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Post by weaselsrock on Apr 25, 2007 15:59:34 GMT -5
This is my first Fanfic.It basically intruduces Vile and some certain weasels will be brought to life.Sorry its so short.It takes off after the WFRR movie left off.
Chapter 1
As everybody left the Acme warehouse, noone noticed a light-brown girl weasel go over to Doom's dead body.She searched through his black jacket, careful not to get any Dip on herself.She pulled out a bottle that said 'Anti-Dip'.
"Must be for in case he got some on himself.Loser." she said, going over to the big tub of Dip.She poured the Anti-Dip into the Dip and watched as a guy weasel's body slowly came together.She dragged the body out of the Dip and tried to wake him up.
"Sammy!!Wake up!!!" she yelled, slapping his face a few times.He finally woke up.
"Vile?Is that you?Oh, and call me Smartguy." said Smartguy.Vile rolled her eyes.
"Whatever.You will always be Sammy to me.Where are your teammates?"
"They laughed themselves to death.I guess they won't be coming back to life.How did you bring ME to life?"
"That dude over there had some Anti-Dip.It brings paint and ink back together.Have you EVER known me to give up?Come on." said Vile, dragging him out of the warehouse.
"Where are we going?"
"To get some supplies." she said, mischeiviously.
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Post by Veggirl on Apr 25, 2007 16:09:17 GMT -5
Pretty good so far. Just an advice, why not make your chapters longer? But still, good so far.
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Post by weaselsrock on Apr 25, 2007 20:40:07 GMT -5
Thanks!!Here is chapter 2.
Chapter 2
Smartguy waited impatiently at the dump, while Vile was looking for spare parts.
"Look, I'm glad you're alive and stuff, but I need to kill Roger Rabbit.He is the one who killed our father, you know." said Smartguy.Vile poked her head out of the metal pile and ran to Smartguy.
"Roger didn't kill our dad, stupid!!That dude that YOU were with did!! I was there.I had just gotten out of the shower when he dumped the Dip on dad a year ago.I went to help him, but I slipped on the water and got knocked out." she said angrily.Smartguy looked dumbfounded as Vile looked for more parts."I have almost everything, I just need some ectoplasmic detector and some electrodes."
"Why do you need those and where are we gonna get them?"
"You want your buddies back,right?Bringing people back from the dead isn't gonna be easy.We need to get to Dexter's Laboratory."
"I heard that place is guarded very well." said Smartguy.Vile looked at him and laughed.
"If it was guarded well, his sister wouldn't get in there so much.His security system is faulty and easy to disable."
"You stole from this guy before?!"
"Of course.I'm a pretty good pickpocket too." she said, leaving Smartguy with a look of surprise on his face.They went to his house and went to the bookcase in Dexter's Lab.Vile took out a book that read 'Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy' and held it to her ear.Surprising Smartguy to death, it began to talk.
"What is the answer to Life, the universe, and everything?" said the book in Computer's voice.Vile rolled her eyes.
"42." she said, bored.The bookcase lifted up, revealing a blue laboratory.Inside, was a blond girl in a ballet outfit named Dee Dee.
"Hi Vile!!!!!Who's that you have with you?Is he your BOYFRIEND!?" she said loudly.Vile and Smartguy gagged.
"Of course not!!He's my brother Sam!!!But he wants everyone to call him Smartguy, even though he isn't smart." Vile said in a teasing tone.Dee Dee took Smartguy aside.
"My little brother Dexter is smart too!!And he loves me very much!!He is always saying 'Dee Dee, get out of my lab!!' and 'Dee Dee, I'm gonna call the cops!'.He is the best brother ever!!" said Dee Dee.Smartguy looked very disturbed.
"Ummm.......ok.I'm gonna go over there." he said, creeping to where Vile was throwing things around.She held up some wires and a generator.
"I got the electrodes, but I need the ectoplasmic detector.Do you know where Dexter has any?" said Vile.Dee Dee had an apolegetic look on her face.
"Well, Dexter doesn't believe in the supernatural, so he doesn't have any.But, his friend Danny's parents are ghosthunters.They came over today talking about capturing some weasel ghosts." Dee Dee said.Vile and Smartguy had looks of horror on their face.
"What do they do with the ghosts they catch?!" asked Smartguy with fear in his tone.Before Dee Dee could answer, a small boy with red hair named Dexter came in.
"Dee Dee!!!!You and your weasel friends get out of my Laboratory!!!" Dexter said with a weird accent.Dee Dee began to prance around, distracting Dexter as she blew stuff up.Vile and Smartguy ran out of Dexter's room and right to his front yard.
"Oh man, my friends are with some ghost hunters!!Who knows what they will do!!!" Smartguy said.Vile patted his shoulder.
"Hopefully, we won't be too late and we will be able to find them." she said in a worryful tone.
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Post by netske on Apr 26, 2007 5:25:30 GMT -5
And how do another weasels stayed alive? If you remember, in the movie in the bar Doom said "Have you forgotten what happened last time?". So the weasels died before. It means Greasy, Stupid, Psycho and Wheezy will come back alive! I`d like to know the continuation. Nice work, weaselsrock, come on!
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Post by weaselsrock on Apr 26, 2007 15:36:46 GMT -5
This is going to sound stupid, but when I was younger, I thought that Psycho might have almost laughed himself to death and that was why he is like he is now.
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Post by weaselsrock on Apr 27, 2007 21:19:56 GMT -5
Chapter 3
Vile and Smartguy went to a phonebooth and searched through the yellow pages of the phonebook.Finally, they came across a page that read:Tired of ghosts haunting your houses?Then call Jack and Maddie Fenton!!!Unless you are Vlad, then abide the restraining order.
"That's gotta be them." said Vlie.Smartguy rolled his eyes.
"Na, it's the other ghosthunter toons that are here in Toon Town." Smartguy said with extreme sarcasm.Vile punched his arm.
"Don't be a smartalec.Come on, we need a car."
"Oh, don't tell me your gonna carjack someone."
"Of course not!!A cab." Vile said, sticking out her thumb."Yo, Benny!!!"a yellow taxi cab came around the corner.Smartguy hid behind Vile.
"Hiya Vile, where to?" asked Benny.
"The Fenton's, please." Vile said, politely.Benny opened the car door and let Vile in, and saw Smartguy.
"HEY!!!!!!!Aren't you supposed to be dead!!??What are you doing with him, Vile?He tried to kidnap me and kill my friend Roger." Benny yelled.Vile glared at Smartguy.
"He is my brother, and I can't BELIEVE HE DID THAT!!!!!!" she yelled.
"Believe it." Benny said, glaring at Smartguy.Smartguy started to sweat.
"Don't get mad at me!!! I didn't know Roger was innocent!!!" Smartguy yelled.Vile turned to Benny.
"Don't get mad at him, Benny.He didn't mean too, and Doom tricked him.Please?" Vile said.Benny thought for a second.
"Ok, I guess.I can't hold a grudge.But do it again, and you will be sorry.Now, hop in." Benny said.Smartguy opened the door and sat in the passenger seat.Benny drove down, yelling at other drivers along the way.Finally, they stopped at the Fenton's.
"Thank you Benny." said Vile.Benny shrugged.
"It was nothing.Just keep an eye on that brother of yours." Benny said.Vile smirked.
"You can count on it." Vile said, kissing Benny's cheek.Benny blushed and drove off.Vile and Smartguy looked at the dark, foreboding house.
"That sure looks homey." Smartguy said.Vile rolled her eyes.Suddenly, a boy with green eyes, white hair, and a black and white jumpsuit appeared.
"Who are you and what are you doing here?!" he yelled, his hands glowing a bright green.
"You know, I actually thought that this would be easy." Smartguy said, eyeing the boy's green hands.
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Post by julayla on Apr 27, 2007 23:24:37 GMT -5
OMG! Danny Phantom! I can't believe he's in this fic! Interesting.
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Post by weaselsrock on Apr 28, 2007 18:16:41 GMT -5
Thank you guys very much!!Sorry this is short too.The next chapter will be longer, I promise!!
Chapter 4
"I'm Vile and this is my brother Sam, but he likes to be called Smartguy.Now, how about you calm down and promise not to kill us?What's your name?" Vile asnwered timidly.
"I'm Danny Phantom and I have heard of you two.That 'Smartguy' is supposed to be dead and you are a master pickpocket.Well, you shall not get any of these people's devices!!" Dany yelled, shooting green ectoplasm at them.Vile did a back flip away from the ectoplasm and Smartguy went behind Danny.He was about to pounce on Danny, when a girl with black hair, and gothic clothes hit him in the head repeatedly with a thermos.
"This won't work on you,since you aren't a ghost, but it is still a good weapon."the girl named Sam said to Smartguy.Danny kept trying to hit Vile, but he kept missing.
"Ok, I am done playing target practice!! If you don't get outta here now, I'll unleash my ghostly wail on you guys!" Danny yelled angrily.Vile snarled.
"Those Fenton's have our friends!!!Plus, we need some ectoplasmic detector." Vile said to Danny.Sam threw Smartguy at Vile, and Danny unleashed his ghostly wail.
"OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH" Danny wailed.The power of the wail blasted Vile and Smartguy away, but not before they saw Danny Phantom turn back into Danny Fenton.Landing 2 miles away from the Fenton's, Vile and Smartguy were still amazed.
"There is going to be a problem with getting past him.Did you see him?He is a toon ghost AND a toon human!!!!!That is amazing!!!" Snartguy said.Vile sighed.
"We are going to need some help.And I know JUST the toons to help us." Vile said with a smile.
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Post by weaselsrock on May 1, 2007 16:23:04 GMT -5
Sarah belongs to Julayla and Rose, Bailey, Ginger, and Kira belong to Bailey the weasel.
Chapter 5
Vile stuck out her thumb again and Benny arrived.
"You guys beat me over here.You got super speed or something?" Benny asked.Vile smirked.
"No.Danny Phantom wouldn't let us in his house.He thought we were gonna steal something." Vile replied.
"We are going to take my teamates and some ectoplasmic detector.He used a ghostly wail on us and I got beat up by a thermos." Smartguy said, matter-of-factly.
"He didn't hurt you, did he?If he did, he will regret it." Benny said.Vile smiled and kissed Benny's cheek.He blushed.
"Don't worry.I'm fine." Vile said.
"We need a ride." said Smartguy.Vile nodded.
"Where to?" asked Benny.
"Back to the house." Vile said in a secretive tone.Benny opened the doors and he drove down the road.Granny was driving in front of them.
"HEY GRANNY!!!!WHERE'D YOU GET YOUR LICENSE?A CEREAL BOX?!??!" He yelled at Granny.Granny turned her head to the taxi.
"SHUT YOUR MOUTH SONNY!!!!" yelled Granny.Vile, Smartguy, and Benny looked surprised at her.She smiled sweetly."Thank you."Finally, they arrived at a blue and white house.They entered the house and saw 5 girl weasels and a brown chihuahua.
"Smartguy, this is Tito." Vile said, pointing to the chihuahua.
"Hey man.You get a nice suit.Heh heh.Pink looks good on you." Tito laughed.Smartguy rolled his eyes.
"This is Sarah." Vile said, pointing to a weasel with violet fur and pink hair.
"Hi.Are you Vile's boylfriend?" Sarah asked curiously.
"For the last time, NO!!!We are siblings!!!!!" Smartguy yelled.
"This is Ginger." Vile said, pointing to a weasel with black hair, brown fur, and blue eyes.
"Hi." said Ginger.
"This is Kira." Vile said, pointing to a weasel with grey fur, white hair, and blue eyes.
"Hey." Kira said.
"This is Bailey." Vile said, pointing to a weasel with grey fur, red hair, and green eyes.
"Hi." Bailey said.
"ANd lastly, this is Rose." Vile said, pointing to a weasel with yellow fur, brown hair, and black eyes.Smartguy's eyes turned into hearts as he looked at Rose.
"She's beautiful." he said amazed.Rose laughed.
"Your aren't so bad looking yourself." Rose said.Smartguy blushed.Vile cleared her throat.
"My brothers teamtes laughed themselves to death and ghost hunters have them.I need some ectoplasmic detector in order to bring them to life." Vile explained.
"Geez.Since when did you turn into Dr. Frankenstien!!" said Tito.Vile smirked.
"Ha ha ha, I forgot how to laugh." Vile said.Bailey snapped her fingers.
"I have an idea.Vile, you, Smartguy, and Rose will distract Danny and Me, Ginger, Sarah, and Kira will head around the back to get Smartguy's teamates." said Bailey.Tito scoffed.
"What am I supposed to do?!" Tito yelled.Vile shrugged.
"Watch." Vile replied.
"Fine, I will!!" Tito growled.All together, Tito and the 7 weasels headed out to the Fenton's.
MEANWHILE AT THE FENTON'S
Danny was still wiped out from the ghostly wail, so his friends Tucker and Sam helped him in the house.His parents were in the basement.
"What do you think those weasels meant, when they said that you guys had their friends?" asked Sam.Danny shrugged.
"I don't know.They were probably lying.Tucker could you get the phone?I'm calling Jake and Juniper.Something tells me that those weasels are going to come back." said Danny.
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Post by weaselsrock on May 2, 2007 14:43:54 GMT -5
I didn't notice the 'girlfriend' thing till you pointed it out!!! I'll go ahead and fix it.When the weasels are in the basement, they are doing it during the fight scene.If anyone is wondering, Vile and Benny like each other.
Chapter 6
Juniper Lee, Jake Long in his dragon form, and Danny in his ghost form waited in the front lawn for the weasels.Jake's friends Trixie and Spud were talking to Tucker and Sam because Jake and Danny insisted that they wait on the sidelines.Munroe and Fu-dog were waiting on the side of the house, forced to just watch the fight.Suddenly, a brown chihuahua named Tito came over to Munroe and Fu-dog and sat between them, trying to carry popcorn and a soda.
"Yo man, if I have to watch, I'm going to watch comfortably." Tito complained.
"Who are you?Do you belong to Danny?" asked Munroe.Tito shook his head.
"No, I'm here with the weasels." Tito said.Munroe and Fu-dog stared at him for a long time, until they heard a battle cry.Smartguy, Vile, and Rose were charging out of the bushes.
"Great, they brought a friend." Danny said.
"Well, there is 1 for each of us now.I'll take the yellow weasel." said Jake, flying to her.He breathed fire at her, but she jumped away from it and kicked Jake in the side.
"Ooh, man!!!This is so exciting!!!" yelled Tito from the sidelines."Give him the chair!!!!!"
"What chair?"This isn't wrestling." said Munroe.Tito shrugged.
"Whatever." said Tito.Juniper jumped in front of Smartguy.
"I'll take the weasel in pink." Juniper smirked.She kicked him in the same place he got kicked by Valiant.He sat back up and took out his gun.
"Say hello to my little friend!"Smartguy yelled in a mock-spanish accent.Juniper grabbed the bullet cartirage and yanked out the bullets.She tried to grab the gun out of Smartguy's hands, but he wouldn't let go.Tito was pretending to be a tv announcer.Jack and Maddie came out of the front lawn, but got hit by Jake, who was dodging an attack by Rose.
"Oooh, that's gotta hurt.Juniper and Smartguy are now tugging of war.Who will win?Rose has just kicked Jake in the back and now they are wrestling.Jake has smacked Rose, but Smartguy saw and is now beating Jake over the head." Tito yelled.
"You are scaring me." said Fu-dog, Monroe nodding with him.Danny went over to Vile.
"That leaves just you and me." Danny said menacingly.
"Bring it on." said Vile.
MEANWHILE, IN THE FENTON'S BASEMENT
With Danny and his friends distracted by the fight, Bailey, Sarah, Ginger, and Kira snuck in the back door and made their way to the basement,but Maddie and Jack were still in the basement.
"I know how to get them out." said Ginger."Help,oh help, the ghost kid is in the front yard.Oh help." said Ginger, in a deadpan voice that only Jack would beleive to be someone in trouble.
"Come on, Maddie, the ghost kid is outside!!" yelled Jack, dragging his wife behind him.Sarah, Bailey, Ginger, and Kira went into the basement and saw the lab.In the middle of the lab, there was a see through bubble with Psycho, Stupid, Greasy, and Wheezy floating inside.Psycho and Stupid froze when they saw the girls, Wheezy looked into Kira's eyes, and Greasy started to flirt with Bailey.
"Come around here often?" he said.Bailey giggled.
"Not really.We have to get you guys out of there." she said, opening the bubble.They floated out and took a good look at the girls in front of them.
"The fastest way to get out of here is to ride on your backs and float out of here.You guys ok with that?" asked Sarah.
"Oh, I like that idea." said Greasy, bending down so Bailey could get on him.
"He-he I'd be honored to carry you." said Psycho, as a blushing Sarah climbed on his back.
"Duh, okey-dokey, smokey." said Stupid, as Ginger got on his back.
"-cough cough- sure.Let me help you up." Wheezy said, bending low as Kira got on his back.They floated out of the basement.
BACK TO THE FIGHT
Danny fired his ectoblasts at Vile and Vile dodged them.She punched him in the stomach and kicked him in the chest.Getting iratated, Danny sent a blast at Vile when her head was turned.He hit her in the jaw.He was about to hit her again, but from out of nowhere, a yellow taxi-cab ran into Danny.
"You are going to regret that!!!" yelled Benny.
"This battle has taken an enexpected twist now!!!" yelled Tito, still imatating an announcer.
"I'm starting to like this dog." said Fu-dog, eating Tito's popcorn.
"Me too."said Munroe, sipping Tito's soda.Psycho, Sarah, Stupid, Ginger, Wheezy, Kira, Greasy, and Bailey floated into the yard.
"Stop fighting!! I think there is a misunderstanding here." yelled Kira.
"They are trying to destroy my friends and my sister is just trying to bring them back to life!!"yelled Smartguy.
"They are trying to take my parent's inventions!!" yelled Danny.
"The only thing we are trying to take is our friends and some ectoplasmic detector." said Vile.
"Really?Oh.I feel stupid." said Danny.
"Duh, I thought I was Stupid!!!" said Stupid.Vile looked at the ghostly weasels with interest.
"Gregorio?Seth?William?Percy?" Vile said, as she recognized the ghosts.
"DON'T CALL ME PERCY!!!!!" yelled Psycho.
"I didn't know your old friends were your teamates." said Vile.Smartguy shrugged.
"Well, I'll let you guys have some ectoplasmic detector, but only if you and your weasel friends stop being bad." said Jake.
"We promise." said Psycho, Stupid, Wheezy, and Greasy at the same time.Danny went in the basement and brought out a perfume bottle with the ectoplasmic detector in it.
"Me, June, Munroe, Jake, Fu-dog, Sam, Tucker, Spud, and Danny are coming along." said Trixie.
"Okay, but I don't have much room in me to carry everyone." said Benny.
"Don't worry.I just need some supplies from the Fenton lab.I'll make you bigger, hon." said Vile, rushing to the basement.Benny blushed until he looked like a red taxi.
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Post by weaselsrock on May 2, 2007 15:52:12 GMT -5
Thank you.*hums the ghostbusters theme song*
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Post by julayla on May 2, 2007 16:47:15 GMT -5
Looks interesting. Keep it up.
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Post by Cobrawolf on May 3, 2007 13:01:40 GMT -5
Wow
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Post by netske on May 4, 2007 5:02:15 GMT -5
Is it the end of the story or you will write more? By the way: weaselsrock, could I use Tito in my future fic about kidnapping of Smartass`s favorite elder daughter - Liza? Please.
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Post by weaselsrock on May 4, 2007 14:43:52 GMT -5
Is it the end of the story or you will write more? By the way: weaselsrock, could I use Tito in my future fic about kidnapping of Smartass`s favorite elder daughter - Liza? Please. I'm writing more.I just have a stupid science project that my insane teacher thinks would be easy.I'll have the next chapter on later today.Yes, you may use Tito.Tito isn't really mine though.He's from Oliver and Company.He is free to use.
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