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Post by Mellow on May 15, 2010 17:17:02 GMT -5
It was the middle of summer, and riz was alseep when suddently her alarm clock went off. it was 7:00a.m.
Riz: (Groaning) All right, all right, im getting up. she hit her alarm clock hard and got out of bed and went to the kitchen to get some coffee. Wheezy and Smart Guy also got up. they saw riz mixing up her glass of coffee.
Smart Guy: Riz, since when did you become an early bird?
Wheezy: Yeah. you're usually up when psycho jumps on your bed.
Riz: I'm just up to go to my job at the beach.
The others came in and they heard.
Greasy: Congrats on the job, riz.
Smart Guy: How much do you get paid?
Riz: ( Sipping her coffee) Exactly $5.00 an hour, plus tips from customers. Our perfect time is lunch hour. You guys wanna come over for lunch? Because your my friends, i can use my employee discount to shorten the charge.
Slimy: So let us get this straight, Because your an employee, you can use employee discounts on almost anything kinda?
Riz: Yep. Pretty much. That is if my boss approves, but i'm sure he won't mind.
Flasher: Who's your boss?
Riz: He's name is richard. Say, what time is it, guys?
Psycho: Its 7:25. why?
Riz: Uh-Oh. i gotta hurry and get ready. She jumped out of the living room and went into her room to change. she came out in a short black skirt, black high-heels, a double-breasted purple dress shirt with a black tie and her black leather jacket, her hair up in a flipped pony tail, wearing a pink and black bowler cap.
Riz: I gotta am-scray you guys. See ya at lunchtime.
Smart Guy: See ya at lunch , Riz. good luck. You're gonna need it.
Riz: You'd better believe it , Smart Guy.
Riz ( Sticking out her thumb) Yo, Benny.
Benny: you call a cab or what? Hop in , Riz. Where to?
Riz: To the beach.
Benny: It's a little early going to beach, isn't it?
Riz: My job is at the beach. I have to hurry.
Benny: No problem. Hold on, Riz.
They drove off to the beach. It took them 5 minutes to get there.
Riz:(Flipping a coin to benny)Thanks a million, benny. Here's a tip. Catcha later, benny.
Benny: You too,riz, and thanks for the tip.
Riz: My pleasure.
Benny drove off and riz quickly ran to a building near a shack.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on May 15, 2010 17:20:04 GMT -5
Very nice!
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Post by Mellow on May 15, 2010 18:30:13 GMT -5
She ran into the buiding where she signed in at 7:30. she was about to go into her changing room when she heard her name over the intercom.
Intercom:Ms.Megan, please report to Mr.Richard's office.
She walked up to a black, wooden door with golden letters painted on the doors. she knocked twice on the door.
Voice: Who is it?
Riz: Its Ms.Megan.
Voice: Please come in.
She opened the door. the room had very little light. her boss had turned around in his chair. he was a toon weasel who was wearing a long, buttoned, black jacket, that went down to his ankles, had red eye's with yellow in the eye background, red fur around a part of his mouth, had a cigar in his hand, and wore a black feroda that shielded his eyes. he then looked up at the teenager with the hat tipped over, hiding his left eye.
Richard: Ey dere, toots.
Riz: You called me, Boss?
Richard: Yeah. I want you to come here a little earlier than when you did this morning. you were the last one to come in.
Riz: Sorry. i'll try to come in early tommorow. I promise you this, boss.
Richard: Please. Call me Richard, dollface.
Riz: Ok, Richard. Do you want me to get you something.
Richard: yeah. why don't you go and get me my cup of coffee?
Riz: Ok. I'll be right back. She then went to the cafeteria and got a cup of coffee and made it the way her boss wanted. She came back in his office with his cup of coffee.
Richard: ( Sipping his coffee) Thanks, toots. I don't know how you do it. This coffee is made perfectly. It looks like it's time for your shift. Get along, doll. i'll see ya at lunch, and i hope you'll be in the shack on time.
Riz: Yes, boss. I mean Richard. She then ran to her changing room to change into her uniform.
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Post by Mellow on May 15, 2010 23:46:24 GMT -5
When it was lunch time, the Toon Patrol had found where Riz had worked at. Just like they promised her, they stopped there for lunch. They found a table for all eight of them. Riz had finally finished changing into her uniform which was a long, black bikini top that tied around her neck and that covered part of her stomach, her black short skirt, Black high-heel sandals with purple swirl's, a purple hairband with a bejewled purple flower on it, and two blue braclets on her wrist's. she put her dress clothes in a bag and put it on a shelf. she then went to the shack where she worked as a waitress. when she got to the shack, she saw her friends. she walked up to them.
Riz: Hey guys.
They looked up and took a good look at riz.
Smart guy: Hey Riz. You look wonderful.
Greasy: No kidding.
Riz So what do you guys want to drink?
Smart Guy: Fruit Punch
Greasy:Mango milkshake
Wheezy: Sweet Tea
Psycho: Coffee
Stupid: Chocolate Milkshake
Slimy: Lemon-lime Drink
Flasher: Fruit Punch
Riz: No problem.
As she was walking, a table where two tough-looking toon male weasels were, looked up at the girl.
Weasel 1: Man oh man. talk about babes in the bar.
Weasel 2: What a doll ( whistling as she's walking away)
When she came back 5 minutes later, she handed all 7 of her friends their drinks. when she was done passing them their drinks, her boss who was on a bar stool near the table called her.
Richard: Hey, Doll.
Riz: Yes Richard.
Richard: Why don't you go get my two brothers over there their order. He then slapped her on her bottom.
Riz: Ok richard, Im going.
Smart guy looked at him as she was walking away.
Smart Guy: A ladies man, huh?
Richard: (looking up) You could say that. Why? You got a problem with that?
Smart Guy: Nah. just wondering. Are you riz's boss?
Richard: Yeah. How do you know her?
Greasy: We are her friends.
Riz returned to the table.
Richard: And one more thing, toots.
Riz: Yes.
Richard:Go get my case from my office will ya, Dollface? He then slapped her on her bottom again.
Riz: Ok, Ok, im Going. she then walked off again.
Richard: What a Doll(whistling).
The two weasels from the table who were his brothers walked up to him.
Weasel 1: That's a fine slice of cake, huh bro?
Richard: You'd better believe it, Gus
Weasel 2: She's a fiesty one. I like that.
Richard: Well you do make a point, Ben.
Riz returned with her bosses case and handed it to him.
Richard: Your shift is up, Toots. Go ahead and take the rest of the day off, will ya, doll.
Riz: Thanks, Richard. She then went to the table with her friends.
Richard: Come on, boys. Let's go to my office to talk some business. the three then walked to the building. Riz then to the table where the toon patrol were. she sat down on a chair.
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Post by Mellow on May 16, 2010 0:39:59 GMT -5
Riz went to where the toon patrol were sitting at, and she sat on a chair.
Riz: Finally, I thought i'd never get a break. What happened today while i was gone?
Smart Guy: Eh not much. Stupid tripped over something and hit the wall so hard, a punch of pots and pans fell on his head.
Wheezy: ( snickering) It was pretty funny. Even his stars had stars.
She shot a glare and a growl at wheezy. he then stopped snickering, and drinked his tea.
Stupid: That frying pan antidote didn't help none at all. i still feel pain.
Riz: I'll go get a bag of ice for you, stupid.
Greasy:(Snickering) Looks like someone has a crush on somebody.
she shot an evil-looking glare at greasy and did a angry growl at him. he shut right up.
Greasy: It was a joke.
Riz: well i don't take jokes at all, do i greasy? i'll only laugh if their funny.
Wheezy: Burned.
greasy glared at him. Riz walked off and returned with a ice-pack and put it on stupid's head.
Stupid: Duh thanks, Riz. I'm feeling better already. ( holding the ice-pack up)
Riz: My pleasure. Another sasified customer.
Smart Guy: Hey riz, we're going somewhere. you wanna come? he did give you the rest of the day off.
Riz: Good point. ok, just let me change and get my stuff, ok?
Greasy: Ok, but hurry as fast as you can.
Riz: Don't rush me, greasy. She ran off into the building to her changing room. as she walked in, she felt someone grab her arms and cover her mouth. she then saw a gun being held to her face.
Voice: ok, sweetheart, make any movement, and i'll blow your head off, got it?! riz shook her head yes, and the two walked out of her room. while they were walking, the toon patrol were waiting on her.
Smart Guy: What's keepin her so long? i know women take long getting ready, but this is ridiculous.
Greasy: I'm starting to think something has happened because we know she doesn't take this long to get dressed.
Slimy: You guys noticed that her boss and his brothers had said that they had business to take care of something?
Flasher: I'm with slimy. he and his brother's seem sinister to us, what do you guys think?
Wheezy: You two do make a point. you don't suppose that their plan involves her, do you?
Smart Guy: Maybe. lets go to her room and check. They left their table and into the building and found her room.
Smart Guy: You in here, Riz? He knocked and the door opened up. he turned on the light to only fing a note on a mirror. it read
To this person who find this,
We have took ms.megan to our secret hideout. We figure we know who's reading this. if this is her friends, The Toon Patrol, hear this, just meet at our hideout in toontown. We'll be waiting. The Sinister's
Smart Guy: Get in the car boys, pronto. we gotta hurry to toontown.
Psycho; Why? What happened?
Smart Guy: Some guys called the sinister's kidnapped riz, and i have a feeling i know who they are. they all hopped in the paddy wagon and drove off fast with the siren going off.
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Post by Mellow on May 16, 2010 1:21:58 GMT -5
Meanwhile, when they reached their hideout, Riz was shoved out gently by one of the weasels, and was still held at with a gun to her head.
Gus: Hey brother. What should we do with the babe?
Richard: Nothing yet. Let's just show her our plan.
Ben: ( now holding his gun at her chest) With pleasure.
Riz: What's going on? What do you want with me?
Richard: Well be quiet and then you'll know, toots.
he then went to a barrel and picked up a baloon filled with liquid in them.
Richard: Can you guess what this is.
Riz: Yes. It's a water baloon. So?
Richard: True, but this isn't water inside. he then threw it at a statue and it bursted green, steamy liquid all over it. Riz then knew instantly what it was.
Riz: oh my gosh, its...It's....DIIIIP!!!
Ben: That's right,sweetheart.Enough to dip toontown and everything in it's path.
Richard: 350 baloons filled with hot dip will be dropped out of the sky and land in toontown.
Riz: I suppose you think no one will notice that toontown is gone?
Gus: Why should we worry when your riding on a road at 100 mph.
Riz: What are you three talking about, There's no road past toontown. everyone knows that.
Richard: Not quite yet, but we have been planning to make a new city for the bad kinds of people.we are calling it Villianville.
Riz: So that's why you kidnapped me? I don't get it.
Richard; Of course not. We didn't want you to watch your beloved friends melt. now how's about we put you down, what do you think boys?
Gus: Sure(pulling out his swichblade and touching her cheek with his finger) i'd love to cut her pretty face up.
Ben( pulling out his revolver) and i'd love to make her into the finest swiss cheese. What are you gona do to her, brother?
Richard: I think i'll file her nails to the end of the nailbed (pulling out a switchblade).
Riz: You guys won't get away with this. My friends will come and find you, beat you up, snd then lock you up.
Richard: You're being spirited again, dollface.
Gus and Ben; He hates that.
Riz: Somebody HELP!!!!
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Post by Mellow on May 16, 2010 3:03:04 GMT -5
Just then, gun shots were heard and the door knob fell off, and the toon patrol kicked the door open. the three weasels and riz turned around.
Smart Guy: FREEZE! you three are under arrest. drop the weapons and no one gets hurt.
Richard: Grab the baloons boys. We'll see to her later.
Smart Guy: Water baloons. water can't kill a toon.
Riz: Be careful, guys. That ain't water. it's dip. they were gonna destroy all of toontown with the dip baloons. but i shouldn't worry about getting hit with one right?
Ben: Wrong, sister. these also have acid in them, and you know what acid does to a human right?
Riz: Yes. It burns our skin quickly and deeply to the bone.
Gus: How's about we pelt them know, bro?
Richard: Yes. Lets start.......NOW!
The sinister gang started pelting at the toon patrol with baloons, but kept missing. but when one of them went to throw one at riz, psycho quickly jumped out in front of her and the baloon hit him and bursted all over him. He was slowy beggining to melt away. Riz and the other's watched in shock as psycho was dissolving. Riz quckly ran over to him.
Riz: Psycho no. don't go!
Psycho: Riz, I... then his mouth and head disappeared. the three weasels were snickering over her misery.
Richard: Looks like the girl has lost her secret crush, huh boys.
Gus: (sarcasticly) Yeah. What a shame.
Ben: (Laughing) What a pity it must for you, sugar.
Riz then looked up at them. the toon patrol saw her eyes change into a fiery red color, and her normal, human teeth went razor sharp. she then stood up and stuck her hands at them. then at the same time her eyes went into a glowing purple color and then the three weasels were surrounded by a purple forcefield where things could go in, but could never get out if she wanted them to not get out. the toon patrol wached as she stuck her right hand out and picked up the barrel of baloons without touching it, and placed it above the forcefield, and grinned a sinister smile.
Rip: How's about i drop it these on them just like they did to psycho?
Smart Guy: Yeah. Give them a taste of there own medicine.
Riz: With pleasure. She then dumped all the dip baloons into the forcefield and the three weasels started melting.
Gus: You've won this round..... for now!!
Ben: But you haven't seen the last of us, Coppers!!
Richard: If we shall ever return, You all will pay for you did to us,PAY!!!! then they all dissapeared. Riz then ran back to psycho's puddle.
Riz: Please tell me you got some anti-dip with you.
Smart Guy: Yeah there's a barrel in the back. let's go get it. they returned with the barrel, and poured it onto his puddle. they waited, but nothing happened. Riz then broke down near his puddle.
Riz: it must have dipped him so badly. He gave up his life to save me. she cried and a couple of her tears ran off her cheek and landed in his puddle. Smart Guy went to her side and patted her back. just as they were getting up, they heard a boiling noise.
Smart Guy: What the?!
They turned and saw that psycho's puddle was boiling and glowing in multiple colors. then after that, a flash of light blinded their eyes. when the flashing stopped, they uncovered their eyes and heard a high-pitched giggle.they all looked up and saw psycho.
Riz: PSYCHO!! We're glad to see you alive again!! they all ran to psycho and did a group hug.
Riz: But what puzzle's me is how did he come back, even though the anti-dip didn't help at first?
Greasy: Your tears and feelings from your heart maybe.
Riz: Whatever it was, i'm just happy were all together again. and thats all that matters. they then got the police over to the hideout and showed them the crooks.
Officer: So these three men kidnapped her?
Smart Guy: Yes officer, and here's a note that they wrote. i think you and the others at the lab will find it a perfect trace to them.
they soon went back to the beach to enjoy the sunset. Slimy, Stupid, and Flasher went go fishing while Riz, Smart Guy, Greasy, Wheezy, and Psycho sat down on beach chairs. As riz was sitting up talking, her top suddently was snatched off of her.
Riz: Ahhh( covering her chest up with a towel blushing like a cherry)
Greasy:(snickering)That's something you'd least expect to happen at beach. She Glared and growled at him. he shut right up.
Smart guy: Yep, grease. that's the least you'd see.
Riz: ok, who snatched it off with their fishing pole?!!
Flasher then came up to her with a worried expression on his face, and was smiling meekly. he handed her her top back with shakey hands, and she snatched it from him.
Flasher: Um.... i'm sorry.. he he.
Riz: (speaking furious,but soft) What were you guys doing over there?!!
Flasher: Um... Triple Dog Dare.... he he.
Riz: Who dared you?
Flasher: Slimy.
Riz: Go get him, and you too come back here, got it?!
The 2 weasel's then came back with scared looks on there faces.
Riz: Boys bend down hear, will ya?!
when they did, riz hit them with a frying pan multiple times until they saw tweeting birds.
Riz: If any of you guys attempt to do this sick dare again, I'll hit even harder with a baseball bat. got it?!
All of them shook their heads fast. and she left to go change her outfit.
Wheezy: We sure don't wanna do that again.
Slimy and Flasher: No kidding.
Greasy: She's as tough as you are, boss.
Smart Guy: Don't remind me.
As soon as she changed, they left the beach to go home, eat dinner, watch tv, and go to bed. psycho and riz went to the room they shared together.
Riz: Psycho.
Psycho: Yeah, Riz?
Riz: I want you to know i love you. I've loved you more than any girl's ever loved a weasel like you.
Psycho: Well, what i tried to say at the hideout was my true feelings for you, riz. your a good friend.
Riz: Well Psycho, i wanna be more than just your friend.
They looked each other in the eyes and slowy leaned into each other's faces and placed each other's lips together and kissed.the moment was interupted when stupid saw them, looking a bit confused as usual.
Psycho: What?
Riz: Stupid, promise me you won't speak of this to anyone, ok?!
Stupid: Duh, ok.
Smart guy walked in to tell them to cut off the light when he saw all three of them on the bed.
Smart Guy: What the heck is going on in here?!
Riz: Nothing we were just talking.
Stupid: But i just saw you and psycho ki-. Psycho covered his mouth up, and smiled a grin at smart guy. He looked at them strangely, but didn't say anything. He kinda figured what stupid was about to say.
Smart Guy: Well just cut off the light will ya?
Riz: We are. Goodnight smart guy, goodnight stupid. stupid was leaving the room to go to his.
Smart Guy: (thinking to himself) She can tell me when she's ready. i knew what stupid was about to say, anyway.
Riz and Psycho got dressed,then they both went into the bed they shared, and fell fast asleep, with riz hugging up to psycho just like he was her teddy bear, dreaming about each other. Riz would never forget this day ever.
THE END
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Post by Syrup on May 16, 2010 16:15:12 GMT -5
*giggle* Tears and feelings... *straight face* Sorry. Nice story.
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Post by psychojr on May 16, 2010 17:59:05 GMT -5
very good story.
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