Who Framed The Toon Patrol 2

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Chpt 1 The Most Gruesome Evening Ever

It was yet another typical evening for riz and her friends, the toon patrol. Riz was about to take her shower to refresh herself. while she stepped in, she didn't see a hair dryer that was still plugged in was in the tub. At the same time, she turned the water on and stepped in the tub in which the hair dryer had shocked her so hard, she crashed through a wall and into another room. Smart Guy, Greasy, Wheezy, Stupid, and Psycho heard what happened. they ran through the hole in the wall and saw riz who luckly had her towel around her whose hair stuck up frizzled with electricity coming off of it and who had stunned eyes. she looked at them humiliated, but furious.

Riz: Say EVEN one little word, and i'll Kill You!!!!!

Greasy: (Laughing) We Find your attitude rather SHOCKING!!!!!

Wheezy: (Wheezing and Laughing) That must have been ELECTRIFYING for you, Riz!!!!!! she made her teeth razor sharp and growled at them coldly. they both shut up.

Riz: Which one used that hair dryer last?!!! and no one had better lie to me because if you lie to me, it's gonna be 5 x more painful than telling me the truth. she looked at greasy, who was smiling sheepish.

Riz: (Soft but Furious) Did you know this was gonna happen to me?!!!!!

Greasy: Ok, ok! I did this as a prank, but i didn't expect this would happen. i just wanted to give ya a good shock!!

Riz: Stupid, Can i please see your bat for a sec. he tossed it to her. she then, hit greasy with it several times and then kicked him between his legs. she then hit wheezy on the head with it.

Riz: And as for you, wheezy, you should know better than to tease me. she then went to take her shower in the other bathroom. as soon as she was done drying off, and getting dressed, smart guy came up to her.

Smart Guy: Don't worry about the hole, riz. i'm making greasy repair it.

Riz: Thanks. It's his fault and he is paying the price! they both went to the game room where the other's were. they were all playing poker. Greasy and Flasher were cheating without getting caught at all, Stupid had a card in his mouth, Wheezy was waiting, Smart Guy was betting, Slimy was arranging his cards, psycho was building a house of cards, and although riz was great at poker, she wanted to help psycho build a house of cards.

Stupid: Duh, Go Fish!

Wheezy: For the last time, we are playing POKER, ya stupid-head!!!!!!

Riz: I saw that, Greasy! You've got a card up your sleeve.

Greasy: Do not! the card fell out his sleeve and everyone but riz narrowed their eyes at him. What about flasher? he cheated too. 2 cards fell out of his hat.

Smart Guy: i think it's time i hit the hay. Everyone thought so. they all got in the bed and was about to fall asleepwhen they heard a loud bang at the door. smart guy went open it and it was the police. the other six got up and went to see wht was going on. suddently all six of them were hand-cuffed and led outside.

Officer: All right boys. You are under arrest, and dont try any funny stuff!!!! riz was sound asleep when this was going on. she woke up confused the next morning and was about to look for them when she heard her phone go off she answered it. it was smart guy.

Riz: Hello?

Smart Guy: Hey riz.

Riz: Where ARE you guys?!

Smart Guy: At the Toontown Jailhouse. We don't why. they just told us that we were caught robbing the jewelery store, bank, and the tv store. we told them we don't know anything about it, but they said they had us taped. you are our only hope left, riz.

Riz: don't worry. i'll come and visit you right now.

Smart Guy: ok. we'll see ya there.

riz: ok, bye. she then got dreesed and ran into toon town.

Gruesome, isn't it, folks?! XD Ha Ha Ha, Ha ha ha ha

[Fisi]

SHOCK!!! ZZZING!!!

Nice.

[Syrup]

Nice chapter. Hehe, yes it was a bit shocking.
Poker, of course. I like poker. That's exactly how it would go. XD

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Chpt 2 Who And Why?

Riz arrived at the toontown jailhouse 20 minutes later. She walked through the open gate, opened the door, and went to the front desk.

Riz: I'm hereto visit the toon patrol weasels please.

Officer: Folow me. they walked into the cell room.

Officer: Toon Patrol, you have a visitor! the cell door opened up and riz ran inside and hugged them all.

Riz: Can't they at least have a court hearing about this?!

Smart Guy: No can do, riz.

Riz: Why not?!

Greasy: It's the law of toontown.

Wheezy: Ya see, if a toon robs more than one place on the same night or day, they just get thrown in the slammer.

Psycho: They're aint nothing you can do about it!

Stupid: But you are the last person to help us outta here, riz..

Officer: Time's up, miss! Tell your friends goodbye.

Riz; I'll see what i can find. I'll try my best, okay guys. they all hugged.

Psycho: Bye Bye, riz.

Riz; Thanks, psycho and goodbye and good luck tonight to you guys. she ran home to get her evidence bags, magnifying glass, finger/footprint powder, adhesive pads, revolver, and switchblade.she then went to the jewelery store where she found traces of grey fur around the door and glass cases. next was the bank. there she found footprints that didn't even match the other's. And finally, there was the TV store. she searched for 2 hours throughout the whole store, but couldn't find anything. she would come back and search tomorrow. she then went back home where she fell on the bed she and psycho shared from exhaustion. she layed there for 20 minutes and got back up to go to the window.

Riz: Please let my friends and darling be safe, and please let me find evidence tomorrow. and at the jailhouse in cell 350, everyone expect smart guy and psycho were all sound asleep.

Smart Guy: What's troubling you, psycho?

Psycho: I'm so worried about her.

Smart Guy: I know you are, buddy. so am i. we all are. I'm sure she'll figure someway out to get us all out of this mess.

Psycho: You think so?

Smart Guy: I know so. goodnight, psycho. psycho went to the window.

Psycho: please let my girl be safe tonight. And if possible, drop an anvil or flowerpot or both on the crooks head. when he saidthat, a flowerpot and anvil hit his head. he looked back up at the sky.

Psycho: No no! Not on me, the people who framed us!!! with that he passed out on the floor.

[psychojr]

wow not bad

[Syrup]

That flowerpot and anvil have issues.
Good chapter.

[Fisi]

Nice chappie.

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Chpt 3 Suspect Near

Riz then got up the next morining and ate breakest which she had made herself. she then put on a purple shirt that had a long sleeve on the left, but was sleeveless on the right, a purple skirt that went to her knees wearing a black accesorie belt, her black high-heels, and a purple zoot hat with a black band on it. she then went back to the TV store to try to find more evidence again. she then found a trace of green liquid, red liquid, and blue liquid. she knew the green liquid was dip, the red liquid was blood from the glass, but what was the blue liquid. luckly, she had a luquid identificator with her. she put the trace in and in 2 minutes, the liquid turned out to be blue rasberry drink. she turned and saw a full bottle of it and took a drink of it.

Riz: Mmmmmm.. blue rasberry...... looks like our crook was thirsty at the time, but who could have grey fur? she decided to go to the Ink & Paint club to think about it. What she didn't know was that someone was watching her and didn't enjoy her victory. she knockd at the door and bongo looked at her and knew who she was.

Bongo: Come on in, riz.

Riz; Thank's, Bongo. she then walked downstairs and opened two big doors and saw donald and daffy fighting again. she walked over to a table near the stage.

Daffy; I've Worked witha lottta wisecrakers, but you my friend, are dispecable.

Donald; Oh Yeah?! he then grabbed him and threw him in his piano and slammed the cover down.

Daffy: (Inside) This means war!!!!!

Riz: Is there anytime of night they never fight?! she kept watching and laughing at the fight. The person who was following her came in and sat at a table next to her. this person was a female weasel who had a black hood over her head so you couldn't see her face. she looked at the girl angryly.

Weasel: There is no way i'm letting that little brat turn me and my gang in!!!! I won't let it happen!!! I have to get her!!! After 15 minutes at the club, riz got up and left. the weasel knew exacly what she had to do. she followed riz home by going threw the city water tunnels she then stuck her head out and saw her walk in. she grabbed her phone and called her gang.

Weasel: Get over here guys! and bring some rope and a burlap bag too while your at it!!!

To Be Continued......

[psychojr]

nice start on this section

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Chpt 4 Captured

Riz had been home for only about 15 minutes. she was about to cook something when she heard a knock at the door.

Riz: Who is it? no one answered. she walked on the porch to find that no one was there. she was about to walk back in when a bag went over her head and was tied up. she felt herself being thrown on something hard and she was knocked out. the car drove off into a dark alley in toontown. The crooks carried her in. she woke up to light being in her eyes and saw seven weasel's looking at her grinning evily. the leader pulled the hood from her head and she had the exact same color of grey fur. her name was misty

Misty: (Sarcasticly) Well, well, well. ( Turning to a female weasel with Auburn fur) what do we have here, Shelia?!

Shelia: (Sarcasticly) I don't know, Misty. (Turning to a female weasel with Hazel fur) what do you think, Hazel?!

Hazel: ( Sarcasticly) heh.. beats me. I'm not guessing. (Turning to a male weasel with Midnight-Blue fur) guess, Weary.

Weary: You might as well forget me guessing.( Turning to a male weasel with Black fur) Produce your answer, Blacky.

Blacky: I don't guess at things. (Turning to a male weasel with Blonde fur) Try to guess, Spikey.

Spikey: (Sarcasticly)Nah, I'm not saying a thing. (Turning to a female weasel with Brown fur) Guess, Giggles.

Giggles: Ha ha ha ha.... (Sarcasticly) I know. its a little snoop.

Riz: Who are you? what do you want?

Misty: We are the Wicked Weasels. And also, we don't you to turn us in for what we did! that's right. We robbed those places.

Riz: ok. I understand that, but why did you frame my friends?!

Misty: oh that....well we were sick of them ruining our fun, and locking us bad guys up, especially with your help. We wanted to an end to this.

Riz: So wacha do?!

Shelia: Well just shut up and listen, ya pest.

Misty: Ya see, we took the stuff to make a disappearing device to wipe out ALL of the cops from here and all the way around the world. Crooks can cause havic, we get free cash, and we can destroy the world!!!!!

Riz: Well can i ask you something?

Misty: Very well.

Riz: well if you destroy the world, how are you gonna cause havic on other's?! hmmmmm....

Hazel: Oooohh. You really have to ruin our fun, don't you?!!

Riz: Heck, what can i say? I'm a wisecracker. (Chuckling)

Giggle: Keep laughing, sister. cuz this is your last laugh!

Misty: Yeah. And aslo, we'd love something to eat.

Spikey: Yeah. She's already Hot enough to eat!

Shelia: Wait, Wait, I got one, I got one. Make mine a Kid Kat, wacha think. They all busted out laughing. and while they were, riz used her razor sharp teeth to cut her ropes free. she crawled at first passed them and then ran out the door.

Spikey: Say, misty. did we order her to-go?!

Misty: No. Why you say that for?!

Spikey: Cause THERE SHE GOES!!!!

[Syrup]

Nice chapter. They're all very sarcastic. Sarcasm will rule the world!
Shelia, that's my name. Well, except it's Sheila.

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Chpt 5 Evidence And Victory on the Run!

Riz was running as fast as she could go. she was running down a hill when she saw a cactus field below her. she wanted to turn back, but the weasels were behind her. So she used her powers to float above the fields. the other's were confused until.

Spikey: Whoa, whoa, WHOA, WHOA!!!!!! he tried to stop, but he tripped over a root and rolled down the hill and into the cactus field.

Spikey: YEOOOOOOWWWWWW!!!!!! The other's stopped before he did and busted out laughing. he then came back up struggling.

Giggles: There she goes, there she goes!

Spikey: So... Go get her, guys!!!!

Shelia: There ain't no way i'm jumping or going in their!

Giggles: Yeah! You want us to end up looking like you, Needle Head?!! he rolled his eyes.

Spikey: ( To himself) Why did i have to join with a bunch of girls for?!!.....why?, Why?.., WHY?!!!!!!!!!

Blacky: Well we have to get her before she reports us.

Hazel; Don't worry, guys(Holding up a piece of paper) This is her list of what to do when she gets them released. It says that she'll first go over to a tanning salon in town to tune-up her skin tone. she then grinned an evil grin.

Weary; I think i get your plan, Hazel. but you don't mean....

Hazel: oh yes i do, guys! If she wants a tan, we'll give her a tan all right. We'll turn her skin into a special tone. They all chuckled evily.

[psychojr]

oh wow good chapter. you got parts from the lion king didnt you but it turned out nicely though good job.

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You could say that. yeah, but doensn't everybody use stuff out of movies?! : D

[psychojr]

true. i do at least i try to