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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 22, 2010 22:10:03 GMT -5
You're welcome!
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 27, 2010 9:44:01 GMT -5
Chapter 8
Soon CarolAnne's mother got ona plane to NewYork, and when she got to the airport there, she was in luck, tonight at midnight there was a plane heading for L.A.
Back at home, CarolAnne decided to go take a evening walk, even though she knew the weasels would be coming to her house later. Though as CarolAnne was walking, she passed by one or two houses where she saw happy families. CarolAnne started to miss her family already.
Soon CarolAnne encountered the Toon Town lake, where she saw a beautiful sunset in a perfect distance. She decided to sit down on a bench to watch it for a while. Then CarolAnne turned her head to her right, but then she froze when she saw Silver the cyborg pirate on the bench next to the one she was sitting on.
He too noticed CarolAnne, looked both ways, then he got up and approached her. CarolAnne just froze there.
When the cyborg was near CarolAnne, he just smiled and said in a friendly tone in his thick sailor voice "even'in Lass".
CarolAnne's fear started to slowly fade away.
"Mind if I join ye" asked Silver
CarolAnne slowly shook her head in means of yes. Then Silver sat down next to her.
"Ye live not to far from me dont'cha Lass" he said
"Yeah" responded CarolAnne
"ah, I figured, ye know, whenever ye see me ye do'nt have to runaway, other's say many t'ings 'bout me, but it not all be true" assured the cyborg, which did put CarolAnne at ease
"well I guess I was falling for one of my sisters stories, hmph I do'nt even know why I listen to her even though what she say's is never true"
Silver could'nt help but to chuckle at this. For atleast an hour, the two just sat there and talked.
"well I think I should be going now" said CarolAnne
"aye, same fer me" said Silver as he stretched and got up
Then after waving good bye, CarolAnne headed home, but when she looked at her watch and saw that it was 6:59, she remembered that the weasels were coming, then she ran all the way home.
Once she got into her house she said to herself, "well CarolAnne, this is your house, and you need to defend it"
For almost a full hour, CarolAnne has been busy building and setting up all different sets of boobytraps all over the house.
Outside the weasels parked their van.
"so what now?" asked Greasy
"we'll try da back door" said Smartguy
"duh, yeah, maybe she'll let us in" said Stupid
" yep, after all, heh heh, she's a kid, and kids are stupid!" said Smartguy
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Post by Mellow on Nov 27, 2010 11:55:04 GMT -5
Wow!!!!! Keep it up, buddy!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 27, 2010 12:44:28 GMT -5
Nice work! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 27, 2010 16:15:45 GMT -5
thanks girls!!! ^_^
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 27, 2010 16:49:55 GMT -5
Chapter 9
Inside the house, CarolAnne has just finished her dinner, then she saw that the clock now read 8 o'clock. CarolAnne quickly got out of her seat, and got by the back door with her sisters Beebee gun and she got it ready.
"This is it, do'nt get scared now" CarolAnne said to herself as she then leaned agains the wall by the door. Then she heard knocking
"How ya doin' kid!" called Smartguy, "We know that'cher in there, an' that'cher all alone"
"Yeah, com'on Girly open up" called Wheezy
Inside, CarolAnne slowly crouched down with her Beebee gun in hand
"Ah, we aint gonnah hurt'cha" said Smartguy
"duh, but Boss you said-" began Stupid
"Shhh, you want da kid ta open do ya?" snapped Smartguy in a whisper
"Duh, yeah"
"well then Shut Up and play along"
"Oh , I get it"
Inside, CarolAnne now slowly moved the fire point of the Beebee gun through the doggie door, while the weasels did not notice.
"Com'on, be a good lil' gal an' open da door" called Smartguy
Then CarolAnne fired the Beebee gun, shooting Smartguy in the place that rhymes with walls. Smartguy squirmed and fell to the ground on his knee's in pain while cursing under his breath.
"Duh, what happened Boss?" asked Stupid
"Do'nt ask me stupid questions" snarled Smartguy, "Psycho, get dat little..." Smartguy moaned in pain
Psycho then slithered his head through the doggie door, he saw CarolAnne sitting on the floor with her Beebee gun in hand, and a wide happy grin grew on his face
"Hello" said CarolAnne with a smirk, the she shot Psycho in the nose.
"OWW!" cried Psycho as he pulled his head out while cupping his nose
"OW, she shot me!!!" he called out
"yes, yes, yes,yes,yes" cheered CarolAnne as she ran from the back door inside the house.
"Alright boys, lets try spliting up, I'll use the front, Psycho, Stupid you 2 use the basement, Wheeze, use one side of the house, Grease, use the other side"
Then the weasels went to their places.
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Post by Mellow on Nov 27, 2010 16:56:39 GMT -5
Oh boy! I can't wait to see what happens next. X3
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 27, 2010 18:06:58 GMT -5
thanks girl friend!!! ;D word of procaution to all who are reading this, the next chapter and the one after that is gauranteed to make you all Laugh your sock's off!!!!!! DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 27, 2010 18:36:45 GMT -5
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 27, 2010 23:36:43 GMT -5
Chapter 10
Smartguy walked all the way to the front of CarolAnnes house, and was about to walk up the porch, but little did he know that the porch covered in dish soap, so the minute he walked up the porch, he slipped, and fell on his back.
Same thing with the stairs that led to the basement, so when Psycho and Stupid tried to use those stairs, they slipped and fell down the stairs, once they got to the very bottom, the door creeked open
"duh, how confinent" said Stupid as he and Psycho entered the Basement and saw the steps that led up into the house.
Back at the front, Smartguy tried to walk up the porch again, and this time he was careful. Smartguy chuckled with success as he made it to the door. Little did he know that the door knob was heated, so when he gripped the door knob...
"OWWWWWWWWWWWWW" Yelled Smartguy as he burned his hand
As Smartguy pulled it away he slipped off the porch steps, then he saw a puddle next to him. Steam rose as he dipped his burned hand in the puddle, but as it helped, he sighed in relief.
In the basement, the steps were covered in sticky black paint (a strong combo of glue and paint), so while trying to walk up Stupid got stuck at the bottom, while Psycho was having a hard time trying to get up but he was determined to make it into the house, but then he stepped on a nail that was put in place. Psycho's eyes widened, then he looked down
"OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW" he cried while clutching his foot then falling down the stairs, knock Stupid down with him, landing on his back.
"OWWW that hurt!!!!" cried Psycho
Knowing that he could'nt use the front , Smartguy walked all the way to the back door. Just before Smartguy gripped the door knob , he made sure it was'nt heated like the front door knob, thankfully it was'nt. For some humor, Smartguy took off his hat, but as he opened the door, a blow torch has been ignited firing at his head, Smartguy screamed from the heat of the fire, then he ran out the door
"OUCH, OW, AH, HOT, HOT,HOT, HOT!!!!" cried Smartguy, then he found a bucket of water, and he quickly dunked his head in it, putting the fire on his head out just in time.
Once he pulled his head out, Smartguy shook his head dry. Then he placed his hat back on, and he rushed to the door, and kicked it open, knocking the blow torch out of place. Smartguy was very ticked, steam was coming out of his ears as well as from under his hat, and fire was burning in his eyes
"WHERE ARE YOU YA LIL' BRAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he yelled
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Post by Mellow on Nov 27, 2010 23:39:43 GMT -5
XD LOL!!! I'm laughing myself to death right now!!! Keep it up!!!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 27, 2010 23:47:36 GMT -5
That was funny. KEEP IT UP!!!!!
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Post by kellyc on Nov 28, 2010 10:16:33 GMT -5
it could use a little work, it's not as funny nut it has it moments
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 28, 2010 16:25:38 GMT -5
I was cracking up when I was typing the scene with the Beebee gun, and how Smartguy and Psycho and Stupid fell for the traps
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 28, 2010 17:16:35 GMT -5
Lol. That was funny.
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