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Post by Mellow on May 11, 2010 15:35:14 GMT -5
Riz had just been going back to school. she heard her friends saying something about the dance tonight, and she was excited. her boyfriend Jake had asked her to go with her, she said yes. But however, jake didn't really like her. He just used her. he was planning on humiliating her in front of the whole school on dance night. she didn't know about this. She just decided to worry about a dress later on. She couldn't wait to tell the others.
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Post by Fisi on May 11, 2010 15:39:03 GMT -5
OH, THAT MEANER JAKE!!!
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Post by Mellow on May 11, 2010 15:48:45 GMT -5
as she was running inside the house after school, the toon patrol was napping.
Riz: I'm HOME!!!!!!
Smart guy fell off the couch, greasy, wheezy,and slimy's chair's fell backwards with them on them, stupid hit his head on his bedpost, psycho and flasher fell out of thier beds.
Riz: Sorry guys. I guess i'm just excited, thats all.
Smart Guy: What's all the excitment about, riz?
Riz: Let's just say my boyfriend jake asked me to the school dance.
Smart Guy: Well congrats. Good luck at the dance, tonight, riz. you're gonna need it.
Riz: You better believe it. it gets crazy, i tell you.
Greasy: Do you even have a dress to wear?
Riz: Sure i do. I got 5 dresses.
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Post by Mellow on May 11, 2010 16:08:28 GMT -5
It was 7:00 p.m., and riz was finished getting ready for the dance. She walked in the room where the toon patrol was, and they couldn't believe their eye's on how she looked. She wore a black dress with one strap on her right shoulder, black high-heels, her black diamonded choker necklace, two gold braclets on each wrist, and her hair was styled perfectly. she looked a young celebrity.
Stupid: Did you get taller?
Riz: No. It's just my high-heels. How do i look?
Psycho: Your pretty to us, right boss?
Smart Guy: Yeah.
Just then, a knock was at the door. Riz opened it and it was jake.
Riz: how do i look jake?
Jake: Gosh you sure do look great, megan.
Riz: thanks. I'll be home later guys. Be careful if anything happens ok?
Smart Guy: thanks,. same to you too.
Riz: okay bye.
She and jake then went off to the school dance.
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Post by Fisi on May 11, 2010 16:12:52 GMT -5
Man, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Post by Mellow on May 11, 2010 16:37:45 GMT -5
10 minutes later, the 2 arrived at the dance. Their was a dj, Snack bar, and other things. While riz and jake were dancing, jake's brother, Jack had brought a projector screen in the dance room. and when riz went to get some punch, jake had everything going as his plan was. When riz returned, she dropped the punch glasses at what she saw. Some how, that picture on the projector screen was a picture of her when her two-piece swimsuit top had popped off at her house at her pool and she recalled that jake had took the picture when it popped off. The whole school started laughing at her. Even her friends laughed at her.
Riz: Jake, how could you. i thought you loved me.
Jake love you? Ha! Your just a psycho who was thrown in an asylum and your also a pathetic, ugly, moron who completely fell for me.
Riz: Well I hope your proud of yourself, and that picture you took!!!
And she ran off, crying. she went to a bar in town, and luckly, she had her new fake ID with her. The bartender had saw her and knew who she was.
Bartender: Hey megan, good to see ya. what will you have?
Riz: Give me my usual.
Bartender: Okay, he said, grabbing her fake ID, and handing her a Strawberry Daiquiri. She drank three of her favorite, and got drunk. As she was finishing her third drink, psycho came in and saw her.
Psycho: What are you doing here?
Riz: What am i doing?! What am I doing here?!!!.. Well what are YOU doing here...you and your little psychotic, but cute stuff!!
Bartender: Sorry. She had a little too much to drink.
Psycho: I see what you mean. Riz, your too young to even drink this stuff.
Riz: Well, no one's ever too young to play patty cake, are they? How's about i get a little info on that!!!
Psycho: Come on, i'll walk you home.
Riz: Ooh, NOW i'm interested!!!
He took her hand and led her out. As they were walking, she hit her head.
Riz: Look at the pretty stars
Psycho: Wow, you are drunk. next time, i-
before the words had passed his lips, she kissed him on his cheek. psycho shook his head and sighed.as they were walking to the house, riz howled out at the moon near the steps. Psycho sighed once more, and started to pull her up the stairs.
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Post by Mellow on May 11, 2010 17:18:48 GMT -5
The toon patrol watched as psycho was pulling riz in the room.as the 2 were walking in, riz hit her head and fell down.
Riz: Wow, look at the shiny stars.when she was getting up, she hit her head again.
Riz: Ooo, and now look at the cute tweeting birds. How about we go shoot some pool, guys? and then she passed out backwards on the floor.
Flasher: Ooo, that's gotta hurt.
Smart Guy: What happened to her on the way back , Psycho. it must have made her real sleepy.
Psycho: She's drunk. she hit the daiquiri's.
Greasy: What could have made her drink so much?
Psycho: I'm thinking it involves the dance. cause i noticed her eyes were red, and her mascara running.
Smart Guy: We'll ask her when she wakes up.
Psycho: Will someone please help me put her in her bed.
Wheezy: Okay, I'll help ya Psycho. and he grabbed her under her arms while psycho had her by her legs.Greasy pulled back the covers on her while wheezy and psycho layed her carefully on her bed. they pulled the covers on her and turned off her room light. The next morning, smart Guy heard screaming in her room. They all came to see that Riz was screaming in her sleep. Smart guy Shook her until she woke up.
Riz: (moans) What happened last night? i feel like someone hit me on my head with a frying pan.
Smart Guy: Why did you drink yourself like that for?
Riz was about to tell when her phone went off. she answered it and it was jake.
Riz: What do YOU want?!!
Jake:( snickering ) how'd it feel last night, stripper.
Riz: Oh wouldn't you like to know. i hope you and your brother are proud of yourselves,and that picture you showed the whole school, you two-face, backstabbing, lying little, NO GOOD selfish, heartless, sneaky, cheating TRAITOR!!! You broke my heart last night. I'm not a stripper in this case. IN fact, they probably think that now after what you did last night!! i don't need your pity, and i dont want to hear your STUPID explanations on why i should come back to you. I hope your new girlfriend will enjoy you doing that to her too. Thanks for breaking my heart and my reputation at school. i hope you have good day!
She deleted his number and fell on her pillow crying. The toon patrol couldn't believe what they saw or heard. they never seen her this way.
Wheezy: Poor kid. He must have done something to her last night.
Greasy: That's why she hit the bottle.
Smart Guy: No wonder. she was upset.What would her boyfriend do with a picture to make her upset? he and the others went to comfort her.
Riz: ( sobbing) Why does love have to hurt you so bad for?!!
Smart Guy: It's okay. Love can hurt you like a falling flower pot landing on your head.
Greasy: Yeah. Don't let him hurt you like that.
Wheezy: He's probably too good for you anyway.
Riz: you know what guys, your right.
Psycho: By the way, what was it about a picture you were talking about on the phone?
Riz: You see, a couple monthes back when me and jake were together, we loved going swimming. One day, he brought his camera. when he was taking a picture of me, some how, the top of my two-piece swimsuit popped off, exposing my chest. he took a clear shot of it too. I told him to throw it away, and he told me he would, but instead he showed to everyone last night at the dance. It was humiliating.
Stupid: Well that just awful.
Slimy: Why would he do that to you for?
Riz: he said that i was stupid, and man, was he right. i never felt more stupid in my life.
Flasher: you are not stupid, Riz. You are a smart, sweet, kind girl, and dont let anyone say your not, right guys?
Stupid: Right. You are the smartest and toughest girl we know in the patrol.
Riz: Your right. Thanks guys for cheering me up at a desperate time. )hugging all of them)
Smart Guy:Our Pleasure.
Greasy: Boss, there's an emergency in toontown.
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Post by Fisi on May 11, 2010 17:24:50 GMT -5
Nice chappie.
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Post by Mellow on May 11, 2010 20:07:28 GMT -5
Riz quickly grabbed her revolver, and switchblade off her table and got in the front with smart guy and psycho. she sat in the middle.
Smart Guy: So how long were you too together for?
Riz: About 2 years or so. He acted suspicious, but i just thought that it was his humor. i guess i was wrong.
Psycho: Don't worry. we all have our mishaps.
About 10 minutes later, they arrived in toontown, they saw 5 humans running away with weapons, money, and jewlery. they ran in the direction the crooks were running in, but when they turned to a corner, they were gone. as they were running past a building, someone grabbed riz and pulled her in. Psycho was behind her and saw what happened.
Psycho: Riz just got snatched by someone in here!!
Slimy: You guys go rescue her. me and flasher will take care of the crooks!
Flasher: We'll meet with you guys later. we get the cops over here too. And he and slimy ran off.
Wheezy: Let's go get her!
they tried to open the door, but it was locked. Wheezy then pulled out his tommy gun and shot the door down. they went inside. Then suddently, they heard a shriek of distress. it was riz. they ran to the door and peeked through it. they saw Riz tied to a chair, kicking and struggling.
Voice: Search the doll, boys.
Voice 2: I'll handle this hot slice of cake, guys. it was a male weasel with a brown jacket with a white tank top, a loose black tie, had slick black hair like slimy's, red eyes with yellow in the eye background with a cigarette in his mouth who then put it out, He was thirteen in human years and rolled up his sleeve with his tongue hanging out while looking at her. he then stuck his hand between her breasts and was searching her. she was still smiling a devious smile when there was a snapping sound, and the weasel who was searching her started cursing in pain and pulled his hand out and there on his arm was a bear trap on his arm. She quickly looked up, pretending not to know what happened.
The toon patrol stood there with their eyes wide.
Wheezy: Ok, I knew she was prepared, but not that prepared.
Greasy: She is one, clever girl, huh boss?
Smart Guy: you got that right..
Riz: Bet you'll think twice before doing that again, huh, stud?
Wheezy:Burned.
Voice 1: Shut up, toots!
Riz: Say, you sound familiar.
Voice 1: You are right on that one, Stripper.
Riz: DON'T CALL ME STR-is this who i think it is?!!
Voice: More than you know, Dollface.
The two other men uncovered themeselves. it was jake and jack.
Riz: What do you 2 want with me now?
Jack: Oh we're gonna surprise you with it.
they then tied up the chair she was still tied to onto a hook. they lifted her up above a tank of electric eels, and jellyfish.
Riz: oh my gosh. what are you going to do to me?!
Jake; First off, we drop you in this tank and these electrifying animals will cook you inside out. then, we feed you to the sharks.
Riz: what are you talking about? there's no sharks in here.
Jack: oh really?
a curtain lifted up and sure enough, there were 5 sharks in the tank.
Riz: i suppose you think no one's going to notice i disappeared all of a sudden?
Jake: we told them you were moving into a house in canada.
Riz: You won't get away with this!
Jack: Sure. Just watch us. He began lowering her into the tank full of eels and jellyfish.
Riz: HELP ME!!!!
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Post by psychojr on May 11, 2010 20:11:00 GMT -5
oh wow that is great chapter. good work.
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Post by Mellow on May 11, 2010 20:55:14 GMT -5
Suddently, theyre were gun shots heard and the door fell down. Jack ,Jake, and the weasel turned to see who it was.
Riz: Guys! thank goodness. help me , stop this thing!!
Psycho: Hang on, I'm coming. He climbed up on the ladder and hit the stop button and just in time befor Riz was halfway into the water. then suddently, Jack grabbed him and was about to throw him in the water but psycho twisted free and escaped him.
Riz: Guys! Be careful, this isn't ordinary water, it's dip.
Jack: Great. Ya just gave it away.
Riz: (sticking her tongue out) So?! Weasel: So we hope ya have a good dip, sweetheart. he hit the button again and she was dropping faster. then she stopped again. and when she turned around,the weasel who searched her got kicked hard by smart guy so hard, he fell in the dip fast and dissolved. greasy was pulling her across the shark tanks when something was seen passing the rope that supported her and was cutting it. it was a dart. and more darts were thrown above her head and the rope was on its last thread whenever it broke, sending her falling into the shark tank. she though it was the end.suddently, someone who was swinging on a rope caught her. it was stupid.
Stupid: hold on tight.
Riz: Believe me, i am.
But the 2 brothers didn't give up easy jack was about to shoot the rope when he was hit on the head with a vase, whiched knocked him out instantly. Jake went to throw his knife at the rope when someone's bat hit him on his head and knocked him out too. they hand-cuffed the boys arms and ankles, and carried them outside while waiting on the cops to come.
Psycho: that was pretty funny what happened to that weasel.
Riz: You guys saw that, didn't you?
Smart Guy: Yeah.
Wheezy: Nice booby trap ya had on ya.
Greasy: Yes. Indeed a clever thing.
Riz: Thanks. I always have one on me, no matter what.
Stupid: Even when you're sleeping?
Riz: Yep.
Soon, the cops came and arrested the boys. The toon patrol drove back home and Riz made her famous chocolate cake with some help from wheezy. when they were done eating, they sat down and watched the news on the incident in toontown today. they sent the 2 boys to 20 years in prison on many charges. later on everyone went ito their rooms to get some sleep. Riz and Psycho had shared a room with one bed in it. But they didn't mind it really.
Riz: Psycho, i want to say thanks for trying to save me.
Psycho: It was nothing really. Just your average guy saving a girl in distress. Listen, i want you to know i think your pretty.
Riz: Really? thanks. i also want you to know i think your cute. You really make me laugh.
Psycho: (blushing) I thought the same thing too.
Riz then kissed psycho fully on his lips, and he blushed like a cherry all over, and had hearts in his eyes while his heart was bouncing in his chest.
Riz: How about we keep it a secret, huh?
Psycho: I agree with that.
They crawled into bed and fell fast asleep dreaming about all the adventures they would all have together. She knew now she didn't have to worry about jake anymore. she found someone who understands her better now., and that's all she needed.
THE END
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Post by psychojr on May 11, 2010 21:03:58 GMT -5
oh man psycho gets Riz in the end wow good chapter
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Post by Syrup on May 11, 2010 23:03:52 GMT -5
Great story... Psycho got the dame... nice.
Dip scares me. Dip scares me very much. Curse you, Dip.
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Post by psychojr on May 12, 2010 8:16:08 GMT -5
DIP. hmm go ahead make my day. hhehehe he.
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