Blooper
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Wheezy Wheezy he's our man!! If he can't blow your head off, no one can!!!
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Post by Blooper on Jun 28, 2008 16:40:57 GMT -5
Yes.
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Post by Wheezy on Jun 28, 2008 21:31:19 GMT -5
Oh wow, this story is nothing short of amazing. It's one of the most entertaining fanfics I've read of anything. Great job!!
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Post by Weasel Freak on Jun 29, 2008 10:21:56 GMT -5
I like it.
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Jul 6, 2008 16:52:13 GMT -5
I. Am. Shoked. u r the best fic writer EVER!!!!!!!!!!! 4 that, u get a gold star and a karma from me! and dont forget the kudos!!!! *puts blooper in a room where it starts raining gold stars, karmas, and kudos*
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Post by Greasy on Jul 7, 2008 10:20:04 GMT -5
Just a question: Was this the end of that story, or does it go on?
Because I wanna read more!
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Blooper
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Wheezy Wheezy he's our man!! If he can't blow your head off, no one can!!!
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Post by Blooper on Jul 12, 2008 15:13:38 GMT -5
No, it wasn't. I'm working on the next few chapters right now. Please be patient.
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Blooper
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Wheezy Wheezy he's our man!! If he can't blow your head off, no one can!!!
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Post by Blooper on Jul 26, 2008 0:37:06 GMT -5
I'm so sorry to keep you waiting!! Here's the next chapter below!!!
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Blooper
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Post by Blooper on Jul 26, 2008 0:37:12 GMT -5
Chapter… What Chapter Was I On Again?
“Um.. What’s a vault?” Stupid whispers to me.
“Shattup,” I whisper back.
“Ok,” he says.
“Which one?” Greasy asks me, his voice also low.
“Uh..” I read a piece of paper. “369.”
Well, where were we, you ask. Why, in the most popular bank in Toon Town, of course! Ya’see, Doom was a little too ‘tired,’ or in my opinion, lazy, to do the robbing job himself. So he sent us on our first mission. EVER. And since we have some experience with this kind of stuff- Okay, I’ll shut up now.
“Lemme see the map, cankers,” Wheezy said, naturally quiet. Except for the wheezing, of course.
“I have no idea what ‘Cankers’ means but fine. Just don’t tear it apart.” I handed the map to him.
“You don’t wanna know what it means,” He told me, grinning. I stuck my tongue out and blew him a rather wet raspberry.
“Where is all the money at?” Psycho asked eagerly.
“Psycho, we ain’t stealin’ all’ve da money. Just some of those hundred dollar bills in vault 369.”
“Why?” He asked.
“Because if we spend a lot o’ time in here, we’re gonna end up gettin’ caught,” I said regretfully. “Now shattup if you dun wanna actually be useful.”
“Uhuh,” Psycho said in voice that meant he hadn’t heard a word I said. This leadership stuff sucks like all heck. Eh, well, someone’s gotta do it.
“This way,” Wheezy said, and he started walking down the hallway. I won’t bother with telling you the boring details of when we turned right and when we turned left and when we just kept on walking and yada yada yada. Who wants hear that stuff, anyway?
“Well, here we are.” Greasy stared a metal door with a large knob that looked like it was once a pirate ship’s steering wheel. It looked old enough, at least.
I walked up and turned the dial this way, then that way, then this way again, and so on. After a while it finally unlocked and we pushed it open.
NOTHING.
Not even a penny.
“What?!” Greasy said, forgetting to whisper.
“Shhh.” I said, but a red light close by started to blink and a loud tinny voice said:
“You have violated-”
And that’s all I heard, because I had dashed out the nearest exit, which was, thankfully, close by. I was closely followed by Greasy, Wheezy, Stupid-
“Uh, where’s Psycho?” Greasy asked.
“Oh no,” I said. He must have been so overcome with greed he’d stayed inside to look for the money!
It’s, uh, a weasel thing. -_-’
I ran back inside and spotted Psycho walking out of the vault with a frustrated look on his face. I quickly grabbed him by the arm and ran back out again. We escaped into an alley just as the cops pulled up to the bank, their lights flashing and their sirens blaring.
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Post by Weasel Freak on Jul 26, 2008 11:02:23 GMT -5
Nice chapter.
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Post by Eternity on Jul 26, 2008 11:23:11 GMT -5
Great to see the story back on track!
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Jul 26, 2008 23:37:59 GMT -5
yay!!!!!! more, please.
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Post by The Unknown on Jul 27, 2008 12:59:23 GMT -5
That is the most amazing chapter title that I have ever seen. Your fic is still as great as ever, Blooper! The Weasel's personalities are colorful! Like Skittles! The sour kind...Anyway, I love the fact that Judge Doom was too "tired" to rob the bank himself. I knew it all along! But with the Weasel's failed attempt, does this mean that Doom will take over the mission, leading up to...not gonna spoil for the viewers who haven't watched the movie.  Keep up the good work! |
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Post by Weasel Freak on Jul 27, 2008 13:59:48 GMT -5
BLOOPER did this, not Wheezy, Uknown. Jeez, first Biskits and then Wheezy. What do you have against Blooper? >.>
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Post by The Unknown on Jul 27, 2008 14:05:40 GMT -5
BLOOPER did this, not Wheezy, Uknown. Jeez, first Biskits and then Wheezy. What do you have against Blooper? >.> Grah!! I did it again!! It's because I keep mixing both of them up with their Wheezy icons! I'm so sorry Blooper! See? Even I embarass myself on the internet.  I'm going to crawl under a rock. See you in a few weeks, guys... |
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Blooper
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Post by Blooper on Jul 27, 2008 14:09:05 GMT -5
No! It's OK! Don't go away!  Dude we need you here or we will all die!! Of boredom!!! |
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