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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 22, 2010 19:41:11 GMT -5
Alright, I reposted it. I'd found a few paragraphs in there that some people might overreact and complain about, but it's probably all good now.
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Post by Fisi on Dec 22, 2010 21:01:50 GMT -5
Dang, lotta lotta parts for sues. I have to try to ignore this if I want a perfect OC.
Just been thinking, is Zudi still an a-okay OC or does she still needs a little work?
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 22, 2010 21:07:15 GMT -5
Fisi, no swearing.
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Post by Fisi on Dec 22, 2010 21:14:02 GMT -5
There, happy?
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 22, 2010 21:19:52 GMT -5
Yes. Thank you.
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Post by Fisi on Dec 22, 2010 21:22:35 GMT -5
No prob.
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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 22, 2010 23:00:49 GMT -5
I have to try to ignore this if I want a perfect OC. Just been thinking, is Zudi still an a-okay OC or does she still needs a little work? I'm confused, what do you mean by "ignore this?" In my opinion, Zudi is ay-okay right now, but there's always room for more development. It wouldn't hurt to work on her some more, no? That being said, she's well past the stage where big changes on her character are made. Her basic personality and background are down, all you need to do now is tweak her here and there as you feel you should, ne?
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Post by Fisi on Dec 23, 2010 7:15:52 GMT -5
Bleh, sorry, I'm still need a little work on english.
I mean, to try not to make a Mary Sue.
What do I have to do for Zudi?
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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 23, 2010 15:41:07 GMT -5
Ohhh, okay. Yeah, that makes more sense. XD
You don't have to anything. All you can do now is occasionally have an epiphany and polish her character off. Suppose you learn some interesting fact about the Russian mob, and you want to intregrate it into Zudi's past. Stuff like that.
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Post by Fisi on Dec 23, 2010 18:38:04 GMT -5
Ah, ok. I'll ask my good friend Brownjacket or look it up.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 3, 2011 22:28:54 GMT -5
ok, I just have a certain question what if you wannah do a story that is inspired by something that happened in your life DisneyPlease!
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Post by Weasel Freak on Jan 3, 2011 22:37:40 GMT -5
It depends on what you mean by inspired.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 3, 2011 23:15:08 GMT -5
ok, heres why I ask
you see, my Disney Fic, 'The Disney Whisperer', is inspired from what I use to do when I was seven
when I was seven, I did'nt really have that many friends, and even at that age I loved disney movies so much, so much that I would pretend that I was going on adventures with disney characters
so in my story, the little girl in it is me, as a seven yearold, though I sometimes like to call her my ego, and she has a ability to see and talk to disney characters
if you wish to know more about this story, you can check out the story in the Non weasel fics catagory, and the 2 following threads here in the idea's and comment's catagory
'My disney fics to come' (page 2 tells more about it)
' TDW story behind the story'
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Weasel Freak on Jan 5, 2011 23:31:15 GMT -5
Heh, that kinda sounds like me. When I was little (and didn't even know what fanfiction/OCs were) I used to daydream of this cartoon character night club my Daydream-self supposedly founded. The club was basically a House of Mouse except it wasn't limited to only Disney characters. It also served as a playground for my very first OCs... ah, memories. I can't believe I still remember what it looked like.
Anyway; yes, that is Mary Sue, but since that sounds more like a fun fluff fic and not really serious writing, it can pass. I admit I'm a little interested...
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 6, 2011 11:02:53 GMT -5
really ?! cause like I said, if you are interested, you can check out the threads I mentioned in my previous post DisneyPlease!
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