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Post by Syrup on Jun 18, 2010 13:41:35 GMT -5
Really? Cool! I want to see more of your story. ^_^
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jun 30, 2010 21:24:05 GMT -5
heh maybe. But sadly I am at ahorrible writers block.... it stinks horribly
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Post by Mellow on Jun 30, 2010 21:26:33 GMT -5
Hello. Great Chpt so far, my friend!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Aug 19, 2010 12:37:37 GMT -5
I've been working on the story and all the work is stored in a usb but I was grounded and have yet to get it back... hopefully I can get it back real soon!  |
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Post by Fisi on Aug 19, 2010 12:54:18 GMT -5
HUZZAH!!!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Aug 20, 2010 12:24:58 GMT -5
I'm kinda bored so I'll make this from scrap and then tune it up later....
Chap 2
The darkness was engulfing. Charlie Fleisher sat silent, tightly wrapped in his straight jacket. He had been here since he could remember. He wished for nothing more then to get out of there. Judging from his stomach complaining of being empty, lunch was soon. Charlie had brown, messy hair that almost looked like a mohawk. His teeth were long and sharp (because the white coats had put a muzzle on him), and his eyes were sky blue, but looked as if they spun wildly.... His voice had become high and he talked quickly.
They treated him as a lab rat here. It was always some new project they did to him. He blinked harshly as the door to his cell was opened. Two large toon men came in.
"Get up, moron!" One of them barked at Charlie. He did as he was asked.
"Move. Some of us have lives you know! Unlike you!" the other said, pulling him out by a chain leash. Again, he does as he is told. The halls are an unnatural white. His arms still wrapped, he walks mute down the hall to what ever they want to do to him today. They lead him through two double doors, make a left turn and three right turns until they come to a lab with a female white coat and a male.
"Put him on that table there..." The man white coat said.
Charlie was lifted and slapped on a operation table.
"Secure his arms and legs. And remove his muzzle..." The lady white coat undid his jacket and strapped him to the table with the help from the large men. Then she took off Charlie's muzzle. It felt relieving.
"You two. Please leave.. This is private." The men left.
"Now... Do you have it ready?" The man white coat asked the lady.
"Yes, sir... Question, Dr." she asked tapping a needle with a strange green substance Charlie had never seen before.
"Yes?"
"Could this test actually kill him?" The lady handed the needle to the doctor as he picked up a scalpel.
"Yes, he may very well expire on us, but does it matter? Who needs insane riffraff such as him?" The doctor chuckled as he run the scalpel along the side of one of Charlie's legs. The cut hurt but he only flinched, he had felt worse pain...
"Now for the fun part." The doctor smiled as he put the needle in the cut he had made and injected the green liquid inside. At first it was nothing then it hit like a battering ram. Charlie was shocked by the pain. It was as if someone had set fire to the inside of his leg. The agony locked his lungs making it hard for him to breathe. He kicked but the clamps were to tight.
"My god! Doctor, look! It's practically eating him!!" The lady gasped.
"Yes. This is just what we wanted!" The doctor smiled at his achievement. Charlie finally got a breathe and yelled in pain. He wanted it to stop. It hurt too much for him to deal with.
"What have we just done?" The lady backed away from the squirming weasel that was starting to froth at the mouth.
"What have we done? Why, we have found the greatest success in the world...."
"We found a way to kill a toon......"
OMG! I felt bad for that chapter! It was so sad... :"( Hang in there Psycho!
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Post by Fisi on Aug 20, 2010 16:22:27 GMT -5
OMG, PSYCHY!!!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Aug 30, 2010 10:33:49 GMT -5
And everyone panics.....
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Post by Fisi on Aug 30, 2010 10:59:40 GMT -5
JOYNESS!!!  |
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Post by Battle Droid 101 on Aug 30, 2010 11:16:04 GMT -5
OMG! Psycho! Hang in there!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Sept 7, 2010 10:27:44 GMT -5
Hey I finally got my flashdrive back but looks like my dad erased all my stuff and I had chapters ready.... So sadly I am at a standstill with writers block...I also went back to Tainted Heart and thought " OMG! This sucks!! You need to do better you hobo!!" So I'm trying to make my other fanfics better.... And whatever you say my other fanfics suck... But al least you guys read them!! ^_^
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Post by Fisi on Sept 8, 2010 14:43:06 GMT -5
Kewl.  |
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Post by ravenblack13 on Sept 15, 2010 8:02:14 GMT -5
they suck? i Thought they were awsome because the would be better than any thing that i
have written in the last two months about these crazy weasel coootes. i don't know what it is bu every time i even try to writs about them i get a major case of writer's block. so i know what you mean Usashi Koto Kito about Wrioter's block or shall i say Captain Major Sucks-A-Lot? I miss my crazy Friend. by the way raven says hi!!!!
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Post by ravenblack13 on Sept 15, 2010 8:05:09 GMT -5
sorry about my spelling yall. i guess Captain Major Sucks-A-Lot isnt the only thing that sucks
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Post by ravenblack13 on Oct 4, 2010 13:58:12 GMT -5
ahh i'm borrreeed. it sucks.
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