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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 10, 2008 10:52:29 GMT -5
when r u gonna put up the next chapter?  ? |
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 11, 2008 18:06:31 GMT -5
OK here I go!Wheezy falls in love! I love this part. I was tired.I could curl up on the floor and wouldn't care.I lugged to my room.I flopped on my bed and feel in a deep dream of paradise. The next morning I woke up to Wise Guy yelling at Psycho. " You psychic B!$#@%" he cused.I got up and put three cigarettes in my mouth.I dragged on them for a minute. " YAY! YAY! festival!hee hee! Fun! YAY!" Psycho yelled literally jumping off the walls. " It's just so dumb thing we have to go so our fans will come and the festival gets more money.." I pointed out as ash dropped on my shirt. I just brushed it off. " Duh? Whats a festival?" Stupid ask.Psycho stopped on the ceiling and fell on his head.Wise Guy dropped his coffee cup.Greasy mouth hit the floor. " YOU DON'T NOW WHAT FESTIVAL IS? "I yelled shocked.Didn't his mother take him anywhere? "Duh? nope" he smiled thinking he said something smart. " well we got 30 minutes...I don't want to late.." Greasy said grabbing the mop for Wise Guy. " you don't want to miss the girls.." I smirked.He gave me a glare and tossed the mop to Smarty and grumbled. OK maybe not yet but expect it...   |
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 11, 2008 18:19:31 GMT -5
Slick's POV ( soon to be Greasy's girl friend)
I sipped my lemonade.Poptart didn't seem to happy.I dragged this weasel to somewhere speacil and she does nothing but grump!
" having fun Poptart!" I smiled putting an arm around her neck.She pushed me away.
" Don't touch me.People will get the wrong idea.." She said taking to steps from my side.
She sighed and pulled at her hood string.It was like 90 degrees outside and she wears a hoodie and pants!!She really never was content.Yet she still was a good person to be friends with.
" Did you hear that the Toon Patrol would be hear?" I smiled.
" yeah.." she heaved
" I hope to see the green one he's so cool and cute.." I cooed.She rolled her eyes and shook her head.Hmph!She never understands love.I swear at her rate she'll never marry!
Later we saw the Patrol.Yes my chance was here!!
" come on! " I yelled with joy. She walked but didn't run.I said hurry up ! and she never did !...
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 11, 2008 18:19:54 GMT -5
i know they're short...
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 11, 2008 19:06:09 GMT -5
god sam they r short make em longer!!!!!!!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 12, 2008 17:33:57 GMT -5
X( pleeze go easy!It's a working progress...
Jacky"s POV
I wasn't enjoying myself at all.I mean so many people and Slick dragging me every where was upseting my stomach.I never really liked going places were people stare at you and they think you a filthy lieing weasel.Look in the dictonary.....Slick decide to drag me to some place were 5 weasels stood.One looked agitated.Slick was staring at one with his pants up WAY to high.I thought he looked gansterish.Well they kinda all looked like it...I wanted to walk away and leave Slick standing there and walk out of this dumb festival crap.I tried to sneek away but Slick has a great sense of hearing and can hear a mouse sneeze 30 feet away.She must have heard me cause she grabbed my arm.
"Hey that one looks like you Jacky.."she pointed.She only called me Jacky when she was mad at me or she just felt like it.I looked at the weasel she pointed at.He was a blue fur gray under bellied male.I a little vice versa.Gray fur and Blue under belly....plus I was a dirty blond( color wise X( )
" He looks nothing like me .." I said.
" I think he looks a LITTLE like you" she said making little to loud for me.I knew she said little.I don't think he does!
" I walking around by myself flirt with Zoot suit if you want" I sigh.I wanted time alone not witha person giggleing in your ear.
" Fine.." she pouted.She's touchy with love.Yet she's not touchy with a guy.SHE wants to touch the guy.Still don't get?I won't go further.....I walked for toward the smell of fried squid.It made hungry and I hadn't eaten a thing this morning and this was a good time.
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 12, 2008 17:35:05 GMT -5
Jacky meets Psycho and teachs him to catch a gold fish!!! XD can't wait tell Lolipop to read to !
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 12, 2008 18:41:39 GMT -5
dont worry she will now i have to work on my story........
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 13, 2008 17:01:31 GMT -5
Psycho's POV
I watched the fish swiming around.
" Weasel? You want to try?"the man said handing me a net.I thought it would be fun.I tried to catch one but they just swam away.I cused and someone caught my shoulder.I turned my head.She was a weasel herself and looked like Wheezy.Only she had vice versa fur.and was a dirty blounde like Wheezy did when he was a teen.( I've know him for that long..)
" want to teach you how to do it?"she asked.I nodded.She took the net from me gently.She rolled up her sleeves and carefuly dipped her hand in the water and waited until a fish came and sooped it up quick.She then let it go.I was shocked.
" How did you do that!" I stammered.She rolled her sleeves down and smiled.
" You have to wait till they come to the net.They have brains.." She said.
" Hey what's your name?" I said.
" Jacky" she shrugged.
" You look like a friend of mine." I spoke up.following her form the fish booth.
" Really? " she said raising a brow.
" You want to met him?" I smiled.Wheezy had a little girl problem.
" So he's a guy.." she sighed.
"yeah" this wasn't going on the right path I think...
" fine..real quick..Slick is probaly is looking for me.." she rolled her eyes.
" Ok! hee hee" I laughed in my highpitched laugh.
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 13, 2008 17:21:54 GMT -5
gonna kill the rabitt........... hehehehehhehehe >:-)
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 14, 2008 18:24:49 GMT -5
ok next....
Greasy's POV
Ugh! The fangirls took my gun.....I was mad,dirty,and my zoot suit was messed up.Smarty looked the same and they took his hat...i hate when they take your stuff and when they run off with it.It sucks really....Wheezy also looked messed up too.Psycho came up with a girl beside him.Did he find a girl for himself? Despicable!!!
" hee hee hee! look I got some one for you to meet" I admit I was jealous....
" Hey wat up" she smiled.Odd her teeth were white.The oddest thing was she looked like Wheezy.
" Hola" I said.She was constantly staring at Wheezy.I thought maybe she liked him.I jabbed him in the ribs.
" Wic! What was that the hell for?" he hissed.I pointed to her.He looked at her very oddly.His cheeks got a little pink.
" Hey.." he said smirking..a smirk she smiled back at. Wise Guy looked at the sun set.
" It's getten late you know and we have work to do?"he said...He was scared that Doom would get mad.
" Sure boss" I smirked.Secretly wanting to leave.
" Hey I forgot to tell you her name is Jacky!hehehe!!" Psycho smiled.Tehn this other girl came up panting like a dog.
" Jacky where have you been..Oh Lord are you talking to them!!" she shriek her black slick hair flipping in the breeze.She had some preety hair.I also liked her Hazel eyes.I thought she was cute.
" hey Slick..I 've been talking and they have to leave..." Jacky said.So her name was Slick...Greasy.....odd it went toghether.
" Well why didn't you come and get me!" she puffed angrly...
" I didn't know where you were." Jacky explained.
"What do I have GPS?" she smirked.
"Ok we leave NOW!" Smarty hissed so touchy with time.
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 14, 2008 19:44:38 GMT -5
sweettttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!! its better than mine! love it!!!! =]
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 15, 2008 14:57:12 GMT -5
Wise Guy's POV
I opened the front seat door and Wheezy opened the back doors...Then I heard him cuse and a familar voice screeched a howdy.What the f*** was going on back there so I jumped out and ran to the back to find who would you guess? Ferret girl and Red head..Man my day was going down by the second...
" Hiiiii ! SUP!!!" the ferret smiled.I knew she was the one from this morning...and her red haed cousin.Didn't I tell her to stay away for EVER!?
" How the hell did you get in here?
" The back locks broken and you have empty dip cans...wich I toke a nap in..It's quite cozy actually.." she said streching and then yawning.
" If you weren't talking then I'd still be asleep for two more hours..." she said hopping form the back of the car.
" go away.Like I told you before!" I said.I was mad now.Very mad...very pissed......VERY!
" I wanted to say hi to you guys " she said .
" Now I have to say bye!!!!" she yelled as she ran back to the festival.Good ridence.....
We silently pulled into a broken down building on Ginger Bread Lane.Just as we pulled in one of the lights in went on.You see some one has been stealing dip from us right from under our noses.We had to find who was doing it and drag them to jail ..well not drag but you get the point....
" Boss..What if they're armed...?" Psycho shivered. He hated when we had fight some one with higher effincy weapons then us.
" If ya scared talk to Doom.." That shut him up quick.We silently went up the stairs that creaked like a parrot with strep throat.I admit it was creepy but I was fine that was until we entered the room.We were out numbered by three but that worse fact was that they took us by suprise.We were in some real crap here.Stupid was first to take action.He tried to hit a guy but hit me in the back of the head instead..I went unconious.
" Opps! Duh..sorry Boss" he said touch his tooth and just looking at me.I hated him right now but I was unconious so I couldn't do anything....
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 15, 2008 15:00:59 GMT -5
the next is filled with action next....
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Post by netske on Feb 16, 2008 3:07:57 GMT -5
Well, very good fic. Im soryy for not commenting it.
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