Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Mar 2, 2008 6:17:09 GMT -5
;D I read the book and watched the movie so its gonna be real good i hope.... 
intro
Bobbie Carter looked out of the window to the clinic.All this rain made her upset.She was in a clinic in a fishing village, which was in Costa Rica.She hoped for sun and fun but this rain was ruining it for her.Her assistant, Manuel looked up and said..
" listen.." he whispered.
" yes I hear it ." Bobbie sighed.
" not listening hard enough! "he said." listen senorita.."
she listened harder.There was a sound mixed in the rain.It sounded like a helicopter.Then moments later a helicopter came into veiw.It circled the ground and then went back and came back to another spot.
" They're not gonna land it here are they?" Bobbie said.
The helicopter did land.Bobbie saw it had Ingen construction on the side with a blue streak.They were calling for a docter...
Bobbie ran out and rushed to the helicopter.
" I am a docter..." she panted.They had a man ,a young man who they began to carry inside.A man in a baseball cap looked doubtfuly at her tank top and capris.
" sir you'll have to stay out side...." Bobie instructed." but first tell me what happened..Manuel wash the boy."
" They say the backhoe got him..I didn't see it but they say he was dragged too." the man said franticly.
Bobbie looked at the wounds.if the boy was dragged then he would have dirt forced up the wound.The wound was clean..she looked at his hands.She had seen bad mug attack injuries in Chicago.The hands had several cuts and bruises.The flesh looked as if a animal of some sort attacked him.
" raptor..Lo sa raptor.." the boy moaned.Manuel dropped his cloth and put a hand to his mouth.
" What!?" Bobbie gasped.
" it bite him.."Manuel said shakily.
" what bit him?"
" the raptor.it means hupia..." he said still shaking...Suddnely the boy went into a spazam.He suddenly sat up and looked left and right with big eyes...then he threw up blood..he shoke with such force he fell of the table.Then he puked some more...Bobie looked for something to put in his jaws.Then the boy relaxed...Bobbie bent to do mouth to mouth. Manuel grabbed her shoulder and held her back.
" no docter! You will get hupia" said...The man in the cap burst in.
" Whats going on?!" he said..then he saw the blood he ran for the bathroom.The men toke the boy away...
" you tried your best docter" Manuel said.Well at least she had pictures..but when she went to look at them her camera was gone and so were her notes....stolen...
intro
Bobbie Carter looked out of the window to the clinic.All this rain made her upset.She was in a clinic in a fishing village, which was in Costa Rica.She hoped for sun and fun but this rain was ruining it for her.Her assistant, Manuel looked up and said..
" listen.." he whispered.
" yes I hear it ." Bobbie sighed.
" not listening hard enough! "he said." listen senorita.."
she listened harder.There was a sound mixed in the rain.It sounded like a helicopter.Then moments later a helicopter came into veiw.It circled the ground and then went back and came back to another spot.
" They're not gonna land it here are they?" Bobbie said.
The helicopter did land.Bobbie saw it had Ingen construction on the side with a blue streak.They were calling for a docter...
Bobbie ran out and rushed to the helicopter.
" I am a docter..." she panted.They had a man ,a young man who they began to carry inside.A man in a baseball cap looked doubtfuly at her tank top and capris.
" sir you'll have to stay out side...." Bobie instructed." but first tell me what happened..Manuel wash the boy."
" They say the backhoe got him..I didn't see it but they say he was dragged too." the man said franticly.
Bobbie looked at the wounds.if the boy was dragged then he would have dirt forced up the wound.The wound was clean..she looked at his hands.She had seen bad mug attack injuries in Chicago.The hands had several cuts and bruises.The flesh looked as if a animal of some sort attacked him.
" raptor..Lo sa raptor.." the boy moaned.Manuel dropped his cloth and put a hand to his mouth.
" What!?" Bobbie gasped.
" it bite him.."Manuel said shakily.
" what bit him?"
" the raptor.it means hupia..." he said still shaking...Suddnely the boy went into a spazam.He suddenly sat up and looked left and right with big eyes...then he threw up blood..he shoke with such force he fell of the table.Then he puked some more...Bobie looked for something to put in his jaws.Then the boy relaxed...Bobbie bent to do mouth to mouth. Manuel grabbed her shoulder and held her back.
" no docter! You will get hupia" said...The man in the cap burst in.
" Whats going on?!" he said..then he saw the blood he ran for the bathroom.The men toke the boy away...
" you tried your best docter" Manuel said.Well at least she had pictures..but when she went to look at them her camera was gone and so were her notes....stolen...
ok as Spikey suggested I thought REAL hard on the next chapter so don't be mean or critical! 
ugh its been so long..ok the third chapter.......