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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 27, 2009 17:33:16 GMT -5
Poem for a contest I wrote.
Shelbi Linn Smith Mrs. Bridges Lonoke Middle School 8th Grade What Have We Done The world as I see it… Is cold, dark, and lonely No one helps each other now Everyone fights The world is no longer the comfortable place We once knew Slowly, but surely Darkness had grown It used to be just a small child’s shadow Now, it is a trees’ shadow Life has become complicated People have died by the hands of others If we all just sat down and thought We’d realize how stupid we’ve become Put down your guns, knives, pitchforks, and torches Let your eyes see and your ears hear Do you hear it? The pain we have caused? Only one person is to blame for this darkness Us
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Post by Fisi on Oct 27, 2009 17:41:58 GMT -5
Cool. I hope you win, this is a nice poem.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 27, 2009 23:48:48 GMT -5
Sunraye thats nice! It brought tears to eyes because of how true it is. I also did a poem in high school but its sayed but it got me an A in the class. So I hope you win this one good luck to you!
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 28, 2009 16:04:36 GMT -5
Thanks, guys. ^^
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 28, 2009 23:07:41 GMT -5
You are welcome you will let us know if you win
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 29, 2009 9:49:22 GMT -5
I will! They mentioned that they'll say who wins on November 2nd. Even if I don't, I might be picked to get my poem in their book.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 29, 2009 9:53:19 GMT -5
Nice so its a win win Deal
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Post by Fisi on Oct 29, 2009 15:17:02 GMT -5
GOOD LUCK!!!
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