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Post by julayla on Jun 15, 2006 13:04:12 GMT -5
A/N: This story takes place in the 1970s and focuses mostly on the weasels, Minnie, Daisy, and my character, Sarah. I don't own anyone else. Enjoy!
Ch 1: Encounter
Voice: Stop! Thief!
A girl weasel in violet (with some white) fur and pink hair was running quickly, carrying a few books, one book in front called "Trails of Being a Doctor". She was running from the expensive book store with it as she looked around in the city of Toon Town. All that while Chief O'Hara came to the owner of the Book Store.
Owner: Sir, thank goodness. That girl...a female weasel has stolen my valuable books!
O'Hara: (sighs) Not again...why did this girl do such a crime?
Owner: I told her that these books were not for sale for any stinkin' weasel!
He then picked up the cash left behind.
Owner: She even threw this at my face.
O'Hara: (sighs) All right, I'll find the one responsible...don't worry, I'm sure that she couldn't have gone far.
He went into the police car as he sighed.
O'Hara: Sarah, it better not have been you.
The car drove off, heading to where the culprit had gone. The girl, hiding in the ally, known as Sarah, looked out and looked a bit frightened.
Sarah: (thinking) That officer's going to arrest me if I take the long way...(looks at the ally) Maybe I should take the short-cut...but the guys did say not to do it. But I have to get this back quickly!
She ran out and looked behind, making sure no one was following. She sighed as she headed down the ally.
Sarah: After all, the short-cut is a little far away from Hyena Territory, but what's the worse that can happen?
She then looked around at the other side of the ally. Making sure nothing was there. She nodded, then headed out of the ally. She gulped a little.
Sarah: (looking at the books) I know it's wrong...but they really need a good doctor, especially my cousin's friend, Wheezy.
Figures from left to right swirled around. She looked startled, trying to find them.
Sarah: Who's there?
She looked a little frightened as she continued heading downward. Just as she saw a familiar street to her, three hyenas surrounded her.
Sarah: (gasps) Hyenas!
Banzai: (smirks) Well, well, looks like a pretty appetizing weasel's stumbled onto our territory.
Shenzi: (circling around her) Perhaps she could be joining us for dinner.
Sarah: Uh...I really like to, but I have to get home and-
Banzai: (stopping her) No, stay a bit!
Ed: Bwa-ha-ha-ha-ha!
Shenzi: Ed's right, missy, you are the dinner!
They charged to her as she screamed.
Sarah: (covering her eyes) Ahhh!!
Voice: Leave her alone!
The four turned and saw a familiar female mouse and duck.
Banzai: (sarcastically) Great...Minnie Mouse and Daisy Duck!
Minnie: Shame on you! Leave that girl alone! She's only a child!
Shenzi: (sarcastically) Oh sure, we'll leave her alone...(tugging her) After we finish eating her!
Daisy: Okay, that's it!
Minnie: (concerned) Oh, Daisy...
The duck then fought the three hyenas as Minnie grabbed Sarah's hand and headed to the light. The duck and hyenas glared as the three tried pouncing all at once, only to bonk their heads into one another and be knocked unconscious.
Daisy: (smirks) Serves you right!
The duck then joined the girls as they neared the house.
Minnie: Miss Weasel? Are you all right?
Sarah: (nods) Yeah...thanks for helping me...but I thought you and Daisy hated us weasels.
Daisy: Just because everyone else places you weasels as well as hyenas evil, doesn't mean that Minnie and I believe it.
Sarah: (smiles) Oh, well...thanks.
She opened the door as she was about to head inside.
Sarah: By the way, my name is Sarah. Let's meet again sometime.
She headed inside, forgetting to close the door. As the door was slowly being closed, Minnie and Daisy looked shocked as Sarah ran into the arms of a familiar green zoot-suited weasel. He looked up after hugging and was shocked, seeing both of them.
Both: Greasy!?
The door was closed as the two quickly left.
Daisy: Minnie, I thought that guy was dead!
Minnie: Me too, Daisy. Maybe we can find out in the records back in the Toon Town vault!
She nodded as the girls disappeared from the area known as "Weasel Territory".
A/N: Whew! That was a long write. So...what do you guys think, huh?
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jun 15, 2006 19:40:42 GMT -5
Ooooh! Love it! I don't think words could describe how great it is! ;D Keep up the good work!
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Post by Veggirl on Jun 15, 2006 20:18:33 GMT -5
This is one of the most finest piece of fanfic I have ever read! Good to know that you are writing about the hard descriminations hyenas and weasels have to face. Anyway, keep it up! ;D
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Post by julayla on Jun 16, 2006 0:23:07 GMT -5
Ch 2: Seeing Weasels
Later, with Minnie and Daisy, near a water fountain, the two girls looked seriously at the Toon Sun shining down onto the city.
Minnie: Now I really am beginning to worry.
Daisy: About what?
Minnie: (sighs) That girl weasel is too nice to be evil, yet she's picked on because she's a weasel.
Daisy: Yeah...ever since that stupid Roger Rabbit incident we've heard about, they and those hyenas have all been marked evil.
Minnie: It just isn't right. (stands up) We have to do something, even if we can't do it without Mickey's help.
Daisy: Well we can't go to the Cornerstone of Light, it can't help change all of them.
Minnie: I wasn't planning on going there, Daisy...we're going back to the Weasel Territory tonight!
That night, Minnie and Daisy, hiding in the shadows, looked from above the rooftops as they saw a few figures entering the huge building.
Daisy: (quietly) Why are they going to Honeydew Lane's abandoned warehouse for?
Minnie: (quietly) I'm not sure...
The two snuck around to the area. When they were down near the garbage area, they saw the five figures with Sarah, closing the door, heading for the lightswitch.
Sarah: Here, let me get the light for you, guys.
The light was turned on as the two Toons outside looked shocked.
Both: (quietly) The Toon Patrol weasels!?
Daisy: (quietly) Minnie, I was surprised that Greasy was alive...but all five of them are still alive as well?
Minnie: (shaking her head/quietly) I don't know how they came back...I heard they were dead.
The two continued looking as Sarah looked seriously at her weasel friends and relative.
Sarah: (thinking) I never got a chance to thank Minnie and Daisy for helping me bring them back...though I don't think they'll remember it.*
*A/N: Read "WFRR 1 1/2: Toon of Their Lives" for more details.
Wise Guy: All right, boys, what's the agenda for today?
Wheezy: (coughing) Same as always...hide from that O'Hara.
Stupid: Duh, how long 'til we get to do our jobs again?
He was whacked by the pink cladded leader.
Greasy: Man, I'm tired of hiding out...why can't we just go out and do our bidding?
Sarah: You know why, Alex. It's because everyone outside of Weasel & Hyena Territory thinks you're all dead.
Psycho: (giggles) He-he-he! She has a point, guys.
Daisy: (to Minnie) These guys are hiding?
Minnie: Oh, what's the worse that can happen?
The two then tripped on the garbage cans, causing them to fall onto the trash cans. The two struggled as the weasels heard a noise from outside.
Daisy: Uh...did they hear us?
Then, they saw the six weasels, glancing at the two.
Minnie: (narrows) Does that answer your question?
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jun 16, 2006 0:43:08 GMT -5
HE,HE! I can imagine Minnie and Daisy in stealth suits, and black marking under their eyes, although I don't think they were dressed like that. Heh, heh. Great Chapter anyways! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by julayla on Jun 16, 2006 23:47:23 GMT -5
Ch 3: A Little Misunderstanding
Meanwhile, somewhere in Toon Town, near Minnie's house, Mickey looked at the construction of one of the new buildings from a bit far away.
Mickey: It'll be swell once the place is done!
He knocked on the door, then waited. He grew a little impatient and was about to bang the door, but then saw a note attached to it.
Mickey: (reading) "Gone off with Daisy to Weasel Territory to find out the truth. Be back soon. Minnie." (shocked) Oh no! Minnie! She and Daisy are in danger! I better get Donald and Goofy!
He then ran off as he passed by his rival, Mortimer.
Mortimer: Geez, Mick, where you off to?
Mickey: Sorry, I can't talk, I gotta rescue Minnie from those weasels!
He quickly left as Mortimer smirked to himself.
Mortimer: Minnie's in danger, eh? Looks like I'll be the one to rescue her, then she'll have to love me!
Meanwhile, back at the warehouse, Minnie and Daisy, now inside and tied up, looked fearfully at the five male weasels that glared at them.
Wise Guy: You people think you're better than us! Guess what? Some of us want to have better lives, and it was bad enough that the five of us gave every weasel a bad name, but oh no, you guys had to go and say that weasels and hyenas are enemies to all Toons!
Minnie: But we weren't the ones who said that! Maleficent was the one who spoke to us before Mickey and I found out she was really evil.
Stupid: Duh, should we believe her?
Greasy: (cracking his knuckles) I would believe they would be needing a bit of interogation first before we would be trusting these senorita dames.
He was slapped by his cousin, who glared at him.
Sarah: Ale..Greasy, no! I think there's a reason why they're here.
Daisy: (nods) It's because we were kinda worried about you, Sarah.
Minnie: Daisy!
She moved the five away from the two Toon girls as she untied them.
Sarah: Oh, I was okay...why did you think I was in trouble?
Minnie: For one thing, we thought you lived in a haunted house. And second, I thought that green suited weasel was going to hurt you.
Greasy: Hey, I don't hurt family! She's my cousin for crying out loud!
Daisy: (glares) Oh really!
Minnie: Now Daisy, I'm sure she has a reason for hanging around with these people.
Sarah: (sighs) It's a misunderstanding, really.
The girls, now freed, looked at all five weasels.
Daisy: The others aren't your cousins, are they?
Sarah: No...the leader wearing pink though is my ex-boyfriend.
Wise Guy: (slaps his forehead) Don't remind me.
Minnie: I hope you didn't choose the one in the beeny as your new boyfriend.
Sarah: (shaking her head) No, he's not....Psycho is.
Psycho: He-he-he! Truth be told!
Minnie: Oh, if only Mickey were here, then he would help straighten this all out.
Little did they knew was that Mickey, Donald, and Goofy were watching and overhearing everything secretly.
Donald: I say we take care of those bozos!
Goofy: Gawrsh, that sounds dangerous.
Mickey: Not yet, Donald, we'll wait 'til Minnie and Daisy are safe.
He nodded as the trio continued watching and overhearing what they have to say.
Wheezy: (hacks) So tell me, is that stupid Pete still in the police business?
Minnie: Of course not. He was fired for trying to frame Mickey. (to Sarah) Now please tell me, in a calm manner...how did your friends survive and cause all this trouble with Roger Rabbit?
She explained everything, being careful not to involve Minnie or Daisy, to the two girls as they listened while the weasels sighed and groaned.
Psycho: (thinking) I know we're gonna be put to death, I know it!
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Post by Veggirl on Jun 18, 2006 0:43:16 GMT -5
Well, well, looks like truths will be revealed. Keep it up!
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Post by julayla on Jun 20, 2006 0:04:53 GMT -5
Ch 4: The Confession and Creator of the Dip?
She sighed and looked at the seven with her.
Sarah: Everyone...you must know something about the Dip.
Daisy: What!? You created the Dip?! A sweet lady weasel toon like you? No way!
Sarah: (sniffs) It is true though! You're looking at the creator of the Dip...I created the Dip.
Wise Guy: (shocked) You did!? I thought the judge came up with it!
Sarah: (shakes her head) He stole the plans and claimed he made it...if I never made that thing had I known that it was going to destroy the place I cared for...(cries) I...I don't know what to do!
Minnie: Oh my...
Sarah: I was only creating the Dip so I can get rid of the excessive stuff that we didn't want in Toon Town...to make the city a better place...
Daisy: Hmm...interesting...go on.
Donald, outside, glared as he spoke.
Donald: So she's the one responsible! When I get my hands on her, I'll-
Mickey: (keeps ahold of him) Now, now, Donald! Wait 'til she finishes.
Goofy: But who would've thought such a sweet girl like her would do something like this.
Back inside, the girls looked seriously as the female mouse helped her up.
Minnie: You also said something about knowing what really happened.
Sarah: Well...it's kinda fuzzy at some parts, but I remember it so clearly...three time travelers came from the future...
The leader backed away slowly as he looked seriously at what she said.
Sarah: I was with Marvin Acme the moment he died...my brother...(looks down) he was going to kill me, but Marvin pushed me out of the way, taking the death instead from a safe on his head.
Daisy: I see...(looks seriously) But you have to remember, Toons are invulnerable to real objects as well as Toon objects.
Sarah: I know...but I was shot by one of Domoni...Judge Doom's Dip bullets with a real gun. The girls and dog tried to save the owner of Acme, but it was too late...then I ran for it...I went back and told Greasy about what happened. The next day, everything was becoming all right, but then a lady told me something about Millenium Items...whatever they were. And that night, as I was waiting for my cousin to show up for dinner, I was almost shot at again, but thanks to the human girl, I wasn't killed.
She looked down in tears as she spoke more sadly.
Sarah: Then, the Toons gathered around later that night, hearing about what happened and all that was left was Doom's human mask. I then ran and checked for any sign of my cousin or friends, which you see here.
Psycho also backed away, looking a bit fearful as she continued.
Sarah: But when I got there, they were gone...I cried and cried...I wanted to join them badly...nervously, I tried with the razor with the leftover Dip, the most evil thing I have wrongfully created, and was about to join them...but then, Dai...a toon duck stopped me.
Daisy: (concerned) Really? Go on.
Sarah: Then, these creatures appeared all around, taking everyone's hearts and absorbing it into them. Then, something strange happened as a door out of nowhere showed up and I was knocked out. The next thing I knew, I awoke three days later, in a beautiful palace with the duck and mouse girl. They told me I was some sort of princess or something...anyway, they told me I could help restore the worlds, since I had some sort of power.
Minnie: Power?
Sarah: (nods) But my real power finally came when two lights shone and my world was restored, with everything and everyone back to normal without any memory of any of those creatures...and what I was glad was that I found my cousin and friends alive as well...I really was special...so after that and saying goodbye to Minn...the mouse and duck, I reunited with them...never telling them about their deaths...until now....and that's exactly what happened.
The weasels, minus Psycho, all looked shocked about what she said as Greasy spoke.
Greasy: We...died!? How? How was that-
And one by one, the four weasels began to remember how each of them died.
Wheezy: (coughs) Oh god...we really did die of laughter!
Psycho: Um...
They noticed Psycho rolling his eyes, not looking at his allies.
Wise Guy: (glares) You knew about this...you knew and never told us, didn't you?
Psycho: Well, uh, you see, boss-
Voice: Minnie! Get away from those jerk of weasels!
They turned (as of the three outside) and saw Mortimer with Pete and Magica DeSpell.
Minnie: Mortimer Mouse, what are you and those two doing here?
Magica: Mouse has promised me Scrooge's dime if I could help rid of your pathetic weasel problem!
Daisy: What are you talking about?
Pete: (to Mortimer) They're not buying it.
Mortimer: Well, I say it's time we show 'em not to mess with us!
The three charged as Mickey, Donald, and Goofy all broke out through the window and stood between them.
Mickey: Not so fast, Mortimer! These weasels haven't done anything wrong!
Mortimer: You want to rough it up, eh? Fine, I can always settle this once and for all!
The trio glared as the fight began.
Minnie: Be careful, Mickey.
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Post by Veggirl on Jun 21, 2006 3:04:31 GMT -5
Ooh, that jerk Mortimer! *shakes fist* Anyway julayla, keep up the good work!
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Post by julayla on Jul 1, 2006 0:44:02 GMT -5
A/N: Sorry for taking so long...anyway, enjoy the chapter.
Ch 5: Battle
The two mice began to battle it out as they desperately fought each other. The two brought out their swords and clashed them together.
Mickey: Why are you doing this, Mortimer?
Mortimer: I am not letting someone like you get on Minnie's side again!
Minnie: (glares) Mortimer!
Goofy, noticing the nearest weapon looking like a shield, picked it up and fought as well, trying to block Pete from going near his friends.
Pete: (rolls eyes) How many times do we have to do this, Goof?
Goofy: Minnie and Daisy are my friends, as of Mickey and Donald! So you're not laying your hands on them.
Magica: Maybe not him, (summons lightning) but I will!
The thunder almost struck them, but they quickly dodged the hideous spell Magica summoned.
Pete: (jumps to them) You weasels are mine! That reward will surely belong to me!
He was then kicked by a familiar insane-looking weasel.
Psycho: (angrily) Don't you dare lay a finger on Sarah!
He was tossed by Psycho toward the wall.
Pete: (struggles) You're no better than Mickey and his stupid pals!
Donald: Who are you calling stupid!
The duck charged, not knowing Magica was using her thunder spell again.
Sarah: (runs to him) Look out!
She managed to bring Donald out of the way, but was caught onto it.
Sarah: Ahhhh!!!
Weasels: Sarah!!!
She fell on the floor, looking like she was starting turning darker.
Wise Guy: How dare they do that to my ex!
Magica: (mocking) Oh, boo-hoo! I'm so bad! (glares) Now be gentle and come peacefully unless you all want to be barbequed!
Greasy: (growls) She's my cousin, you jerk!
Stupid: Duh, and she's one of us!
Wheezy: (cracks his knuckles) You better prepare yourself for the worst then...because if you've seen Psycho this mad, this is worse.
Psycho brought out his mallet and prepared to use it.
Psycho: How dare you...(fury) HOW DARE YOU HURT SARAH LIKE THIS!!!
He rose his mallet, then slammed it hard on the floor, making a huge board lift Mortimer and Magica, flinging them to Pete, who was trying to use his gun.
Pete: No way are you gonna mess with-(notices) Huh?
The two were screaming and collided with Pete, knocking them unconscious. Psycho, meanwhile, turned and lifted up the female weasel's unconscious body.
Daisy: Donald...she just saved you...that means she can't be all bad.
Then, Chief O'Hara arrived, pointing their guns as Mickey spoke.
Mickey: Thank goodness...Pete, Mortimer, and Magica were about to kill us.
O'Hara: I agree. It would seem that once more, Mortimer's jealousy has caused him trou-(gasps) Oh my god! The weasels from the Roger Rabbit incident!
Minnie: Chief O'Hara, wait!
It was too late as the nine on the same pile were taken to the paddy wagon the officer was driving. He then slammed the door, locking them inside.
Goofy: Wait a second! Hold up!
The officer then drove away from the five.
Minnie: (sighs) Poor Sarah...
Daisy: But Minnie, those male weasels did work for Judge Doom.
Minnie: Maybe they were forced to do it...
Mickey: Still...
He picked up the books that had everything on being a doctor.
Mickey: Maybe they were just trying to find a better life...
Donald: Hmmm...
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 1, 2006 0:47:56 GMT -5
Ohh boy, Psycho's really mad. Well, who can blame him? He really loves Sarah. Keep up the good work!
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Post by julayla on Jul 1, 2006 1:15:30 GMT -5
Ch 6: Fates and Little Info
A bit later, Sarah awoke and looked around.
Sarah: What happened?
Wise Guy: Sorry to say this, but they found us.
Sarah: (gasps) Oh no...
She began to cry on Psycho's arms, who barely noticed her fur was charred. Psycho hugged back, sighing as he dusted her off to her normal fur color.
Psycho: I'm sorry, Sarah...
Sarah: I guess we shouldn't have left your families after what happened back in 1947.
Wise Guy: Look, it's not your fault...we kinda brought this on ourselves too.
Stupid: Duh, what about our families? I mean we haven't gone back to them nor seen them since uh...1947.
Greasy: At least you guys have families...I have none...other than Sarah.
Sarah: My parents were killed when I was little...I could still remember what happened...his demon eyes, his evil grin and insane laugh...
Greasy: You have to remember, your mami and papi weren't really very good parents.
Sarah: I know, but still...I still miss them...and my brother too, even though he turned to the dark side at the age of five.
Wheezy: Hmmm? What about you, Grease?
Greasy: I wish I still had me mami, but she was killed the same time...in fact, the same day Teddy Valiant was murdered.
The other weasels gasped while Sarah sighed.
Greasy: What about you guys? Do you not have any relatives to back to?
Wheezy: My parents were imprisoned for a crime they didn't commit back at age 7...never saw them again...
Stupid: Duh, and I don't know if my mom and dad are still looking for me...I lost them long ago.
They looked at the pink wearing leader.
Wise Guy: Well...after we came back to Toon Town, I told my mom not to look for me...I don't know if she or my brother are still worried, but still...
Sarah: What about you, Justin?
They all turned to Psycho, who glanced at the bars.
Psycho: I am never going back...my dad, brother, and baby sister can just forget about me...
Greasy: You're just saying that because you miss your mom.
He nodded sadly.
Psycho: She, like Sarah, was the only one to be allowed to call my real name...now whenever someone else calls me Justin...(shudders) I just want to-
Wise Guy: Whoa, Psycho...they can't hate you just because they keep calling you by your real name.
Psycho: I hate it...but I still miss mom...dad never even explained what happened...
Unknowingly to them, Chief O'Hara, listening, looked simpathetically at the six weasels. Then he sighed and slowed down, just as Mickey and his friends neared.
Minnie: Oh, thank goodness.
The officer came out and looked at them.
Mickey: Please, you have to listen to us. I know this is not something that you would do, but-
O'Hara: Mickey, I must speak to you about it...as long as you and your friends keep your mouths shut.
They looked confused as the officer opened the paddy wagon door, which contained the weasels and the unconscious villainous trio.
O'Hara: I leave you and your friends in charge of them...they shall be in your custodies.
Five: (confused) What?
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 1, 2006 1:16:09 GMT -5
Aww, nice chapter julayla. ^_^
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 1, 2006 1:22:12 GMT -5
Oh boy, looks like all the weasels are like orphans. Poor them. But still nice chapter.
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Post by julayla on Jul 1, 2006 1:37:22 GMT -5
A/N: This is it, the final chapter.
Ch 7: Trust
The officer then turned to the weasels.
O'Hara: Gentlemen...and lady, you are all now under the care of these five most trusted citizens of Toon Town.
They looked shocked about what he said.
Wise Guy: Wait a second, what's the catch?
O'Hara: Just one...unless you really trust them, you must never reveal yourselves outside your own species nor the Hyena Territory.
Sarah looked up and smiled a bit.
Sarah: You mean we don't have to serve the rest of our lives in prison?
Minnie: (smiles) Isn't that great, Sarah?
Wheezy: (coughs) At least it's better than hanging in prison.
Stupid: Oh goody! We're not going to jail!
Greasy: Caramba! What made you change your mind?
O'Hara: Let's just say sometimes, even people like me feel for people like you.
The weasels hopped out of the van as Sarah spoke.
Sarah: Oh, and about the guy who took the books while trying to pay...
O'Hara: That will be taken care of, young lady...now go home and get some rest.
Then, he closed the wagon with the other three left inside, then drove off with the females smiling to Sarah.
Minnie: Well, it looks like your identities will be safe.
Greasy: So...about you two Senoritas...
Daisy: (glares) Don't even try it!
He sighed.
Greasy: Oh well, I'll hear a yes when you simmer down.
Minnie giggled as did Sarah.
Mickey: Minnie, listen, about the weasels...
Minnie: Now don't worry, Mickey...besides, I'm sure with us around, they'll be fine...
She looked at Daisy trying to run to a smirking Greasy, who took her bowl. Sarah just giggled as the others chuckled at the scene.
Sarah: (thinking) I guess this will be a new beginning for us...
The End...for now.
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