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Faline
Dec 7, 2010 17:45:59 GMT -5
Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 7, 2010 17:45:59 GMT -5
Spikey gets a karma.
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Faline
Dec 7, 2010 19:30:17 GMT -5
Post by disneyplease on Dec 7, 2010 19:30:17 GMT -5
okay, I think I got 2 more flaws for Faline she can also be sarcastic, at certain times that is and could the size of her hips count as a physical flaw DisneyPlease!
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Faline
Dec 7, 2010 19:57:02 GMT -5
Post by Fisi on Dec 7, 2010 19:57:02 GMT -5
No? Why would hips be a flaw?
That's ridiculous.
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Faline
Dec 7, 2010 20:23:41 GMT -5
Post by disneyplease on Dec 7, 2010 20:23:41 GMT -5
I meant the size, but okay
alright so right now these are Falines personality flaws
she has temper problems
she's stubborn
she's abit indenial
she's sarcastic at certain times
how about this,
due to the fact that she spent almost her whole life working hard on her goals, she has very little knowledge about certain things, girly things being one of them
DisneyPlease!
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 0:16:58 GMT -5
Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 8, 2010 0:16:58 GMT -5
No, the size of her hips isn't something negative, it's something most people would want. It wouldn't even count if she had flat curves anyway.
And sarcasm definitely is not a flaw. Unless she's EXTREMELY sarcastic, like almost everything that comes out of her mouth is sarcastic and very offensive. But then she'd have to pay for it (like Unknown's Sam has to pay for her own mouth), and the examples you've given of Faline so far have suggested that she doesn't have any such thing as karma. Which of course would make her Sue-like.
And the no-knowledge-of-girly-things doesn't count as a flaw either. You can still keep it, but don't count it as a flaw. Unless she has no sense of fashion whatsoever and dresses horribly, then it might be a flaw.
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 10:18:54 GMT -5
Post by disneyplease on Dec 8, 2010 10:18:54 GMT -5
ok then,
what about Faline being a smart alleck at certain times
and a teaser
incase y'all are wondering what I mean by teaser, well it's like what peter from ghostbusters does
there are times when Faline teases the weasels, though she mostly teases Smartguy, Greasy and Wheezy
DisneyPlease!
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 15:17:51 GMT -5
Post by Fisi on Dec 8, 2010 15:17:51 GMT -5
You need alot of thinking.
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 16:06:29 GMT -5
Post by Lola on Dec 8, 2010 16:06:29 GMT -5
No, the size of her hips isn't something negative, it's something most people would want. Really!?
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 17:30:06 GMT -5
Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 8, 2010 17:30:06 GMT -5
No, the size of her hips isn't something negative, it's something most people would want. Really!? Um, yeah, most girls want big hips. To impress the boys. >__>;
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 17:33:48 GMT -5
Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 8, 2010 17:33:48 GMT -5
ok then, what about Faline being a smart alleck at certain times and a teaser incase y'all are wondering what I mean by teaser, well it's like what peter from ghostbusters does there are times when Faline teases the weasels, though she mostly teases Smartguy, Greasy and Wheezy DisneyPlease! Are you ready for her to take the consequences? Because if you make her like that, fluent in combat or not she will get her ass whooped every now and then. She'll say something smart-alecky and somebody will get mad and punch her in the face because that is how real life works. And if a fight ensues, she will not always win it. But no offense (and no pun intended), you seem to get offended when your character gets offended, and that is definitely not a good trait to have when writing. Love your characters, but when writing, gods cannot take sides. You are the god of your fic-world. I don't really know if you'd be fair enough to have Faline get her karma when she deserves it in your fics. Having her constantly get off the hook when she teases somebody is, you guessed it and are probably sick of the phrase, Mary Sue-like. This doesn't mean you have to annihilate the trait; I'm just making sure you know what you're doing and that you're ready (because believe me, I used to be a lot like you back when I first made my OC Twobits. A smartass to the heart, but always got away with everything he said/did. Different now, of course, but...). Also: You might still need another flaw to even your character out. Maybe she's really geeky in some annoying way? My friend Ginger's character Mary Mei has an obsession with drawing and will hurt you if you don't freeze when she tells you to so she can paint you. Another character loses his temper waaaaaay too easily and will shoot you at the slightest provocation... Actually, almost forgot, are you still going with the temper thing for Faline? That could be a defining trait.
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 18:07:44 GMT -5
Post by Fisi on Dec 8, 2010 18:07:44 GMT -5
Oh snap. XD
Sorry, I just had to agree.
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 20:50:03 GMT -5
Post by disneyplease on Dec 8, 2010 20:50:03 GMT -5
well yes, Im still going to give Faline her temper problems
there'd be a reason why she has temper problems, same thing for her being stubborn, and tough
her foster fathers death, it devistated her and it left her heartbroken and angry
I never said the weasels, especially Smartguy, would take Falines Smart remarks at them well
even when she meets the weasels, she acts like a Smart alleck, which makes Smartguy mad
plus, before Faline and Smartguy fully understand each other, they disagreed and argued over many things, it even leads to when Faline goes to far and her temper gets out of hand, causing Smartguy to strike her (physically)
and Faline can be geeky at times
DisneyPlease!
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Faline
Dec 8, 2010 21:45:26 GMT -5
Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 8, 2010 21:45:26 GMT -5
If you say so.
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Faline
Dec 9, 2010 14:53:04 GMT -5
Post by disneyplease on Dec 9, 2010 14:53:04 GMT -5
what about Faline being curious it was her curiousity that got her mixed up with the Toon patrol in the first place does curiousity count as a flaw DisneyPlease!
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Faline
Dec 9, 2010 18:26:58 GMT -5
Post by Fisi on Dec 9, 2010 18:26:58 GMT -5
No, it's a personaility. That's different.
Flaws are something that why the OC is different. Of course personaility is what makes them different, but I'm talking about in the outside.
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