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Post by chelonianmobile on Feb 28, 2011 16:32:46 GMT -5
The suspect was cornered, and the Valiants were closing in.
As they entered the building, the distinct shadow of a falling piano covered them. Eddie chuckled. Sure, it'd hurt, but this was Toontown; if they ran it'd somehow land on them anyway, and if it hit they'd just walk it off. Teddy grinned. "Brace yourself, Ed."
It was only when it was too late, as he felt the bones in his arm snap under the pressure and Teddy's smiling face disappeared under the splintering pile of wood, that Eddie managed to think Wait a minute, that's a real piano ...
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Post by theamericanmarten on Feb 28, 2011 18:25:48 GMT -5
Nice.
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Post by disneyplease on Feb 28, 2011 20:17:45 GMT -5
Oh My Goodness!!! Nice Fic Chel !!! DisneyPlease!
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Post by chelonianmobile on Mar 1, 2011 15:50:49 GMT -5
Aww, thank you ^_^
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Post by disneyplease on Mar 1, 2011 18:12:06 GMT -5
You're welcome!!! ^_^
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Mar 2, 2011 1:17:23 GMT -5
That's right!
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Post by chelonianmobile on Mar 2, 2011 9:24:57 GMT -5
I'd appreciate suggestions for future fics. I really want to write something about the weasels, but I can't think of anything. I don't want to write about other people's OCs, but other than that I'm open.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 2, 2011 12:45:29 GMT -5
not bad so far
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Post by disneyplease on Mar 2, 2011 12:52:43 GMT -5
why do'nt you do something that shows the weasels being evil
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Mar 2, 2011 18:56:15 GMT -5
Yeah.
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