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Post by Mellow on May 7, 2010 23:02:47 GMT -5
The second performer was a female toon human who had dark brown hair, silver-blue eyes, who wore a backless and sleevless red-glittery dress that had a split on the left side, a black choker necklace, and red pumps.
Slimy: eyes pop out in a jack-in-the-box way. "Wow."
Flasher: tongue hangs out. "Man, oh man. Look at her."
Smart guy: starring with eyes wide and his mouth open. "Talk about a girl in glitter on a glistling night."
Greasy: whistles. " Now that's a woman."
Wheezy: eyes wide and jaw dropped. "Your not lying either."
Stupid: hearts in his eyes and his propeller is spinning fast. " She's is as pretty as roses."
Psycho: heart is bouncing, and is floating up. " No kidding."
the performer was singing "Why don't you do right", the same song that Jessica Rabbit sung at another club. the performer's voice sounded like an angel from heaven. when she finished, she went to her dressing room, to change into her black backless and sleeveless dress with a long split on the left side, long black gloves, and black high-heels that had a strap around her ankles. she had just finished changing, when she heard a knock on her door.
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Post by Syrup on May 7, 2010 23:16:56 GMT -5
I'm guessing this is going to be a new fanfic of yours?
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Post by Mellow on May 8, 2010 0:30:04 GMT -5
"Whoever it is, you may come in" she said. when they came in, each of the toon patrol had roses in their hands.
Smart guy: Has anyone ever told you how beautiful you look?
Flasher: The roses we each hold are a symbol of your beauty.
Greasy: What is your name?
Performer: My name is Julia. and no one has ever told me i looked beautiful before.
Wheezy: What about all those people giving you wolfcalls?
Julia: they just do that on account of the way my voice sounds,not how i look.
Stupid: Well, you do have a very pretty voice, and you do look very pretty.
Julia: thank you i dont know what to say----
Suddently, there is a loud, hard banging at her door.
voice: OPEN UP IN THERE!!
Julia: Uh oh. its him!
Smart Guy: who is it?
Julia: its my ex-boyfriend, jason. i broke up with him 2 weeks ago because i was sick of him treating me like scum.
Greasy: We can't blame you for that. I would have done the same thing.
Slimy: Yeah! It makes perfect sense.
Jason: I KNOW YOUR IN THERE. OPEN UP OR ELSE!!!!
Julia: Quick! we can escape throught my window, come on!!
So all 8 of them escaped through her room window, and right before jason had busted the door down. he had seen the open window and climbed through it, but he didn't see them.
Jason: YOU CAN RUN, BUT YOU CAN HIDE FOREVER , JULIA!!!!
Stupid: He sure is angry now.
Julia: You better believe it. Lets take your car.
Wheezy: And let's hurry. he's right behind us!
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Post by Mellow on May 8, 2010 1:10:33 GMT -5
Julia and the toon patrol ran into their car and drove out of the night club , but they weren't fast enough to put out because at the moment of them pulling out, jason had seen them. and he got into his car and sped after them.
Smart Guy: Is there a second reason you left him?
Julia: Yes there is. i caught him killing a toon with dip.
Greasy: Why didn't you tell the cops about it?
Julia: I wanted to, but he caught me, and said if i spoke about this to anyone, he would throw me in a tub full of dip. so i never told anyone.
Smart Guy: Don't worry, we understand, Julia. We won't let him dip you. Your safe with us.
Julia: Oh, thank you.
Psycho: SPEED UP!! HE"S RIGHT BEHIND US!!!
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Post by Mellow on May 8, 2010 1:36:03 GMT -5
As they were speeding trying to get away from him, jason's evil partner and brother, ned, had threw some thumb tacks on the road that the toon patrol were driving on. Suddendly,there were four loud BANGS, which sent them spinning five times, and caused them to crash into a tree, sending all 8 people flying out of the car.
Ned: hey there sis, where have ya been?!
Julia: i figured you and jason would team up to try and catch me.
Ned: well sis, looks like your luck ran out this time, especially with the help of your friends.
then jason pulled up along the side of the road and came out of his car.
Jason: well,well,well, what have we here. if it isn't julia. how unfortuante for you and your new partners this time.
Julia: you won't get away with this,jason. we ran away from you before, we can do it again.
Jason: your still a bit fiesty, just like you were before,but this will be your last time.
Ned: you want me to tie them all up, bro?
Jason: tie them up and put them in my car. i think julia will love a trip back home.
Ned: with pleasure.
15 minutes later, they arrived at jason's home. he and ned threw julia and the toon patrol into a large room.
Jason: do you remember this room, dear?
Julia: yes. this is were i saw you dipping a toon.
ned walks over to a water hose and turns it on.
Ned: can you guess what this is, sis?
Julia: oh my god, its...its....DIIIP!!!
Jason: thats right, darling, and i have enough to eliminate you and the weasels.
Julia: and how do you suppose on telling my family where i am?!
Ned: oh lets just say that they took a little dip,sis.
Julia: you didnt!
Jason: yes we did! We invited your whole family over into this room. and as they stopped in the middle of the room,we poured a whole tub of dip on them.
Slimy: How could you do that to your own girlfriend's family?
Ned: we just did that cause they were a bunch of idiots anyway.
Wheezy: Its crooks like you 2 that make us sick!!!
Ned: shut up, smokey!
Julia: Dont talk about my friends that way!!
Ned: how's about we dip them now, bro?
Jason:With pleasure, ned.
Ned and Jason did not know that julia had a switchblabe hidden in her hand. she cut her rope, setting her free.
Jason: SHE ESCAPED THE ROPE!!
Ned: LETS GO GET HER!!!
Flasher: RUN, JULIA, RUN AS FAST AS YOU CAN!!!
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Post by Mellow on May 8, 2010 2:00:20 GMT -5
While julia was distracting the two boys, Smart Guy and Greasy had also sneaked their switchblades out of their pockets and cut all of them free.
Smart Guy: Come on! we have to rescue Julia.
Greasy: you think we should use the dip on those two killers, boss?
Smart Guy: good idea.yeah bring some of that dip along, boys.
Greasy: with pleasure.
As they were getting the dip, julia ran back into the room with ned and jason hot on her trail.
Ned: you cant out run us forever you know!
Jason: and when we find you, you will be as good as dip!
Suddendly, smart-guy was holding the dip hose at a safe distance from him. greasy was at the main valve getting ready to cut on the hose.
While julia,psycho,stupid,wheezy,slimy, and flasher were distracting them.
Julia: hey jason,ned.
Both: what, you stupid woman?!
Julia: see ya, wouldn't wanna be ya.
Ned: huh?
Jason: what the?
Smart Guy: Hows about a little dip to end your trip?! Hit the switch, Greasy.
At that exact moment, greasy had turned the hose on high, while smart guy was aiming the dip at the 2 brothers. they started melting and screaming.
Ned: you win this time sis... for now!
Jason: but you haven't seen the last of us. we will get our revenge on all of you, ALL OF YOU!!!!
then they disappeared into the dip.at that time the police came and examined it.
Officer: so these 2 guys killed a toon?
Julia: and my entire family.
Officer: now thats what i call killer toons.
julia and the toon patrol walked away from the house , and walked down the road.
Julia: i want to thank you all of you for saving and helping me.
She kissed all of them on their lips. the weasels all blushed and smiled with hearts in their eyes. julia blushed herself too.
Smart Guy: By the way you look like someone familiar.
Julia: you mean like jessica rabbit?
Smart Guy: Yeah. Are you related?
Julia: Yes indeed. I'm her sister. In fact, that's why i came her. so i could visit her and my brother-in-law, roger. come on, let's go.
Greasy: But don't you know whatwe did a year ago? You know..
Julia: Yes. I know that, but that was then, this is now.
Greasy: You actually trust us?
julia: Of course i do. you may have almost destroyed toontown, but i know that you guys were innocent victims of that terrible judge. you guys were just desperate, that's all. now let's go. so they all walked off to her sisters house. when she knocked on the door, roger and jessica both came. but when they saw her with the weasels, they're expressions changed.
Jessica:You Weasels let my sister go at once!
Julia: Calm down, jessica. they're my friends.
Roger: Friends??!!! Ha! They're evil,
Jessica: They're Traitors,
Roger: They're- julia interupted them.
Julia: They're hero's!, and more importantly, they saved my life!
Roger: Really, sis?
Jessica: And where is jason at?
Julia: That's what i'm trying to tell you. Jason had dipped a toon two weeks ago, and he caught me watching. he said if i spoke about it to anyone, i was as good as dip. so i broke up with him and ran off. Then i met the toon patrol at the club i preformed at, but jason and his brother, jack had kidnapped us and tried to kill us all, but thanks to our teamwork and quick-thinking, we dipped them.
Roger: but they TRIED dipping us a year ago.
Julia: Yes, but that was because they were being used. i should know. before i performed, i was spying on judge doom. it turns out, he was just using them. they aren't evil, they're were just misguided. doom had took them in when they were without anything. but however, i found out something you all might find interesting. it turns out that doom had dipped your families boys. i have his list right here. she showed it to them. they all were surprised.
Julia: And also the picture's don't lie. She then showed them picture's of doom dipping their families.
Everyone: How did you do it without him knowing you were there?
Julia: Well i am still a secret spy. i have my moves, but also i snuck in at night.
Roger: I still can't believe that jason had tried to kill you guys.
Stupid: Duh, it's true. he's was a big meanie.
Jessica: Well, we want to thank you guys for saving our sister. and we forgive you for what happened a year ago.
Julia: Thank you. that's all i wanted to hear. she and the toon patrol went to a restraunt to celebrate. they were all over the toontown news. all of toontown forgave them for what happened. and as for julia, she now lives with the toon patrol and works as their secretary, crime-fighter, and a spy. she could never been more happier than this in her whole life.
The End
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Post by Fisi on May 8, 2010 11:09:29 GMT -5
Nice fic. ^_^
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Post by psychojr on May 8, 2010 11:49:21 GMT -5
very nice indeed.
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Post by Syrup on May 8, 2010 17:18:12 GMT -5
Cool fanfic ^_^ Gasp, "How about a little dip to end your trip,"... that was on Roger Rabbit's Car Toon Spin!!! ^_^ Sorry, Heh, I got a little excited...
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