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Post by gardevoir on Sept 7, 2007 15:57:31 GMT -5
Thanks for waiting, guys! This is a new fan fic related to the Toon Patrol!! Here is Part 1:
Part 1
Greasy and Bailey were in a store.(same store from "Smartass the father"). Greasy and Bailey went inside and grabbed a cart. "How many diapers should we buy?" Bailey asked. "More than a dozen." Greasy replied.
Bailey puts 20 packages of diapers. Greasy puts a case. "A case!? Why do we need a case!?" Bailey yelled. "This is called, "Baby supply case". It has ALL the supplies that babies need. It never runs out." Greasy explained.
"Now THAT's toonish!" Bailey said. The two weasels laughed and pushed the cart over. After they checked off, Bailey was holding 9 bags. Greasy was holding 7 bags. They put the bags in the trunk. Their car is a buggy. Greasy and Bailey went off.
A few days later, Bailey's first baby is ready to born. "Oh my gosh! We better rush to the hospital!!" Greasy yelled. Greasy carries Bailey to the buggy. "Please hurry." Bailey whailed. Greasy starts the buggy. He rushed to the hospital. (same hospital). He took Bailey there. It took 2 hours until the baby comes out. One of the surgeons came out of the door.
"Two boys." he said. "Twins!?" Greasy yelled. "I wanted quintuplets!" Bailey said. "Better than nothing!" Greasy suggested. After a week, they took the two boys home. "What shall we name them?" Bailey asked. "Jack and Jackie." Greasy said. Greasy bought shirts that matches them. Jack and Jackie were sleeping on their cribs.
Sorry this fan fic is kinda short. I didnt have much time. But the next story could be longer. To be continued.................
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Post by netske on Sept 8, 2007 2:19:26 GMT -5
Dont worry. Some of chapters in my fics are short. BTW Good chapter.
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Post by Veggirl on Sept 8, 2007 23:47:44 GMT -5
Aww, this is cute.  |
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Post by gardevoir on Sept 12, 2007 19:48:52 GMT -5
I'm still getting some ideas for Part 2 so please wait. The next part should be longer. |
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Post by netske on Sept 13, 2007 3:40:33 GMT -5
Cant wait for contuning.
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Post by julayla on Sept 18, 2007 0:00:23 GMT -5
Awww...it's cute. I can't wait for more.
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Post by netske on Sept 18, 2007 1:56:03 GMT -5
Me too.
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Post by gardevoir on Sept 23, 2007 15:22:12 GMT -5
Finally!!! Here's part 2:
Part 2
A few years later, Jack and Jackie were toddlers. But they were very destructive and chaotic. They break vases, they take out tissues from the tissue box, and even put fire crackers in Smartasse's cigars when they were with Greasy to work.
One time, the two rascals carried a big bee hive and stuffed it inside Greasy's pants. Another time, Jack had hidden Bailey's hat in a mole's hole in their backyard. Jack and Jackie loves pranks. They drove Greasy and Bailey crazy.
"THAT'S IIIT!!!!!" Greasy yelled. "I cant take this anymore!!!! I gotta make them stop!!" "Awww, Jack and Jackie acts like Prankie!" Bailey said. "Well, I gotta go to work now." Greasy sighed and went off. At work, Smartass was on his PC. "Hey, Greasy. Yesterday I got a call from Mickey Mouse. He said that someone had shot an innocent toon.
"So what are you doing?" Greasy asked. "I'm trying t figure out who shot him." Smartass said. "And you can help Psycho and Wheezy carry those boxes outside." "Okay." Greasy said. He went outside. There were over 100 boxes. "Ahh!!! That's aLOT!!" Greasy yelled. "That's why were in a trio." Psycho explained. "But were couples for a while because you were LATE!!" Wheezy yelled. "Sorry! It's just that my two sons were chaotic. They drove me crazy!!" Greasy explained.
"Well, just carry some boxes and take them in that room." Wheezy instructed. The three weasels carried out boxes until a police car came by. "Uhh, Mr. Greasy?" The police officer said. "Yes?" Greasy asked. "Are these two babies are yours?" the police officer asked. "Goo-ba!!" the babies said. It was Jack and Jackie. "AHHHH!!! What are they doing here?" Greasy yelled. "I see that they used their wings to escape." the officer said. "What!? Babies dont have wings!!" Greasy yelled. Greasy looked at Psycho and Wheezy. But they were now babies. "What the!?" Greasy yelled. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Then, Greasy woke up from his nightmare. "Oh? What?? Wha... whew! Thank god that was a dream." He was breathijg very hard. Today, it was Greasy's day-off. He went to the living room to search for Bailey. Bailey was gone. "Bailey? Bailey?" Greasy yelled. There was no answer.
Greasy checked Jack and Jackie. They were still there. Greasy went to the kitchen. He drank a cup of ice cold water. Then, he saw a note sticking on the fridge door.
"Dear Greasy, I have kidnapped your wife. Want her back?? Meet me at the Toon Town electronics factory at noon. From, Judge Doom."
Greasy read it. "It's Judge Doom!" Greasy gasped. "I gotta save Bailey!!" Greasy looked at the kids. "I shouldn't leave the kids in the house." Greasy said. "I guess I gotta take them with me!"
It was noon. Greasy took the kids and fastend them in their car seats. Greasy started the car. Then, he went off. Meanwhile at the factory, Bailey was hung up high. Below her was a big bowl of dip. "Why did you kidnapped me??" Bailey asked angrily. "Because your the Greasy bait!" Judge Doom said. "Once Greasy arrives, I shall get rid of both of you and get rid of the Toon Parol!!" Bailey gasped.
Suddenly, Greasy came just in time. "Ahh, you just came here right on time!!" Judge Doom said. "Give back my wife!!" Greasy yelled angrily. "Make me." Judge Doom laughed. Will Greasy defeat Judge Doom before Bailey falls in the deadly dip? Find out on Part 3.
To be continued....
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Post by Veggirl on Sept 23, 2007 20:38:45 GMT -5
What is Judge Doom up to? I hope Greasy rescues his wife soon!!!
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Post by netske on Sept 24, 2007 2:01:15 GMT -5
I hope Grease will rescue Bailey.
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Post by gardevoir on Sept 25, 2007 21:21:03 GMT -5
Here's the final finale!:
Part 3
Greasy was ready to fight. He took out his dagger. Judge Doom just sat there. He was relaxed. "What's with that guy?" Greasy thought. Then, he charged. Suddenly, he fell in a hole. "Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!" Greasy yelled. "Ha Ha Ha!!!" Judge Doom laughed. "Thank goodness I setted that trap!" Greasy got up. "Awww," he moaned. He got up. "Dang these wounds!!" he growled. After the great fall, Greasy got a few wounds on his legs, and his right arm.
He tried to get up. But he fell again. Greasy tried his best. "I gotta get up there!!" Greasy moaned. He got up. Then, he fell again. This time, Greasy's hat fell off. Greasy got it back on and got up. He found a branch and hangs on to it. Then, he walked and walked. Now he dosent know where to escape.
Jack and Jackie knew that Greasy needs help. The two weasels got out of their car seats and walked to Judge Doom. "Hm?" Judge Doom said. Jack took out his toy pistol. "Ga ga." he said. And then he shot Judge Doom a plastic ball in the eye. "Ahhhhhgh!!" Judge Doom yelled in pain. He fell down.
Jackie came to the hole. He pressed a button that reveals a secret door that leads people out of the hole. Greasy got up. "Thanks, Js!" Greasy said. He grabbed his bottle from his bag. It was labeled, "Oran Juice". His juice was made out of berries called Oran berries, a type of berry that gives you full energy.
Greasy opened the cap and drank it. Then, Greasy got up physically and grabbed his dagger. "Ready, Doom?" Greasy asked. " Doom's one eye got a bruise, but he is still fine. "I'll get YOU and your pesky rascals once and for ALL!!!" Judge Doom yelled.
Greasy charged again. Judge Doom threw a bomb. Greasy got hit by it but threw it out. Bailey was cheering. Greasy jumped high into the air. He threw his dagger. Doom grabbed it. Greasy landed in front of him.
Judge Doom stabbed Greasy. "Ohhh!!!" Greasy yelled. "Greasy!!" Bailey yelled. Greasy looked behind and blinked. Bailey knew that Greasy was faking. "Ha ha ha!" Judge Doom laughed evily. Greasy stood up and said, "Ya know, you should work on your aiming." "What!?" Judge Doom yelled. Greasy grabbed his dagger from his arm pit. He kicked Doom in the stomach.
"Ooomph!!!" Doom yelled. He fell back. Judge Doom got up. Greasy grabbed him and punched him hard. Judge Doom fell again.
Greasy grabbed Judge Doom. "I'm gonna get rid of you once and for all!" Greasy said. He got a big red cannon and puts Judge Doon inside. "Oh, great." he said. Greasy got a match and lights it up. He puts the flame onto the cannon. Soon, Judge Doom got blasted off. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!" he yelled.
After, Greasy got Bailey out and got Jack and Jackie. They went home together happily ever after. And Judge Doom,....... well, let's just say that he left for parts unknown. Meanwhile at Splash Mountain, Judge Doom was in there lying down with his ears covered because of all the animals were singing. "I'm getting tired of this annoying song!!" he groaned.
So, Greasy became the hero of the day. He and Bailey were having a good time. Jack and Jackie were behaving well too. So that's the end of this story.
THE END
Credits:
Story made by Kirlia
Special thanks to:
Rose
Characters:
Smartass
Greasy
Jack
Jackie
Wheezy
Psycho
Stupid
Judge Doom
Bailey
Police Officer
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Post by netske on Sept 26, 2007 2:02:16 GMT -5
Very cool work on this fic. Are you going to write about Psycho, Stupid and Wheezy being fathers?
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Post by julayla on Sept 26, 2007 23:19:48 GMT -5
Yep. Great job on this. Hope to see the rest of the "father" series.
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