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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Sept 1, 2010 23:46:50 GMT -5
The night
Amelia La Thugg was a dock to think privately about her dead parents.
They died when she was only a baby, and she had to run away.
The night that her parents died still haunts her.
Then a swift black shadow of toon with glowing red eyes, a long cape, shiny white teeth, and long pointed ears came along.
He saw a old car the was close to the dock.
The dock was like a high hill, and Amelia was at the bottom.
The toon picked the car up, and put down on top of the dock.
Aimed at Amelia La Thugg.
Then he put titanium spikes on the car that couldn't really strike through Amelia's heart, but he injected dark energy ball power in the metal spikes.
His powers were similar to Amelia's powers.
Then the toon pushed the car down, and the car rolled down the hill at a fast pace.
When Amelia turned around the car was too close for her to get away.
The spikes punctured her chest while she was falling into the water.
And everything went black for her, then she saw a bright light.
A strong force started to pull her up.
She screamed while the force was pulling her in.
"WHAT THE H*LL IS GOING ON??!!" she screamed
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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Sept 2, 2010 12:51:18 GMT -5
Heaven
Clouds were everywhere, she couldn't see a thing.
Then she crashed into something.
When the clouds cleared up, she crashed into the golden gates.
"Where am I?" Amelia asked confusedly
Her head got a HUGE headache from the crash.
Then a silver weasel popped up infront of her.
The weasel was wearing a dark blue robe.
"This is the great hall of judgement." the weasel answered
"JUDGEMENT?!" Amelia exclaimed
"Relax, Amelia. You're innocent." the silver weasel said
"Oh, thank g*d." Amelia said in relief
"Where are my manners? I'm Swift. What's your name?" Swift asked
He had a calm voice.
"Amelia La Thugg." Amelia answered
"You're gonna love it her, Amelia La Thugg. ♫Welcome to doing whatever you wish♫" Swift sang
"This is a lovely place you got here." Amelia said
"♫Eating whatever you please♫ follow me ♫We keep it 72 degrees♫" Swift sang
"That's fine with me." Amelia said
Swift-♫Welcome to no more tragic moments. to happy and friendly instead. Welcome to being dead♫
"WHAT?! You mean I'm--I'm--" Amelia stuttered
"Stone cold, I'm afraid." Swift said
"I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! I WASN'T SUPPOSED TO DIE!" Amelia growled
"I beg your pardon?" Swift asked
"THERE'S A MISTAKE HERE! I'M SUPPOSED TO LIVE A MILLION YEARS!" Amelia snapped
Amelia La Thugg-♫I wasn't supposed to die. You got the wrong girl. I've been double crossed by so many dirt rats. Actually those rats were humans, and my parents layed down their lives for me. I only got to live thirty years. I got four unmanly thugs who need me. This is hard to explain. May I talk to your manager? Because this was a stupid mistake!♫
Swift-♫Welcome to doing whatever you wish.♫
"You got the wrong girl." Amelia growled
Swift-♫Laughing and singing all day♫
"Hey! Listen! My time is not up yet." Amelia barked
"Oh, it is. There's no mistake about that. We know everything." Swift said
Then Amelia grabbed his neck, and brought him up to her face.
"Listen very carefully. Send me back, now." Amelia growled
"If I send you back, you can never come back." Swift said
Swift was starting to get really scared.
"I don't care. Just send me back." Amelia growled
"I can't. I'm not in charge. If I send you back, I go back also." Swift said
"Just do it or else." Amelia threatened baring her teeth at him
"Alright, alright. I'll try to send you back." Swift said
Then they went to place to where the clocks were.
"There's your watch. Oh, I'm gonna be in sooo much trouble." Swift whined
"Shut up. Now where's your's?" Amelia asked holding her watch
Her watch was gold conneted to a gold chain.
She replaced her old watch, with her life watch.
Swift's watch was a gold wrist watch.
She winded them up, and then the watches started to glowed and shake.
"Are you sure this is a good idea?" Swift asked
"Shut up." Amelia growled
Then a strong force pulled them down.
"We can never come back!" Swift yelped while the force was pulling them down
"Shut up!" Amelia snapped
This story is sorta like the movie called "All dogs go to heaven".
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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Sept 2, 2010 17:18:28 GMT -5
Alive
A black cat was at the dock trying to find something to eat, but then he heard a loud splash.
It scared him a little bit, and he peeked over the dock.
Then Amelia and Swift popped out of the water, coughing.
The cat jumped, screamed, and ran away.
They pulled themselves up, gasping for air.
When they fell down, their clocks started to work.
They could breath.
There white flowers all over Amelia La Thugg.
Amelia shook the flowers off, got on her back legs, and started to walk away.
"Wait, where are you going, Amelia?" Swift asked while getting up
"My place." Amelia answered while still walking
"You're just going to leave me out here?" Swift asked
"You might slow me down." Amelia said over her shoulder
"How do you know if you don't let me come with you?" Swift asked
Amelia froze, and did a annoyed sigh.
"Fine. You can come along." Amelia growled over her shoulder
"Thanks. So, what's for dinner?" Swift asked walking by Amelia La Thugg's side
"Don't push it." Amelia growled
"Sorry. But I'm starved" Swift whinned
Then Amelia did a annoyed groan.
"Don't make me hurt you." Amelia growled
"Sorry." Swift apologized
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Post by Fisi on Sept 2, 2010 17:24:17 GMT -5
Kewl.
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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Sept 2, 2010 17:35:22 GMT -5
Thx. ^_^
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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Sept 2, 2010 18:13:16 GMT -5
Back together
It started to rain.
Back at Amelia La Thug's hide-out, her thugs were quietly sobbing and crying in their sleep.
They thought that they lost their boss forever, but what they don't is that Amelia just escaped from heaven.
Their were sleeping in bunk beds.
Then the door open and shut closed.
Amelia La Thugg and Swift soaken wet.
Amelia went to Smokey's bed, and started shaking him.
Smokey tiredly opened his eyes, and looked at Amelia.
"Oh, hi boss." Smokey greeted
"Hi" Amelia greeted back, she thought that they were gonna be calm, but she thought wrong.
Smokey screamed, Amelia's eyes widened, Swift hid under table, and the other thugs woke up.
"BOSS! YOU'RE A GHOST!" Smokey yelped
The others started to scream too.
Amelia pinned them to the wall.
"Shut up. I'm not a ghost. I'm not dead. I'm gonna let you go, and when I let you, you're gonna be quiet. Aren't ya?" Amelia asked suavely
They all nodded.
When she let them go, they screamed again.
"Will ya shut up?! Guys, I'm alive! Look! Do ghousts have fleas?" Amelia asked angrily holding up a flea.
"No. Ghousts don't have fleas." Ghastly whinned
"Right." Amelia said
"Boss? Boss, It's really you." Smokey said softly
"Oh, boss. We saw the car, and found you in the river." Alejandro said starting to cry softly
"I know. But I'm here now." Amelia said
Then they strted to hug her tightly, and their voices overclapped.
"Shut up! Do you want the whole world to know I'm alive? Oh, anyway I brought someone." Amelia growled
"To torture?" Deathonator
"Shut up. Swift, get out here!" Amelia growled
Swift crawled out fron his hiding spot.
Her thugs tilted their heads when they saw Swift.
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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Sept 2, 2010 19:34:15 GMT -5
A new plan
"Alright, let's get down to business. That car "accident" was no accident. I need to find out who did this to me." Amelia said
"But what if you're over your head, boss?" Ghastly asked
Amelia glared at him and bared her teeth at him with a soft growl.
"Shut up. When I found out who did this, they won't be breathing." Amelia growled
"Okay, boss. But what about him?" Smokey asked pointing at Swift
"I'll deal with him later." Amelia growled
Swift felt the cold shoulder.
"Don't get upset, Swift. She does that all the time, because she doesn't know how to express her soft feelings." Alejandro said to Swift
"We need a plan if we're gonna "take care of" this guy." Amelia said
"Um, excuse me, Amelia?" Swift asked softly
"What?" Amelia growled
"Do you think that maybe you can help me find a family, who needs me?" Swift asked softly
Amelia softly growled at him.
"Fine." Amelia grumbled
Swift smiled a bit.
Swift wants a family. ^_^
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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Sept 4, 2010 13:38:26 GMT -5
DARN IT! I'm totally fresh out of ideas for this story.
Can someone give me some ideas plz???
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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Sept 6, 2010 10:44:38 GMT -5
A word well kept
Amelia La Thugg kept her word.
Swift fell in love with a toon racoon named, Veronica.
They had three little children.
Two little racoons named, Jessica and Carmen.
And a little silver weasel named, Charile.
Amelia finally "took care of" the guy that killed her.
He was a overlord named, Suave.
She also "took care of" his henchmen.
She actually saved Toon town.
And Swift and Veronica's children call Amelia La Thugg, "Auntie Amelia".
The End
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