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Post by Veggirl on Jan 28, 2007 23:36:01 GMT -5
Here is the prologue for my new fanfic. Read and enjoy it!
Prologue
Red eyes glowed through the dark forest. The owner of these eyes licked it’s lips hungrily. The sun had fallen and it was time to feed. A sheep then stepped into the meadow, lowering it’s head to nibble the sweet grass. The creature licked it’s lips, hungry for a hunt, hungry for something warm, hungry for blood! Night was the perfect time for hunting. Sometimes the creature hunted chickens, which were more easier to take down. Goats were a bit tricky. You have to beware of those horns. Pigs were slow and stupid, it was easy to bite them, but heavy to take down. Sheep were a lot more easier and not too heavy. Yes, sheep was perfect for a meal! It took a step forward, eyes on the sheep. The sheep lifted its head, ears flicking to listen. The beast growled softly. The sheep then trotted away. The beast lunged! It was too late for the sheep to do anything! It felt fangs sinking in it’s neck. It bleated with panic. The sheep fell to the ground, kicking and bleating, but the fangs went in deeper. The kicking and bleating faltered. The sheep was getting weaker and weaker. The beast then stopped, looking down at the sheep that was drained from blood. The beast licked it’s blood-stained lip and flew off into the sky.
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Post by julayla on Jan 29, 2007 1:58:17 GMT -5
Whoa...I feel bad for the sheep. I hate to see the creature now.
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Post by Veggirl on Feb 2, 2007 0:37:14 GMT -5
Here is the first chapter to the story.
Chapter 1
“YAAAAHHHH!!!” Smart Guy awoke to a loud crash on his bed. His eyes flew open as the pounding continued. He instantly knew who it was. “PSYCHO! GET OFF!!!” He shouted. Psycho, the strait jacket weasel, grabbed a pillow and started pounding Smart Guy with it. “Wake up boss! We have this new case! Get up!” Psycho leapt off the bed and raced out of the room. Smart Guy sat up and rubbed his eyes. If this case made Psycho excited, then it must be good. After getting dressed, Smart Guy went downstairs into the kitchen where the others were having breakfast. Smart Guy sat down at the table. “So, what’s the mystery today boys?” Greasy looked up from the newspaper he was reading. He shoved it toward Smart Guy. “Read this, boss.” Smart Guy took it and read it silently to himself.
ONE MORE DEAD SHEEP FOUND IN PUERTO RICO. NO SIGNS OF BLOOD AND TWO PUNCTURE HOLES IN THE THROAT. FARMERS ARE ALARMED, THE POLICE SEEK ACTION. VILLAGERS TELL TALES OF THE CHUPACABRA WHICH MEANS “GOAT SUCKER”.
Smart Guy looked up. “Yeah? So?” “So, this our case man!” Greasy said. “We can find this Chupacabra and bring it back. Just imagine! We could be famous!” Smart Guy frowned. “Are you saying we’re gonna go all the way to Puerto Rico just to find this monster that is just a bunch of stories?” “M-monster?!” Stupid yelped. “What monster?” “It’s nothing.” Smart Guy said. “Just some stories. Made up fairy tales.” Wheezy frowned. “Fairy tales don’t include blood sucking monsters!” “I say we do it!” Psycho said. “This can be a great adventure!” Smart Guy looked at his gang. “Fine, we’ll take a vote. All those who want to go, say aye.” “Aye!” Psycho and Greasy said. “Undecided.” Wheezy said. “Me too!” Stupid said. Smart Guy nodded. “Okay, since I’m the boss here, I’m gonna decide. I decided...” He looked at Greasy and Psycho’s eager faces. He groaned. “We go get this beast.”
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Post by julayla on Feb 2, 2007 21:05:30 GMT -5
Yeah, it is short, but it is an interesting chapter. Looks like they're off on another adventure.
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Post by Veggirl on Feb 5, 2007 20:46:10 GMT -5
Okay, here's the 2nd chapter. I hope it's long enough.
Chapter 2
The weasels arrived in Puerto Rico two days later. Smart Guy looked over at Wheezy who had his eyes covered, panting loudly. "It's okay Wheeze, you can open your eyes now!" Wheezy opened his eyes. "Oh. We landed." The weasels went out from the airplane where they were greeted by the heat of Puerto Rico. Greasy breathed in. "Aah, Puerto Rico! My land!" "How can you live in a land that's so hot?!" Psycho said, panting. "You guys know nothing about these sort of things." Greasy said. "I'm gonna go check around and see what has changed and what has not." "I'm gonna go get water." Psycho said, going off to find a drinking fountain. Stupid and Wheezy followed him while Greasy went off. "Well then fine." Smart Guy called out. "I'll just find a rental car and we'll be on our way." Smart Guy looked around. Besides the people speaking Spanish to one another, he was alone. "Right then." He mumbled and went off.
A few hours later, the weasels arrived at grassy field where some policemen were around the sheep's body. A police sheriff met them. "Toon Patrol, you have arrived. Good." "So what's this about?" Smart Guy asked as they were led to the scene of the crime. When they got there, they stared at the victim. The sheep stared up at them with dead eyes and two puncture marks were on it's throat. "I'm feeling nauseous." Stupid groaned. "We have reports saying that it came from---" "The Chupacabra?" The sheriff looked at Smart Guy in surprise. "Yes, how did you know?" Smart Guy shrugged. "We read it in the newspaper. So what is this Chupacabra anyway?" "No one knows. It comes out at night and feeds at night, that's what I've heard. But there are some descriptions of it. A reptillian thing with spikes going down it's back plus fangs. It has glowing red eyes and fly." "It can fly?!" "Si. How else it'll make it's escape?" Greasy looked at the sheriff. "So uh...what do you want us to do?" "We need you five to capture it." "CAPTURE IT?!!" "Si. We have heard about your adventures in Toontown and we need someone who is brave and daring." "We can do it!" Psycho said. "We are brave and daring!" "But how are we going to capture it?" Stupid asked. Smart Guy looked at the grazing sheep. An idea formed into his mind. "How about we lay a trap for this Chupacabra?"
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Post by julayla on Feb 5, 2007 23:43:23 GMT -5
So now they're at the scene of the crime. Now all they have to do is plot on how to catch the Chupacabra. That will be tough.
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Post by Veggirl on Feb 14, 2007 0:42:48 GMT -5
Another chapter here.
Chapter 3
The weasels hid out that night in the van, on the road near a small sheep. Smart Guy stared at the sheep, his eyes drooping. He looked at the glow-in-the-dark watch. 3:00 AM. He sighed. "Three AM, still nothing." He announced. Greasy awoke, grabbed a paper and pen and wrote down the information. "How long is it going to be?" Wheezy sighed. "We've been up for almost nine hours, and still nothing!" "Can't be long now." Smart Guy said, yawning. "The Chupacabra might be coming soon." "Can't we take a nap?" Psycho groaned. "Look, Stupid is already asleep!" "You guys go ahead." Smart Guy said, blinking. "I'll stay awake." Greasy slumped down at his seat and shut his eyes. Wheezy and Psycho got in the back of the van and was already asleep. Smart Guy looked at the little sheep near the van. All they had to do was wait for the Chupacabra to come, capture it and then send it off to a museum. His head drooped. Maybe a little nap won't hurt. No, no nap. He must stay awake! Well...he'll just rest his eyes and get comfortable while he wait. Just rest and...ZZZZZZZZ.
Greasy awoke suddenly a little while later. He looked at the clock. 3:45. 45 minutes had passed since the last time he was awake. He looked outside and blinked. Something was hunkering down on the ground. Greasy blinked. It seemed like it was standing on the sheep. His eyes widened. He nudged Smart Guy. "Boss...boss!" Smart Guy grunted. Greasy began to shake him. "BOSS! BOSS!" Smart Guy awoke and glared at him. "What?!" Greasy pointed. "Chu...Chu...Chu...Chu---" "Chu what?!" Smart Guy said. "CHUPACABRA!" Smart Guy's head shot straight up. The creature turned and glared at them. It was a reptillian-like animal, with spikes going down it's back. It had sharp claws and a scaley tail. The eyes were red and glowing. It curled it's lips into a snarl and revealed sharp teeth. Then it bounded off. "DON'T LET IT GET AWAY!" Smart Guy shouted, turning on th car. He turned the wheel, making the van do a U-turn and drive after the Chupacabra. The Chupacabra bounded down the fields with the black van right behind him. "Greasy, get the net!" Smart Guy said. Greasy nodded, bent down and grabbed the net from the car floor. He opened the window and stuck the net out. "Now we gotcha you little bloodsucker!" The Chupacabra suddenly leapt up into the sky. The van screehed into a stop. Smart Guy scrambled out and stared up at the sky. No sign of the Chupacabra. "What the heck happened?!" Wheezy's voice came from the back of the van. "We lost the Chupacabra!" Smart Guy said, disappointed. Greasy frowned. "So, fearless leader. What's our next plan?"
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Post by julayla on Feb 14, 2007 1:33:30 GMT -5
Hoo boy, looks like the Chupacabra is much more than they can handle. Nice job on the chapter.
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Post by Veggirl on Feb 22, 2007 0:37:38 GMT -5
Here is the next chapter for the fanfic. Enjoy it.
Chapter 4
The next day, Smart Guy stood on a small cliff, gripping a net. He looked at Stupid, who was blowing up a balloon. "Is that balloon ready yet, Stupid?" Stupid stopped blowing. "Almost boss. Duh...are you sure it'll be big enough for us to---" A small whistling noise interrupted him. He looked down just in time to see the balloon slowly becoming small again. He frowned and began to blow again. "So, what's this plan again?" Greasy asked. Smart Guy pointed at the sky. "We're gonna swoop down in the sky, and when the Chupacabra comes flying, we're gonna fly in and nab him with the net!" Wheezy coughed. "But boss, the Chupacabra has teeth and claws that can rip us to shreds!" "Not to worry," Smart Guy said. "The net is made out of strong metal material." Suddenly, there came a small noise from Stupid. Looking up, they were surprised to see Stupid clutching onto the balloon, slowly floating away. Smart Guy raced over and caught Stupid in the net before he could float away. Stupid released a bit of the balloon. "Duh...thank you BOOSSSS!!!" A fierce wind suddenly blew, taking Smart Guy and Stupid with them. Greasy raced over and clung onto Smart Guy's leg. Psycho grabbed onto Greasy's jacket and Wheezy grabbed onto Psycho's foot. The five weasels were flung around in the sky, the wind toying with them before finally letting them loose. The five weasels floated through the sky, high above the tree line. "Wheeze," Smart Guy said. "Whatever you do, don't look down." Wheezy blinked and slowly turned his head down. His eyes widened at the sight of the height. He moaned with fear. "See any Chupacabras yet?" Greasy asked. "Not yet!" Smart Guy snapped. There was a little whistle noise. A bird flew in and stared at the weasels. Smart Guy glared at it. "Fly away, birdie! We're busy here!" The bird flew up to the balloon and looked at it. The weasel's eyes widened. "No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no!" They begged the bird. The bird took no notice and pecked the balloon. There was a loud POP, then screams as the weasels went down, down, down. The bird stared down at the falling weasels, then flew off.
The weasels landed hard on the grassy ground, very hard indeed. Smart Guy sat up, glaring at the sky. "Stupid bird!" He growled. "Didn't he see it was a balloon?!" Greasy sat up, rubbing his head. "Now what?" "I'm thinking!" Smart Guy snapped. Psycho sat up and rubbed his head. He looked down at the ground. Paw prints. He blinked. These paw prints weren't like anything he has ever seen before! Psycho stood up and began to follow them. The pawprints went down the hill and into this bush. Psycho went closer to the bush and looked in. He couldn't believe what he saw!
Psycho walked back to where his gang were, still busy arguing about a new plan. "Look, we go back, get another sheep and some trap steel cages!" Smart Guy said. "Oh and who's gonna stay awake?" Greasy said. "We'll all fall asleep!" "Guys..." Psycho spoke up. "We'll stay awake in shifts! Stupid, you do it first." "Awww, but why do I always have to do it first?" "Guys..." "Because you're the youngest." "But that's not fair boss!" "Guys..." "Look, if we're gonna catch the Chupacabra, we have to---" "GUYS!!!" "What?!" The weasels snapped, glaring at Psycho. "I think I found something." Psycho said. Smart Guy folded his arms. "Really? Well, what is it?" Psycho walked off. "Follow me." The weasels looked at each other, and shrugged. They followed Psycho down the hill and into a bush. Psycho held up a paw, and got down, spreading apart the bush to reveal something that made the weasels freeze in shock.
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Post by julayla on Feb 22, 2007 0:48:41 GMT -5
Looks like they found another clue. I wonder what they froze about?
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Post by Veggirl on Feb 25, 2007 18:55:34 GMT -5
Now it will be revealed what they found.
Chapter 5
"BABIES?!!" The weasels stared down at the scaley skinned little things with big red baby eyes, small little teeth and small spikes going down their backs. The baby Chupacabra's looked up at the weasels and blinked. There were three babies together. "This thing has babies?!" Smart Guy exclaimed. "Does that mean there are more Chupacabras here?" Wheezy coughed. One of the babies went over to Smart Guy's leg and nudged it. Smart Guy jumped. He glared down at the little thing who looked up at him with red eyes. "Don't even think about it, shrimp!" Smart Guy snapped. "Aw, boss!" Psycho said. "Be nice to them! They're only babies." The baby Chupacabras went back into their bush den and started to play-fight with each other. The weasels watched for a moment as the babies nipped, jumped and swiped at each others. "You know," Greasy said finally. "They are kinda cute." "Yeah, until they grow up into bloodsucking sheep eaters." Smart Guy mumbled. "Come on Boss!" Psycho said. "You know you like them!" "Oh please!" Smart Guy sniffed. "They're not even cute." One baby Chupacabra suddenly leaped at his brother. The brother jumped out of the way, leaving the youngest tumbling in the dirt. Smart Guy's lips twitched. "Okay, well...maybe a little." Suddenly, there was a screeching noise. The weasel's jumped when they heard it. "Uh-oh!" Stupid yelped. "Mama came home!" "Quick!" Smart Guy said. "Hide in the bushes!" The weasels raced behind the other bushes just in time before a full grown Chupacabra swooped in. The babies made little shrieks of joy as they raced out to greet their mother. The weasels poked their heads out a little bit. "What is that she's carrying in her jaws?" Greasy whispered. Smart Guy looked closer at the thing the mother had in her jaws. It was red and large and the mother's chin was wet with red. He groaned. "I don't think you want to know." A shadow suddenly flew above them. To their shock, another Chupacabra landed. It was slightly bigger than the mother and had bigger spikes going down it's back. The little Chupacabras raced over to the bigger one. The bigger one touched each one of them with it's nose. Then going over to the mother, it touched noses with her. "That must be the daddy." Smart Guy mumbled. The mother dropped the red meat on the ground in front of the babies. The babies bit into the meat. The meat began to shrivel and it's redness faded into white. "They're sucking the blood out of it!" Greasy said. When the babies were done, the father dug a hole in the ground and shoved the dried meat into it. Then the two adults laid on the grass while the babies began to play again. The weasels watched in silence. "We better go." Smart Guy said. "Otherwise---" Psycho made a small yelp. "Boss, look!" Smart Guy looked back. To his horror, he saw that the father was facing the bush. The bush that the weasels were hiding in!
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Post by julayla on Feb 25, 2007 23:12:47 GMT -5
Awww...baby Chupacabras! And uh-oh, looks like the father is about to find them.
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Post by Veggirl on Mar 10, 2007 3:18:39 GMT -5
Here is the other chapter.
Chapter 6
"What do we do now?!" Psycho whispered-hissed. "Stay calm." Smart Guy said. "Maybe he won't notice us." The male Chupacabra went in closer to the bushes and sniffed. He then lifted a paw. With a sudden swiftness, the father slashed the bushes apart to reveal the five weasels hidden in the bushes. The weasels and the Chupacabra stared at each other. "Uhh...hi?" Stupid said. The Chupacabra reared up on it's hide legs and roared. The mother raced over to her mate's side and roared at the weasels. The two Chupacabras bared their sharp fangs at the weasels and snarled. Smart Guy felt around for a branch or something that can be used as a weapon. Suddenly, one of the babies raced over and stood in front of the parents. It made little squeaking noise, looking at the weasels then back at it's parents. The mother and father watched the baby for a few moments, then looked up at the weasels. The father turned and walked back toward the bushes, snorting. The mother and baby followed. "What just happened?" Wheezy asked. "Seems like the baby told it's parents that we mean no harm." Smart Guy said. The baby Chupacabras raced over to the weasels, jumping and squeaking. "Maybe they want to play!" Psycho suggested. He got onto the grass and went after the babies. "Is it safe to play with them?" Greasy asked. Smart Guy shrugged. "We should name them!" Psycho suddenly said. "WHAT?!" Greasy yelped. "Psycho, you can't name them! Once you name them, you get attached to them!" "So?" Psycho said, rubbing the head of one little Chupacabra. "They're harmless. They're like little puppies!" "Yeah, except puppies don't have sharp teeth that can suck blood!" Wheezy said. Psycho picked up the oldest male. "Maybe we should call this one...Willie." "Willie?!" Smart Guy said. "Why Willie?" "Because he's big." Psycho said. "Plus, Willie the giant is big." Wheezy snatched the youngest male. The father of the young ones leapt onto his paws, snarling ferociously. Wheezy stared at him and calmly stroked the young one's back. The father growled and settled back down. "Well..." Wheezy said when he caught his voie. "I'm naming this one...Nemo." "Nemo, why Nemo?" Greasy asked. Wheezy shrugged. "I don't know." "Well I guess this leaves only the girl." Smart Guy said, staring at the female. "I want to name her!" Stupid piped up. "I wanna call her...uh...um..." "Will you pick a name already!?" Smart Guy snapped. "All right. Umm...Josie." The weasels stared at him. "Brilliant." Wheezy said dryly. Stupid shrugged. Smart Guy looked up at the setting sun. "Well, we better get going soon. Night is coming." Psycho patted each of the babies on the head and went off with his gang. Smart Guy looked back at the parents, who were staring at them with glaring, hostile eyes.
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Post by julayla on Mar 10, 2007 12:02:27 GMT -5
Lol, good reference to Willie, Nemo, and that quote from Monster's Inc. Awww...the babies are cute, but I have a feeling that the parents aren't gonna be happy.
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Post by Veggirl on Apr 7, 2007 17:33:45 GMT -5
All right gang. Sorry it took so long, but busy with school work, you know. Hope it's not too short.
Chapter 7
"I still don't see why you think they're cute, Psycho!" Smart Guy said as they made their way back to town. "I told you!" Psycho said. "They are---" "Yeah, yeah, yeah!" Smart Guy snapped. "Like puppies." "With big huge fangs." Greasy mumbled. Entering the town, they found a huge mob in the plaza. "What's the hooplah about?" Smart Guy asked. The mob then went off, marching toward the sheep fields. The weasels watched until the last person in the crowd was gone. They looked at each other. "All right," Wheezy said. "A big crowd went out of town. What does that mean?" Smart Guy looked around and noticed a lady outside her house, sewing. "Hey Grease, go ask that lady what all the commotion was about." Greasy nodded and went towards the elderly woman. They spoke for a few minutes and Greasy came back with this sick look on his face. "Well?" Smart Guy said. Greasy gulped. "Eh....well that mob went out to find the creature who was killing their sheep." "What? Wolves? Bobcats?" "No." "Well what then?" "Chupacabras." The weasels became silent. "B-but, the Chupacabras are safe, aren't they?" Psycho squeaked. Greasy slowly shook his head. "They found some tracks leading to the field where that family was living in. And what I've heard, once they find those Chupacabras, then..." Greasy slid a finger across his throat and made a choking noise. The weasels were silent with horror. "We gotta go rescue them!" Psycho cried, racing toward the van. "Psycho! Get back here!" Smart Guy shouted. "No way!" Psycho shouted back. "Those guys need our help and it's up to us to help them!" "But we were supposed to capture them!" Smart Guy said. "Doesn't matter!" Psycho said. "I'm going and I don't care if anyone is not with me!" Stupid raced forward. "Wait! Wait for me! I'm with you!" Wheezy was still for a moment and then ran forward. "I'm in!" Smart Guy glared at Greasy. "Well?" Greasy sighed. "It's a tough decision boss. But..." Greasy suddenly lunged forward. "Hang on to your hats, I'm coming too!" "What!" Smart Guy yelped. He looked around. There was no one else but him. He growled with frustration. "Fine! I'm going!"
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