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Post by Veggirl on Feb 24, 2009 19:38:42 GMT -5
Here's the next chapter!
Chapter 7
Fidget flew around the Haunted Mansion building as the others waited below. He flew down and landed. “No entrance that I can see.” Greasy growled. “We’re getting nowhere fast! Let me see if I can do something!” He went over to the entrance door and banged on the door. “C’MON! LET US IN! WE HAVE TO SAVE THE WORLD AND IF YOU DON’T LET US IN, WHEEZY’S BLOWING THIS DOOR DOWN!” Wheezy coughed. “Except I didn’t bring my gun.” Greasy started to shout and yell in Spanish which made Smart Guy cover Kovu’s ears up while Stupid covered Kiara’s ears. Suddenly the door slowly opened up which made Greasy stop. There was silence, except the wind softly blowing. Smart Guy shivered, realizing that there was no wind when they were walking towards the mansion. The Toon Patrol slowly entered and looked around. It was incredibly dark, darker than the night outside the building. Suddenly a voice slowly came out of nowhere in the dark.
“When hinges creak, in doorless chambers. And strange and frightening sounds echo through the halls. Whenever candlelights flicker, where the air is deathly still, that is the time when ghosts are present. Practicing their terror, with ghoulish delight!”
Stupid jumped and yelped. “What was that?!” The doors opened to reveal the Stretch Room. Smart Guy motioned them to get in and they all stepped into the Stretching Room. The room began to stretch as the ghost host began to speak.
“Our tour begins here, in this gallery. Here where you see paintings of some of our guests, as they appeared in their corruptible, mortal state. Your cadaverous palour, betrays an aura of foreboding, almost as though you sense a disquieting metamorphosis. Is this Haunted room actually stretching? Or is it your imagination, hmm? And consider this dismaying observation, this chamber has no windows, and no doors. Which offers you this chilling challenge, to find a way out!”
The Ghost Host laughed before adding,
“Of course, there’s always…my way…”
Suddenly the lights went out and thunder crashed. Smart Guy felt something jump on him. When the lights appeared, it was revealed that Stupid had jumped on him for safety. Stupid looked at him and smiled a little bit embarrassed. Smart Guy growled and dropped him. The doors opened and they walked through the hallway. They came upon the doom buggies which were running as though someone had just turned them on. Hester walked forward, flicking his tail. “C’mon guys! Lets go!” He went over to the Doom Buggies and jumped into one. The weasels looked at each other and shrugged. They each got into one Doom Buggy, Smart Guy and Psycho in one, Kovu and Kiara in the other, Greasy and Wheezy in the other and Stupid and Fidget in the last. They went past the Endless Hallway, the coffin and the pounding doors. Psycho looked around in the Madame Leota room. “Hey boss, I don’t see anything yet.” “Be patient,” Smart Guy murmured as they passed by the ballroom, “something will turn up.” After going through the attic, they finally made it to the graveyard as ghosts sang the theme song, “Grim Grinning Ghosts”. It was all going along well until suddenly the Doom Buggies stopped. There was silence except for the singing. Smart Guy was extremely annoyed for they had just stopped in front of a gravestone where a popping ghost kept popping up every couple of seconds. Now what they were supposed to do?
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Post by Weasel Freak on Feb 25, 2009 9:38:29 GMT -5
Uh-oh! I guess they'll have to get off the ride now. . . Now what??
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Post by jebikun on Feb 25, 2009 19:52:39 GMT -5
Eek. I imagine getting stuck in an spooky attraction must really make one feel...well, very bad :0 wonder what will happen? And thanks for changing the font color!! looks great
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Post by julayla on Feb 26, 2009 12:35:46 GMT -5
Man, they're stuck. Oh dear. That is not a good sign.
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Post by Eternity on Feb 26, 2009 16:47:47 GMT -5
I can feel a demon confrontation coming on...
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Post by Veggirl on Feb 26, 2009 22:44:25 GMT -5
Chapter up!
Chapter 8
Smart Guy looked around at the singing ghosts and popping ghouls. Psycho looked at him. “What do we do now, boss?” “We wait till it starts again.” Smart Guy answered. Psycho was about to say something when he saw Kovu and Kiara out of their doom buggies and walking towards one of the headstones. “Hey kids!” He called out. “Stay in the doom buggy!” “Kiara thinks she saw something!” Kovu called back. “It’s over there near the headstone by the ghost band.” Psycho looked at Smart Guy and shrugged. They pushed against the handlebars and they magically lifted up. The weasels, Hester and Fidget then went over to where Kovu and Kiara were standing. Near a gravestone was a flute, sticking out from the ground. “Where did that came from?” Wheezy asked. Hester stiffened when he saw it. “The flute of the Immortal Han Xiang!” “Han who?” Stupid asked. “Han Xiang,” Hester explained. “Was one of the Eight Immortals who is the protector of flute players. His flute also gave new life.” He went over to the flute and tried to pull it out from the ground. It didn’t budged. Hester turned to the weasels. “One of you need to pull it out, since Han Xiang might be one of you guys.” Smart Guy stepped up and grabbed onto the flute. He gave it a tug, but it still wouldn’t budge. He looked over at Stupid. “Stupid, get over here! You’re the strongest!” Stupid ambled over and tried to tug the flute out. He pulled and tugged but it still wouldn’t budge. Fidget stepped up. “Let me try.” Stupid stepped aside while Fidget grabbed onto the flute. He gave it a tug and out it came. He frowned at the others. “I don’t know what was so hard about that!” He looked at the astounded faces of his teammates. “What?” Suddenly, there a wind blew over them which almost knocked them over. Out of the ground came some little miniature mummies with a yellow eye. “HEARTLESS!” Hester yowled. “Quick!” Smart Guy yelled. “Grab something to defend yourself with!” “We can’t!” Psycho said. Smart Guy stared at him. “Technically boss,” Wheezy said, surprisingly calm, “we cannot grab anything from here since it’s a ride and if we grab something, that’ll be destruction of property.” The weasels looked around at the mummy Heartless which were springing towards them, waving their claw-like hands. Kovu looked at Fidget. “Fidget, blow the flute!” “What?!” Fidget yelped. “Do it!” Hester hissed. “Quick!” Fidget, with an uncertain look on his face, held up the flute and blew with all his might. The flute’s high pierced note echoed throughout the graveyard and it made the Heartless freeze in their tracks. “Once more!” Hester ordered. Fidget nodded and blew again, the flute echoing across the graveyard. The Heartless fell back as if a strong wind blew over them. “Back to the doom buggies before they get up!” Smart Guy yelled. The Toon Patrol raced back to their doom buggies and jumped in. Instantly, the doom buggies started to move slowly towards the exit. Once they reached the exit, the Toon Patrol jumped off and ran up the ramp into the warm night. Once outside, they leaned against some benches and trash bins, catching their breaths and calming their hearts. “Where to next?” Greasy panted. There was a loud caw, and a raven flew down in front of them. It placed a piece of paper in front of them, then flew off towards the Haunted Mansion. Smart Guy grabbed the paper and stormed off. “What’s it say?” Psycho asked. “We’ll read it while we walk!” Smart Guy snapped. “I just want to get out of here as soon as I can! Now move it!”
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Post by Veggirl on Jun 23, 2009 2:55:25 GMT -5
Gaah! Finally after a long writers block, plus the obstacle of having my fanfics deleted after a computer virus attack, I managed to write up the next chapter! Chapter 9 The Toon Patrol managed to find their way to Liberty Square without any incident from the Heartless. Hester looked at Smart Guy. "So, what does the next riddle tell us?" Smart Guy opened up the folded paper and read it outloud. A place of laughter and fun. A large place is considered tiny Where can you find harmony and happiness, in the journey where danger lurks? "Isn't Disney World considered where happiness is found?" Greasy asked. "Yeah, but Merlin did say each object is located in different rides." Smart Guy pointed out. Wheezy snatched the paper and looked it over. "Something large in considered tiny..." Stupid thought for a moment, then his eyes lit up. "Ooh! I think I know what it is!" "Yeah? What?" Smart Guy wanted to know. "The world is big." Stupid said happily. Greasy's eyes widened. "Oh no! Not that!" "It's a world of laughter, it's a world of tears. It's a world of hopes and a world of fears..."Smart Guy growled as the small boat he sat in floated through the ride of singing dolls. Next to him, Kiara and Kovu looked around in wonder. Kids these days, Smart Guy thought. Behind him, Psycho was looking around with a weird glint in his eyes. Greasy and Wheezy were covering their ears eyes narrowed as they looked straight ahead. In the back, Stupid was obviously enjoying it by humming along to the song while Fidget looked around, holding his flute out in front of him. Hester was meanwhile looking around wildly, trying to locate a possible demon object. "Just to let you know, boss..." Greasy's voice hissed into Smart Guy's ear. "If we ever get out of here with our sanities intact, I'm gonna strangle Stupid, just so you know!" "Oh stop complaining!" Smart Guy growled, annoyed as he was. "It's not even that bad!" No sooner did the words came out from his mouth, the boat stopped. Hester then leaped onto the nearest platform. "Well guys, everybody off! I think I know what the next object is!" Smart Guy looked around at the Mexican scenery. "Why would a bunch of Chinese guys chose something like Mexican?" He growled as he got off. They followed Hester through the little dolls and animals until they reached upon a small box with a castanet on top. Hester pointed his tail to the direction of the castanet. "There you go, the castanet of Royal Uncle Cao." "Royal who?!" Psycho squeaked. Hester groaned. "Uncle Cao! He was the uncle of the Emperor of the Song Empire. His younger brother was a bit of a bully, which left Uncle Cao with sadness and shame that he resigned from his office and left home. Honestly, you guys need to catch up on your history!" "So who gets the castanets?" Kovu asked. "Not me," Fidget spoke up. "I already have my object." "Maybe Greasy could try it, since he's a Mexican." Wheezy piped up. Greasy turned to him, turning red underneath his fur. "Are you saying all Mexicans carry dinky little castanets?!" Wheezy shrugged. Greasy growled and grabbed the castanets. "Well then, I'm gonna prove those stereotypes wrong by revealing I am not the one to receive the castanets." Greasy gave the castanets a good tug, and it came off in his hands. Everyone stared wide eyed at him. Greasy's jaw dropped. He then placed it back. "You guys give it a go..." Everyone but Fidget and Hester tried to pick up the castanets, but it stayed onto the box as if glued on. After everyone tried, Greasy was left and it came off into his hands easily. "Congratulations," Hester said to the stunned Spanish weasel, "You are the reincarnation of the Immortal Royal Uncle Cao."
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 10, 2009 16:23:39 GMT -5
Here's the next chapter! Chapter 10 “I cannot be Royal Uncle Cao!” Smart Guy sighed as Greasy complained once more. The Toon Patrol was sitting in the moving monorail, heading to their next location, Epcot. Smart Guy looked out the window of the monorail. “Greasy, the castanet practically jumped into your hands.” Behind him, Greasy lifted the castanets and pointed at it. “If anyone sees me with these, everyone’s going to assume all Mexicans play the castanets! Well I don’t, and I won’t play them!” Hester closed his book and hopped off his seat. He went towards Greasy and narrowed his eyes at him. “Do you want the demon to get out from its prison and cause chaos in the world?” Greasy shook his head slowly, a bit nervous that Hester had narrowed his eyes dangerously. Hester then bared his fangs and screeched, “THEN YOU MUST USE YOUR CASTANETS WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT!!!”With that said Hester returned to his seat and continued reading. The monorail then stopped and opened the doors. The Toon Patrol got out of the monorail and found themselves in front of the large white Epcot sphere. “Well guys,” Smart Guy said, “let’s go.” They entered they park as Smart Guy read the next clue. The mystical mountain with lush green jungles Bamboos grow as tall as the trees. Your next object is located here Can you find it within its copy? “Well I guess the bamboos mean that it’s in the China pavilion.” Smart Guy said when they reached the World Showcase Lagoon, “which is all the way across the lake!” “You could use the demon objects.” Hester suggested. Everyone stared at him. “Wouldn’t they sink to the bottom?” Kovu asked. Hester shook his head. “Trust me on this.” Fidget and Greasy looked at each other. They went near the lagoon and threw the flute and castanet in it. There was a bright light and suddenly, two sea monster heads came out from the water, roaring. Smart Guy grabbed Kovu and Kiara and raced away from the lagoon while the others besides Hester, ran screaming away. “What’s going on?” Kiara asked. “What were those things?” Smart Guy looked back at Hester, who seemed to be speaking to the sea monsters. He looked over at the others. “C’mon guys, it’s all right.” Smart Guy crept out from his hiding place, still holding onto Kiara and Kovu. He narrowed his eyes at the sea monster. “Are they safe?” “Perfectly safe,” Hester said. “They agreed to take us across the lagoon to the Chinese pavilion.” He turned to the bushes. “Fidget! Greasy! Come and meet your new sea dragons!” Greasy and Fidget crept out from the bushes and looked up at the sea dragons. Greasy’s sea dragon was brown with three horns on its face like a triceratops and fins on the side of its neck. Fidget’s sea dragon was a bit smaller with red scales and fins starting from its head down to its back. Wheezy, Psycho and Stupid crept out from their hiding places and stared up at them. “Everyone get on a dragon and let’s go!” Hester said. Once everyone was seated, the sea dragons swam toward the other side of the shore. They didn’t know a strange shadow was watching them from the other side of the shore. “Hmm, better follow them and make sure they are good boys…” A/N: I got the inspiration of the sea dragons from the Eight Immortal legends, which said they can throw their objects down in any body of water, and it'll turn into sea dragons.
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 28, 2009 17:27:35 GMT -5
I am sooo sorry for the really long delay, but I am determined to continue on with this story and I finally got the next chapter up. Enjoy.
Chapter 11
The Toon Patrol stepped into the China pavilion a few minutes later after arriving. Hester stepped into the shop and looked up at a wall. “There it is! The fan of Zhongli Quan.” He suddenly turned to Smart Guy. “All right Smart Guy, your turn.” “Why me?!” “Zhongli Quan was the leader of the eight immortals. Since you are the leader, it fits perfectly.” “But Hester,” Wheezy said. “Wouldn’t we be stealing if we take the fan from the store?” Hester frowned. “We’ll leave some money near the cash register. That is if we brought any money…” “Yeah, yeah, I got some.” Smart Guy snapped. “Can we get this over with and done?” He stepped closer to the fan. He grabbed onto the handle of the fan and gave it a good tug. Nothing happened. Hester’s eyes widened with surprise as Smart Guy tugged and pulled furiously. After a few minutes, the Toon Patrol leader stopped and glared at Hester. “Nothing happened!” Hester was shaking his head. “I don’t get it…you’re the leader of the group and Zhongli Quan was a leader…” “Let me try!” Kovu spoke up. He raced towards the fan and clamped his jaw around the handle. He gave it a tug and released it. “Ouch!” He yelped. “It’s stuck all right.” Hester meanwhile was flipping through the books in bafflement. “But it says here that the leader of the eight immortal really did have a fan as his symbol. He used it for all sorts of magic!” “Which Psycho already got.” Greasy spoke up. Everyone stared at where the fan was stuck on, but instead they found the crazed weasel staring at the fan clutched in his hand. Hester looked up at Smart Guy who was glaring at him. The cat shrugged. “Well, who knew?” Hester suddenly tensed up and he shivered violently. “Hester, what is it?” Stupid asked. “I’m getting the willies…” Hester said. “The willies?” Kiara asked, looking up at Smart Guy. “The willies is something Hester gets when he feels something isn’t right.” Smart Guy answered. “Bravo, bravo.” A voice suddenly said. The Toon Patrol jumped at the voice. They turned near the entrance and saw a lioness sneering at them. “Who are you?” Smart Guy demanded to know. “And how the heck did you get here?” “I could ask you the same thing.” The lioness said sharply. “Important business lady,” Wheezy hissed. “What about you?” “Now lets not be hasty,” The lioness pleaded in a mock tone. “I am here for a special mission for my queen. She has asked that I watch your progress and report back to her. So far, you have been doing very well.” “And who is this queen of yours?” Greasy wanted to know, a bit suspicious of this stranger, but also a bit intrigued by her. The lioness turned and walked away, but she paused and looked back. “You’ll see soon enough. Oh before I forget, she says to prepare for the meeting. She would love to see what you did with your demons.” Before anyone else could say anything, the lioness disappeared. The Toon Patrol looked at each other, unable to comprehend what just happened. Smart Guy quickly raced to the cashier and slapped a ten dollar bill on the desk. “Come on, we’re leaving!” “But what if she’s still out there?” Stupid asked, eyes widened in terror. Smart Guy stepped outside of the shop and looked around. “No lioness around here, but just in case…we’ll run towards that trash can and then dash to that popcorn stand.”
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Post by Fisi on Oct 28, 2009 18:49:42 GMT -5
Good chappie.
I wonder who the queen might be?
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 31, 2009 16:20:49 GMT -5
Nice Chapter
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Post by Veggirl on Nov 22, 2009 2:56:47 GMT -5
Next chapter up
Chapter 12
“And…go!” At the sound of the signal, the Toon Patrol raced from the trash bin towards the potted plants. Greasy’s hat suddenly flew off of his head. “Hey! My hat! My hat!” “Run without it!” Smart Guy snapped, racing past him. Greasy made a u-turn and raced towards his fallen hat. He quickly snatched it and raced back to where the others hid. “All right gang,” Smart Guy said. “The next riddle says we must go to the Canadian Pavilion, so we’ll just go dodging towards it. Stupid flopped down on the ground and groaned. “No more dodging, boss! I’m tired.” “And I’m tired of losing my hat every time we run!” Greasy snapped. Smart Guy frowned. “Fine, fine.” He looked towards Fidget. “You fly up there and see what’s going on. Report back if you see anything suspicious.” Fidget nodded and flew up, flying off into the night sky. In an instant, he flew down. “There are Heartless coming our way!” Kovu grinned with excitement. “We can take them! We’ll—” He didn’t have a chance to finish for Smart Guy had suddenly grabbed him and they jumped into the nearby bushes. The Toon Patrol peered out from the branches as they watched several Soldier Heartless march past them. One of them was clutching a yellow daisy. Hester gasped. “The flower of Lan Caihe, one of the eight Immortals!” The Soldier Heartless stopped dead in their tracks and turned their heads towards the bushes. Fidget sighed. “Way to go Hester. Now it’s off to battle.” He stepped out of his hiding place and raised his flute. He looked back to see the others still hiding. “Well?! Isn’t anyone gonna help me?” Hester then leapt out. “Agreed! Greasy, Psycho, get over here and help Fidget while one of us gets the flower!” The two weasels hesitantly stepped out of the bushes and joined the peg-legged bat. The Soldier Heartless lunged towards the three fighters, claws bared and teeth gnashing. A battle ensued with Psycho waving his fan around, Greasy playing the castanets wildly and Fidget blowing notes from his flute. Kovu suddenly lunged out from his hiding place and snatched the flower which had fallen to the ground. He raised it up and pointed it towards a Heartless. “Eat heat beams!” He waited but nothing came out. “It’s not working!” “That’s because you’re not the one Lan Caihe has chosen!” Hester hissed. “Let me try.” Kiara volunteered, running towards Kovu. Kovu passed the flower towards Kiara as a heat beam note flew above them. Kiara grabbed the flower and waved it around. Still, nothing happened. “Oh give me that!” Wheezy snarled, snatching the flower away from Kiara. He turned to face the battle and began to wave the flower at them. “I don’t know what you do, but you better hurry up and go! Go, go, go!” At that moment, the flower began to glow brightly. With a yelp, Wheezy dropped the flower in alarm. The flower shot out a beam of light towards the Heartless. The Heartless jumped into the air with fright and scurried off. Wheezy stood there dumbfounded. “What…just happened?” “Great job Wheezy!” Kovu cheered. Wheezy bent down and picked up the yellow daisy. He turned to the others who had just come out from their hiding places. He shrugged. “Well, what are you supposed to do?” Kiara then noticed a tiny piece of paper on the ground. She picked it up and held it up to Smart Guy. “Here, this must have fallen out.” Smart Guy took the paper and began to read it silently. “Well boss, what does it say?” Greasy wanted to know. Smart Guy folded the piece of paper and placed it in his pocket, grinning. “I think I know where we’re off to now! C’mon, follow me!” Wheezy was about to follow Smart Guy when suddenly he noticed Hester staring at him. “What?” Hester gave him one last look before going off to follow the others. “Your immortal is a strange one, just to let you know.” Wheezy didn’t like the sound of Hester’s voice. “Hester!” He snapped, running after him. “What do you mean by ‘weird’? Well? What did he do?!” None of them noticed a little shadowy creature following them.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 22, 2009 11:16:56 GMT -5
Good chappie. ^_^.
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Post by Veggirl on Jan 1, 2010 23:34:09 GMT -5
Whew, sorry for the long wait guys, but Geometry is taking up most of my time. *grumbles about homework*. But anyway, I had finally came up with the chapter and I'll be continuing working on this fanfic whenever I can.
Enjoy.
Chapter 13
In Disney MGM studios, the Toon Patrol stood around Echo Lake and stared out at the lotus flowers floating in the water. “So,” Greasy said breaking the silence. “How are we going to do this?” “We can always use our sea serpents.” “The sea serpents wouldn’t waste their time swimming through a tiny little lake.” “Well, we’ll just walk over.” “Can’t we take a rest first, boss?” Stupid said. “My feet are starting to hurt.” Hester’s paw suddenly shot out and dealt a small cuff to Stupid’s head. “Ow!” Stupid yelped. “We don’t have time for rest!” Hester snapped. “We must get the four remaining demon objects and tame your demons before something awful will happen!” “What type of awful?” Psycho wanted to know. “How am I supposed to know?!” Hester hissed. Suddenly, the bushes began to rustle. The Toon Patrol looked up in alarm, raising their objects to prepare for a battle. Two yellow eyes peered out from the bushes and out stepped a tiny black creature. “Heartless!” Smart Guy hissed. The Heartless stood there, as if unsure what to do. Then it started to walk towards the Toon Patrol. “Get back kids!” Smart Guy said, placing himself in front of Kovu and Kiara. Greasy stepped up and bonked the Heartless with the castanets. ”Scram Heartless! Get out of here!” The Shadow Heartless just stood stupidly, as if it didn’t felt the castanets. Kiara pushed herself away from Smart Guy and crept towards the Shadow Heartless. “Kiara! Get away from that Heartless!” Kiara looked back. “Why not Smart Guy? He’s cute!” The Heartless took a step towards Kiara and nuzzled closer. “See? He’s harmless. Can we keep him?” “WHAT?!” The Toon Patrol yelped. “We can’t keep it!” Greasy snapped. “We have to get rid of it!” “But it’s not hurting anyone!” Kiara said, standing in front of the Heartless. “I’m not going to let you kill it! I’m not!” Suddenly, a lotus pod began to glow brightly. The Toon Patrol stared in awe as the lotus pod floated into the air and towards Kiara. Once in front of Kiara, the lotus pod wrapped a vine around Kiara’s neck to form a necklace. Then it went still, the glow gone. “Of course!” Hester said. “Kiara is the only female in this group, and the only woman in the Eight Immortals is Immortal Woman He, known for her compassion to all creatures.” Kiara stared down at the lotus pod, unable to believe what just happened. It was Kovu’s voice that shook her out of it. “Way to go Kiara! You finally got your demon object!” “Fine, fine.” Smart Guy said. “But where’s the clue to the other demon object?” He felt something tug on his sleeve. He looked down to see the Heartless staring up at him. The Heartless handed him a piece of paper. Smart Guy snatched it, snarling a “Thank you”. He opened the paper and began to read.
A tall rock surrounded by water Lights shine in the night A valiant weapon defeats all evil. Find the place where nightmares are vanquished.
Smart Guy folded the paper and turned to Greasy. “Greasy, go get a map. We might need it.” “Fine,” Greasy said. He turned towards the Heartless. “If that thing comes after me, I’m going to kill it myself!” “His new name is Shadow.” Kiara said proudly. Greasy gave a grunt and went off in search for a map.
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Post by Fisi on Jan 2, 2010 8:01:33 GMT -5
That is soo mean to say Greasy.
Nice chappie. ^_^.
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