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Post by psychojr on Dec 22, 2010 19:15:01 GMT -5
I'm gonna start my second script now, so heres the original and first look at the new movie if we make it.
scene1. prologue
(scene descip. arrival at maximum security prison and awaiting execution by lethal injection. Beginning of story)
What is it about fame, the glory of every one depending on you to make a changed. well if thats the case then not all want to live a life of fame. you see life is like a game, it gives you a chance on this planet. you can cherish it, have long relationships and even have grandkids. but life can also be cruel, it can be taken away just as easy. My name is Psycho Junior and my game is over. as they insert the needle, i have only one regret. but before i knew it i saw the white light of death and my life flashing before my eyes.
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 22, 2010 19:20:39 GMT -5
Cool.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 22, 2010 19:44:12 GMT -5
wow ^^ nicely done
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Post by psychojr on Dec 22, 2010 20:50:35 GMT -5
thanks.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 22, 2010 21:00:20 GMT -5
welcome
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Post by Fisi on Dec 22, 2010 21:07:22 GMT -5
There's some grammar mistakes, but it's a good beginning.
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Post by kellyc on Dec 22, 2010 21:13:03 GMT -5
Some Mistakes here and there but not a bad start
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Post by psychojr on Dec 22, 2010 21:19:37 GMT -5
yeah i know im not so good in spelling and i really do type fast, and most of my keys on the keyboard dont work
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 22, 2010 21:24:40 GMT -5
That's okay.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 22, 2010 21:25:03 GMT -5
ya it;s ok that's why i use microsoft word
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Post by Fisi on Dec 22, 2010 21:29:15 GMT -5
I do that at my other computer. My laptop is being such a little female dog.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 22, 2010 21:32:18 GMT -5
i see
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 22, 2010 21:35:37 GMT -5
I do that at my other computer. My laptop is being such a little female dog. Tee hee hee hee hee hee.
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Post by Lola on Dec 22, 2010 21:36:09 GMT -5
vedy nice vedy nice
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Post by The Forgoten One on Jan 15, 2011 14:24:24 GMT -5
it is
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