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Post by Veggirl on Aug 10, 2006 0:50:17 GMT -5
I'll be posting another chapter soon, so hang on.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Aug 10, 2006 0:59:43 GMT -5
To what? Bada-chhh.
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 10, 2006 1:03:53 GMT -5
Heh, okay next chapter.
Chapter 13
In the ship, the box opened to reveal the floating pods. "CONTAINER READY. SELECT VERMIN." Hamsterviel rubbed his paws with glee. "So many nasty vermin! I shall wreck mayhem on this stinky galatic empire!" Psycho then jumped down, grabbed the box and raced off. "Heeheeheehee! Thank's for the gift! Bye-bye!" "WHAT?!" Hamsterviel shouted. He began to jump up and down with rage. "GET THE VERMIN BACK! GET THEM BACK!!!" Megavolt leaped in front of Psycho. "Going somewhere?" Psycho growled and threw the box between Megavolt's legs. Greasy grabbed the box and raced past Megavolt. Stupid was looking at the controls, searching for something useful. He grinned. "Duh...here it is! The window!" He pushed the button, causing the window to open. "THE WINDOW'S OPEN!" Megavolt yelped. Greasy threw the box over to Wheezy who threw it to Smart Guy. Smart Guy raced to the window and prepared to throw. "Go and be free, cousins!" He threw. Megavolt leaped and grabbed onto the box. The box opened and out came a bunch of pods.
Back at Toontown, Jumbaa grinned as pods rained down into Toontown. "Ahh, Toon Patrol weasels had freed the vermin. It's very good!" "Very good?!" Pleakley yelped. "It's not very good! It's very bad! 454 pods activated by water raining down on a place where there are water squirters, squirting flowers, pools and birdbaths?!!!" "Actually, it's only 452." Jumbaa said. "Whatever!" Pleakley said. A pod landed on a tree where underneath it was a birdbath filled with water. Another pod landed on rocks in the ocean as waves lapped at the rock. Another pod landed on some sugar cubes while two British Toons were drinking tea. Another pod landed on a towel near a "pool. The Grand Council woman sighed. "I'm afraid Pleakley is right. This is indeed bad."
Back on the spaceship, the weasels were thrown in seperate cells. "This should keep you five confined!" Gantu said. "Untill Hamsterviel reveals what is planned for you." He walked off. "Well, it could have been worse." Wheezy said. "And we also saved the vermin." Smart Guy groaned. "Yeah, and now Skyler isn't gonna have a dad anymore. Just like me." "Well, remember what Lilo said?" Greasy said. Psycho nodded. "Family means nobody gets left behind." "Or forgotten." Stupid added.
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Post by julayla on Aug 10, 2006 1:12:22 GMT -5
Yay! They're free from Hammy's clutches! *hearing Hamsterviel shouting about his name* Anyway, keep up the good work.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Aug 10, 2006 1:14:59 GMT -5
Aww, poor Smart Guy. Hope they get out of there in one piece.
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 11, 2006 23:29:07 GMT -5
Next chapter up!
Chapter 14
A few hours later, the weasels were led in front of Hamsterviel. He had a smug grin on his face. "You think you're so---" He paused. "Phonebook! Phonebook!" "Phonebook." Quackejack said, saluting. "Yessir." He went off. Hamsterviel waited and looked at the weasels. "One second." Quackerjack came back with fifteen phonebooks. Hamsterviel climbed up and stood in front of Smart Guy. "You think you are so smart, you weasel with the ridiculous pink clothing! You thought you were smarter than Dr. Jacque Von Hamsterviel! But you only suceeded on bringing your small gang to me! I shall now clone you all and make my own personal army!" The weasels were led away as Hamsterviel's laughter rang through the halls, then followed by a cough and gagging noise. "Hairball!"
The weasels found themselves on metal tables with their wrists and ankles locked in metal cuffs. Psycho remembered these metal tables when he was just a young weasel when scientists experimented on him. He struggled to get away, but it was no use. "Struggle all you want!" Hamsterviel said. "These are very strong cuffs you have. Now my little weasels, are you ready for the cloning process?" Greasy laughed. "Hah! Do you worst you big gerbil!" "HAMSTER!!" Hamsterviel shouted. "And don't worry I shall do my worst to your crazy friend there. I shall cut him, IN HALF!!" A lazer came out from a gun-like thing and slowly began making it's way towards Psycho. Psycho was in wild terror now, struggling and yelping with fear. Hamsterviel grinned wickedly. "The suspense is killing me!" Suddenly, a young weasel leaped on the lazer, grabbed a knife and opened it up. Fiddling around with wires and buttons, the lazer stopped. "What's happening?!" Hamsterviel shouted. Suddenly, he found himself against the wall with knives around him. Ferahgo leaped in front of him, drew out a skinning knife and held it under Hamsterviel's nose. "Make one move, gerbil, or I'll skin you alive!" Hamsterviel gulped. Klitch went to the controls and pushed a button. The weasels were released from the metal tables. "Thanks Klitch!" Greasy said. "Now lets get that gerbil on one of these tables and lets see how he likes it!" Hamsterviel gulped as the weasels went towards him, eyes gleaming with wicked delight.
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Post by julayla on Aug 11, 2006 23:45:50 GMT -5
Neat-O! Great chapter! Klitch and his dad helped them escape! Yay! Keep going!
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 11, 2006 23:46:24 GMT -5
Thanx. Sorry if I'm sounding pushy, but how are your fanfics going along?
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Post by julayla on Aug 12, 2006 0:38:43 GMT -5
I'm still working on the next chapter for Search for Parents...hopefully, I'll get it up soon...hopefully.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Aug 12, 2006 1:03:38 GMT -5
Aw, poor Psycho. Neat chapter, heheh Phonebook! Like that part. ^_^
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 12, 2006 2:16:15 GMT -5
Um, okay, I'll try. But I really don't know any of the Fearsome Five's super powers.
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 14, 2006 1:37:32 GMT -5
Okay, here's the next chapter. Spikey, I hope I didn't do anything wrong!
Chapter 15
"What do you mean the weasels are gone with Dr. Hamsterviel?!" Negaduck shouted at his four comrades. Bushroot shrugged. "They just disappeared! We searched everywhere but they're gone!" "Maybe they escaped from a secret tunnel or something." Quackerjack suggested. A new voice came in. "Hah, you just wish!" The Toon Patrol plus Klitch and Ferahgo stood near the doorway, weapons drawn out. "Give it up, Negaduck!" Smart Guy said. "You're outnumbered!" Negaduck laughed. "I don't think so. Attack!" "Oh boy!" Quackerjack laughed. "It's playtime!" The weasels then found themselves in a battle between the Fearsome Five. "Attack my vine minions, attack!" Bushroot shouted. Vines came out from the wall and went toward Greasy. Greasy took out his switchblade and slashed at the vines. "Ha! No vine can escape me!" Greasy laughed. "Because I am---" Something then bit his foot. "YEOW!" Greasy yelped, jumping up. Toy teeth clamped to his foot. "Quackerjack!" Greasy growled. "No," Quackerjack said, grinning. "I'm Quackerjack!" Greasy growled and leaped for Quackerjack, but a pie slammed into his face. Quackerjack laughed. Megavolt tried to sneak away from the fighting, but Psycho jumped in front of him, baring his fangs. "Going somewhere, Sparky?" "Don't you dare call me Sparky!" Megavolt snapped. "Well I'll start calling you dead meat after I fight you!" Psycho growled. Megavolt grinned. "Well good luck fighting!" He laughed and pointed at Psycho. An electric spark shot out from his pointer finger and zapped Psycho. Psycho yelped and went flying, crashing into the wall. Stupid lunged at the Liquidator but came out from the other side of him, soaking wet. Stupid sat up on the floor, coughing. He turned to Liquadator and shook a fist. "Duh...just you wait, I'm gonna get a bright light and make you evaporate!" "You and what navy?" Liquidator retorted. He then turned into a huge wave and knocked into Stupid, making Stupid tumble through the water. Wheezy advanced on Bushroot, growling. "I warn ya' Bushy! I have a machine gun and I'm not afraid to use it!" "Ooh, I'm shaking like a leaf!" Bushroot said sarcastically. Wheezy leaped, but vines shot out and grabbed him. Wheezy growled and struggled to get out. "Look out!" Psycho yelled. "Negaduck has his chainsaw!" Smart Guy turned and indeed, Negaduck had his roaring chainsaw out. "No escape this time, Toon Patrol!" Negaduck laughed. Smart Guy charged at him with his pistol out. Negaduck leaped out of the way and swung with his chainsaw. Smart Guy leaped up and nearly avoided a buzzsaw. Negaduck stuck out his foot, tripping Smart Guy. Smart Guy turned his head and frowned as Negaduck advanced on him. "No where to run now, huh Smarty? Suddenly, daggers flashed out of nowhere, pinning Negaduck to the wall. "What the?!" Negaduck said in rage. Smart Guy saw Klitch and Ferahgo standing in front of the other members of the Fearsome Five, also pinned up. "We got you, so don't move!" Klitch growled. Negaduck glared at them and got out a small ball. "This isn't over yet, weasels!" He snapped. "Me and the gang we'll get your vermin cousins sooner or later!" He threw the ball down to the floor and smoke came out. The weasels coughed and gagged as the Fearsome Five disappeared. "They're gone." Psycho said, disappointed. Wheezy shrugged. "Who cares. We'll get them another day. We still have one big dummy to take care of."
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Post by julayla on Aug 14, 2006 11:34:20 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Too bad the Fearsome 5 escaped, but they'll catch them another day. Keep it up!
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 14, 2006 21:04:48 GMT -5
All right, I got the next chapter up. The next chapter will probably be the last.
Chapter 16
Gantu was patrolling the corridors of the ship when Psycho suddenly raced in front of him. "How did you get out?!" Gantu shouted. Psycho raced down the hallway with Gantu following. Turning the corner, Gantu saw his ship's door closing. "You're not taking my ship!" Gantu shouted. Forcing his way in, he burst into the ship. The captain's door turned around, revealing 625. "Hey Gantu," He said. "Where's some baloney? I got nothing here but cheese!" "Where are they?!" Gantu snapped. "Who?" "The Toon Patrol and the two weasels!" "I dunno. Not in here." The door suddenly slammed shut. Gantu turned and saw the weasels waving at him through a window. "Bye bye!" Psycho said. "Have a nice trip!" Greasy said. Smart Guy looked at Klitch. "Hit it, Klitch!" Klitch went over to the controls in the door, grabbed a dagger and jammed it in. The ship was released and floated toward earth. "Duh...won't he turn and come back?" Stupid asked. Wheezy grinned. "Nah, Klitch disabled the navigation before Gantu entered."
Meanwhile, Gantu pushed the buttons desperately, but to no avail. "The navigation is disabled!" "WARNING." The computer voice said. "NAVIGATION DISABLED." In another room, sparks came out from the walls and burned the cheese sandwich to a crisp. 625 picked it up. "Aah, grilled cheese!" The ship went flying through the atmosphere and crashed near a waterfall. Gantu got out with 625 following. "Well, looks like we won't be going anywhere." 625 said. "Looks like we're going to be working together, eh? Sandwich?" "No, I don't want a sandwich!" Gantu said. "Um, unless you have egg salad." "Nope. Only cheese." 625 said. "Have you not been paying attention?!"
Meanwhile back in Hamsterviel's ship, the weasels laughed out loud and high-fived each other. "C'mon boys!" Smart Guy said. "Lets turn this heap of junk around and start heading for home!"
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Aug 14, 2006 22:29:30 GMT -5
Cool Chap, Veggirl. ^_^
I'm starting to like the Fearsome Five now (watching the episode where their first introduced). Go Fearsome Five! ;D
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