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Post by Mellow on Jun 21, 2010 22:41:01 GMT -5
This is the story of riz's past before she met the toon patrol. It tells about how she was treated, dumped, and totured. what do ya think, my friends?
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Post by Syrup on Jun 21, 2010 23:04:18 GMT -5
Sounds interesting.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 22, 2010 8:49:44 GMT -5
cant wait to find how it began.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 22, 2010 15:07:30 GMT -5
Chpt 1 A Mistake
There i was, cleaning the floors again as usual. well. that's what i usually do in the morning when they wake me up at 4 a.m. i was to wear a white bandana over my head maidstyled, and a maid outfit that was sleevless, a skirt too small, and some tights. the whole thing was too tight, but i didn't care. my parents didn't even care at all.
"And when your done, you can cut the grass" my mom and dad said. i nodded and finished up my first chore on the list. after that i got outside and started the lawnmower up and since we have a pretty big lawn, it takes you about an hour or so to cut it until it's perfect to them. after i got done with that, i went inside.
"The lawn's finished" i said. they looked at it to see if i was right and i was. you see, my mom and dad were very rich, but they never bothered to hire a maid, or make the other's do work. my father was a useless drunk/drug addict and trust me, you could never get on his bad side. my mom was a chain smoker and a drunk. she could never be satisfied that easily. their names were Rita and Carter. i was the midde child in the family out of fourteen kids. when i was 6, my mom and dad told me something that i didn't understand until now.
"You were an accident to began with, megan" Mom said
We didn't even wanted another girl, we wanted a boy" Dad said" i felt heartbroken ever since. i needed to get out of this place,but how?! they have camera's outside and in to keep an eye on me! i guess i'll never know. i was thinking about it while i was washing all 3 of the cars that no one drives hardly. theyuse these things to showoff to other's. all i knew was i had to make a living and not by this. i had to find a job somehow.
"I'll think about it sometime over the summer" I said to myself. i then finished the cars and went inside, waiting for my next chore.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 22, 2010 15:38:11 GMT -5
Ah, poor Riz.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 22, 2010 23:15:36 GMT -5
Aw, poor Riz, indeed. Her life sucks.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 23, 2010 1:31:15 GMT -5
Chpt 2 Love At First Sight
It was finally summertime, and my family left me behind on vacation again as usual. but i didn't really care to tell you the truth. i idn't even wanna go anyway. as soon as they vanished around the turn, i ran so far away from my home and ran to the Ink & Paint Club. i heard they were hiring. this was my chance. i knocked on the door and bongo opened the slot.
"Private password?" He asked.
"Walt sent me" i said. he opened the door and i walked downstairs and went inside. i saw donald and daffy duck fighting as usual. i went to the bar and grabbed a form and filled it out. i handed it to the bartender and waited. after 5 minutes, he told me i could work as a waitress and i agreeded to it. but then i regretted it because i had to wear a sleeveless leather jacket, luckly i got to wear my dark jeans, but had to wear black high-heels. trust me, its hard to walk in high-heels while in jeans,but i got used to it. as i walked passed a table, i saw a boy my age staring at me.
'Waitress!" he called. i walked up to him.
"Yes?" i asked. he was kinda cute. he had blonde, spikey hair, green eyes, wearing a black t-shirt, and blue jeans, and sneakers. his name was jason. he asked me on a date and i agreeded. we ate at a restraunt, took a walk in the park, and he took me home. we stopped at my doorstep.
"i really enjoyed it, megan." he said. he then kissed me on my cheek. i blushed.
"I also enjoyed it, jason." i said. we said goodbye and he left. i then got dressed for bed and layed in my bed, thinking to myself.
"Is this love that i feel?! Yes it is!" I said to myself. i then drifted off to sleep. i think that this was the best summer so far.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 23, 2010 13:46:39 GMT -5
Chpt 3 Tragedy Hits Me Fast
Me and jason were dating for 2 weeks now. everything was all peaches and cream. until one night while we were swimming at the public pool. it was open until midnight. so we came in at 8:45 p.m.. while we were swimming i got out and was about to plug up the radio when someone punched me. when i looked up, i saw a girl my age with red and black hair, grey eyes, wearing a green tank top, black jacket, blue jean skirt, and red stilietto's, and man, she was angry.
"I'm guessing you're his ex, right?!" i asked.
"BINGO, Sister!" She snapped. she punched me into the fence, and threw me at a post. she then looked at the radio, and then at jason. she plugged it up, and walked over to where he was with it.
"What do you want from me, Marissa?! He asked in shock.
"Oh nothing..... Just revenge for breaking up with me!" She Yelled. she then threw the radio in the pool and it was electrocuting him. i saw what was happening.
"JASON!" I panicked. i went to unplug it,but the socket was so overloaded, it blasted me to the fence and got shocked and was knocked out.i then woke up to a bright light and voices.
"Am i dead?" i asked softly.
'No, sweety. you're ok, but the boy who was found in the pool ......... he never made it. i looked at him with the you gotta be kidding me eyes.
'You're not being serious are you, doctor?!" i asked in surprise. he shook his head. i then broke down crying in my bed. just then an officer came in and asked me questions.
"Do you recall what happened?" She asked.
"Well his ex-girlfriend attacked me, then she threw the radio in the pool while he was in the water. i tried to stop it, but the socket exploded, shocking me and sending me to the fence where i was knocked out at." i explained.
"What did she look like?" she asked.
"She had red and black hair, grey eyes, and was wearing red stelietto's, green tank top, blue jean skirt, and a black jacket. she was about the same size as me." i said.
"That's all i need to know, sweety. we'll find her." She said and she left. i left the hospital shortly after having no serious injury. i then walked home alone, crying. i walked by the pool where the police were still investigating at, i then strolled in the park to heal my pain. i then walked home and sat down on the couch, and cut the tv on, but all they had on was what happened. i cut it off and went to bed and cried myself to sleep. the next morning was the saddest. it was his funeral. i got dressed in a black dress andwas off. i met his parents and his sister hugged me to comfort me because i haven't cried so hard before.
" Why couldn't it have happened to me?!" I cried.
" We wouldn't want that, dear, and neither would your family too." his dad said. he was both right and wrong. after the funeral, i left to go to my job.
'Could my summer get any worse?!" i asked myself. i just had to find out myself.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 23, 2010 14:00:34 GMT -5
Aww. Riz doesn't have a very good life. Like I've said before. Nice chapters.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 23, 2010 14:57:07 GMT -5
Nice chap. .
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Post by Mellow on Jun 23, 2010 16:04:07 GMT -5
Chpt 4 Almost Dead.
It's been going on two monthes since jason was murdered. the good news was that they arrested marissa, but i was still blue. i decided to go to toontown. where all people who are blue go to sometimes. i decided that a little falling piano's and tweeting birds would help. when i got there, i was walking past a dark alley when suddently, i was snatched by my arm. i tried to speak, but the person or thing covered my mouth and i was knocked out by something. i woke up and i was tied up and i was on a floor, blindfolded. i heard footsteps coming my way.
"Well, well, well..... a dame, are we?" A voice said. i was then unblinded and i saw the people who got me. It was a toon weasel who was the boss, and another weasel. they were both wanted in my town. i panicked.
"What are you gonna do to me?!" I asked in fear. luckly my switchblade fell out my sleeve and i was busy cutting my ropes.
'Nothin much outta ya, doll!" The leader said. " Search her, Tom!" he reacted quickly, so i could tell that he was pervert.
"With pleasure" Tom said grinning. he came beside me and stuck his hand down my shirt and moved it around. then, there was a snapping sound and he pulled his hand out cursing in pain. that's because i learned this trick from a friend. i set a mantrap down there. pretty clever, huh?
"AAAGGGGGHHHH!!!!" He Yelled. the leader was laughing so hard, his spirit almost flew out if he didn't stop. i then cut the last thread of rope free and ran out of the building. but they followed me running. i needed help fast. i knew what to do. i stuck out my thumb.
"Yo benny!" i yelled. he came.
"You call a cab or what?! Where to?" He asked.
"Anywhere. there's weasels comin ta kill me!" i said. he then drove off, but the weasels had a car too and were hot on our tails. then i heard gun shots. i then pulled out my revolver and started shooting at them too.
"Pull the lever!" benny said. i pulled it and we jumped onto a bridge.
"Wat da?!" I heard the leader yell. he watched us drive off. i shot one last time at them, and we were off. he then dropped me off at a restraunt. i threw him a coin and he drove off. i then went to my job and earned a few dollars. that was enough to earn me a meal somewhere. after i ate, i went home and took a relaxing, ot bath to clear my stress. i stress alot when i'm alone. i can't believe i got away from two criminals today. that was exciting...oh and funny too.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 23, 2010 16:38:42 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Haha "exciting, and funny, too"
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Post by Mellow on Jun 23, 2010 17:38:02 GMT -5
Chpt 5 Well, Here We Go Again.
Summertime was coming to an end, and my family was coming back in 4 hours. i knew i had to clean up the houe or i was good as meat. so i cleaned up the entire house in 2 hours. when i got done, i went to take a nap on my bed which had only a thin, cotton blanket on it, and a tiny pillow. i gotused to it after 2 weeks. after 30 minutes of napping, i made me a snack because they hardly feed me much. so i had to stash all the snacks that i could before they noticed. i washed up my plate and stashed my snacks in my pillow. when they finally got home, i opened the door for them.
'All right, Little house maid, do our laundry, and shine our shoes!" They all said. i nodded and did up all the laundry first. while shining all the shoes. after 2 hours of that, i put everything where they needed to be. i was just about to relax when they told me to make dinner.
"What do you want to eat exacly?" i asked politely. they said pasta and i can't refuse to that. i love making dinner. that was my only fun because i got to use exotic spices and salts and sauces. it all smelled so good. after i got through, i handed the pot down on the table and they all dug in. i tried to get some, but there was only 10 noodles left. i had to make the best of it, so i only had that to eat. i could dig into my snacks later when they're all asleep. after dinner, i did the dishes as usual. then i dressed the little ones for bedtime, made myself some hot tea to ease the pain away, and fell asleep.
'Tomorrow is gonna be a long day. i can sense it." i thought to myself.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 23, 2010 17:54:01 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Yum, food.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 23, 2010 18:28:53 GMT -5
*belly rumbles* Man.
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