The New Kid

[Mellow]

The year is 1947. The Toon Patrol was busy moving into a new duplex apartment. all 7 were just finishing when someone shouted "LOOK OUT!" they all jumped out of the way.

[Weasel Freak]

Would you mind if I critique this?

[Mellow]

The person skated back to them. the person was a developed girl who was 13, had brown hair, violet-blue eyes, and was wearing a purple shirt that had no sleeves, but it covered the back of her neck, a maching purple skirt that had short shorts attached underneath it , a black choker necklace, black skates, and a black leather jacket.

Girl: Sorry. i tried to stop, but something was stuck in one of my wheels. Are you boys okay?

Smart Guy: Yeah. Watch where ya going,kid

Wheezy: We Outta tell your parents.

Girl: I dont have parents or a family. at least not anymore.

Smart Guy: What do ya mean?

Girl: i was always an outcast in my family. I was also the servant of my family. i always had to cook, clean, watch the young kids, shop, and and everthing else. no one would help me out. My parents told me that i was an accident to begin with.
So when i turned 12, they sent me into an asylum, told the workers that i was crazy, and left me there forever. never came and saw me. they did terrible things to me there.it was pure toture. i had to wear a straightjacket, which almosted killed me by putting too much pressure on my chest cause they tightened it too much. then one year later, i was released. i only had a few dollars, a switchblade, my revolver, cigarettes and a lighter, and the clothes on my back.

Greasy: Why would a beautiful senorita like you be treated like that?

Girl: That's what i ask myself too.

Smart Guy felt like crying. he felt sorry for her as much as the other's did.

Smart Guy: You just earned yourself a new home, toots.

Girl: Really?

Smart Guy: Yes.

Girl: Thank you so much. (Hugging Smart Guy)

Smart guy: So whats your name, dollface.

Girl: my name is Megan, but people call me Riz. What yours?

Smart Guy: The names Smart Guy.

Greasy: I'm Greasy

Wheezy: Wheezy's the name.

Stupid:Duh, hi i'm Stupid.

Psycho: Hee hee, i'm Psycho.

Slimy:Hey i'm Slimy.

Flasher: I'm Flasher.

Riz: pleased to meet you all

[Syrup]

Ooh, new story. Nice start. You even got Slimy and Flasher in, cool.

[psychojr]

i wasnt exspecting slimy and flasher but very good start.

[Mellow]

As all of them were going inside, a group of boys on a golfcart drove up.

Boy: Hey Crazygirl, How's it been since you were released?

Boy 2: Ha ha. Good one. not bad-looking for a crazygirl, toots.

The toon patrol saw riz's eye's go into an instant angry glare at the boys.

Slimy: (whispering) I got a bad feeling about this.

Riz: What the heck do you losers want? I'm not crazy. So cut me some slack ok?!, and go jump in garbage like you always do!

Boy 1: you keep that up, Missy and im gonna have to wash out your mouth.

He put a bar of soap in her mouth and she fell backwards. She coughed bubbles while trying to cough it up.

all 5 boys started laughing.

Riz: STOP LAUGHING AT ME!!!

Boy 2: We have a fiesty one right here.

She coughed up the soap and grabbed a plunger.

Flasher: (whispering to smart guy) Well this can't be good.

Smart Guy( whispering to the other's) Oh they are going to get it now if they dont stop it. who knows how hard she hits.

Riz: STOP THAT LAUGHING!! YOU KNOW WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN IF YOU DON'T

Riz: STOP( hitting two boys in the head with it)

Riz: LAUGHING?!!( Hitting another boy in the stomach)

A fourth boy was still laughing when she threw the plunger and it stuck to his mouth.

Riz: One of these you were gonna get hurt laughing!!

Riz: As for you buster, one more stupid move like that again, and i'll take you and your friends out for a shave and a haircut. And don't worry, i'm skilled with a razor.

Wheezy:Burned

She then pulled out her switchblabe and waved it around at them and snickered.

Riz: Now BEAT IT, suckers!

They immediatly scrambled on the golfcart and drove off fast.

The toon patrol just stood there with their eyes wide and their mouth's dropped.

Greasy: (whispering) That's one tough girl, eh boss?

Smart Guy: (whispering) Yeah. She doesn't enjoy being called crazy.

Riz pulled out a cigarette and her lighter and lit it up and took a deep breath and blew out two smoke clouds from her mouth. she looked back at the weasels.

Riz: What? i don't put up with people like those jerks calling me crazy or other things. But speaking of bullying, what do you guys do?

Smart Guy: We deal with bad guys. and by the way, i have to give you credit. we never saw a single human girl like you beat up someone before.

Riz: Well thanks, I don't let people punch,kick,call me names, or touch me. That's how i handle things.

Smart Guy: Well you can help us. With skills like that, you are a good fighter.

Riz: Well, guilty as charged, im in.

[Fisi]

Nice chappies.

You go, Riz. ^_^.

[Mellow]

Stupid: Duh, boss there's an emergency down in toontown!

Smart Guy: Okay, let's move it, guys!

Riz, Psycho, Stupid, Slimy, and Wheezy hopped in the back of the car. it was dark , but riz didn't mind. she then felt someone hop on her back. she felt some spiky fur and she then knew it was.

Riz: Psycho is this you?

Psycho:( giggling) Yes. hee hee heehee heehee. I'd hang on if III were youuuu.

Riz: why exacly?

Stupid: Boss is one fast driver.

Then the car started going fast. everyone was thrown around in the back. Riz was holding on to Psycho who wouldn't get off and was giggling still, Stupid was whimpering, Wheezy was thrown constantly, and Slimy was slipping while trying to sit down. after 5 minutes, they stopped. they jumped out of the back and were at the toontown bank. All of them got out their weapons, and went into the bank where they saw two people dressed in black, holding guns to a banker.

Person: Make one move and the banker gets it!

Smart Guy: Look, we dont want any trouble. just return the money, and they're won't be any harm.

Person 2: Well if this doesn't make you, maybe this will. the person then grabbed riz and held a gun at her head.

Riz: Guy's! Save yourselfs!

Greasy: No! No amigo of our team is getting hurt, or left behind!

he ran to the person who had riz and opened his switchblabe. he went to stab the person to let her go. but as he went to stab the person, he was punched in the face by the second person, but as the person was doing this, riz escaped his wrath and grabbed him by the neck and held her knife at him.

Riz: Now, we can do this the easy way, or we can do this the hard way. which one will it be?!

the person had dropped their gun. and when they did, Riz picked it up and raised it at the first person.

Riz: Drop the gun, or we will pump you full of lead.

Person 1: Make me.

she, smart guy, greasy, and wheezy all started shooting at him, and this made him let the banker go. he dropped his gun and raised his arms in the air while she and greasy surround him holding their guns at him. The cops came in 5 minutes later after smart guy had called them.

Officer: well lets see who they are.

The officers uncovered their heads and the girl was shocked when she saw them.

Riz: DAD?!!, GEORGE?!!

George: Well if it isn't the nuisance of the family. we thought you'd still be in the place.

Riz: SHUT UP! I'm NOT 7 YEARS OLD ANYMORE, GEORGE!!!

Dad: Don't talk to him like that!

Riz: why shouldn't i? You were the ones who put me threw alot, and not to mention put me in an asylum!!! i wasn't mean't to suffer. I was the one who did a ton for you guys, and look what i got in return.

Officer: well, well. looks like these 2 will be in an asylum themeselves for i don't know.... how's 10 years sound to you, miss?

Riz: Sounds Excellent to me. I think they love it just like i did.

The officers took the 2 men away. and they all went to a restraunt where they all got spaghetti. Riz didn't see that she and psycho were eating the same noodle. before the toon patrol could warn her, she and psycho's lips touched each others. Psycho blushed red all over and melted into a puddle.
Riz blushed pink in her face.

Riz: Guy's, remind me to be careful when we order spaghetti again,ok?

Greasy: (snickering) Sure thing, but i should have brought the camera to take that shot for psycho to remember this night.

Smart Guy: Yeah. Ain't that cute, guys? Young love right there.

Riz rolled her eyes and looked at psycho who was still blushing and giggling.

Psycho: I'll treasure this moment forever.

riz: (blushing) me too.

Riz knew her knew life would be awesome. she enjoyed this night as much as psycho did. and she knew this was a new leaf for herself and for the toon patrol. she couldn't have been more happier.

THE END

[Syrup]

Oh, it's over? ...That was fast. But nice story. Heh.

[Mellow]

oh this is just the beggining of it, my friend

[psychojr]

i knew somthing was fishy and wasnt the fish, sorry it smells like fish here. but very good story hoping to see more.