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Post by netske on Jun 21, 2007 12:24:17 GMT -5
GIRLS' POWER OR ADVENTURES OF WEASELS' WIVES
This is my 3rd fic about weasels. Sarah belongs to Julayla. Idea of using villian team belongs to Spikey.
THE PROLOGUE
July the 22nd, 3:30 am. The "Devil-evil" bar. Different Toon villians were sitiing at the tables or at the bar smoking and drinking. Suddenly a big rat named Ratigan entered the bar. All of the villians looked at him. - My friends! - yeeled Ratican - Friends? - asked lion named Scar with sarcasm. - We're not your friends! - yelled human Computer-Animated prince named Charming. - YES! - yelled the villians. - I only want to help you to become kings and queens of Toon Town. We had a lot of chances to do it, but Toon Patrol weasels always ruined our plans. And now, we have a new chanse. Nicolay is going to give a vacation to them, so nobody can look after Toon Town. So, if we work together, we can make our dreams really. - said Ratigan - Lets drink for Toon Town leadering and our friend Ratigan! - yelled a ghost named Dirty. - Hip-hip! - Hoooray! - yelled the villians - Hip-hip! - Hoooray! - Hip-hip! - Horay!
TOON PATROL BASE, NICOLAY'S OFFICE, 11:00 AM - Ok, guys. - said Nicolay - The villians are quet now, so...you can have vacation. And Nicolay smiled. - YAU, COOL! - yelled the weasels. - Congratulations. - said Annabelle and kissed them. - I'll miss without you. - said Brix and there were tears in his eyes. - And your vacation starts...right now. - said Nicolay
LOS ANGELES AIRPORT, 12:35 AM After talking with Nicolay, Psycho suggested his friends to visit his friend in Russia. The weasels said good-bye to their friends and children. And they were standing in the airport and saying good-bye to their wives. - I'll come back in 5 days. - said Smartass - I'll be looking forward for your return. - Rose hugged Smartass - I hope you won't fall in love with another man while I'll be out. - said Greasy - You are my love forever, Diego. - said Bailey to Greasy - Bye-bye, he-he-he. - said Psycho - Good-bye, Charlie. - Sarah looked in Psycho's eyes. - Bye, my Funny Bunny. - said Stupid - I'll miss without you. - Ginger kissed Stupid - I'll bring a souvenir to you from Russia. - said Wheezy - Say hello to your friend from me. - Kira took Wheezy's hand. And the weasels sat in the plain and the plain flew away. - HOORAAY! - yelled Ginger - We'll have a great time, girls. - said Kira - We'll be able to make a party for girls. - said Rose. - And nowbody will disturb us. - said Bailey. - I'll remember it forever. - said Sarah And the girls laughed and hugged each other. Suddenly their mobile phones rang. - Hallo! - said Bailey - Oh, hi Annabelle! - said Sarah - What!? - said Kira - Very importaint? - said Ginger - Ok, we'll be at Nicolay's office right now. - said Rose
TOON PATROL BASE, NICOLAY'S OFFICE, 1:00 AM
- Well... - said Nicolay - Your husbands left for vacation. But the villians are glad to hear this. So, they started to robe and kill Toons. You'll rescue Toow Town while your husbands are at vacation. Girls looked at each other surprisely. - Dont worry, it will be all Ok. You also can ask Annabelle and Brix to help you. - I'll be your true assistant. - said Annabelle - I always get ready to help so beautiful girls. - said Brix
To be contuned...
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Post by netske on Jun 22, 2007 13:08:00 GMT -5
Im sorry if my next chapter is short.
CHAPTER 1 The Main Street, 1:15 pm. Rose, Bailey, Kira and Sarah were standing at the waste bin. Ginger went out of the phone store and came to her friends. - I asked my assistant, Gina, to be boss instead me. - she said - Ok, lets go. We must think about plan of chasing villians. - said Kira The girls were walking threw the yard, when suddenly a stripped scunk named Stinky, a hyena named Harold, a wolf named Wincent, a coyote named Goile and a Computer-Animated saber-toothed tiger named Soto (Ice Age) ran out of the waste bins. - I'll take the weasel with red hair and in violet jacket. - said Stinky loking evily at Bailey - I'll take the weasel with pink hair and in green dress. - said Harold looking evily at Sarah - I'll take the weasel with white hair and in white blouse. - said Wincent looking evily at Kira - I'll take the weasel with black hair and in black suit. - said Goile looking evily at Ginger - I'll take the weasel with brown hair and in blue suit. - said Soto looking evily at Rose And the fight started. Fortunatly, the villans didnt have any guns, so the girs could handle with them using some karate and kung-fu. - Who's your boss? - asked Ginger - Duh... - said Stinky - ANSWER! - yelled Kira - Raaaaaatigaaaaaaaan!!!!! - cryed Soto - Lets go, girls. We must tell Nicolay about it. - said Bailey
TOON PATROL BASE, NICOLAY'S OFFICE, 1:30 PM
The gilrs have just told their yard story to Nicolay. - Ok, girls. - said Nicolay - So Ratigan is leader of gang. And Annabelle entered the room. - Boss, I've just got some imformation. Do you remember Bridget Pussycat? - Yes. She helped my daughter with her kidnapping. - said Rose - And she is the best friend of my Elena. - said Bailey - Her parents didnt die. They're alive. They are at villians'. - said Annabelle. - Thank you. Lets go. - said Sarah
To be contuned...
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Post by julayla on Jun 22, 2007 14:09:02 GMT -5
Yeah. Way to go! Keep it up.
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Post by netske on Jun 23, 2007 5:32:42 GMT -5
CHAPTER 2
Joy's Supermarket, 2:00 pm. The girl were bying products when they saw Rocky. - Hi, Rocky. - said Rosy. - Hi, mrs Sanders, mrs Sanchez, mrs Fleishier, mrs Newman and mrs Foray. - said Rocky and smiled - We'd like to ask you: do you know Ratigan? - asked Ginger - Yeah. My father could handle with him. - said Rocky - Now he's leader of villians. - said Kira - Do you know where the residense is? - No. But I'll ask my father. And I'll tell Jennifer and Dan the answer. - said Rocky - Thank you. - said Bailey - Not at all. - Rocky smiled - Ok, Yo-yo and I are going to baseball. - Good luck. - said violet furred male mouse named Yo-yo. - Bye. - said Rose
SANDER'S HOME, 2:30 PM
- Hi, mom. Hi, aunt Sarah, aunt Bailey, aunt Ginger and aunt Kira. - said Liza - Hi, honey. - said Rose - We have a news. Bridget's parents are alive. - Cool. - said Liza - We'll rescue them today. - said Rose - You? - asked Liza surprisely. - Please, dont tell it to your father and his friends. - said Rose - Ok - said Liza At this time Ginger's mobile telephone rang. - Hallo! Oh, we're leaving right now. - Ginger looked at girls. - We have new information about villians. We must go. - I must go too. - said Liza - Today is my working day. There will be a lot of stars in Pool Bar today.
TOON PATROL BASE, NICOLAY'S OFFICE, 3:00 PM
- Rocky told Jennifer some imformation about the residense of villians. - said Annabelle - It is "Devil-evil" bar and Bridge's parents are in the basement. - We must rescue them. Lets go, girls. - said Kira - By the way, Annabelle, we need your help. - Oh, thak you. - Annabelle smiled - Brix had his star hour during affair with witness, and now its mine star hour.
To be contuned...
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Post by netske on Jun 23, 2007 7:07:38 GMT -5
Oh, yeah. I'm sorry for my mistake. How do you think, Spikey: should I correct the name or not?
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Post by Smartguy on Jun 23, 2007 19:41:48 GMT -5
Okay *rubs paws* I guess I can get back in reviewing things again and possibly posting a bit myself. Decided to start with this first as it was most recent on updates. Interesting that you put it almost in script form, as I hardly see those anymore, which isn't really a good thing as they can be enjoyable to read. Feels good to be reading fanfics again actually, as its been just a bit too long that I've gone without them. Only two chapters in so far and its not bad, and yeah, noticed you changed Ratigan's name back. Good so far with this. Different perspective too as its not told from the weasels' POV. I dashed over the Original Characters section to get caught up on what everyone came up with and place the proverbial "face" with the name.
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Post by netske on Jun 25, 2007 5:35:36 GMT -5
Im sorry that I made you waiting next chapter long. But I was very busy yesterday.
CHAPTER 3
"Devil-evil" bar, 7:00 pm. All of the villians were sitting at the barstand or at the tables dinking and smoking. At one of the tables was Drinkers competition. Kira was sitting next to the villians taking part in competition. An eagle named Hendrix: What is an angel doing so far from heaven? Kira: I'm no angel.
AT THIS TIME AT THE BAR BASEMENT A tiger named Shere Khan, a snake named Kaa and a computer-animated rabbit named Boingo (Hoodwinked) were playing cards next to Bridget's parents - Kamilla and George Pussycat, when suddanly a big wooden box opened and Rose, Bailey and Sarah went out of te box. - What that? - asked Shere Khan - Get it! - yelled Rose and swalloped him Bailey kicked Kaa, Sarah hitted Boingo. All of the villians fell down and closed their eyes. Sarah untied Kamilla and George. - We came to help you. - said Bailey - How many toons do you have? - asked George - We've got 3 friends in bar. - said Rose - They have 50 armed villians. - said Kamilla - I know. It hardly seems fair. - said Bailey
BACK TO THE BAR
Ginger was playing pool with ghosts. A prize was a box with 5 dip pistols, and Ginger won it. She took the box and left the ghosts. And she came to Kira who had lost the competition and was waiting next to the basement door. - I've won the pistos. - said Ginger - Good. - said Kira and took her mobile telephone - Annabelle, its your hero time. After that Annabelle entered the bar. - IS IT A HOTEL, YEAH!? - yelled Annabelle and smiled. The villians looked at her and invited her to ride on a machine bul. She sat on the bull and started to ride and the villians were looking at her. Ginger and Kira opened the basement door and Rose, Bailey, Sarah, George and Kamilla went out. - Lets go. - said Ginger The company was going to leave the plase whe suddanly a toon-animated bull named Kazar (The wild) yelled: - STOP! All of te villians looked at the company. Annabelle jumped out of the bull. - Annabelle, go away with George and Kamilla. - said Kira Annabelle, George and Kamilla left the plase while the girls were fighting with the villians. Using some karate and kung-fu and dip pistols that Ginger won, they stopped the villians, ran away and sat in the car.
POOL BAR, 9:00 PM
Rose, Bailey, Ginger, Kira, Sarah, Annabelle, George and Kamilla entered the club. Liza was singing on the stage. There was a white cloth hairband, a pink sparky dress, red stilletto shoes and diamond necklare on. She was singing Serebro's song:
Oh! Don't call me funny bunny I'll blow your money money I'll get you to my bad ass Spinning for you Oh! I'll make it easy honey I'll take your money yummy I've got my bitches Standing up next to me So come and check it So come and check it So come and check it My bad ass spinning for you So come and check it So come and check it So come and check it My bad ass spinning for you
After she stopped singing, Rose told her: - Liza, please call Bridget. - Ok. Bridget. - yelled Liza Bridget came and saw her parents. - MOM! DAD! - she yelled - BRIDGE! - yelled Kamilla - HONEY! - yelled George They hugged each other. - Thank you. - they said to the girls. - Not at all. Ok we must go. Thank you, Annabelle. - said Rose. - Not at all. Okie-dookie, Alex, make me a glass of strawberry milk coctaile. - said Annabelle. The Toon Patrol girls went out of the clud when suddenly a group of evil computer-animated foosas with machine guns came to them. The girls tryed to stop them but there were too much foosas so the could handle with the girls. - Ok, lets show them to Ratigan! - yelled foosa-leader.
To be contuned...
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Post by netske on Jun 25, 2007 9:26:21 GMT -5
Yes. Its my favorite song.
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Post by netske on Jun 26, 2007 6:50:04 GMT -5
The girls last names that they had before marries will be written at first.
CHAPTER 4
"Devil-evil" bar basement, 11:00 pm. Ginger, Kira, Rose, Bailey and Sarah were sitting on chairs and their hands were tied. - Well well well. - said Ratigan looking at girls. - Toon Patrol wives decided to protect Toon Town instead their husbands. Hmmmmmmmmm. Ok, guys, frisk them. - I'll handle this one. - said Scar. He came to Ginger and touched her breast. And she kicked him. - What a proud woman. - said Ratigan - Ok, kill them one by one. Blondie must die first. - Why? - asked Charming - Because she is Kira Verjak-Foray. She is a public prosecutor, and a lot of our people were sent to the prison by her. Thats why she must die first. Then kill brunet Ginger Mandi-Newman, then pink-haired Sarah Lightfood-Fleishier, then red-haired Bailey Galiego-Sanchez, and, at last, brown-haired Rose Griffits-Sanders. GO! - ordered Ratigan. But at this time the door opened, and Puss in The Boots (Shrek), Donkey (Shrek), madagascar penguins, Timon, Pumba, Muchu and Scrat entered the room. - Pizza deliver. - said pinguin Skipper - Hi, girls. We came to help you. - said Pumba Scrat thrown the knife and girls' hands became untied. - Come on lets go! - yelled girls Scar catched Ginger, but she swalloped him. Kira kicked Charming, Sarah took the sauser and hitted Dirty The Ghost's head, Bailey kicked Soto The Saber-toothed Tiger, Madagascar penguins started to fight with foosas, Scrat, Puss In The Boots, Donkey, Timon and Pumba started battle with the rest of the villians, and Rose shocked Ratigan. After a long fight all of the villians were tied. - You all will go to the prison. - said Kira - We won. - said Rose - By the way, guys, how did you found us? - asked Sarah - Your friend Annabelle told us where you are. - said Puss In The Boots - Thank you, guys. - said Bailey - Ok, lets go. - said Ginger. And the company left the plase.
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Post by netske on Jun 26, 2007 7:01:16 GMT -5
THE EPILOGUE
July 27th, Los Angeles airport, 12:00 pm. The girls met their husbands. - Hi, boys! - yelled Ginger - We were missing without you. - said Kira - You had no time for missing 'cause you were rescuing Toon Town. - said Brix - What? - asked Smartass surprisely - Brix. - Annabelle looked angriy at her brother. - Girls, tell us everything. - said Wheezy During the way home Ginger, Kira, Rose, Bailey and Sarah told Stupid, Wheezy, Smartass, Greasy and Psycho their story. - Nice work, girls. We're going to have a party in your honor. - said Greasy Stupid kissed Ginger, Wheezy kissed Kira, Smartass kissed Rose, Greasy kissed Bailey, Psycho kissed Sarah, and Brix kissed Annabelle. - Well, you showed to the villians what is girls' power. - said Brix - I love happy endings. - said Annabelle
THE END
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Post by netske on Jun 26, 2007 7:18:33 GMT -5
Thank you
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