Post by Fisi on Oct 4, 2010 19:03:26 GMT -5
This is where I will put info on my OC, Zudi. Any honest opinions would be nice to hear.
I think I got the background for Zudi.
Back at the 1931 in Russia Odyessa (I think spelled) Zudi's father wanted to run away from peasant life and live on a new life in America. He begged for them to come along, but Zudi's mother refused to let her kits in danger since they are too young (Zudi is like 3 as for her brother 5 years old.) to even go. Her father decided to go without them but is planning to bring them once he reaches there. Before he did, he gave Alik his hat and Zudi a badanna as reminders of him. It was then Zudi heard from her mother's friend that came to visit, told her father died after he has been caught trying to escape. In 1933, when she was five years old (this is the year of when her brother, Alik, died and passed away from illness. I have already said this.) her cousin, Theodore, (since he is an American.) bring her and her mother to the United States. What they didn't know about him was that he was part of a mob. Theodore wanted Zudi and her mother to be a part of this but again her mother did not want to. So, he murdered her. For a kit, her cousin expected her to be a perfect as their member. Every chance she try, she messes up. When Zudi does messed up, she does not be fed, no water or food(they are harsh.). Later on in life as she is 17 years old, Zudi is experienced. She didn't stayed long, she escaped by faking her death. (need to figure out how she escaped.)
What you think?
I think I got the background for Zudi.
Back at the 1931 in Russia Odyessa (I think spelled) Zudi's father wanted to run away from peasant life and live on a new life in America. He begged for them to come along, but Zudi's mother refused to let her kits in danger since they are too young (Zudi is like 3 as for her brother 5 years old.) to even go. Her father decided to go without them but is planning to bring them once he reaches there. Before he did, he gave Alik his hat and Zudi a badanna as reminders of him. It was then Zudi heard from her mother's friend that came to visit, told her father died after he has been caught trying to escape. In 1933, when she was five years old (this is the year of when her brother, Alik, died and passed away from illness. I have already said this.) her cousin, Theodore, (since he is an American.) bring her and her mother to the United States. What they didn't know about him was that he was part of a mob. Theodore wanted Zudi and her mother to be a part of this but again her mother did not want to. So, he murdered her. For a kit, her cousin expected her to be a perfect as their member. Every chance she try, she messes up. When Zudi does messed up, she does not be fed, no water or food(they are harsh.). Later on in life as she is 17 years old, Zudi is experienced. She didn't stayed long, she escaped by faking her death. (need to figure out how she escaped.)
What you think?