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Post by disneyplease on Oct 19, 2010 14:08:15 GMT -5
Chapter 4
Back home, it was night time, and outside, a black van was parked, and inside it was Smartguy, along with his partners Greasy, Wheezy, Psycho and Stupid.
"see boys, being an EX cop certainly has it's adventages" said Smartguy, " I've picked the close to wealthy looking familys who are going on vacation homes, and the families told ME in person how they're keeping their places secure while they're out'ah the picture"
then he pulls out his watch, "in fact our house for this neighbor hood's timed outside lights should coming on just about.., Now!"
then the outside lights of CarolAnnes house turned on.
"duh, thats a purdy house!" said Stupid
"Nice choice Boss" said Wheezy
"yep, and it's LOADED with stuff, perfect silver ware along with glass, a nice tv and stereo, heck I bet we're gonnah find rare jewelry" said Smartguy, one could see the greed in his eyes
"well enough talkin' 'bout it, lets get ta work"
then he turned on the Van and drove it into the drive way of the house
In the house, CarolAnne woke up as she heard a car park on the drive way and doors opening, her eyes widened when she saw five figures outside the window, holding Crowbars
"Burglers" she thought to herself
"so where do go Boss?" asked Greasy in a whisper
"we'll go through the basement" whispered Smartguy
with that heard, CarolAnne rushed to the door leading to the basement downstairs where the was a light switch by the door
and the light to the basement turned on, alarming the weasels.
"Duh, hey, I thought you said they were'nt here Boss" said Stupid
"What Da.., they were supposed to leave t'day" stated Smartguy
"I think we better get out of here" said Greasy
then the weasels ran
Inside, CarolAnne rushed to the front door, pressed her ear to the door, and heard their van turning, backing up and leaving. CarolAnne was relieved.
"phew..., thank heaven, smart move CarolAnne" she said to herself
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 19, 2010 18:12:04 GMT -5
Cool so far!
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 19, 2010 20:52:57 GMT -5
Thanks AM!
Is'nt there anyone else with opinions of this fic!
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Post by Mellow on Oct 19, 2010 20:59:40 GMT -5
Yeah. KEEP IT UP!!! HEE HEE!!!
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 21, 2010 11:49:42 GMT -5
Chapter 5
at the Jamaica airport, things were not going so good. Just about every Flight was full, including flights to L.A., atleast til saturday, but CarolAnnes mom did'nt want to wait that long, but then the Lady at the check in desk then suggested that she could stay at the airport and get put on stand by. Thankfully CarolAnnes mom agreed, and Grandma and Aunt Polly promised to stay with the kids in Jamaica til theres a flight back home availible.
Back at home in the morning, CarolAnne was getting ready to go out and buy something, then she reached under her bed and pulled out a Large piggy bank full of money from house work and from the tooth fairy. Her saving money was about to pay off at this very time.
At a different house, not to far from CarolAnnes house, the weasels were helping their selves to taking whatever they thought were worth something. Then the Answering machine went off.
"Hey sher, it's Mrs. McFall, something came up here in Jamaica could you please call me back if you get this message thanks"
the weasels eyes widened
"Hey Boss" said Greasy
"Yeah, whats da Matta' "
"That House we were at last night, what that the McFalls place?" asked Wheezy
"Yeah"
"You were right, they are Gone" said Greasy
Smartguy grinned evily at this, "I knew they were"
"So were going back tonight" asked Wheezy
"YEP!"
at a drug store, CarolAnne walked up to the cashier holding a pint of juice
"Can I help you with something dear?" said the lady
" Are the fruits in this real or artificial?"
"hmph, I dunno" said the lady looking at the juice pint, " Hey Larry, I gottah question about a certain juice pint"
Then as the lady was talking to a staff member something slammed on to the counter, CarolAnne looked, and her eyes widened when she saw that it was Silver the pirate cyborg. Out of fear, she backed away, but she quickly put the juice back on the counter to avoid stealing, then she ran right through the exit, puzzling the lady at the counter.
"Hmph, *shrugging*, guess she probably changed her mind!" she said simply
CarolAnne ran until she was completely out of the drugstores sight. Then she began to walk home with her head in her thoughts, which made her fail to notice that the weasels van was pulling out of a driveway and she was walking towards it.
"Alright boys, now that we know that the family is gone, our schedule for tonight is-"
"BOSS STOP" yelled Psycho as he and now Smartguy spotted a little girl walking by
Smartguy hit the breaks hard, CarolAnne noticed the van almost about to hit her, and screamed, but stopped when the van stopped just about a few inches away from her face. She slowly walked away from the Van
"HEY KID" shouted Smartguy, causing CarolAnne to hault and turn around to face him, "WATCH WHERE YER GOIN' NEXT TIME!"
"Sorry mr!" CarolAnne apologized
"Ah never mind, you can go Skat now!"
There was something about the weasels voice and looks that were familiar, then she remembered he was that cop that came in her home to talk to her mother, and she remembered that voice as one of the burglers from last night. Then she nervously continued to walk home. Smartguy then narrowed his eyes at her as she walked away.
"What is it Boss" wheezy asked
"Theres somethin' familiar 'bout that kid"
"Duh, I never saw her before" said Stupid
"Ah, who knows where I saw her, heck I've seen just about a THOUSAND Brats this week when I was seeing those families altogetha', but enough 'bout that, lets just go, we gottah job ta do tonight". Then they drove off in another direction.
"hmph, if those weasels come back tonight, I'll be ready" said CarolAnne to herself
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 21, 2010 17:30:16 GMT -5
Cool! Keep it up!!!
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 21, 2010 17:34:46 GMT -5
thanks girlfriend!
it's fans like you that make me feel like there are those who appreciate my talents!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 21, 2010 17:45:01 GMT -5
Aye!
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 22, 2010 13:30:21 GMT -5
Chapter 6
That night, the weasels drove back to CarolAnnes house, but they were surprized when they saw Every light in the house on, loud party music being played, and some movement.
"Duh, Oh BOY, a Party!" claimed Stupid
"Did they come back?" asked Wheezy
"how the heck should I know" snapped Smartguy
"maybe we should get out of here" said Greasy
then the weasels drove away, CarolAnne looked out and smiled that her plan worked then she continued to party all by herself in the house.
At the Jamaica airport, CarolAnnes mom was in luck, there was a plane to Miami availible, so she decided to keep flying til she found an air port with a plane that will take her back home to L.A.
Back at home, as CarolAnne lied in her bed, she could'nt help but to think about the good times she had with her family when they were still here. Then the next morning she got up and she went to go get some groceries. Then she came back to take care of some things in the house.
Outside, the weasels drove up and parked by the house.
"I really do'nt get whats goin' on" said a fustraighted Smartguy, "Last night da place was nearly jumping, now it's like theres no one home!"
"duh, what're we gonnah do now boss?" asked Stupid
"I'll tell ya what we're gonnah do, we are gonnah stay right here, and see what's goin' on" said Smartguy getting settled in, "we'll wait ALL night Long if we have to!"
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 22, 2010 17:41:49 GMT -5
Cool! Keep it comin'!
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 22, 2010 18:05:54 GMT -5
thanks AM!
the next chapter may have you at the edge of your seat!!!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 22, 2010 18:12:12 GMT -5
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 22, 2010 20:31:21 GMT -5
Chapter 7
It was 2 o'clock, the weasels were occupied in the van, Greasy was looking at a magazine with pictures of women, Wheezy was helping himself to his cigarette, and Psycho and Stupid were napping, then Smartguy just woke up from his nap, then he noticed someone in the back yard, taking down the laundry down from the clothes line. When he saw the red ribbon on her head, he was able to tell it was a little girl. and a evil grin grew on his face.
"hey boys" he said getting the other weasels attention
"look" said Smartguy as he pointed at the kid in the yard then going back in the house, "well whaddya know boys, looks like we've been DOOPED by a 3rd grader"
then the weasels exited the van, and quietly crept by the house, Smartguy looked through the window where saw the familiar little red ribbon wearing girl.
CarolAnne was folding some of the things she took down, then she froze when she looked up at the mirror and saw that Smartguy was spying on her.
"hey Mom, how am I supposed to fold these again" she called out hoping it would do something.
Smartguy grinned and backed out of view from the window chuckling wickedly to himself.
"this is TOO precious!"
"what is it boss?" asked Wheezy
"remember dat lil girl we saw yesta'day, She LIVES 'ere!"
"if the Nina's here, her parents have gottah be" said Greasy
"nah ah, dis is da juicy part, she's home alone!"
the weasels grinned at this
Inside CarolAnne ran out of the room and to the window to see and hear what they were up to now.
"so you really wannah come back here to finish the job TONIGHT?!" asked Greasy as he and the others started to walk back to the van.
"Yes I do!" said Smartguy
"even with a kid here?!" asked Wheezy
"yep!!" answered Smartguy
"Duh, I do'nt think thats such a good idea Boss" said Stupid
"You also do'nt know what comes after 3, look ya mugs, I've been wanting to do this job on this house since I saw it, and Im NOT letting a a kid get in my way. So heres the plan, we'll get a bite ta eat, go home for a rest, then we'll come back at eight, when it's dark!"
"duh, yeah, kids are scared of the dark!" happily claimed Stupid
"you're afraid of the Dark too Stupid!" said Wheezy
"duh- HEY, NO IM NOT!" said Stupid offened
Inside, CarolAnne heard the whole thing. This was bad. They Know that she's alone.
"Mom, where are you?" she said to herself
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 22, 2010 21:33:31 GMT -5
Oh boy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 22, 2010 21:39:15 GMT -5
Thanks a million AM! ^_^
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