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Post by Mellow on Jan 9, 2011 16:13:21 GMT -5
why wouldn't i?
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Post by Fisi on Jan 9, 2011 16:17:57 GMT -5
Yeah, that's what I'm asking: Why wouldn't you?
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Post by Mellow on Jan 9, 2011 16:18:59 GMT -5
I don't know. I just enjoy reading things. I'm a book worm. i'll read pretty much anything that's on this board.
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Post by Fisi on Jan 9, 2011 16:23:50 GMT -5
Even the most terrible ones?
I'm a book worm too, but I don't read almost anything!
If there's a book and after you read the summary, you hate it, would you still read it anyway? Your just only gonna please the author if you buy the book and somehow "enjoyed" it.
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Post by Mellow on Jan 9, 2011 16:33:55 GMT -5
I'll read some stuff even if it was terrible, but only when i'm bored or depressed at times, but i regret to read it sometimes.
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Post by Fisi on Jan 9, 2011 16:37:20 GMT -5
Your only just making the author proud of themselves for making the most horrible thing.
I know what I'm telling you is wrong, but who's more wrong: the person being honest or the person being dishonest?
If you not stating your own opinion, your not doing your job as a viewer or an audience.
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Post by Mellow on Jan 9, 2011 16:38:48 GMT -5
I'm sorry. I shouldn't have opened my mouth like that. But i guess what i'm trying to say is that no one's perfect. We all try to do our best at things.
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Post by Darkie on Jan 9, 2011 16:57:00 GMT -5
When is more coming out of this story?
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 10, 2011 11:55:53 GMT -5
well Darkie, these fics I do are usually one shots, though in the future, maybe I will make a part 2 episode
but I did a few things to the previous episode
and believe me, you do'nt wannah know what the weasels do to that nurse exactly, it's too horrifying, it's too grim, it might make you scared to end up in a hospital or better yet a hospital that uses experimental pratices
*laughing evily while theres lightening and thunder* MUAW HA HA HA HA Ha ha.......
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Jan 10, 2011 19:14:15 GMT -5
Wow, not even scary.  |
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 10, 2011 20:25:23 GMT -5
well, I'll get to that point someday
I just need to keep trying
DisneyPlease!
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 20, 2011 12:49:07 GMT -5
(not trying to double post, this is just an update)
Ok I think I got an idea for the next episode
would you guys like to hear what I got for this episode, or do you guys wannah be surprized ?!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Mellow on Jan 20, 2011 13:28:49 GMT -5
Surprise me! i like surprises, especiallly party surprises! ^_^
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Post by Darkie on Feb 6, 2011 15:01:25 GMT -5
Okay where is your next story?
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Post by disneyplease on Feb 23, 2011 15:16:30 GMT -5
here it is epsiode 15
now agin, I tried to make this one different and spice it up like all of you guys said, and if it's not, please tell me so I can do a better job in the future
here we go
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" Mom, why?!" whined 15 year old Tia
who was a human toon with straight medium length strawberry blonde hair that was in layers, with bangs over her brows, olive green eyes, a peach complexion with some freckles on her nose and cheeks. She was wearing a hot pink barrete on her head, a white baby T with a un buttoned pink plaided blouse over it, dark baggy jeans, and tennis shoes
Tia's Mom , who was a lawyer, had a meeting to go to tonight, but was not going to leave Tia by herself
" Cuz Tia, last time I left you here by yourself, you had a huge party, and things got rough" said Tia's mom
" Oh c'mon mom, what're the chances of that happening again" said Tia
" Zero, cuz I hired sitters" said tia's mother
" Sitters?! Mom, Im 15, Im too old to be babysat" whined Tia
" Oh, do'nt be so stubborn Tia, the sitters I got for you happen to work for the man I have a meeting with tonight, fact he's the one that got them to do so"
Then the door bell rang.
" Oh, that must be them" said Tia's mother as went to get the door, and when she did, there stood the Toon patrol weasels
" You got a bunch of ferrets to babysit me?!" asked Tia in surprize
" Duh, we're not ferrets" said the fat one, named Stupid
" Yeah, we're weasels, hee hee" giggled the crazy one, named Psycho
" Whatever" said Tia
" Tia!" snapped Tia's mother
" Do'nt worry 'bout it lady, we get her type" said the leader, Smartguy
" Well, you guys know where I'll be, all the important numbers are on the fridge and-"
"Ya, Ya, we got it" said Smartguy
" Ok then, Bye Tia" said Tia's mother as she left
Psycho rushed over to the window, looked out to see Tia's mother driving away
"She's gone now, Boss, hee hee" said Psycho
"Perfect" said Smartguy
"Yeah, well looky here rats"
" We're weasels Toots" said Smartguy
" Well whatever type of rodents you are, Im going to go in my room an try to pretend that you aint here an- wait, did you just call me toots?" said Tia
" Yes I did" said Smartguy with a smirk, " and you aint going nowheres"
Then the weasels locked up the front door, then locked the windows and drawing the blinds and curtains. Tia now grew nervous and felt a lump in her throat.
" Uh, what're you guys doing?" asked Tia
" Oh you'll find out soon enough Doll..., Now Boys" Said Smartguy as the weasels lunged for Tia
But Tia ducked, and ran upstairs to her room. Once Tia made it to her room, she quickly locked the door, and began to open her window to escape, but her window was rusty, so it was abit difficult to open it quickly, and to make matters worse, Tia heard the weasels trying open her door. Finally, Tia got her window open, but just when she was about to jump through it, she was grabbed from behind, and pulled back in.
" Not so fast, Doll Face" said Smartguy as the others shut the window and locked it.
Tia was now blindfolded, and tossed over one of the weasels shoulder. Tia could feel them taking her back downstairs, then she herself being thrusted down into a chair. Her wrists being tied together from behind while her ankles were being tightly tied to the legs of the chair, but the strange thing she felt was her shoes and socks being taken off, and the chair being tipped back.
A few minutes later, Tia's blindfold was removed
" Do'nt tell me you guys are one of those sitters that like to,.. well.., 'take advantage' of the ones they're sitting" said Tia
" Nah, nothin' like that at all, were just gonnah have some fun with ya toots"
" Quit calling me that!" snapped Tia
Then Smartguy glared at her, then snapped his fingers. Then a Blue weasel named Wheezy began to set the chair that Tia was in right, but Tia's eyes widen when she saw what was on the floor right below her feet. a small tub of DIP. Tia screamed and struggled as she tried to make her bare feet avoid the DIP, but they were tied to the legs so tight that she could'nt move them. But then Wheezy put the chair back to how it was.
" Ok 1, I'll call ya whatever I want, 2, any misbehaving from you whatsoeva' will result with DIP, do we understand eachother?" said Smartguy with a sneer, while Tia nodded in fear.
" Good" said Smartguy, then the phone rang, " I'll get it, Greasy, get the dame warmed up"
" With pleasure boss" said the hispanic weasel
" and just so you do'nt squeal" said Smartguy as he ot out a roll of duct tape, tore one strip, and placed it over Tia's mouth
Then the weasels went to answer the phone, while Greasy began to rub Tia's feet.
" Hello" Answered Smartguy as he picked up the phone
" Hi it's me, is Tia there?" asked Tia's mother who was on the other end of the phone
" actually she can't come to the phone right now, lets just say she's abit 'Tied Up' at the moment" said Smartguy
" Ok then, could tell her that Im actually going to be home late?" said Tia's mother
" No Problem" said Smartguy with an evil smirk
" great thanks" said Tia's mother as she hung up
Meanwhile......
" I must say senorita, you have scrumptious feet" said Greasy as he was still rubbing Tia's feet
Tia groaned at this. Then Smartguy and the others came back
" Well I got some news for ya Doll, yer moms going to be gone longer that we expected" said Smartguy as he then chuckled while peeling the tape off Tia's lips
" And Now it's time for us to have fun with you"
For two hours, the weasels tortured Tia, and scared her to death by constantly lowering her feet towards the DIP. But after that.....
Wheezy kept burning Tia's back with his cigarettes, and right after that, he kept pouring cubes down her back, which made made her thrash like crazy.
Psycho then came up to Tia with 2 wires that had sparks at the very tip, and he kept zapping her with them
Then Stupid came out of the kitchen with a bowl of who knows what it was.
" Hope you do'nt mind Fish paste Doll" said Smartguy as he got out a spoon and scooped a spoonfull of the paste that was in the bowl
" Now Open wide!" said Smartguy as he shoved the stuff in Tia's mouth
Ugh, this stuff tasted terrible, but Smartguy kept feeding it to Tia.
" C'mon Doll, Open yer mouth" said Smartguy as he kept the spoon near Tia's lips
Tia kept trying to keep her mouth closed, but then Smartguy pinched Tia's nose and opened Tia's mouth
after what felt like an hour, Smartguy finally stopped feeding Tia this horrible stuff, then the weasels began to torture Tia some more
Another 3 hours later, Tia's mother finally came home, and the weasels left.
" Hi Tia, how were your sitters?" asked Tia's mother
" well-" a terrified tia was about to speak when she saw Smartguy at the window, placing a finger by his lips and going shhh, then placing it his throat and gliding it across
"they were Ok" she said quickly
" Great, next time I need to go out, I'll call them again" said Tia's mother
Tia's eyes widened with fear upon hearing this
The End
DisneyPlease!
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