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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 16, 2008 20:09:26 GMT -5
OK! the 1st was a practice so i am going to make one (with help from biscuit) and it is going to be about me and biscuit being weasels. OK so here it is!!!!!!
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 16, 2008 20:21:33 GMT -5
Ok so here r the characters:
i own.....
Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My sister, Biscuit(u no her, u love her......)
I dont own: the original weasels
kk?
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 16, 2008 21:49:18 GMT -5
ok, here we go!!!!!!!!
Chapter 1
Wise Guy's POV
It was finally that day: the first day of 8th grade; the first day of our last year in middle school. Me and my friends were walking to school. there was me, Justin Cooger, Greasy, or Diego Cortez, Wheezy, or Jesse Ryans, Psycho, or Cody Vandever, Stupid, or Bob Smith, Poptart, or Jackie Dewey,and Biscuit, or Larissa Gaines. Biscuit's little sister, Destiny, was following her into her first year of middle school. We were talking, but Destiny was just talking to Biscuit.
We got to the school entrence, and Biscuit said to us,"Hey guys, you go to homeroom, I'll meet you there." We all had the same homeroom, so I agreed. Biscuit went off to the 6th grade hallway with Destiny, and we went down the 8th.
"Well, here we go guys" I said as we walked into the room full of 8th graders. We all sat in two rows of four, saving a seat for Biscuit. She ran in right before the bell rang, panting. She smiled, and sat in the seat we saved for her.
The teacher called roll, welcomed us, said that 8th grade was going to be fun if we behave, blah blah blah. The bell rang, and we all went to electives. Biscuit & Greasy went to band, Me, Psycho, & Stupid went to gym, and Poptart & Wheezy went to art. Gym was the usual: streching, running, climbing the rope, you get the idea. Finally, the teacher, a large moose, let us go shower. The bell rang just as Psycho got out of the showers. The gang all met up, and we headed for 2nd block together.
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Well? wat do u guys think of my 2nd try?? pleez comment
btw, thanks 2 Bicuits 4 the help on this chapter!!!!! ;D
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 16, 2008 21:49:50 GMT -5
i no its short i just realized that.  |
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 16, 2008 21:51:56 GMT -5
but pleasseeeeeeee like it
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Post by netske on Feb 17, 2008 4:48:44 GMT -5
I like your second try adn the chapter is good. You have perspektives.
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Feb 17, 2008 9:12:00 GMT -5
Not bad! Not bad at all!! (Imagines Psycho coming out of the shower o///o)
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 17, 2008 11:05:26 GMT -5
i helped!!!!!!!!!!! ;D i gave her ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 17, 2008 13:36:34 GMT -5
ya you helped thanks.....
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 18, 2008 17:33:28 GMT -5
;D i am the mastermind behind this fic!!!!!!!  |
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 18, 2008 18:53:42 GMT -5
blah blah blah... stop showing off just because you helped me for like 1 part.......
(saying annoyed)
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Feb 20, 2008 14:41:22 GMT -5
Yeah girl!! Defend yer rights (both of yeh)!!
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 20, 2008 16:24:38 GMT -5
oh, no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont go blah blahin me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i WROTE this whole chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u just sat in ur room, watchin zoey101 or watever u watch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  and dont go lyin again bcauz i no u 2 well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 29, 2008 17:58:01 GMT -5
psyho biggest fan...that would be very odd....( i think he never take off his straight jacket)
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 29, 2008 17:59:20 GMT -5
hey no sister war here!Destiny..give her some credit...and Biscuit...you should have made her do it....
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and dont go lyin again bcauz i no u 2 well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
