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Post by Fisi on Jun 8, 2010 18:21:23 GMT -5
OMG, I LOOOOOOOVEE HOW YOU USED THE LIONKING FOR THIS!!! AWSOME JOB!!! DO YOU LIKE THE HYENAS TOO?
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Post by Syrup on Jun 8, 2010 18:28:09 GMT -5
Wow Fisi. *giggle* Nice chapter.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 8, 2010 19:12:56 GMT -5
Chpt 6 Almost Fried CHICKen
Riz made it to the police station and brought the evidence with her. luckly they didn't know that she recorded what they said too.
Riz: And unless they caught and captured, there won't be ANY more cops!!!
Officer: Well that settles everything. Toon Patrol (opening the gate) Your free to go! They all cheered and hugged each other.
Greasy: Thank you, Riz, Beauty and Brains. She blushed a little but was happy. they walked into town.
Riz: Hey guys. I'm going to the Tanning Salon. I'd be safer if you came along with me.
Smart Guy: Sure, but what do you do at a tanning salon exacly?
Riz: Just come with me and i'll show you. they nodded and followed her. They reached the Summer Salon where riz walked up to a counter and gave the owner $20.00. She signed her name on the customer list and they went to a room. she opened the door and turned on the light. there were two tanning beds on the side of the wall.
Wheezy: So these are tanning beds?
Riz: Correct. she then went to a little box which was the timer and hit an up arrow five times meaning it would be five minutes and then the lights and the fans on the bed came on which made them jump.
Riz: Don't worry, guys. that's normal, but it's so warm in here. she then went to a thermostat. she set it to 65 degrees. she then put her bag beside the bed.
Riz: Ok, guys. i need to this step in privacy ok? they nodded and closed the door. she took her clothes off and layed in the bed wearing her favorite swimsuit. she brought her MP3 player with her and put it on Smooth Jazz. she put on protective eye goggles. she recalled what happen to her friend , Mary-Lou.
Riz: i don't wanna end up having an eye injury like she did. Luckly for her it was temporary. she then closed the top part of the bad and relaxed. The other's were in the waiting area looking at magazines.
Greasy:(Whistling) Man, oh man, You see these beautiful senorita's?! Some look better with their skin tan. At that point, his tongue was hanging out and was drooling and panting. They all slapped they hands on their faces. Then they were all froze up by someone. It was Misty and Hazel.
Misty: Now where's that little brat at? She then saw the door and blue lights. they grinned and walked in and saw movement in the bed. she then smiled and saw the control unit for the beds. she then saw a warning sticker on it.
Misty: Warning: This device should never be above 250vac! She grinned an evil grin and used a screwdriver to open the box.
Hazel: (Evily) I think i'll crank the heat up in here a little..No!..ALOT!!!! she set the thermostat at 90 degrees.
Misty: I think the wires need some fixing. she tampered with a few of them and then the timer shorted out, and it rose up to 40 minutes, and the bed temperture rose up from 220vac to 250vac and they saw what happened. the lights got brighter.
Misty: We'll turn her into fried chicken all right, but just to be safe, she grabbed a metal rod and tied it to the handles.
Hazel: There. that'll hold her in. they both laughed evily and left the room and unfroze the other's. Riz couldn't hear them, but she then felt it getting hot.
Riz: That's odd. i thought it i had it at 65 in here. i'd better go tell the owner to get someone to check it. she pushed on the top, but it wouldn't budge, she tried again, but touched the glass.
Riz: Ow..hot! ok, i know i watched the 3rd final destination movie, but this can't be happening to me...It can't!!! she kept struggling. the temperture of the bed was at 320vac now.
Riz: (Struggling) AGHHH....HOT, HOT, AAAHHHHHH...OHMY GOSH!!!!! EAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! She heard something crack. It was the glass above her. she panicked. Smart guy heard something screaming.
Smart Guy: Hey guys, listen. (Riz: WAAAHH!, AAAHH, AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH , AAAAAHH, AAAAHHH!! HELP GET ME OUT!!!!!! ( Glass breaking) WAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!
Smart Guy: Oh snap! they ran in and saw the control box was open, and the bed had something stuck on the handles.
Smart Guy: RIZ!!!!!!
Riz: GUYS, HELP ME!!!!!!!! Turn it off, TURN IT OFF!!!!!!!! Luckly psycho found the circuit box and found the breaker marked tanning beds. he flipped it and the bed turned off.
Psycho: BREAKERS FLIPPED!!!!! they then undid the metal tie and opened the bed and riz stepped out of it. She was a little darker than ever, and had cuts from the glass on her arms.
Riz: What happened?!!! they looked at the thermostat , the timer, and they mainly looked at the control.
Greasy: Someone tampered with it.
Riz: Who could do tht thou-....Oh no. its those weasels. they're trying to kill me cuz i set you free.
Wheezy: But how?! we couldn't see them?!
Riz: It's the leader, guys. She has mystical powers. she must have froze you guys up. The only reason i couldn't hear them was that i was listening to music. we have to find them...and fast! she got dressed, even though it was painful. they all ran to the car. Riz sat between Smart Guy and Wheezy.
Riz: Thanks a million, you guys. if it wasn't for you, i'd be fried chicken.
Wheezy: No problem. Riz took out a cigarette and smoked it. They both looked at her.
Smart Guy: Why are you smoking at a time like this?! she didn't say. she just rose an eyebrow at him.
Smart Guy: Oh yeah. that's right. carry on. Sorry. she smiled and they headed off with the sirens roaring into toontown
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Post by Fisi on Jun 8, 2010 19:36:33 GMT -5
Mmm, fried chicken.
Good chappie.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 8, 2010 19:54:40 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Final Destination ;D I knew that was coming when it said "not to be above 250vac".
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Post by psychojr on Jun 8, 2010 20:45:54 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Final Destination ;D I knew that was coming when it said "not to be above 250vac". you read my mind syrup. wow good chapter.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 8, 2010 21:29:34 GMT -5
Chpt 7 The Fighting REALLY Begin's
Riz: Ok, were here! they all jumped out and went here the buliding where riz would lead them. she saw the other's go in. she had talked over a plan for 5 minutes.
Riz: (Whispering) Let's Go! they all tip-toed near the door, but stupid tripped anf fell on a few crates. misty turned and saw stupid under the crates. she walked over to him angry. He looked at her with innocent eyes.
Stupid: Duh, um..........I'm sorry. i got the wrong place.....hee hee. she grabbed him and pulled him inside and shut the door.
Riz: It worked so far. now when i scream and they shut the door, you all know what to do, right?! They nodded and she ran to the door and knocked.
Misty: Who dares to trepass?!!! she opened it and saw the girl.
Misty: It's you!!!!
Riz: NO! It's the PIZZA MAN. YES ITS ME!!!!!!!!! She grabbed the girl and dragged her inside and threw her by stupid.
Stupid: Duh, Hi Riz.
Riz: Hi stupid. good to see ya! they both high-fived.
Shelia: It's YOU again, isn't it?!
Riz: Who were you expecting, Marelyn Monroe?!
Spikey: I wish it was her! They rolled eyes.
Misty: Well now that we have two cops here, we have a surprise for you too!
Stupid: (Clapping his hands) Oh BOY..Heh hee hee hee, Is it a party?!! Riz slapped her head.
Shelia: No! Not that kind of surprise, ya stupid head, we mean to eliminate ya. she hit him on the head.
Stupid: Oooooh looky there. STARS! she hit him on the head again.
Stupid: Oh boy! Look riz, Cute little tweeting birds!
Shelia: Oh brother. Forget it!
Misty: I think you recall our plan. don't you, missy.
Riz: Yes.
Giggles: Well....Produce it!
Riz: You robbed the stores so you could build a device to eliminate cops all over the world. Bla, bla, bla! And you framed my friends cuz you were sick of them ruining your so called FUN, and bla, bla, bla, bla,bla!!!
Weary: Ok, Just shut up, wise guy! she gave him a rasberry. stupid just suck out his tongue at him making a face. they then looked at misty who pulled down a curtain and there was the machine itself. it was made out of melted gold, silver, and diamonds. they were tv's in the machine.
Riz; Ok, i understand the jewelery and the tv's, but what about the money?!
Blacky: Well how else can we get buttons and levers?! Stupid and Riz looked at each other and back at them.
Misty: SOON, they will be no more, police, cops,patorls, or EVEN canine units. Bad guys can be free from jails everywhere! It will be stealing and fighting 24/7 from now on!!! Just then they heard the sound of a tommy gun going off. Stupid and Riz looked at each other.
Both: Wheezy! the knob fell and they all jumped in with their weapons. Stupid and Riz got their weapons too.
Smart Guy: OK, FREEZE!!!!! All of you are under arrest for stealing, framing, and attemped murder! Drop the weapons and no one gets hurt!!
Weary: No, but this will make YOU obey. He grabbed riz and held a switchblade at her throat.
Stupid: Duh, Oh no you don't! He swung the bat at him and hit him on his head, and he released her.All of sudden, the toon patrol saw something fly past them and hit the floor. it was a baloon filled with dip.
Blacky: What? you'd really didn't think that We wouldn't have dip?!!!
Riz: No! I'd figure you would have some! she punched him in the face and he flew back. misty was about to place a spell on stupid when he turned around and the bat hit her in the face.
Stupid: Duh, Ooops. Hee hee hee hee! he saw a dip baloon coming for him. he got his bat ready and swung at it and it bounced back and it Spikey. He began melting.
Spikey: AAAGGGHHHH!!!!! you will pay for this, PAAAAAYYYY!!!!! he vanished. The other six evil weasels looked at stupid angryly.
Stupid: Duh, Whaaat?!
Riz: Stupid, DUCK!
Stupid: (Looking around) Huh? Riz jumped and pushed him out of the way. before the baloon hit him.
Riz: You can thank me later. right now, we've got friends to save!!! Hey guys get over here! They ran quickly to her and she activated her powers. the weasels all looked at her and they threw all the baloons at them, but when they were about to land on them they froze where they were then they went back to the other's they all freaked out and they managed to miss all of them. They stared at them. they dropped their weapons and surenderred. they were locked up and sent to the jail, where they would be in jail for 25 years. The toon patrol went to the car. Riz then looked at the other's.
Riz: You think i should go to the ER, guys?
Smart Guy: If you think it's serious. i understand the cuts, but why else?
Riz: Ya see, UltraViolet Light Radiation can be harmful to a human sometimes if its too strong. It can cook you not only from the ourside, but from the inside too.
Greasy: Makes perfect sense.
Wheezy: Lets go then. they took her to the Er where she had her cuts treated and wrapped, and to scan her body for any harmful effects of the radiation.
Doctor: Well ms.megan i must say, you are a very lucky girl! The massive UltraViolet Lights from the overheatingbed only cooked your skin, but nothing harmful on the inside. they sighed in relief and went home where they were could be with each other.
Riz: I'll sure never forget what happened tonight for sure.
Psycho: Neither will we riz, neither will we. They all bursted out laughing and enjoyed the rest of the night.
The End
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Post by Syrup on Jun 8, 2010 22:26:47 GMT -5
Then a giant meteor hit and they all died. The end. Just kidding. Nice story.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 9, 2010 9:59:35 GMT -5
that meteor hits bongo and bounces back out to space and hits mars. soory syrup
but good story.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 9, 2010 14:45:09 GMT -5
The meteor hits the movie theatre because of Twilight and it's sagas. . HUZZAH FOR YOU FIC!!!
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Post by Syrup on Jun 9, 2010 18:46:10 GMT -5
MARS! How am I gonna explain this to Marvin... But YES! Twilight must die.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 9, 2010 22:28:19 GMT -5
you;ll think of somthing syrup you always do.
but yeah twilight must die.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 10, 2010 4:55:32 GMT -5
It's just another vampire movie about this really sad of an excuse girl who is loved by two guys that are different and so far if it does happened a robotic unicorn will come a from a rainbow and DESTROY BELLA AND THE OTHERS FOR ALLL!!!! MWAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!
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Post by psychojr on Jun 10, 2010 8:54:48 GMT -5
fisi you got ont twisted mind and a creative one to.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 10, 2010 18:10:02 GMT -5
Aaaaw thank you. <3.
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