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Post by Veggirl on Oct 6, 2006 23:41:23 GMT -5
Since it's October, the month of Halloween, I will write a Halloween fanfic. I hope you like it. Here's the prologue.
Prologue
It was the year of the 1700's. A time where witches and goblins were spoken of and evil spirits roamed the woods at night. The story started one night while three wildcat witches called the Wildcat sisters, were creating a potion that will suck the lives out of a group called "The chosen five" so they could live long and young, doing evil and terrorizing the others. The oldest one, Enon, waved her arms around the bubbling cauldron. "Soon sisters, the potion will be ready and we shall seek the five chosen ones and we can suck the lives out so we can be young forever!" "And who are the chosen ones, Enon?" The second youngest, Keket asked. Enon looked in her book. "One shall be plump with the brain like an acorn. Another, fur gray like smoke. The next will be one with teeth like thorns and wild eyes. The other shall be one like darkness and the last will have a diamond stone." "Diamond stone!" The youngest one, Ophel shrieked. She began to dance around, chanting, "Diamond stone! Diamond stone! Diamond stone! Diamond stone! Diamond---" "Sisters!" Enon said. "The potion is ready! Now we shall---" Suddenly, there was banging at the doors. "Fiends! Daughters of Darkness! Open this door!" "Nobody is in here!" Enon called out. "Eh...we're only simple wildcats!" "Who are making potions to suck lives!" Ophel said. She never was a bright one. Enon grabbed her sister by the throat, hissing angrily as the door fell to the ground.
Minutes later, the wildcat sisters were standing on barrels with nooses around their necks. "Enon Wildcat!" A squirrel shouted. Enon looked at the squirrel. "Yes?" "You and your sisters had been proven guilty for witchcraft! Have ye' have last words?" Enon laughed. "Why yes I do! Sisters!" The wildcats yowled into the night sky. "264 years from now, a vigin shall light the black flame. The witches shall rise and seek the chosen five to live for eternity!" The wildcats cackled into the night sky until the barrels were pushed from under them. There they hung from the tree, but a terrible curse had been set.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Oct 7, 2006 0:47:15 GMT -5
Oh, a hanging. Hope they don't come back anytime soon. This sounds intresting, hope you continue with it. ^_^
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Post by julayla on Oct 7, 2006 21:01:40 GMT -5
Wow, interesting start. Very nice start. Good job!
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 12, 2006 1:13:02 GMT -5
Hah, funny scene to picture! ;D ;D All right, next chapter. Since I don't have school for the following week, I might put up a few more chapters.
Chapter 1
Greasy paced back and forth in the living room, stopping only to look out the window. "Where are they?! I told them to be here by 5:00, and did they arrived? No!" The door then burst open and in walked a crazy-looking weasel, a gray weasel with a bunch of cigarettes in his hat, and a fat dopey-looking weasel. They each had a bag of candy. "Hi Greasy!" The crazy weasel, Psycho, giggled. "We bought enough candy so we can be set for those trick-or-treaters." The smoking weasel, Wheezy, looked at the hispanic weasel. "Are you okay Grease?" Greasy fumed. "Okay? Do I look okay?! First, I told you specifically to come back at 5:00. It is now 6:34, and I had to set up Halloween decorations, find some spooky music, and a whole bunch of other stuff!!!" The dopey looking weasel, Stupid, spoke up. "Duh...but Greasy---" "Uh-uh-uh! Don't say!!!" Greasy snapped. "From now on...I want you guys to be punctual! And if you don't, then something really bad's gonna happen!!!!" He paused. "Oh my gosh, I'm starting to turn into boss!" Stupid sighed. "I miss him." The weasels were silent. Ever since the Roger Rabbit incident, their leader had disappeared out of nowhere. They searched everywhere, but they couldn't find him. But a feeling kept on telling them that he was still alive, which was strange. Another weird thing was whenever they get out of the house, a black cat always rush over to them, meowing like crazy and rubbing itself against their legs. The weasels have no idea why it did it, but they figured cats were like that and just let it go. It was Wheezy who broke the silence. "You know, there is this museum about those three wildcat witches from Salem. Maybe we can go take a peek?" Psycho brightened up. "Yeah! That'll be great! We can go and see great things like eyes of newts, bat wings, lizard spleens and all sorts of things!" Stupid then looked scard. "But that place is haunted! I've heard a bunch of stories about it!" "Aw, come on!" Greasy said, looking disgusted. "You still believe all those stories? It's just a bunch of Hocus Pocus. We'll just go there a little bit, then come back in time for trick-or-treaters." It was settled. The weasels went outside, into their van and drove off. A black cat was sitting in a tree, watching the van drive off. It leaped down and raced after the van as it headed toward the abandon museum of the wildcat witches.
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Post by julayla on Oct 12, 2006 16:37:35 GMT -5
Yeah, reminds me of that movie, Hocus Pocus. Anyway, keep it up.
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 16, 2006 20:42:47 GMT -5
Here is the next chapter. I apologize if it's too short. I'll try to make the next one longer.
Chapter 2
The four weasels entered the museum when they arrived. Inside was damp and dusty, cobwebs were forming in the corners. To one side was an exhibit of the witches potions, cauldron and a case of books. This exhibit was protected by glass. The other side had a small little gift shop with witch books, small little toy brooms and some candy. To the front were the witches brooms and a book protected in a glass case. Psycho went over to the book and looked at it. "Wow! It says here that the lead witch, Enon, got this book from the real devil!" "The...the...the devil?" Stupid gulped. Wheezy took a drag on his cigarette. "Whoever made that up must have been a great storyteller." Greasy went over to a candle and looked at it for a moment. He read the little display. "It says that if this candle lights up on a Halloween night on a full moon by a virgin, then the witches will return." He looked up, grinning. "You guys wanna try it?" "No!" Stupid said, shaking his head rapidly. "What if it's true?" The black cat stood on a rafter, narrowing it's eyes at the four weasels. "Aw c'mon." Greasy said. "It's all a bunch of stupid scary stories. There's nothing real. Wheeze, can I borrow your cigarette lighter?" Wheezy shrugged, tossing the cigarette lighter to Greasy. "Sure, but as long as you don't do anything stupid." "How stupid will lighting a candle be?" Greasy mumbled, lighting the cigarette lighter and taking a step toward the candle. The black cat leaped down and sank it's claws into Greasy's shoulders. Greasy yelled and tried to shake the cat off. The cat hung on tightly, yowling with rage. Giving Greasy one last slash, it leaped off. Greasy shook a fist at it. "ESTUPIDO GATO!!!!" He shouted. "I wanna go home now!" Stupid said. "Yeah, we should go home." Psycho said. "Grease you better---" Greasy lit the lighter again and ignited the candle. The flame glowed black. Suddenly, there was a flash of bright light. The weasels fell to the ground as the museum began to shake. The windows began to glow green and the shutters shook violently. Shadows then flew near the window like witches on brooms. Suddenly, it stooped. The weasels crawled to the nearest hiding spots they could find while the black cat pressed itself down on the ground. There was a moment's silence, then the door flung open. "Sisters, we are home!"
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Post by julayla on Oct 16, 2006 22:49:56 GMT -5
Oh my gosh! The weasels are now in for a surprise from the witches! This is not good...not good at all.
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 19, 2006 22:23:24 GMT -5
All right. Here's the next chapter. I made it longer, like I promised.
Chapter 3
The wildcat witches prowled around their old home. "It's like we never left before!" Keket hissed with delight. Ophal reached up toward a shelf and pulled down a long string thing. "My lucky rat tail! Right where I left it!" Enon raced over to her book, cackling with delight. "Here is my book! Now we can conduct the spell and make ourselves younger." Keket suddenly sniffed the air. "I smell...a weasel!" The weasels froze. "Age...early twenties." Psycho and Stupid's eyes widened. "Plump. Oh yes, very plump!" Stupid did a small whine of fear. "Find it, Keket!" Enon said. "So we can concoct the spell!" Keket slunk nearer to the counter where Stupid was hiding. Ophal following, quietly singing, "Come little weasel, the day shall---" "Quiet!" Keket hissed. "He should be right about...HERE!" Stupid yelped and leaped up. The wildcat witches stared at him. "Uh...hello." Stupid said, waving a bit. The wildcat witches smiled. "Why hello dearie." Enon said. "Tell us, what year is it?" "Duh...1947?" Stupid said. "Sister," Enon said. "We've been gone for 157 years! Now dear, what's a nice weasel like you doing around here?" "Duh...I was just checking around, and now I'm leaving." Stupid tried to rush out the door, but the witches grabbed him. "You're not going anywhere dear." Enon said. "Ophal, Keket, tie him up while I concoct the spell!" "What?!" Stupid yelped. "No! Let me go!" Greasy leaped up. "Hey!" The witches look up. Greasy gulped. "Um...if you want to take him, you gotta get past me!" "You and who else?" Enon sneered. Greasy took Wheezy's cigarette lighter and lit it. The witches gasped. "He makes fire in his hand." Keket whispered. Greasy lifted the flame to the sprinkler above. It set off the sprinklers and they started to sprinkle rain. The witches screamed and raced to hide. "Run guys run!" Greasy shouted, leaping down. The three weasels raced to the door. A weight landed on Greasy's back. He fell to the ground and rolled over. The cat stood on his chest, glaring at him with narrowed eyes. It opened it's mouth, revealing white fangs. Then it did something that shocked Greasy. "Nice going, Grease!" Greasy stared at the cat with wide eyes. He looked confused for a bit, thinking that he had heard that voice before. His eyes widened again when he realized who it was. "B-Boss?"
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Post by julayla on Oct 19, 2006 23:33:26 GMT -5
What the-!? Smarty's a cat now?! Oh my god! This is getting more and more interesting now.
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 24, 2006 20:32:31 GMT -5
Oh dear, Halloween is almost here and I still haven't finished this! I gotta work fast! So here's another chapter.
Chapter 4
"Boss? Is that you?" "Yeah, no fooling!" The black cat said. "Now hurry up and get the book!" Greasy stared at Smart Guy. Smart Guy rolled his eyes and sighed. With a loud hiss, he swiped at Greasy's face. Greasy jumped. "Come on! Move it!!!" Smart Guy hissed, before jumping off. Greasy stood up and ran to the book. He did a small smirk. That was the boss he remembered. Racing over to the glass case, he tried to shake it. "No!" Enon cried. "My book! My book!" She tried to race over, but her sisters held her back. Greasy grabbed a broom and smashed the glass case. Grabbing the book, he raced out the door with Smart Guy following. "No!" Enon shrieked. "They stole my book!" Her sisters cowered away from the sprinkling water. Enon stretched her paw out and felt it. She growled. "Sisters! This is just water!" Slowly, the other two sisters stretched thier paws out to feel it. "It is water!" Keket said. Ophel started to catch water droplets with her tongue. Enon stormed to the door with her sisters following, determined to get her book back. Outside, they stopped at the road. "What is it?" Keket asked. "It's a black river!" Enon said. "Maybe we should cross it." Ophal said. Enon and Keket looked at each other, then pushed Ophel. Ophel shrieked as she landed on the road. She felt it. "Sisters, it's firm! It's firm as stone!" The wildcat witches stepped on the road, feeling it. Enon growled, picked up her skirt and stomped down the road. Her sisters followed. Suddenly, a red firetruck came towards them. The sisters stared at the flashing light for a moment, then they screeched and jumped into the bushes to hide.
The four weasels and the black cat raced into the graveyard and skidded to a stop to catch their breaths. Smart Guy jumped on a tombstone. "Well you guys certainly messed things up!" Wheezy looked at him, then at Greasy. "Is he really---" "Yup, that's boss." "But how did he---" "I'll explain it." Smart Guy said. "When Valiant was making you guys die from laughing, I remembered saying that nose doesn't rhyme with walls. Then Valiant kicked me in the groin, sending me flying into the Dip. How did I survived, I'll never know, but I remember floating through darkness until a bright red light glowed out from the darkness. Then the three witches stepped out, and chanted a spell." "What was the spell?" Psycho asked. "I don't really remember it all," Smart Guy said. "I think it went, 'Twist the body, make him black. Trim off all his baby fat. Black as night, amber eyes, make him live for all his life!' Suddenly, I felt my bones cracking and stretching; and it didn't felt good, let me tell you that! Then I felt myself shrinking and shrinking until I was like tiny. When I opened my mouth to shout, all it came out was a 'meow'. Then I found myself in the museum. I looked through every book in the museum about changing myself back, but I couldn't find anything. I read the legend about the witches and the candle, so I decided, 'What the heck, I should just protect the stinking candle so no boneheaded idiot will light it!' But a boneheaded idiot did." He turned his head toward Greasy, squinting his eyes. Greasy shrugged. "I thought it was a bunch of phooey. But now---" "Three maniac witches are after us!" Wheezy snapped. "Great job Grease!" "Duh...what do we do now?" Stupid asked. "The witches can only live for tonight." Smart Guy said. "If the sun rises, then they will die forever." "So we wait until the sun rises." Wheezy said. "And when it rises..." "Heeheeheee!" Psycho giggled. "Those witches will say bye-bye!" The three weasels looked at him, and they all burst out laughing. Even Smart Guy purred with delight. It was a moment's relief in that dark Halloween night.
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Post by julayla on Oct 24, 2006 21:02:10 GMT -5
Interesting that Smarty is now under the same spell that Binx was in Hocus Pocus. Good work on this. I can't wait for more.
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Post by Cobrawolf on Oct 27, 2006 19:55:41 GMT -5
I like it. it is funny as The 13th Century and gets you Laughing like w Witch. All in All, Great Stroy
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 27, 2006 21:25:53 GMT -5
Dang! Halloween is almost here and I'm still halfway finished! I gotta hurry.
Chapter 5
The wildcat witches hid behind the bushes as they watched the firemen drive away. "Enon," Keket whispered. "What are those?" "Those are witch hunters!" Enon hissed. "Did you saw their black clothing and axes?" Ophel watched as a spider climbed on her paw. "What a pretty spider," She purred, before gobbling it up. Enon stood up. "Sisters! We must find my book before sunrise! Once I get my claws on those pathetic weasels, they shall be sorry to cross the path of me!" "Sister," Keket said calmly. "I suggest you must calm down." "I AM CALM!!!" Enon screeched. "You must not fool with yourself." Keket said. "Come, we must do a calming circle." The sisters stood in a circle and breathed in.
Smart Guy led the four weasels down into a deep dank tunnel. "This is gross!" Wheezy groaned, holding his nose from the wifting smell. "I can't bweeth!" Stupid moaned while holding his nose. "Don't worry," Smart Guy said. "I've hunted mice down here for months." The weasels stopped and looked at each other. "He eats mice?" Psycho squeaked.
The sisters were still breathing in and out, chanting soothing chants while they thought of calming thoughts. Suddenly, there was a blow from a horn and flashing lights. The sisters shrieked and jumped back. A huge bus stopped and the doors opened. The pink panther took off his bus driving hat and stared at the witches. Enon cleared her throat. "Sir, will you dearly be so kind to give us...a ride on your...thing." The pink panther narrowed his eyes and made a thumbs up motion to the back. The witches grinned at each other and got in.
"How long is this going to go on!" Greasy groaned as they made their way through thick slimy water. Smart Guy stopped and looked up. "The opening is right above us." Psycho climbed up the ladder and lifted the man hole covering up. Smart Guy leaped on his shoulder and climbed out. Psycho looked to the left and saw the bus coming towards them. "Boss!" Psycho yelped. "Get back!" Smart Guy gave him a weird look, then looked up. His eyes widened at the sight of the glowing bus lights. Psycho fell back into the water as the bus drove over. There was a sickening squishing sound. The weasels froze with horror. "BOSS!!" Scrambling out of the man hole, they stared at the black cat that was flattened by the bus tires. Stupid began to cry. "We lost him again!" "This is my fault!" Psycho cried, covering his face. Wheezy stood there, staring at Smart Guy. He then took two cigarettes and lit them. Suddenly, there was an inhale noise. The weasels watched as Smart Guy puffed up to a normal cat size and opened his eyes. He sat up and shook himself. "Dang, I hate it when that happens!" "Boss!" Psycho said happily. "You're okay!" "Hey, just because I'm a cat doesn't mean my Toon powers are gone." Smart Guy said, flicking his tail. "Now come on. We gotta get back home or else the witches will find us."
In the bus, Keket suddenly jumped up. "STOP!!!!" The pink panther pushed on the breaks. "What is it?" Enon hissed. Keket sniffed the air. "I smell weasels!"
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Oct 27, 2006 22:45:29 GMT -5
Ooooh. Wonder what sort of weasels she smells. I think the witches are funny. ^_^ Good job.
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 28, 2006 20:20:33 GMT -5
All right, I'm really speeding up right now, so I can get this finished in time for Halloween. Here's the next chapter.
Chapter 6
The wildcats jumped out of the bus quickly, but were surrounded by children in costumes. Some of the children were weasels in costumes, but the wildcats didn't know that. "Sisters!" Keket said with panic. "I smell weasels, but I can't see them!" Webigail, from Ducktales, dressed as an angel, went up to the witches and curtsied. "Bless you!" The wildcat witches screamed as if in pain, since they had made a deal with the devil a long time. "I don't know what happened!" Keket said. "Maybe...I lost my sense!" She began to sob. Ophel started to comfort Keket. Enon squinted her eyes at the children. Something was wrong. Very wrong. Something then dawned on her. "Sisters! These are only costumes!" She grabbed a child and ripped the mask off. A Toon pup stared at them. "Get away freakos!" "A child!" Ophel said, smiling. Keket smiled. "Let me hold---" She yowled with pain when the pup swung his Halloween bag and smacked her on the side. He raced off. "Freaks!" "Keket!" Enon said. "Search for the weasels that stole my book!" The witches raced off.
The weasels went down the alleyway, hiding behind trash cans, scanning the sky for witches. "Looks like we'll be safe." Smart Guy murmured. "But how are we going to get rid of those witches?" Psycho asked. Wheezy took a cigarette and lit it. He stared at the flame and thought for a moment. The high school had a huge oven that was used to harden clay stuff. If the witches get in there, then it'll be bye-bye witches. He grinned. "I think...I have an idea."
Keket led her sisters to a High School. "What is it?" Ophel asked. "It's a dungeon." Enon said. "A dungeon for children. Are you sure this is where the weasels are?" "My senses never fail me." Keket said. "I am sure this is where they are." The witches went into the high school where a high creepy voice came out from the intercom. "Welcome goulies and gals, to the haunted highschool. Heeheeheeheehee!" A black cat came out from the hallway. It stared at the witches and hissed. "After him!" Enon said. "It's the weasel we turned into a cat!" The black cat raced off with the witches following. The cat raced into the creamery class and hid behind a statue. The witches raced into the oven to find nothing. Suddenly, the door slammed shut. Wheezy turned the dial on the heat. "Fry up, witches!" Wheezy shouted. The weasels raced out with the wildcats screaming behind them. Outside, the weasels began to cheer and do cartwheels and throw fallen leaves in the air. Greasy raced over to Smart Guy, who was standing on a branch. "We did it boss! We did it!" "Yeah, guess we did." Smart Guy said. "Guess I better go now." "Go where?" "I don't know. Maybe go explore the alleyways and then back at the museum. Heck, I don't even have a home to go to now since I'm...ya' know, a cat." "You can still be with us." Greasy said. "You can be our new pet." "Come on Boss!" Stupid said. "Lets go home!" Smart Guy purred. What a beautiful word. Home.
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