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Post by disneyplease on Dec 3, 2010 21:08:58 GMT -5
one if I take away one of her abilities, and lower how much education including the self defense classes she had, would that do anything I really need an answer people, I do'nt wannah go through anymore heart breaks or break downs, someone tell me please DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Dec 3, 2010 21:14:30 GMT -5
Your making her toooo perfect.
Find some false. Not just "oh she's temper or etc" something else a
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Post by disneyplease on Dec 3, 2010 21:15:41 GMT -5
how about I add the fact that Falines foster fathers death destroyed half of her faith, does that count as a flaw DisneyPlease!
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Post by The Unknown on Dec 3, 2010 21:21:52 GMT -5
Um...well...I don't think that'll do a bit of good for her. You need to make her more "life-like" and less perfect. If you have trouble thinking of ways to make her seemed flawed, look at yourself. I'm not saying turn her into you, but compare your flaws to her. I...hope that helps. I could go into more details, but I gotta go for family movie night. I'll be back later.
OH! Here's something that can help you a lot. You said you were in college, right? Find out if they have a writing course for "character writing." A friend of mine took that and said it's fantastic! Really improves your character making skills!
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Post by disneyplease on Dec 3, 2010 21:40:15 GMT -5
well, if you looked up to one of you parents like how Faline did, would'nt you feel destroyed if they were murdered? and unlike me, but like my mom after how she's had her luck, Faline doe'snt believe in love or relationships and how about I lower her advanced education, like.., Faline graduating High school successfully with a diploma, but with no honors and scholarships, and Faline going into law school instead of Harvard University. and how about I lower her abilties which are being fluent in hand to hand combat, use of weoponry, and being able to squeeze through tight places, and no more than that is that all right DisneyPlease!
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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 3, 2010 21:45:02 GMT -5
If anybody thinks of a name that would fit this guy, please tell me! He's going to be in my upcoming fic. I made his character last August.
1.) What's your name?
Hey, that’s what I wanna know. I ain’t got one yet.
2.) Do you know why you were named that?
Skipping this one.
3. Are you single or taken?
Happily single.
4.) Have any abilities or powers?
Mm not the last time I checked no. Well I can write if that counts.
5.) Stop being a Mary-sue.
T.T A what?
6.) Uh... if you were to get in a fight with a strong wrestler, do you think you'd win?
ಠ_ಠ What the hell kind of drugs you on?
7.) Riiiight... Have any family members?
No. I got siblings, but we’re ain’t close, so no.
8.) Oh? How about pets?
If you can call the big hairy lug who hangs out at my place every weekend a pet.
9.) Cool, I guess. Tell me something that you don't like.
It’s not that I’m tiny, it’s that everybody else is too big!
10.) Something that you do like?
Money, expensive stuff, journalism…
11.) Do you have any activities/hobbies that you like to do?
… *shrug* Sit and listen to the news.
12.)Have you ever hurt anyone in any way before?
W-what’s that matter to you?
13.)Ever...killed anyone before?
What? I think I’d remember if I did…
14.)What is your species?
Toon bee.
15.) Your worst habits?
Overworking, maybe.
16.)Do you look up to anyone at all?
Nope.
17.)Gay, straight, or bi?
Straight, thanks.
18.)Do you go to school?
Nah.
19.) Ever wanna marry and have kids one day?
O-nay. Not even for money. *shudder*
20.)Do you have any fan-girls/fan-boys?
No. T__T;
21.)What are you most afraid of?
Losing my life just because of a couple of mistakes.
(By “life” he means everything he’s worked for and gained so far in his life.)
22.)What color is your hair?
You mean paint? Yellow and black.
23.) Eyes?
Black.
24.) What do you usually wear?
Collared shirt, reporter’s hat, my camera with the sling around my neck. *raises arms to show self off*
25.)What's your religion?
Don’t have one. Too busy to pray anyway.
26.)Do you wish this quiz is over?
Yes I do.
27.) Well, it's still not over.
… ಠ_ಠ
28.) Anyways, where do you live?
Downtown Toontown, in a highrise *daydreaming*
(He lives in an apartment in the burbs of Toontown. XP)
29.) What class are you? (Low class, middle class, high class)?
Middle class, but I’m going to be high.
30) How many friends do you have?
What counts as a friend?
31)If you could change anything about you, what would you change?
Ha, I’d be rich.
32.) What are your thoughts on pie?
I-- what??
33.) Alright. What's your favorite food?
Bread ‘n’ butter.
34.) Favorite drink?
Honey tea.
35.) What is your favorite place?
Downtown Toontown.
36.) Least favorite?
The slums of the human world.
37.) Are you still wanting the quiz to end?
Yep.
38.) Well, it's over.
Good then.
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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 3, 2010 22:06:46 GMT -5
well, if you looked up to one of you parents like how Faline did, would'nt you feel destroyed if they were murdered? and unlike me, but like my mom after how she's had her luck, Faline doe'snt believe in love or relationships and how about I lower her advanced education, like.., Faline graduating High school successfully with a diploma, but with no honors and scholarships, and Faline going into law school instead of Harvard University. and how about I lower her abilties which are being fluent in hand to hand combat, use of weoponry, and being able to squeeze through tight places, and no more than that is that all right DisneyPlease! Yes, but that isn't a character flaw. We're talking flaws, not reactions here. A lot of people don't believe in love or relationships. I don't. That is not a flaw. That's still about too much, because not many people went to college back then. ESPECIALLY not girls. You can make Faline tough as you want, but you can't get rid of the sexism. Not everything's going to bend her way. Does the squeezing-through-tight-spaces thing make sense? You said she had largish hips. Is she super skinny, super small? Otherwise it doesn't make sense and is thus Sueish for her.
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Post by The Unknown on Dec 3, 2010 22:07:27 GMT -5
1.) What's your name? *climbing over window* Buah?! Where the heck did YOU come from?!
2.) Do you know why you were named that? I'm still a bit freaked out that you're in my room...
3. Are you single or taken? Have you ever seen a kid my age hooked up? Wait, I think Shirley Temple was dating during her young prime years...Huh.
4.) Have any abilities or powers? If I was a toon my ability would be the power to throw you outta here.
5.) Stop being a Mary-sue. My name isn't Mary Sue, *#@$%!
6.) Uh... if you were to get in a fight with a strong wrestler, do you think you'd win? The chances are pretty slim.
Interviewer: For you?
Nah, the other guy.
7.) Riiiight... Have any family members? Depends on what you mean by "family members."
8.) Oh? How about pets? I believe I've mentioned to this other guy that the Weasels probably count.
9.) Cool, I guess. Tell me something that you don't like. You. Being here. In my room. When I could be sleeping.
10.) Something that you do like? Sleeping right now on the bed you happen to be sitting on.
11.) Do you have any activities/hobbies that you like to do? Kicking you out so I can finally get to sleep. Oh, and I guess playing guitar.
12.)Have you ever hurt anyone in any way before? I could in the next second.
13.)Ever...killed anyone before? Ever been dead before?
14.)What is your species? What do I look like to you?!
15.) Your worst habits? Smoking...if you consider that a bad habit.
16.)Do you look up to anyone at all? A look up to a lot of people...I'm a kid after all. Not quite tall yet.
17.)Gay, straight, or bi? I haven't really thought about that...Huh.
18.)Do you go to school? Nope. Maroon Cartoon Studios for me.
19.) Ever wanna marry and have kids one day? Uh...I don't think that's something kids think about at this time of day.
20.)Do you have any fan-girls/fan-boys? What's that?
21.)What are you most afraid of? I'd rather not mention them or else I could be blackmailed. *whispers* The walls have ears...
22.)What color is your hair? Are you color bli...wait. I think color blinds can still see black. Well actually it's dark brown but it's hard to tell.
23.) Eyes? Blue, stupid.
24.) What do you usually wear? Unless you can't tell, raggedy clothes.
25.)What's your religion? Don't have one.
26.)Do you wish this quiz is over? Yes. Very much.
27.) Well, it's still not over. FFFFFFFFFFFF
28.) Anyways, where do you live? I don't know why you'd be asking me that when you're in my room anyway, but if it'll make you leave sooner, I live in an apartment with a bunch of cartoon weasel police in Downtown LA.
29.) What class are you? (Low class, middle class, high class)? I...uh...not quite sure. Somewhere in the bottom rank I guess.
30) How many friends do you have? Some
31)If you could change anything about you, what would you change? Lots and they're none of your business.
32.) What are your thoughts on pie? It's...good.
33.) Alright. What's your favorite food? Whatever is cheap and good to eat. Not red meat though.
34.) Favorite drink? Water
35.) What is your favorite place? Someplace quiet and peaceful where I can sleep. Oh, it's not here right now.
36.) Least favorite? A place filled with people I don't like.
37.) Are you still wanting the quiz to end? Yes.
38.) Well, it's over. Thank you God. Now. Leave...please.
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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 3, 2010 22:13:23 GMT -5
I love Sam so much. <X''D I can't wait to read her in the next "Orphan" chappie. Great character.
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Post by kellyc on Dec 3, 2010 22:26:46 GMT -5
Characters Chosen:Moonbeam
1) How Old Are You? Moonbeam-I'm six
2) Height? Moonbeam-3'0''
3) You Got Any Bad Habits? Moonbeam-Ya i play with mt hair when i'm happy
4) You a virgin? Moonbeam-What that?
5) Who's your Mate/Spouse? Moon-I'm too young for love
6) Have Any Kids? Moonbeam-I'm six
7) What's your favourite food/drink? Moonbeam-Jello and Milk
8) Favorite Ice Cream flavor? Moonbeam-Cookie Dough
9) Killed anyone? Moonbeam-No
10) Hate anyone? Moonbeam-I don't know
11) Any Secrets? Moonbeam-Yep
12) Love Anyone? Moonbeam-No i'm six
13) TACOS? Moonbeam-Yuck
14) Ever slept in All day? Moonbeam-Yep
15) Favorite Show? Moonbeam-Micky Mouse Cartoon
16) Favourite Movie? Moonbeam-Snow White
17) Favorite Band? Moonbeam-No
18) Eye Colors? Moonbeam-Blue
19) Skin/Fur? Brown fur with black streaks and white belly and a white muzzle
20) Fat/Average/Slim? Moonbeam-I don't know
21) Rain or Sunshine? Moonbeam-Rain
22) Pool or Beach? Moonbeam-Pool
23) Camping, staying home? Moonbeam-Camping
24) Dog, Cat? Moonbeam-Doggie
25) Believe in aliens? Moonbeam-Yes
26) Natural Born, or Clone? Moonbeam-Natural
27) Car or Ship? Moonbeam-I can't drive
28) Ever destroyed something out of Blind Rage? Moonbeam-Nope
29) Any Unusual Things about you? Moonbeam-Yes i cause bad luck too others who are close too me
30) How much food/drink do you need a day? Moonbeam-Meat
31) Favorite Place? Moonbeam-The Night Sky ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1.) What's your name? Moonbeam-I'm Moonbeam
2.) Do you know why you were named that? Moonbeam-No
3. Are you single or taken? Moonbeam-I'm too young
4.) Have any abilities or powers? Moonbeam-Does bring bad luck too others count?
5.) Stop being a Mary-sue. Moonbeam-What's that?
6.) Uh... if you were to get in a fight with a strong wrestler, do you think you'd win? Moonbeam-I don't fight
7.) Riiiight... Have any family members? Moonbeam-Yes my father left and my mother doesn't care
8.) Oh? How about pets? Moonbeam-No i wish
9.) Cool, I guess. Tell me something that you don't like. Moonbeam-My bad luck too others
10.) Something that you do like? Moonbeam-I don't know
11.) Do you have any activities/hobbies that you like to do? Moonbeam-Aggravating the Weasels
12.)Have you ever hurt anyone in any way before? Moonbeam-Unless you count the bad luck
13.)Ever...killed anyone before? Moonbeam-Oh no
14.)What is your species? Moonbeam-I;m Lynx
15.) Your worst habits? Moonbeam-Playing with my hair
16.)Do you look up to anyone at all? Moonbeam-No
17.)Gay, straight, or bi? Moonbeam-What does those mean?
18.)Do you go to school? Moonbeam-Yes
19.) Ever wanna marry and have kids one day? Moonbeam-Nah
20.)Do you have any fan-girls/fan-boys? Moonbeam-Nope
21.)What are you most afraid of? Moonbeam-Monsters
22.)What color is your hair? Almond
23.) Eyes? Blue
24.) What do you usually wear? A long sleeved yellow shirt and black pants
25.)What's your religion? Moonbeam-I don't have one
26.)Do you wish this quiz is over? Moonbeam-Yes *yawns*
27.) Well, it's still not over. Moonbeam-Ok
28.) Anyways, where do you live? Moonbeam-An old house
29.) What class are you? (Low class, middle class, high class)? Moonbeam-Low class
30) How many friends do you have? Moonbeam-I don't have any they all run away from me
31)If you could change anything about you, what would you change? Moonbeam-My curse
32.) What are your thoughts on pie? Moonbeam-Yummy
33.) Alright. What's your favorite food? Moonbeam-Meat
34.) Favorite drink? Moonbeam-Milk
35.) What is your favorite place? Moonbeam-The Night Sky
36.) Least favorite? Moonbeam-At my house
37.) Are you still wanting the quiz to end? Moonbeam-Yes
38.) Well, it's over. Moonbeam *yawns*-Yay
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Post by Mellow on Dec 3, 2010 22:28:31 GMT -5
Characters chosen: Mellow (Mel) Weasel
1. Whats your name? Mellow, but call me mel for short.
2. Why were you given this name? The heck would i know!
3. Are you single or taken? Taken.
4. Have any powers or abilities? Well, i know jitsu very well.
5. Stop being a mary sue! Oh no, you didn't!
6. If you got in a fight with someone strong, would you win? That depends, if the person weak, even if their strong.
7. Who's your mate/spouse? Stupid.
8. Are you a virgin? That's none of your business!
9.What's your hair color? Blue-violet.
10. What's your eye color? Blue.
11. What's the color of your fur? Do i have to keep answering questions about what color i am?!! (Sigh) My fur is auburn.
12. Do you wish this quiz was over? Yeah!
13. Too bad! It's not over. Oh that's just peachy!
14. What outfits do you wear? I normally wear a golden short-sleeve sweater dress. It's so soft, and a black hair band.
15. What's your favorie foods? Spaghetti, pomegrants, and chocolate.
16. What's your favorite drinks? Tea, juice, and chocolate milkshake.
17. Do you ever wish to get married and have kids someday? Yeah!
18. Have you ever killed someone before? Why should you know?!
19.Have you ever hurt someone before? If you mean in fights, then yes.
20. What is your species? Toon weasel. Why? what were you expecting, a dog?!
21. What class are you? Low, middle, or high? I'm middle class.
22. What's your hobbies? Swimming, drawing, and roller-skating.
23. Are you straight, bi, or gay? Straight.
24. What's your favorite movie? The final destination series.
25.Have any family members? I have a sister.
26. What's your favorite things to do? Sleep, dance, sing, and hang out with my boyfriend and sister.
27.What's your greatest fear? I guess my greatest fear is.....getting dipped.
28. What's your favorite music? Alternative choices. It doesn't matter. Music is music.
29.What's your favoorite place? Toontown, and L.A.
30. What's your least favorite place? If it's a bad, filthy town, then forget about me living there.
31.Have any bad habits? I drink when i'm either depressed, or when i just wanna party and have fun.
32. Are you slim, fat , or in between? That's not the best question to ask me, but i'm slim.
33. Still wish this quiz was over? Who doesn't?
34. It's over now. Finally. I need some chocolate. Catcha later!
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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 3, 2010 22:48:14 GMT -5
You can always modify your post. Or delete it.
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Post by Mellow on Dec 3, 2010 23:00:36 GMT -5
Ok, I've finshed it up.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 3, 2010 23:21:18 GMT -5
nice ^^
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Post by Mellow on Dec 3, 2010 23:23:25 GMT -5
Thanks.
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