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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Dec 22, 2008 14:26:05 GMT -5
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 22, 2008 14:39:20 GMT -5
No problem! ^w^
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Post by Fatal hilarity on Dec 22, 2008 14:40:15 GMT -5
I think she's quite pretty. Her expression- the way her eyes are closed and relaxed- gives me the impression that she's in very deep thought. You don't see that very often in art, much less a cartoon character.
The viola's a rather difficult instrument to play, you know that? It's almost twice as big as a violin, and yet you have to play it on your shoulder! That makes the correct notes hard to reach. But I admire the fact that you're using such an under-appreciated instrument, and one that's so nice to hear as well. I myself plan to learn it one day.
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 22, 2008 14:52:33 GMT -5
Your reply is deep! I'm so glad that you see that much in one picture! The viola part is based off of myself for I also play the viola, and it is quite hard to play, especially when the instrument isn't your size
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 22, 2008 19:08:18 GMT -5
LOVE it!!!! I LOVE her clothes, her eyes, her pose, the style - GREAT JOB!!! if you want constructive criticism, i only picked out one thing - her elbow. It looks a smidge rubbery. Even Toons have muscles. Look at Wheezy screen-by-screen when Eddie first starts dancing. his shirt sleeves go up a bit to reveal that he has SLIGHTLY defined muscles. Like this -  This ONE screen helped me A LOT!!! hope it helps u, 2! |
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 22, 2008 19:10:04 GMT -5
i have another one, but my computer's on the fritz  ...lemme try again in a bit. |
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 22, 2008 19:20:30 GMT -5
Yayz! Criticism!! Its something EVERY artist needs! *nods* Thankies! I should work a little more on it...*thinking* Nice of you to also use Wheezy as an example too! Its like a brother givin' some advice to his younger sib X3
By the way, can I ask you something about any of your upcomin' fics?
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 22, 2008 19:26:13 GMT -5
i know, i can't get ANYONE to critique me, except for me muther... akshually, i used Wheezy b/c he's the only one besides Stupid who you can see his elbows *^_^* Roger provides excellent ref, too. here's a good site for that - screenmusings.org/WhoFramedRogerRabbit/index.htmshore! ask away! btw, here's that other pic -  |
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 22, 2008 19:29:29 GMT -5
Yesh!! And you really can't get anyone else to critique you? That's too bad...
And about the fics...Would you mind using Kilo in any? I mean, if its not too much trouble for ya ^^''
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 22, 2008 19:33:35 GMT -5
hmmm...i dunno if there's really a place for her right now, y'know what i mean? but if something comes up i'll let you know! sorry... i really will, tho! send me more info about her in a personal message, and i'll keep her in my mind! ^_^
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 22, 2008 19:38:18 GMT -5
I'm not upset, so don't think I am! ^w^ I can wait! Your fic is really comin' along great too! There seems to be a time and place for everyone who's in and will be in the whole thing!
And send you more info? Man, that's like the hardest part when it comes to makin' an OC for me! XD I think I wrote it down here somewhere...*digs through my agenda to look for some sketched info* This'll only take a second!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 22, 2008 19:42:47 GMT -5
oh, if it's character profiling you need helping with, i've got just the thing!
Animal character profile
Archetype
Name_____________________________________________________________________
Nickname(s)_______________________________________Role_____________________
Age_____________________ Season born___________________ Species______________
Appearance
Physique____________________________________________________________________
Fur color________________________________ Eye color____________________________
Distinguishing marks (natural or inflicted) _________________________________________
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How did they get there? _______________________________________________________
Clothing
Description__________________________________________________________________
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Accessories (Hats, jewelery, ect.)________________________________________________
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Weapons and their use________________________________________________________
Family
Mother’s name________________________ Father’s name__________________________
Place of birth________________________________________________________________
Siblings (names and relationships)_______________________________________________
Other family members ________________________________________________________
Education
Education (location, type, special teachers or subjects)_______________________________
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Languages___________________________________________________________________
Personality
Persona_____________________________________________________________________
Goals_______________________________________________________________________
Weaknesses/flaws_____________________________________________________________
Strengths____________________________________________________________________
What causes: Fear______________ ______________________________________________
Anger______________________________________________________________________
Happiness___________________________________________________________________
Details
Favorite: Color_________________ Food____________________ Drink_________________
Best friend___________________________ Arch foe________________________________
Other friends________________________________________________________________
Misc.
Dwelling place_____________________________ Love language______________________
Significant other’s name and role________________________________________________
Met significant other__________________________________________________________
Other notes_________________________________________________________________
copy and paste this into Microsoft Word or something, print it, and fill it out. it's small, portable, and very convenient, and it comes at the low price of only two easy payments of $99.99! (Offer not available in Hawaii, Alaska, or Puerto Rico)
lol, just kidding! ^_^
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 22, 2008 19:46:07 GMT -5
Phew, I really thought you were gonna make me pay! XDDD
But thankies SO much!!! *hugs you* I really needed something like this!! My brain is so unorganized. ^w^" I'll have everything you need in just a bit!
By the way, would you mind if I put your OC Dizzy as one of her best friends? Its like how us bein' real good friends and all ^w^
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 22, 2008 19:53:52 GMT -5
wellll...okay, as long as you give me full credit (I don't want anyone stealing her)...and can she be Smart Guy's sweetheart like in my fics? i don't think she could handle it if he had someone else...  (for youse other guys, I understand u have your own fan characters, and some of them are his girls. I mean she couldn't handle it if he had someone else in front of her, y'know?) P.S. Can I see it before anyone else? I LOVE sneak previews!!! ^_^ |
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 22, 2008 20:05:36 GMT -5
oh, oh, one other thing - do u need any info on her? like what the rest of the weasels call her and her relationships with them (not lovey relationships, i mean like how they treat each other, y'know?)
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I know, thanks!
(for youse other guys, I understand u have your own fan characters, and some of them are his girls. I mean she couldn't handle it if he had someone else in front of her, y'know?)