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Post by Veggirl on Jun 19, 2006 20:03:35 GMT -5
Well, I got the next chapter up. Not all reactions are the same.
Chapter 11
That night, Greasy straightened his suit as he stood in front of Alejandra's door. "Okay, just tell her this, 'Alejandra, I really like you and all, but I gotta tell you that I was a member of Judge Doom's gang. Now I understand if you don't want to see me, but---'" He sighed. "I'm in trouble. Well, here it goes." He knocked on the door. Alejandra opened it. She smiled. "Hi Greasy." "Hi." Greasy said. "Look I came here to tell you---" He felt a sharp pain on his shin. He jumped and looked down. The little Toon shoe glared up at him and kicked him in the shins again. "Ow! Hey!" "Shoey!" Alejandra said sharply. "Stop that!" The shoe stopped and looked up at Alejandra with a frown. She turned to Greasy. "What was that all about?" Greasy closed his eyes and sighed. "Look, the reason I came was to confess." "Confess? Confess on what?" Greasy sighed. "I killed Shoey's partner." "What?!" "Wait, I didn't killed him! I was with Doom and I said that thing Shoey told you!" "You said that?!" "Yes." "And you didn't even cared about him? You didn't even considered that he was still a living creature?" "Well, what was I supposed to do?!" Greasy pratically shouted. "How could you be so insensitive! That shoe was my friend!" "WHOEVER HEARD OF A SHOE AS A FRIEND! IT'S STUPID!" "IT IS NOT!" Greasy growled with anger. "Look, forget it! I'm not having this argument. Just forget it!" Alejandra gasped. "Are you dumping me?" Greasy looked at her. "What?" Alejandra stood there for a moment then turned to Shoey. "Kick him." Shoey kicked Greasy in the stomach. Greasy's eyes widened and he doubled up. Alejandra picked up Shoey and stormed into her apartment. She then turned. Greasy could see tears in her eyes. "I really liked you Greasy. I thought you did too." Before Greasy could say something, she slammed the door shut. Greasy groaned and walked back toward the elevator all bent up and with a broken heart.
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Post by julayla on Jun 19, 2006 20:10:25 GMT -5
Awww...poor Greasy. Ended with a broken heart! How sad. *huggles Greasy to comfort him*
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Post by Veggirl on Jun 19, 2006 21:07:16 GMT -5
Okay, I finally got the chapter up. I think the story will end in a few more chapters. Read and review.
Chapter 12. Broken hearts
Smart Guy raced down Olly-Oxford street towards Samantha's house. He had to tell her the truth sooner or later! Stopping in front of a two story building, he raced up the door and knocked. Samantha opened the door. "Hi Smart Guy." She said. "You didn't called or anything." "Look Samantha," Smart Guy said, "I need to talk to you. I'm not the weasel you think I am." Samantha smiled. "What? You have other things hiding in you?" "S-sorta." "Well?" Smart Guy sighed. "Samantha, I've done a lot of bad things." "Bad things? Like what?" Smart Guy sighed. "I was going to be a murderer." Samantha stared at him with shock. She stepped back with horror. "What?" Smart Guy covered his face. "I was working for Judge Doom." "Judge Doom?! The guy who wanted to destroy all of Toontown?!" "I helped him built a Dip machine along with the others boys. We also had to find Roger and report him to the Judge." "Roger?! Roger Rabbit?!" "YES!" Samantha took a deep breath. She then glared at him. "I thought I was a knowledgeable Toon," she said, half to herself. "Yet, sometimes I can be so stupid." She gave Smart Guy a serious gaze. "You were a lot of fun when we were dating. I treated you like a friend and you treated me like a friend. At least I thought you did." "Now you know the truth about me!" Smart Guy grunted. "Are you happy now?" "Should I be?!" Samantha said. "After all this time, I was dating a heartless monster! Didn't you felt a scrap of sympathy for the others? Didn't you felt sympathy for Roger? Didn't you even thought about the Toons you were going to destroy?!" Smart Guy looked down at the ground. "No, I guess you didn't!" Samantha snapped. Smart Guy grabbed Samantha's arms and stared in her eyes. "Did you think I had a choice?!" He shouted, starting to shake her. "Did anyone showed a little scrap of sympathy for me! NO! They think all weasels are evil! Did Doom showed sympathy for me? NO!" He was greeted by a slap in the face. "Let go of me and get away from my house! Or I'll call the police!" Smart Guy let go and glared at her. "Go ahead! Call the police! I don't care! Looks like this relationship isn't working out!" He stormed away. "May you rot behind bars!" Samantha hissed. She stopped as she watched Smart Guy storm down the street. Going into her house, she closed the door behind her, sat on the couch and began to cry.
Smart Guy went into an alleyway and stood there. He felt tears course down his cheeks. "Samantha," He whispered. "I wish I could have told you how much I loved you!" He stared up at the cloudy sky. He sighed. "I blew it. I totally blew it."
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Post by julayla on Jun 19, 2006 21:13:57 GMT -5
Awww...now he's been dumped as well. I want to huggle him as well to comfort him...poor him. *hugs Smarty*
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jun 19, 2006 21:22:30 GMT -5
*Starts sobbing loudly* Poor Smart Guy! Two break ups! WHAA! *Grabs tissue and blows nose* Ok, I'm done. We haven't heard from Wheezy or Stupid for a while, do they break up with their GF's as well? The only one with a sucsessful relationship is Psycho, Yay him! ^_^
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Post by Veggirl on Jun 20, 2006 16:36:34 GMT -5
Well, here's the other chapter where things really starts to get good. Sorta.
Chapter 13. Second thoughts
Smart Guy entered the house a few hours later and found Wheezy sitting at the table, smoking a cigarette. "I thought ya' quit smoking after you met Crystal." Wheezy blew out smoke. "Yeah, but I got back in after she found out and dumped me!" "She dumped you?" Wheezy nodded. "So did Grease." Smart Guy sighed. "Same with me, I got dumped." "Duh...you dumped what?" Stupid and Psycho entered the kitchen. Smart Guy sighed. "Looks like we're back to being single men again." "Not us." Psycho said. "We still have our girlfriends." "Didn't you told her?" "Yeah. Well sorta. But she said she still loved me just the same." "Duh...I didn't told her yet." Smart Guy looked at Stupid. "Do you want us to go with you when you tell her?" Stupid shrugged. "I guess. I don't want to keep a secret from her any longer." Smart Guy stood up. "Well boys, lets go."
Alejandra sat on her couch with Shoey on her lap, staring out into space. Shoey looked up and squeaked. Alejandra looked down. "What? Oh, nothing Shoey. Just thinking." Shoey squeaked two more squeaks. "No, I'm not thinking about Greasy!" Squeak, squeak, squeak. "Why would I think about that weasel who was insensitive to your little partner?" Squeak! "I know everyone has good in them, but---" Alejandra sighed. "All right, I am still thinking about him. I can't help it. I love him." Squeak, squeak. "You're saying that he might love me back?" Squeak! Alejandra placed Shoey besides her and stood up. "All right, I'll go to his house and apologize. Then maybe he'll apologize too." Shoey followed Alejandra out the door.
At Samantha's house, Samantha did her chores reguarly without thinking about Smart Guy. But after that, she found herself picking up the phone and about to dial the weasel's telephone number. She paused and lowered the receiver down. "Why should I care?" She whispered. "He's just an insensitive weasel, and I hate him!" She sat down on a chair and thought about Smart Guy. She sighed. "Oh Smart Guy. How can I hate you? I don't hate you!" She then stood up. "I'll go to his house and apologize. That's what I'll do." Leaving her house, she walked down the street and met Crystal. "Where are you going?" Crystal asked. "I want to apologize to my boyfriend." Samantha said. "Really? Me too." Crystal said. They heard someone running towards them. Alejandra raced over to them with Shoey by her side. "Are you going to the weasel's home?" She asked. They both nodded. "Can I come?" Alejandra asked. "I want to apologize to my boyfriend." "Well, looks like we have a few things in common." Samantha said. "Come on." The three weasels walked to a block and met two other female weasels. "Are you heading toward the weasel's home too?" Samantha asked. Sarah and Kiley nodded. "We were going over to meet our boyfriends. What about you?" "We were going there to apologize to our boyfriends." Samantha said. "My boyfriend is Smart Guy." "Greasy." Alejandra said. "Wheezy." Crystal said. Sarah and Kiley nodded. "Well, the house can't be far from here. Come on." "Oh, I don't think you dames will be going anywhere." The female weasels turned. Shoey did a little Toon growl. Coming out of the dark alleyway were a group of human thugs.
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Post by julayla on Jun 20, 2006 17:36:00 GMT -5
Awww...they decided to apologize...too bad they ran into the thugs. Oh my! I hope things turn out all right.
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Post by Veggirl on Jun 20, 2006 18:31:16 GMT -5
All righty then, next chapter up and ready. P.S. The story's not over yet. Just one more epilogue.
14. Rescue
"Who are you?!" Samantha demanded. "Now, now, sweet thang." One human said. "We're only friendly guys out to find some good looking dames like you." One eyed the female weasels from head to foot. "Hey, You look cute, for weasels," he mentioned. The human pinched Alejandra's cheek only to be kicked in the stomach by Shoey. "Oooo!" he said as if not taking offense to Shoey's kick. "We got ourselves feisty ones, boys!" "Yeah," said another. "If they wants to play hard to get, let's do the same!" As a result, the female weasels raced away. Shoey lunged at one human, but found himself in the hands of the other. "Drop the shoe in the garbage and lets go after them!" The leader said. Shoey was tossed into a garbage can where he squeaked with rage and kicked around.
Panting for breath, the female weasels continued to run as fast as their legs could carry them. But alas, the gang caught up with them. One of them slid behind Kiley and grabbed her ankles, causing her to fall. "Let go of me, you filthy scum!" she cried. Ignoring her command, the others grabbed the other female weasels. "We can't let a pretty things like you escape," one of them said. "First, we're gonna do this nice and slow and---" The man paused in his sentence. He felt something claw his back. He bellowed in agony as he released his grip on Sarah and reached for his back. Before he could grab whatever clawed him, he received a blow to his head and collapsed. The other humans let go of the female weasels. Sarah peered at the sight of the unconscious human. Behind him, she caught sight of a familiar face. "Psycho ... Is that you ...?!" "Yes Sarah, it's me," said Psycho. "Along with the others!" The weasels stepped up besides Psycho. Smart Guy glared at the gang of humans. "You leave them alone!" he shouted to them. "If you want to deal with them, you'll have to deal with us first!" Despite witnessing Psycho's strength against the one human, the other humans laughed when they looked at them. "So you're alive after all!" one of them teased. "We thought you died by laughing!" "That's another story!" Greasy snarled. "Do you want to fight or talk?!" "Duh...yeah!" Stupid said. "Because if you fight, we'll beat you like mashed potato's!" The humans laughed. "We don't think so." The battle began. For the most part, the weasels were able to handle them well. As the fight progressed, the tables turned and weasels found themselves on the ground. One man grabbed Smart Guy by the tie while the other grabbed the other weasels. "Swear allegiance to us, and we'll let you go pain-free!" One human growled. "We'd rather die than swear allegiance to you or let you hurt our gals any further!" Wheezy made clear. Just in time, Psycho bit the arm that held his strait-jacket. Greasy punched the face of the other with his free fist. The battle resumed. In the end, the weasels were left standing; the human thugs were all knocked out cold. "Smart Guy!" Smart Guy turned and in a few seconds, Samantha had her arms around him and lips pressed against his. The other weasels found themselves in the same situation with their girlfriends. Lips pressed against lips. Some human police cars came up and Lieutenant Santino got out from one of them. He pointed to the human thugs. "Arrest them now. We'll question them later when they wake up." Smart Guy embraced Samantha warmly and gently. She buried her face in his shoulder. "You came for us?" "Of course we did," he whispered. She rested her hand on his cheek. "I thought you didn't ... care for me. Why did you save us?" "Because ... I love you," was his reply. Samantha's cheeks blushed at his remark. "Samantha, why were you out here by yourself!? You could've been killed!" "We were looking for you," she told him. "Why?" Smart Guy asked her with concern. "I'm a heartless criminal ... Remember?" Samantha smiled at his amusing assertion. "Why would a ... heartless criminal risk his life for me?" she asked. "Smart Guy, I don't hate you. None of us do. I'm sorry I lost my temper on you ..." "It's me who should be apologizing," Smart Guy admitted. Greasy came over with his arm around Alejandra. Shoey was sitting on his shoulder with a proud look on his face. "Hey, you guys wanna go back to our house and get a bite to eat?" "We'll take you home." Santino offered. Smart Guy shook his head. "That won't be necessary. We'll walk." So the weasels walked back home with their arms around their loved ones once again.
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Post by julayla on Jun 20, 2006 19:19:08 GMT -5
Awww...great chapter. The girls are rescued. And they're in love again. That's so sweet. Let me know how the rest of the chapters turn out.
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Post by Veggirl on Jun 21, 2006 3:06:26 GMT -5
Last and final chapter to the whole story then I'm done! Epilogue The weasels finally had the courage to apologize to everyone they had hurt and ask for forgiveness with the help of their girlfriends. First of all, they apologized to Shoey for not doing anything when his little companion was dipped. Shoey forgave them with the translation from Alejandra. Then they apologized to Roger and Jessica. At first, they were a bit reluctant, but had the heart to forgive them. Then they apologized to Benny which was a bit tougher. Benny claimed that to forgive was to forget and he will never forget how they locked him up, but he also stated that not forgiving was gonna haunt him forever, so he forgave them. Then the weasels went from door to door apologizing and asking for forgiveness. Most Toons forgave them, while others said they will think about. But in time, they all forgave them. The best part of this whole incident was when the weasels finally had the guts to ask their girlfriend's hands in marriage. So the weasels were married and now live happy, peaceful lives with their wives. (credits roll as the song "Beautiful" plays) From the Moment I saw you, from the moment I looked into your eyes there was something about you I knew I knew that you were once in a life time a treasure near impossible to find and I know how lucky I am to have you Chorus: Cause I've seen the rainbows that can take your breath away the beauty of the setting sun that ends a perfect day and when it comes to shooting stars, I've seen a few but I've never seen anything...as beautiful as you Holding you in my arms no one else has fit so perfectly I could dance forever with you, with you and at the stroke of midnight please forgive me if I can't let go cause I never dreamed I'd find a Cinderella of my own Chorus: Cause I've seen the rainbows that can take your breath away the beauty of the setting sun that ends a perfect day and when it comes to shooting stars, I've seen a few but I've never seen anything...as beautiful as you Chorus repeat: Cause I've seen the rainbows that can take your breath away the beauty of the setting sun that ends a perfect day and when it comes to shooting stars, I've seen a few but I've never seen anything... Oh Oh, Oh no, I've never seen anything...as beautiful as you from the moment I saw you, from the moment I looked into your eyes... THE END There! All finished! And if you want more, don't worry. I have another fanfic in mind.
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Post by julayla on Jun 21, 2006 7:24:38 GMT -5
Yeah, very well indeed. I give you my applause! ^_^
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Post by nauticusvergil on Jun 21, 2006 23:50:07 GMT -5
Okay just read up to chapter 5....sorry for being so late, but looks good so far, the pic we talked about, heheh, finally materializing here. Yay! ^_^
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Apr 11, 2008 21:17:49 GMT -5
*CRYING* that------ was------ BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *SOBBING* it reminds of my boyfriend................. *SOBBING HARDER* *PARENTS COME IN, COMFORT* *SNIFF*
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Post by Sodapop on Apr 14, 2008 11:06:29 GMT -5
Ummm... I liked it, buuuut.....
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Post by Sodapop on Apr 14, 2008 11:06:54 GMT -5
*chuckles* I just can't imagine the Weasels going door to door and saying "Sorry". It's just not them. Especially Smart Ass. I could never picture him just going out and saying "Sorry". Well, maybe he could sort of apologize to Jessica, but Roger, I don't know. Here's my scene:
I walked up to the Rabbits' apartment door, my gold chain swinging noisily. If the Rabbit family is reading this, I have two words for you: Seasonal plantigs. Seriously, the place was a mess. Anyway. I knocked, my hand shaking slightly. In a few moments the door opened, revealing Jessica. "I, um," I began. "I, uh, came to-" Jessica slammed the door on me, making the hard wood hit my nose with great force. "Aagh! For Pete's sake!" I shrieked, grabbing my muzzle. When the throbbing stopped, I cupped my hands around my mouth. "Look, sister, we can do this the easy way, or the hard way!" "What do you want from me?" Her voice sounded strained. "I just want to apologize!" I said, sounding alot less angrier then I really was. "Just open the door." She hesitated, then opened the door a bit. She stared at me, giving new meaning to the word "Dumb". "You want to whaaaat?" Roger's head peeped out over Jessica's shoulder. "Jessica, I'm... sorry about what me and my boys did to you." "Hey, what about me?!" Roger demanded. "Forget it," I said, folding my arms across my chest. "But I'M the one that was framed, threatened, trapped--" "Yeah, the one that was just SOOO thrilled about us dying," I replied snidely. 'Ok, ok, I admit it, I was releived when I saw you guys die. P-b-b-b-b-b-lease forgive me!" Roger begged, turning the tables. "Ok, fine. I forgive you." I sighed, rolling my eyes. What a Toon. "YAY!!!" Roger hopped out from behind Jessica. He grabbed my hands and shook them hard. "Thank-you thank-you thank-you THANK-YOU!!" Roger stopped shaking my hands. I pulled my hands away quickly and straightened my jacket's collar. "Uh-huh, see you later." I was starting to back away when Jessica grabbed my arm. "Wait, you haven't apologized to my husband." I resisted the urge growl and say, "Oh, come on!" Instead I sighed and said, "Ok, I'm sorry, I'm sorry! Happy now?!" "Yes. You may go." Jessica said. She slammed the door, which hit my nose again. "Ow! God damn it!" Holding my throbbing muzzle, I walked away, shaking my head at how weird that family is. Well, not weird, just... Toonish.
Ah, yes! I'm proud of myself! *huggles posted scene* I like this one!!!
AKA I'm Smart Ass...
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