand to this very day, if you would like to see, go to Youtube, type in Forgotten DisneyLand 1, watch it and you will see for yourselves)
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 22, 2010 17:43:17 GMT -5
Wow. Reminds me of The Rescuers when Penny, Bernard, and Miss Bianca were down in the hole.
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 22, 2010 19:22:50 GMT -5
hmph, that part of the movie was'nt what I was going for, But thanks!!! ^_^
For me, It felt great to put in an actual remain of a ride of DisneyLands past, it felt like My Knowledge of the DisneyLand parks was put into an early use!!!
Yes, I study the history of everything of Disney, the films, the Parks, and Walt Disney himself!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 22, 2010 23:37:28 GMT -5
Okay.
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 29, 2010 11:59:32 GMT -5
incase you guys are curious about which Disney Villain gave Mr. Finster the burned scratches on his right forearm, I'll give you a hint, it's from the most Hot headed Disney Villain ever!!!!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 29, 2010 12:27:35 GMT -5
Lemme guess... Hades from Hercules?
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 29, 2010 12:46:15 GMT -5
You have guessed correctly my friend!
^_^
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 29, 2010 13:35:53 GMT -5
Great! (hugs you) ;D Here's a karma.
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