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Post by netske on Dec 6, 2007 8:48:47 GMT -5
Its my 7th fic about weasels.
THE PROLOGUE
A lot of years passed. Toon Patrols became old. So their daughters - Liza (Smartass's daughter), Marianna (Greasy's second daughter), Peggy (Stupid's second daughter), Nina (Wheezy's daughter) and Dacia (Psycho's first daughter) - became Toon Patrols instead their fathers. And a lot of things changed for this years. Liza got marry on Alex (Psycho's first son) and became Fleshier instead Sanders. She also gave a birth to her and Alex's daughter - Rice. Marianna got marry on Marty (Stupid's first son) and became Newman instead Sanchez. And Dacia got marry on Tommy (Wheezy's second son) and became Foray instead Fleishier. Nina found a boyfriend, but they have time-out now. Beki became Toon Patrol Boss instead Nicolay who was retired. Rocky got marry on Jennifer and became Beki's assistant instead Brix who moved to Jamaika. Jennifer became Holmes instead Spingfield after weeding with Rocky, and she gave a birth to a son - Eddie, who became Rice's friend. Bridget got marry on Twitchy and became Holmes instead Pussycat. She also became Beki's secretary instead Annabelle who left her job for Nicolay. And Id like to tell about one of the missions of new Toon Patrols.
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Post by netske on Dec 6, 2007 9:04:53 GMT -5
CHAPTER 1
April the 18th, Fleshiers's house, 8 am. Liza, Alex and their daughter Rice were having breakfast. - I dont want to eat this porrige. - said Rice - I hate porriges. - Honey, please. - said Alex - No. - said Rice - Rice, if you eat all of the porrige Mom wil buy you some ice-cream. - said Liza - Ok, mom. - said Rice And Rice started eating her porrige. Suddanly Liza's mobile phone called. - Hallo! Good morning, Boss! A very importaint mission? Ok, I will be in Toon Patrol Base in an hour. Liza turned off her mobile phone. - Mom, please, dont leave. - said Rice - Honey, it wont be long. You should proud of your Mom. By the way, I'll by an ice-cream after the mission. Bye, Rice. - Liza kissed her daughter. - By, mom. - said Rice - By, Liz. - said Alex - By, sweetheart. - said Liza And she kissed her husband.
TOON PATROL BASE, THE RECEPTION, 9:00 AM
Liza. Marianna, Peggy, Nina and Dacia came to Bridget's table. - Your names! - ordered Bridget - Elizabeth Madonna Apple Fleshier, ex-Sanders. - said Liza - Marianna Newman, ex-Sanchez. - said Marrianna - Peggy Julianna Marina Natalie Samantha Newman. - said Peggy - Nina Foray. - said Nina - Darya Foray, ex-Fleshier. - said Dacia - Ok, girs, you may come in. - said Bridget The girls. entered Beki's office. - Hi, girls. - said Rocky. - Hi, Rocky. - said the girls They started to hugg and kiss Rocky. At this time Annabelle entered the office. - Hi, girls. - said Beki - Hi, Boss. - said the girls. - Rocky, I hope these "Charlies Angels" didnt disturb you so much. - said Beki - Dontont worry, Boss. - said Rocky - I have a wife and a son. And I need these girls just for short fun. - said Rocky - Well. To cut the story... Girls, you mission is to stop mobsters of a famoust gang "Soprano's gang". Did you understand me? - asked Beki - Sure, Boss. We'll catch these bad guys! - yelled the girls.
TO BE CONTUNED...
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Post by netske on Dec 8, 2007 12:35:29 GMT -5
CHAPTER 2
The cafe, 10:35 am. Girls were having lunch and discussing the plan of arresting Soprano. - Well, girls, Ive found information about Soprano and his best mobsters in Internet. - said Peggy - Come on! - said Liza Peggy took a package out of her bag, took photos and profiles of the mobsters and put them on the table. - Lets look at the first profile. - said Peggy She took a photo and a profile of a big bear. - Name: Mark Soprano. Codename: Boss. Species: Bear. Age: 60. Role in the gang: Boss of the gang. Bio: Decided to be a king of Toon Town and organised his own gang. - read Peggy. She took a photo and a profile of an vulture with brown feathers and black eyes. - Name: Garret Grind. Codename: Bloody. Species: Vulture. Age: 34. Role in the gang: killer, spy, one of the guardians of gang base. Bio: His parents went to the prison for murder of a real human when he was 3. After what he was living with his aunt, but she died when he was 14. After that he became a vagrant. Soprano promised to give him a home if he works at him. After that Peggy took a photo and a profile of a grey bat. - Name: Lukas "Luke" Jonson. Codename: Drako. Species: Bat. Age: 19. Role in the gang: robber, spy. Bio: unknown. After that Peggy took a photo of a fair furred and black eyed mouse with violet bandana. - Name: Tzitzianno Marriarti. Codename: Moody. Species: Mouse. Age: 21. Role in the gang: catcher, one of the guards of the base. Bio: Was in skinhead group when he was 19, after what he was sent to the prison for it for 2 years. After that Peggy took a profile of a weasel with green eyes. - Name: Zeke Navarro. Codename: Hooley. Species: Weasel. Age: 30. Role in the gang: catcher, one of guardians of base, often works in pair with Garret. Bio: Had to work for Soprano 'cause he said that he will kill his family if he doesnt work at him. - Thank you, Peggy. - said Liza - By the way Zeke is very nice. - said Peggy - Peggy, I hope you didnt fell in love with him. - said Marianna - Oh, Marianna, take it easy. Peg just said that he is nice. - said Dacia - Look, girls! Its Garret sitting at the barstand, isnt he? - asked Nina, pointing at brown feathered vulture sitting at the barstand. Liza looked at Garret's photo again. - Yes, yes, he is. - said Liza - Hi, girls! At this time Fifi (if you remember, Fifi was one of Beki's recruts in my last fics) sat at one table with girls. - Hi, Fifi! - said Liza - We'll see if that vulture is Garret. Fifi, please, look at the brown feathered vulture sitting at the barstand. What is your opinion about him? - asked Peggy Fifi looked at him and smiled. - Yummy! - she said Peggy: That's what I thought. Lets go, girls. Fifi think's he's hot. Fifi: What do you mean? Dacia: You always fall for the bad guy. Fifi: Well then, this guy must be really evil. Liza: So this guy is your prince from your dreams. Just look at his photo and his profile. Liza gave the photo and the profile to Fifi. Nina: Well, we cant arrest Soprano untill we find the gang base. I think we should ask Garret. Fifi: I'll handle this one! Marianna: Ok. Be careful. Fifi came to the barstand and sat next to Garret. - Hey, cowboy, give me a cigarette! - said Fifi Garret turned to her. - A cigarette to so nasty girl? No questions! - he said
IN 15 MINUTES
- So, it was nice to meet you, baby. - said Garret - Me too. - said Fifi - By the way I think I saw you before. - What? - asked Garret surprisely - Dont ask any quesions! - said Fifi She hugged and kissed Garret. During the kiss she took a card out of pocket of his vet. Finalyy she stopped kissing. - Whow, I could think that bad girls can kiss so cool! - said Garret - Well, I need to go. See you later. - Bye, honey. - said Fifi Garret left the cafe and Fifi said to the girls. - This is adress of the base. - said Fifi - Our Fifi is so brave girl. Thank you, Fifi. - said Liza - Not at all. Dont remember, its my duty to help you 'cause Im Beki's worker. - said Fifi. - Well, girls, come on, lets go. - said Liza And the girls left the pub.
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Post by netske on Dec 9, 2007 12:06:17 GMT -5
CHAPTER 3
Yard of Soprano gang's base, 14: 00. The girls were hiding behind the tree. - Do you see this grey haired orange furred and green eyed weasel sitting near the door? - asked Marianna - Its Zeke. How can we divert him? - Well, one of us will come to him and talk to him. During the talk she will take the keys and threw it to us. She will contune talking and we'll go in the base and arrest Soprano and his men. - said Liza - And who will be this girl? - asked Dacia - It will be... - Liza first looked at Nina, then on Dacia, then on Marianna and at last on Peggy - Peggy. - Me? - asked Peggy surprisely. - Peggy, dont worry, it will be easy. - said Liza - O...o....o...ok, I'll do it. - said Peggy - Be careful. - said Nina Peggy went out of the tree and walked pass Zeke. - Stop! Dont move! - ordered Zeke - What? - Peggy turned to him - I said STOP! Its a private territory! - said Zeke angrily - Hey! I was just having a walk! - said Peggy angrily - Do you think what I believe you? Go away! - said Zeke - Hey, dont talk with me so! - yelled Peggy - No girl has spoken to me like that. - said Zeke - Its... bold! I like it. He smiled. Peggy smiled too. - Aaaaa! Ive lost my contact lense! - yelled Peggy - Dont worry. I'll find it. - said Zeke He bent down trying to search "the lense". At this time Peggy took keys out of his backpack and threw it to girls. - Haaaa! Peggy used an old girl trick. - laughed Dacia - Ok, lets go. - said Liza Zeke rised: - Well, I dont see your lense. - he said - Well, probably I though what I lost it. - said Peggy At this time Liza, Dacia, Marianna and Nina went behind the couple, came to the door and opened it by Zeke's key. After that they looked at the map on the first floor and went to the last floor.
IN FIVE MINUTES ON THE LAST FLOOR
The girls came to the door of Soprano's office. - Phew, I hope I lost some kilos by rising. - said Nina - Its strange that we didnt see any mobter on the floors. - said Marianna - Probably they are all in Soprano's office. - said Dacia - So come and check it. - said Liza She opened the door and the girls entered the office. Soprano was sitting at his table. - Dont move! You're areested! - yelled Liza holding her pistol - Wow, what a nice meeting! Hi, Toon Patrols! You think that you catched me in surprise. But Im ok - its time to end. So, girls, meet my guys. With these words Soprano pressed a button on the table. The bell rang and all of the mobsters entered the office. - I know this girl! - said Tzitzianno pointing at Nina - Her mother was a public prosecutor on that day when I was sent to the prison. - Hi, girls. - said Garret holding his pistol - I saw you in cafe. You were sitting with this yummy vulture when she came to me. But I dont see your fifth friend. Probably she is flirting or fighting with my friend Zeke if he could let you come in. - Dont worry, girls, I and my guys were ready by your visit. - said Soprano and laughed evily.
TO BE CONTUNED...
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Post by Eternity on Dec 9, 2007 12:44:02 GMT -5
Great job with this fic!
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Post by netske on Dec 12, 2007 12:37:31 GMT -5
Im sorry that I didnt upload the contuning. Simply I was very busy in school and my ENTER key didnt work.
CHAPTER 4
The base yard, 14: 08. Peggy and Zeke were talking when suddanly they heard the bell. - O-o, I need to go. - said Peggy and entrered the hall. - Im sorry, Zeke. - Wait, Peggy, please, dont go! Peggy! PEGGY! - yelled Zeke and entered the hall. Peggy was writing an SMS to someone. - Zeke, I have to tell you the truth. Im a Toon Patrol and I and my friends came here to arrest your boss and gangmates. - said Peggy - Please, forgive me. But I love you! - Peggy, it doesnt mean that you are a Toon Patrol and Im a mobster. I will always love you threw thick and thin. -said Zeke - Well, I can help you. - Really? - asked Peggy - Sure. - said Zeke He opened a secret wardrobe and pressed a red button on it. At this time secret doors opened. - Its a secret lift. If we use it we'll help your friends together in time. - said Zeke They entered the elevator.
AT THIS TIME IN SOPRANO'S OFFICE.
- Soprano, you were going to kill us, but your mates didnt start our killing. - said Liza - Simply Im waiting for your fifth friend. - said Soprano At this time Peggy and Zeke entered the office. - Wow, all Toon Patrols are there. Thank you, Zeke. You did your work well. Ok, guys, kill them! - ordered Soprano And the fight started. The mobsters were using their dip pistols and girls were using their martial arts, pistols, blackjacks and switchblades. Duting the fight Luke took a dip pistol and he was going to shoot Peggy. Zeke saw it. - Peggy, fall down! - yelled Zeke He pushed Peggy and she fell down. At this time Lukas shoot. But Lukas confused simple pistol with dip pistol. And a bullet hit Zeke's breast. Zeke fell down on the floor and there was blood leacking from his breast. - No! - yelled Peggy she ran to Zeke. - Your face looks like Cameron Dias's. But in whole you look like your Dad. I know he can be proud of you. - sad Zeke and closed his eyes. Peggy started to cry. Garret hit Luke's head: - Idiot! How could you shoot in our guy! - he said Suddanly Toon Patrols and the mobsters heard a voice: - STAND UP! DONT MOVE! It was Fifi. She, Jerry, Antonio, Eva, Mauriko, Mutya and Linda entered the office. - You're all aressted! Hi, yummy! - she said to Garret - Hi, hottie! I knew that I'll see you again. - Garret answered - Garret! Luke! Tzitzianno! Kill these six uninvited guests! - ordered Soprano - No, Boss! I go away. - said Garret and came to Fifi. - Yes, Boss. Garret is right. I'll go away too. - Tzitzianno said. He came to Mutya and smiled to her. - I'll kill them! - said Luke He was going to shoot but at this time Peggy cut his wing with her blackjack. - So if Zeke passed away, Garret and Tzitzianno betrayed me and Lukas is too weak to kill these guys, so I'll do it. - said Soprano He took his dip pistol and he was going to shoot. But Liza kicked his arm. The pistol turndet to Soprano and he was dipped. - We won! - yelled Tzitzianno. - Tzitzianno, its too early to be happy. - said Garret and looked at Zeke. Peggy was crying next Zeke. Suddanly Zeke's eyes opened. - Zeke, you're alive? - asked Peggy surprisely - Sure, Peggy. I just pretendent that I passed away to defuse Soprano a little. I always wear protekted vets. - said Zeke and kissed Peggy At thise time Luke tryed to ran away but Liza catched him and put handcuffs on his wings. - You're aressted. - she said After that she turned to the rest of the mobsters. - Would you like to be aressted too? - she asked seriously. - NO! PLEASE, FORGIVE US! WE'LL BE GOOD! - yelled the mobsters - So go away and dont return there anymore. - said Liza And the mobsters left the place. - How did you find us, guys? - asked Tzitzianno holding Mutya's hand. He definitely fell in love with her. - Fifi got an SMS from Peggy. - answered Mutya - So you're Fifi. - said Garret to Fifi - Yeah. And you are Garret. - said Fifi - No, Im Chuck Norris! Hee. Its a joke. Yes, Im Garret. - answered Garret -Ok, lets go. -said Liza And the company left the base.
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Post by netske on Dec 12, 2007 12:50:54 GMT -5
THE EPILOGUE
The cafe. Toon Patrols were sitting at the table. - Ok, lets congratulate Peggy with founding of her second half. - said Liza - Thank you. - said Peggy - And what are you going to do with you second half, Nina? - asked Dacia At this time a weasel, who was Nina's boyfriend, came to Nina's back. - Hi! - he said - Kiija! - yelled Nina and hitted the weasels face. After that she turned to her boyfrined. - Vlad! Im sorry! - she yelled and hugged her boyfriend - I know we're having time-out now. - said Vlad - Its finished. We can contune our play. - said Nina - Ok, I need to go home. By, girls! - said Liza - Bye! - said Marianna - Bye! - said th rest of girls
FLESHIERS' HOUSE, 16:00
Alex and Rice were watchin TV when Liza entered her house. - Mommy! - yelled Rice - Dear. - said Alex - Hi. - said Liza She hugged her daughter and kissed her husband. At this time her mobile phone rang. - Hallo! Oh, hi, Dad, how are you! Im Ok. - Liza started to talk to Smartass - So, Dad, do you know about my plans when I grow up? - asked Rice hugging her Tom-cat Snowy. - No, honey. - said Alex - Im going to be a Toon Patrol as my Mom. - said Rice - NOOOOOO! - yelled Alex
THE END
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Post by Eternity on Dec 12, 2007 14:00:52 GMT -5
Cool fic! Luved it!
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Post by julayla on Dec 12, 2007 22:19:32 GMT -5
Awesome fic. Nice work on this one.
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