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Post by disneyplease on Dec 19, 2010 12:26:57 GMT -5
No, it's not a new episode yet, this is just a thread for new upcoming episodes for my series 'In the Dark of the night'
though like I said, Im temperarly retiring from this series since nobody likes it anymore, all because Im doing a lousy job at trying to do something different
but for those I gave permission to do episodes of their own like mine, you can still do them here, heck I bet you guys would do better than I can
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Post by Lola on Dec 19, 2010 12:29:03 GMT -5
Diz don't put yourself down like that. I have problems coming up with different tactic thats why i change the story a bit but it takes a while so just wait it will come to you
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Post by disneyplease on Dec 19, 2010 12:35:26 GMT -5
yeah,
and you know, after all this this time since I announced that I was going to stop doing the series until I come up with a new torture technique, Only one new technique popped into my head
but Im not telling what it is, I wannah surprize you guys!
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Post by Lola on Dec 19, 2010 12:36:18 GMT -5
that's good just make sure to spice up the story.
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Post by disneyplease on Dec 19, 2010 14:56:31 GMT -5
there is one episode I have in mind that I am still going to post as promised, I just need to come up with different torture techniques, and the one thing you guys should know about this one is that, the female for this next episode is in her 20's, an adult
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 3, 2011 21:41:19 GMT -5
ok, after some thinking heres a new episode, episode 14
and for this one, I tried to make it different and I tried to spice it up, if it's still the same to you guys, do'nt just ignore me, please tell me
well here goes nothing
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It was morning in Toon Town, and a human toon woman was on her way to work. The woman's name was Judy, who was 22 years old, had long light blonde hair, blue eyes, and a peach complexion.
Judy worked as a nurse in the Toon Town Hospital, so she was wearing a uniform, which was a shortsleeved white dress that went down to her knees. As she was waiting at the boss stop, she was reading a newspaper, where she found an article talking about the Toon Patrol Weasels, though she mostly focused on the picture of Psycho.
Why? because she knew him, and there was no doubt that he would know her. Before Psycho was recruited in the Toon Patrol, he was a patient at the hospital that Judy worked at, though at the time, Judy was just a nurse in training, but when Psycho was there, he disliked most of the doctors and nurses for obvious reasons. Though he was'nt harmful towards Judy, considering she never did anything to him. Judy will never forget how Psycho always looked at her with those swirling eyes of his, especially on the day that the Toon patrol weasels checked him out of the hospital, or better yet bribed the people incharge of the hospital to let them take Psycho, which they did with no questions.
As Judy was coming out of her memories, she looked across the street and saw the Toon Patrol weasels minding their own business, Though when Psycho looked across the street as well, he did'nt take his eyes off of Judy the entire time.
But to Judy's relief, the bus that took her to the hospital pulled in right in time, so she quickly hopped on, and was of to work.
It was now 8 o'clock at night, after a busy day at the hospital, Judy walked into her home nearly exausted, but when she turned on the lights, she nearly jumped when she saw a familiar weasel standing infront of her, and in her home.
"HI JUDY!!!" said Psycho as he giggled
" Oh, uh, Psycho it's you, Im surprized that you even remember me" said Judy nervously
" Yep, It's me, Hee heee, and yep, I remember you, and those other doctors and nurses at that hospital"
" great, uh, is there a reason why you're here, in my house?"
" I was in the neighborhood, so I thought I'd drop by, and I thought you'd like to know that what I like about my new life" said Psycho as he moved closer to Judy, who was backing up against the wall
"well, it's nice to know you're having a good life, but uh, maybe you should get back, your boss is probably wondering where you are" said Judy in a nervous tone
"hee hee, do'nt worry, Im not angry at you" said Psycho as he got out his razor then looked at her menacingly " Im angry at the fact that you still work at that place"
At that moment, Judy panicked and ran straight out the door, and into the street, Pyshco ran after her while cackling. for half an hour atleast, Judy was running all over the desserted streets of Toon Town as the crazy weasel was chasing her with a razor in his hand.
Judy then saw a fence and ran behind it, hoping to loose Psycho. Judy panted as she was catching her breath, then she carefully peeked from her hiding spot to see if Psycho was there, but as she did, something from behind grabbed her, wrapped one arm around her waist, and clapped a hand over her mouth.
Judy then felt whoever grabbed her pull her into complete darkness, and she felt herself being thrust down onto a flat surface and being tied down or something.
Then one lamp abouve turned on, revealing that Judy was in a paddy wagon, strapped down to a table like the ones at the hospital, and out of the shadows came the Toon patrol weasels
"Having fun yet toots?" asked Smartguy as he approuched Judy
All Judy did was struggle against the straps holding her down.
" you can do do that all ya want Doll Face, but you aint goin' nowhere" said Smartguy
" Wha- What do you weasels even want from me?!" asked Judy
" Oh we do'nt want anythin', truth be told, dis was all Psycho's idea" said Smartguy
"yep, hee hee" giggled Psycho
" And right now, we're just gonnah try a few experiments of our own on you, but do'nt worry" said Smartguy as he got out an injection that was filled with some sort of liquid, " if you hold still, they wo'nt hurt too much".
Then, Greasy flipped off her heels, Psycho placed one paw on the side of Judy's head while holding his razor near her stomach with the other, and Smartguy rolled up the sleeve of Judy's left arm, nearing it with the needle.
Within a distance, one could hear the sound of screaming.
The end
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Post by Lola on Jan 3, 2011 21:47:03 GMT -5
i kind of liked it
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Post by Darkie on Jan 3, 2011 22:09:13 GMT -5
Okay read it and curious as to what will happen next.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 3, 2011 22:23:51 GMT -5
(to Superfreak) Thank you Superfreak
(Darkie) Really ?!
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Post by Darkie on Jan 3, 2011 23:26:37 GMT -5
Yes I would like to know what happens next.
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Post by invaderfreak666 on Jan 9, 2011 3:06:52 GMT -5
Loved it
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 9, 2011 11:43:51 GMT -5
Why Thank you!!!! ^_^
and to Darkie, congradualations, cuz thats the feeling that I was going for!
You all get an Ice cream sundae!!!
and I got some news, I now came up with 3 or 4 new torture techniques, but Im not telling what they are, y'all are just gonnah have to wait til the next episode, which I still need to put together
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Post by Fisi on Jan 9, 2011 16:00:49 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm just gonna say this:
You need alot of work for your fic, not even bothering working on your OC's, and heh, some who come and look at this wouldn't even bother looking at this.
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Post by Mellow on Jan 9, 2011 16:05:44 GMT -5
Well i like it the way it is.
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Post by Fisi on Jan 9, 2011 16:09:59 GMT -5
And why wouldn't you?
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