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Post by Mellow on Jul 3, 2010 16:31:49 GMT -5
This is a fic about Riz, Terry, Jenny, Michelle, and Loa. it's about adventures they have by themselves. What do you think, My Compadre's
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Post by Fisi on Jul 3, 2010 16:47:22 GMT -5
It's is AWSOME!!! I know it.
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Post by Mellow on Jul 3, 2010 16:50:36 GMT -5
You'd better believe it, me sista!!!!
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Post by Syrup on Jul 3, 2010 18:13:40 GMT -5
Sounds magnifique!
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Post by Mellow on Jul 4, 2010 17:21:53 GMT -5
Chpt 1 On The Plane.
"Call for flight 45, please hurry!" the speaker called. The five girls hurried to their private plane. thy handed the tickets to the ticket lady and ran through the tunnel and into the plane. they all sat down, got out their snacks and then 3minutes later, the plane took off. they were headed to Tokyo, Japan.
"Ah the place where anime toons are.' said Riz, smoking a cigarette.
"I can't wait." said Terry, reaching for a magazine.
"Ditto." said Michelle, Looking in the clouds of the sky.
"I just hope we have professional pilots on here!" said Jenny, drinking a bottle of juice.
"Ditto." said Loa, typing on her labtop.
"You ever wonder if there is a place to go shop at?" Terry asked.
"Uh Yeah! Of course terry. What country wouldn't have a clothing staore?!" said Loa.
3 hours later...
The plane started shaking and making funny sounds.
"Ok..um..Whats going on?!" said riz worried. she got up and went to the pilot room. she found the to plots out cold. she panicked.
"Wheres a live-saving button when you need it?!" She said to herself. then she saw a auto-pilot button. she pressed it and they were back on path. she then went back to her seat. She was smiling and then she looked t the window with her eyes wide. she saw dark, clouds. she turned to loa.
"Uh.. did the weatherman mention storm clouds on our way, loa?!" she asked.
"No. Why?!" She asked confused.
"LOOK!!" she shouted. they all looked out the window and saw what the leader was talking about. jut then, lighting struck one of the engines and the plane wascoming down. the girls panicked.
"They got parachutes!!" Riz shouted. there was enough for everybody, even the pilots. they grabbed their belongs, put on the parachutes and jumped off one by one.
"Here we GOOO!!!" Riz jumped out.
"WHOOAA!!!" Terry jumped.
"AAAHHH!!!!!" Jenny jumped.
"LOOK OUT BELOWWW!!!!" Michelle jumped.
"Here we COOMMEE!!!!!" Loa jumped. the pilots jumped out afterwards. and when they did, the plane crashed and exploded. the girls landed in the ocean water. but luckily there was a boater out, and they managed to spot the five girls and rescue them.
"So where are we?!" Michelle asked.
"You're near china." the boater said.
"Well we need to get to tokyo. You see the plane we were on crashed, and now we don't know what to do. can you take us to there?!" Riz asked politely.
'I'm headed there too. what a coincidence!" the Toon dog said.
"Well let's do it!" Loa yelled.
"YAAYY!!!" They all shouted and off to tokyo they went.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 4, 2010 17:54:27 GMT -5
OH SNAP!!!
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Post by Mellow on Jul 4, 2010 22:11:48 GMT -5
Chpt 2 Tokyo A Go-Go
It had been 2 hours since the girls were rescued by the toon dog who was a german sheperd. his name was charles. they were all sailing past a city of china when they heard a voice.
"Hey charlie, are we there yet, man?!" A voice said. a toon chihuahua came from downstairs of the boat.
"Oh yeah. this is carlos, carlos these are our passengers. he looked at the girls and grinned.
"They are very nice passengers, charlie man!" Carlos said. he then went to the girls.
"Single?" he asked. they all giggled.
"OL'E!!" He yelld. he ran downstairs and came back up with a guitar and played a song.
"LAAA LALA LALA LA BAMBA!!!" Carlos sang. the other's joined in too. after20 minutes of singing, they all relaxed and ate supper. it was tacos.
"Mmm. Sooo good!" Riz said.
"Totally!" Jenny said.
"I agree!" Terry said.
"Ditto!" Michelle said.
"What she said!" Loa said. after they ate, charles anchored out the boat.
"we need to stop right now. we'll continue on in the morning. everyone nodded in agreement. everyone fell fast asleep, expect for riz. she wished her special someone was with her, but she knew he was. he was in her heart. she smiled and layed down and fell fast asleep. the next morning, they all got up and had breakfast. after 15 minutes, charles pulled up the anchor andthey were off. riz was whistiling a tune.
"Hi-HO, Dairy O, off to tokyo we Go!!" She whistled. After 6 hours of stopping and going, they saw a sign.
"We'er HERE!!!" Charles barked in excitment.
"YYYAAYY!!!! Loa shouted.
"Tokyo Here we CCOOOMEE!!!" Riz Exclaimed. they had finally made it to their destination.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 5, 2010 6:03:51 GMT -5
Carlos reminded me of Pepe the chihuahua. Nice chappie. .
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Post by Syrup on Jul 5, 2010 14:35:00 GMT -5
Haha! If Psychojr reads this I'm gonna feel so bad for him. XD
Good chapters.
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Post by Mellow on Jul 7, 2010 16:49:48 GMT -5
Ditto Syrup, Ditto!! XD
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Post by Mellow on Jul 14, 2010 23:44:43 GMT -5
Chpt 3 Exploring Tokyo
After they got off the boat and said goodbye to charles and carlos, the girls split up and went off in different directions in tokyo. After 2 hours of spending the day away, they all met up and went to a hotel that loa picked out for them. it was a very beautiful hotel.when they made it to frontdesk and the woman knew who riz was. because she worked as a hero back in LA, they got to stay their for free. no charge. they showed the girls to each of they're rooms. they got one room each. loa wanted a room where the floor was crystaled, the walls were clouds, a water bed, and a hotub. jenny's room had a candy wall, red carpet, and a flatscreen tv. Michelle's room had a flower wall, marble floor, and a toy robot puppy. Terry's room had a black carpet, bubble wallpaper, and a stereo system. And Riz's room had a soft, cloud-shaped bed, purple carpet, a blue wall with purple swirls that actually swirled, bonzai tree, a radio that played harmonious music, and a box of lollipop's. you see, before they came their., the hotel could let you customize your own room. thanks to their designing robots. that's how they got their favorite rooms. they all huddied into terry's room and showed the stuff they bought today. Terry bought a hip new set of headphones, and a robot kitten toy, Loa bought some cosmetic makeup and a comic book, jenny bought a box of her favorite japenese candy and a vase, Michelle bought a pink feroda and a jar of cookies, and riz went to a special clothing store that sold clothes from all the decades and century's, so she bought a purple zoot suit to go with her purple zoot hat, a kimoco dress, and also she went to a place where you could make your own dolls. she made 4 dolls at the place, and she was happy she did. when they all finished talking, they decided to go to a nightclub so they did. after 6 hours at the club, they all went to their rooms. it was 2:45 a.m., so they went their rooms. everyone fellfast asleep. Loa was asleep in a leaning over motion, terry was fist-punching a bad guy in her sleep, michelle was talking in her sleep about cute toons, jenny was stucking her thumb, but in hr dream she was sucking on a sucker, and riz was cuddled to her 4 dolls. the first looked exacly like her, the second doll was her if she was a weasel, the third one was an anime version of her, and the fourth one was that special someone. she was dreaming about the day she, terry, and jenny escaped the asylum and from certain death. she always dreamed about her adventures. she couldn't wait to go and surprise her favorite anime friend tomorrow.
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Post by Syrup on Jul 15, 2010 0:51:20 GMT -5
Nice chapter.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 15, 2010 11:09:20 GMT -5
Niiice.
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Post by psychojr on Jul 15, 2010 11:36:50 GMT -5
Haha! If Psychojr reads this I'm gonna feel so bad for him. XD Good chapters. what if i read it. thery ok i dont mind but very good chapters.
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Post by Mellow on Jul 21, 2010 11:39:40 GMT -5
Chpt 4 Meeting Miko.
Riz got up early, got dressed, and headed off to see an old friend of her's. her friend was an anime toon named miko. she had rasberry colored hair, had hazel eyes, pale skin..sort of, and her nails always had blue nail polish on them. she had known riz for a long time now. you see, back in L.A., riz had saved miko from getting dipped in an dark alley. they then became friends after that. she knocked at the door.
"Coming!" Miko yelled. miko was wearing a orange loli, sneakers, and had her hair in two blue bows as pigtails. when she opened the door, she couldn't believe it.
"Riz?! Is that you, girl?!" Miko said.
"Long time no see, Miko buddy!" She said perky.
"Nice outfit." Miko said. riz was wearing a purple kimoco, snekers, and her bowler cap. the two girls loved dressing in their own ways no matter if looked weird or awful, they didn't care what other's thinked, they loved it.
Thanks, miko! Same to you!" Riz said.
"So, what's been going on in your town, rizzle raz?" Miko asked.
"Ah nothin' much, rasberry!" Riz said. They would nickname each other too. you could call them sister's.
"Watcha doing in tokyo anyway?" She asked.
"Ah.. i needed a break really. i won this contest, and my friends came along with me.
"Where are they?" She asked.
"They're still exploring the wonder's of tokyo." She said.
"Makes sense. Hey, it's good to see ya by the way!" Miko said, but riz noticed she sounded worried.
"Is something wrong, miko? you seem worried." Riz asked.
"Yes there is. Some guy i borrowed money from is gonna kill me, even though i paid him back the cash i borrowed from him, he still want's to kill me!" Miko said.
"" I know. You can come and stay with us! Just get ALL your stuff out of here and as soon as we return to L.A. , i'll try and help you find a house, capitche?" riz said.
"Ok, but i need to hurry before he gets back here!" She said in fear. riz nodded and they started packing all her lothes, funiture, and all her valuables up in a tiny little ag that somehow managed to hold everything up. they were just going to leave her house forever when miko saw the guys car. the guy, whose name was frankie started knocking on the door hard. they decided to escape through the backdoor, jumped over the fence, and ran back to the hotel, but what they didn't know was that miko had accidently dropped her leather wristband on the ground. As soon as frankie saw the wristband, he picked it up and called his german sheperd, rocky. he smelled the wristband and growled.
"Don't worry. We'll get her, rockey. and once we got her, you can eat her, boy! Frankie laughed sinisterly. and they became looking for their victim.
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