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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jun 27, 2009 6:01:57 GMT -5
Um...This is kinda slashy, but I really wanted to do it. _________________________________________________ "Thoughts Clouded By Smoke" He watched the smoking weasel. The swirls in his eyes went faster as the blue weasel made some kind of object with the smoke. Psycho didn't know why, but it made him happy to watch Wheezy smoke. Wheezy, unknown of being watched, chuckled at the objects he made. He closed his bloodshot eyes and laied down. He chewed on his cigarette until he sensed something was near him. He looked up and his eyes met the psychotic ones of Psycho. The paler weasel cocked his head to the side as he stared at Wheezy's cigarette. "What?" Wheezy asked. When Psycho didn't answer, Wheezy shrugged and took the cigarette away from his mouth. ...Then he felt something. He opened his eyes, shocked. Psycho kissed him and, unknown to Wheezy, the smoke that was once in his mouth was now in Psycho's. Psycho pulled back and puffed the smoke out. He giggled insanely and said, "I made a cloud." Wheezy kept staring at him until finally he shrugged, thinking that maybe Psycho could be cute at times. _________________________________________________ Okay, what do you guys think. I was aiming for it to be cute.
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Post by Eternity on Jun 27, 2009 6:05:44 GMT -5
Don't take this personally but that is out of character for the weasels.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jun 27, 2009 6:09:14 GMT -5
Ugh, I know. I'm trying my best at this. I just thought I try this. Thanks for looking at this, though. ;D Um, quick question. How do you put avatars on this?
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Post by Eternity on Jun 27, 2009 6:11:01 GMT -5
No problem. Can you look at my fic "Saving Toontown" and leave a comment on the thread there, please? I love getting comments!
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jun 27, 2009 6:12:32 GMT -5
Sure!
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Post by Kitsune on Jul 15, 2009 14:20:58 GMT -5
It is funny. I like the "I made a cloud" part. ;D They do make a cute slash couple...in a wierd freaky way...
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Post by Giggles on Jul 15, 2009 15:08:18 GMT -5
gurl y did u have to make them gay??? now whenever i read fanfics bout them i am gonna think wrong!!!
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jul 15, 2009 18:56:13 GMT -5
Not my fault you can't control your mind and the thoughts you want to rerun in it over and over again.
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Post by Greasy on Jul 17, 2009 3:44:27 GMT -5
Yeah for some reason I thought they would be gay, too, cause If I would be Wheezy I would have spit and shrugging after Psycho gave me a kiss, bluarr! But well in the next part it was a funny reaction Psycho made, cause he only wanted to get the smoke in his moth, cause he wanted to make clouds like Wheezy. I like this!
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Post by Harley on Oct 5, 2009 16:11:39 GMT -5
i can't believe i missed this. it's adorable! c: i wish you would write more to it!
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Post by Fisi on Oct 5, 2009 16:29:15 GMT -5
AAAAAWWW PSYCHY.
HE IS SOOO ADORABLE AND THE CUTE PART WAS HE WANTED TO MAKE A CLOUD.
Omg I just soo wanted to hug him right NOW.
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Post by Harley on Oct 5, 2009 17:33:09 GMT -5
me too, omg! c:
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 5, 2009 20:42:43 GMT -5
Hmm, might as well put some on FA when I get the chance, eh, Harley?
Also, thanks for liking it. X3
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Post by Harley on Oct 5, 2009 20:52:17 GMT -5
yes, put it on FA!
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 5, 2009 20:57:04 GMT -5
Have to put them in journals (the computer I'm using is a piece of crap. ) I'll put FanFiction beside them.
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