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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 15, 2008 17:59:37 GMT -5
I loved this!
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Feb 16, 2008 6:49:25 GMT -5
Tragic-comical, it would be a bestseller.
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Mar 2, 2008 6:51:17 GMT -5
oh yes it would!Flame u rock( does a little weasel dance of happiness with Biscuit)
we made up a dance called the weasel wave.
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Mar 2, 2008 8:41:00 GMT -5
How funny!!!!
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Post by jebikun on Jan 25, 2009 23:16:44 GMT -5
I've been reading this!! Really good...
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Miss Moonstruck
Trainee
I could be brown, I could be blue, I could be violet sky, I could be hurtful, I could be purple...
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Post by Miss Moonstruck on Mar 17, 2009 0:22:18 GMT -5
I really like this fanfiction, it's written very well. I like everyone's story, and it all really fits well together at the end. You're a pretty good writer  The only thing is maybe a few grammatical errors and on some of the Spanish words you left the 'h' out. Like horchata. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. |
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Aug 21, 2009 17:28:55 GMT -5
Wow! Thanks everyone! Ya I can understand the gramatical errors because I wrote this three years ago and back then I was pretty stupid. You guys are all so nice. Thanks for reading it!  |
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 22, 2009 6:58:44 GMT -5
I liked it. I also really liked how you saw Wheezy and Psycho as two people who really disliked the other, but still made them "friends" in some way at the end.
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Dec 15, 2009 14:03:44 GMT -5
I still love it! I see the next Shakespare!
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Post by The Forgoten One on Jul 21, 2010 22:16:21 GMT -5
Nicely done
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 29, 2010 17:09:10 GMT -5
I still love it! I see the next Shakespare! Why thank you! Ha ha! ;D |
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Post by Fisi on Jul 29, 2010 20:50:29 GMT -5
Omg, this is so nice. ^_^
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Post by thekeygirl666 on Apr 16, 2011 10:56:42 GMT -5
I love this! I can totally imagine that happening! You have a very imaginative, flowing style that's easy to follow! Keep it up!
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Post by cutieweasel on Apr 16, 2011 13:55:46 GMT -5
I love your story keep up the good work ^^
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Post by imaginarytoon1 on Feb 9, 2014 0:02:46 GMT -5
This was the first story that I've read when I came across this website. I really enjoyed it! |
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The only thing is maybe a few grammatical errors and on some of the Spanish words you left the 'h' out. Like horchata. Other than that, I really enjoyed it.
