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Post by Mellow on May 18, 2010 21:21:16 GMT -5
Dont expect this to be long, my friends ok? i'm stiil in school right now until next week. just letting you all know.
Day 1
13-year-old Riz and her pals, the toon patrol were all outside doing what they enjoyed to do. Smart Guy was meditating, Wheezy was smoking as usual, Slimy and Flasher were playing rock, paper, scissors, Stupid and Psycho were playing baseball, while riz and greasy were talking. Greasy had his gutar outside and was trying to write a song and he still had work to do on it.
Riz: What's the name of your song?
Greasy: (smuging) Any cute girl's who tell me their name if i happen to meet them.
Riz: (sarcastickly) Wow a song named after a girl. I heard a million of those already.
Greasy:( narrowing his eyes, and getting angry) Name 20 or more.
The others looked at her, though she looked calm and smiled her mellow-like smile.
Riz: rossanna, roxxane, ashely, michelle, angie, brandy, sandy, mandy, barbra, anne, billie jean, lela, lola, loa, peggy, sue, jessica, nancy, fancy, elvira, maggie-may, jenny from the block.
The other's looked at her in amazment. she said 22 names in one sentence.
Wheezy: Burned.
Stupid: I had no idea so many girls had songs after them.
Smart Guy: Boy Riz, you sure know your stuff.
Greasy: I'm just speechless.
Riz: Hey smarty, what time is it?
As smart guy was looking at his watch, psycho threw a curvy toon ball to stupid who hit the ball so fast, so far, so high, it crashed into a window of a house. they all panicked.
Smart Guy: It's time to run!!! so they all ran inside and didn't go out for the rest of the day. Smart Guy looked at stupid and psycho glaring.
Smart Guy: You twits! we could have been in deep trouble. Who knows who saw us! he went to punch them when he saw female hands grabbed him under his arms and and lifted him up. he looked down at who it was. it was riz. she let out a growl and a glare at him.
Riz: (speaking angry, but soft) Look, we weren't seen ok?!, so give a rest, will ya ?! he undid his fist's and sat down.
Greasy: Stupid move boss, stupid move. Riz shot him an icy look and growled at him also.
Riz: Cut him some slack will ya, grease?! he's still the boss. smart guy smiled.
Smart Guy: Thank's Riz.
Riz: My pleasure.
they enjoyed the rest of the evening inside. they went to play twister. psycho and riz stayed out of it spin the wheel. after 10 minutes, the other 6 were in knots.
Smart Guy: I've heard of being a pretzel, but this is ridiculous.
Riz: It's the game that leaves you in knots. psycho laughed at her joke.
Psycho: Riz. You are so funny. That's when Greasy and Wheezy started to sing.
Both: Riz and Psycho sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-. Riz punched them in their faces. they saw stars.
Riz: Sing that again,and see what happens, got it?!
They all nodded. and she untied all 6 of them free without any trouble.
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Post by Syrup on May 18, 2010 23:54:26 GMT -5
Nice story start. Hehe, that reminds me: LOLA! Lalalala- lola!
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Post by Mellow on May 19, 2010 21:03:37 GMT -5
Day 2 part 1
the next morning, riz went in the bathroom to take a shower. Slimy had cut the sink on in the kitchen for mischief. about 5 seconds later upstairs, he heard screaming.
Riz: Good grief, who cut on a faucet again?! It's freezing.
Slimy: (snickering) Sorry.
About 5 minutes later riz got out and dried herself off. she was just about to put on her shirt, she didn't know that greasy and wheezy were about to come through the door. Wheezy had a camera in his hands. she had just picked up her shirt when the 2 weasels broke the door down. she was in her bra when she saw the camera flash multiple times.
Riz: Get Outta here, you two!!! the kept getting closer when she fell backwards into the tub and a cup of water spilled all over her upper body.
Riz: Hey! I just got threw drying off!!!!
Greasy:( Snickering) Well you look better with wet hair, anyway. She backed up out of the bathroom while wheezy was still taking pictures, when she went tumbling down the stairs. Smart Guy was down stairs with the others when he heard the comotion. the other's and him were confused until they saw someone tumbling down the stairs and land on the floor. riz who was still in her bra looked at the stairs evily and ran back up.
Smart Guy: i wonder what that was about. as soon as he said that, he heard a smashing sound and screaming. the others and him looked at the stairs and they saw greasy and wheezy running with a camera, while riz was swinging a baseball bat at them.
Greasy: Run, man, RUN!!!! Our lives depend on it!!!
Wheezy: NO Kidding, SHERLOCK!!
Riz: GRRRRR!!, GET BACK HERE WITH THAT CAMERA , YOU PICTURE PINHEADS!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU TWO WHEN I GET YOU!!!
Wheezy: i told you it was a stupid idea!!!
Greasy: Well you agreed with it! Smart guy grabbed the two by their arms and riz caught up to them. she had an evil-angry look on her face, and who could blame her. She then took a baseball bat and hit them multiple tmes on the head until they surrendered and gave her the camera. She then kicked them both between their legs, and punched them in their stomach's.
Both: What was that for?!
Riz: I just wanted to do that for the heck of my victory. Smart Guy laughed. Riz then went to dry up again and get her shirt back on. She came back down 10 minutes later. that morning was pretty gruesome for everyone
Smart Guy: How are you feeling from falling in the tub backwards and down the stairs?
Riz: I'm a little bruised, but i think i'll be okay as long as NO ONE messes with me. i need a good laugh. when she said that, wheezy had bumped into stupid, into greasy, and into psycho, and into slimy. she then collapsed on the floor laughing, which made her hit her funny bone.
Riz: ( Giggling) Ow! my funny bone! She bursted out laughing again. the others just stared at her.
Wheezy: Somedays i just don't understand her humor.
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Post by Syrup on May 19, 2010 22:43:28 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Tsk, tsk. Boys, never understand them.
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Post by Mellow on May 19, 2010 23:15:25 GMT -5
Day 2 part 2
When they went outside tp play again, they first played frisbee toss. when it was riz's turn to throw, she threw it to stupid, but he when he turned and opened his mouth, the frisbee flew in his mouth. he did a confused-happy smile with it in his mouth. the other's bursted out laughing, and smart guy had slapped the other weasels to make them stop while riz went to aid stupid.
Riz: Sorry about that, stupid. are you ok?
Stupid: ( spitting it out) Duh, yes. i'm ok. it didn't hurt one bit. it's all right. it was a little accident. but it didn't taste good, i tell you that. she smiled. then, she saw something crawling up a powerline. she knew what it was.
Riz: There's that pesky bug that keeps getting into the strawberries. let's get him! Stupid, Greasy, Psycho, and Riz all climbed up on to the top of the powerline and saw the bug underneath a piece of glass. they hit the glass with their weapons, and at the same time, there was a sound that sounded like a gun shot, then the other's saw the 4 going up in the sky and falling down to the ground hard.
Greasy's hair stuck up straight.
Greasy: ( coughing) Caramba!
Riz's hair was frizzled at the ends and she was coughing smoke.
Riz:( Wheezing) HOLY
Psycho's fur was more stuck up than ever and his eye's were wide.
Psycho: (DIzzy) SMOKES! the caterpillar then crawled along the line, and every movement he made, he lit up. stupid looked fuzzier than ever. he saw the bug.
Stupid: (Sputtering) Duh, how he do that boss?, huh, how?,how? ,how? Smart Guy sighed. he helped up the other's and they went inside. and everytime riz touched something metal, she would get shocked, but it lasted only for 15 minutes anyway. that was a " shocking" day for them all.
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Post by Mellow on May 21, 2010 21:12:42 GMT -5
Day 3
The next day, all of them decided to go camping in the woods. when they got there, Riz and Psycho were pitchig the tent, while Greasy tried to start a fire, and the other's went to find something to eat. while greasy was rubbing two sticks together, he didn't see a car pull up and two red high-heels stepped out of the jeep. the woman, who was a ranger, who had black hair with red on the ends, walked up to him.
Ranger: Need any help, little camper?
Greasy: Of course not. I'm a regular pioneer (looking up quickly at her) maaaaannn oh man. Talk about babes in the woods.
Riz and psycho were watching him.
Riz: ( Giggling) I'd like to see him win.
Psycho:(Giggling) Me too.
Ranger: (Playing with his hair) I must say, you do look like you know what your doing. he giggled as she was walking back to her jeep.
Ranger: Have a nice day. And remember, only YOU can prevent forest fires. At this point, he was rubbing the sticks fast, and was going red all over quickly, and was panting like a dog. When he turned bright red, the stick exploded, and when the smoke cleared, he was charcoal black. riz and psycho collapsed laughing.
Riz: The ladies-man does it again.
Psycho: You got that right, sister. Greasy didn't say anything to them. when the other's returned, they brought berries, honey, and hotdogs. it was a good lunch. 15 minutes later, Riz, Wheezy, Psycho, Smart Guy, and Stupid went to go rafting.
Riz: Ya sure you wanna stay here?
Greasy: Ci. we get sea sick real easily.
Riz: Suit yourself. so the 5 of them put on vest's and started paddling.it was calm for 10 minutes.
Riz; Don't worry guys, things are gonna pick up once we round the ben.
Psycho:IWe can hardly wait. they paddled to the right, but that was the wrong way. the water's were very rough.
Psycho: Wheeeee!!!
Stupid: Duh Too fast, Too FAST!
Wheezy: Hey! We're goin down the wrong way!
Riz: oops!
Smart Guy: Let's turn back now while we have the chance! they all started paddling faster. wheezy looked at riz.
Wheezy: I thought you said YOU were trained at this stuff!!! he was interupted by a wave which splashed him out the raft along with Smart Guy.
Both: AGHHHHH!!
Riz: FIND A ROCK AND CLING TO IT! WE'LL COME BACK AND GET YOU IN A WHILE!! they each found a rock and sat on it.
While the other three were paddling for their lives. then stupid spoke up.
Stupid: Duh hey look a waterfall......
All: WATERFALL?!
Psycho: PADDLE BACKWARDS!, PADDLE BACKWARDS!!!!!
Riz: ABANDON SHIP!
Stupid: Duh, ABANDON TO WHERE?!just then, riz and psycho jumped out and grabbed two rocks, but stupid jumped straight up above the falls and stood still for a few seconds. he gulped and started falling.
Riz: ARE YOU OKAY?!!! they both saw him sitting on a rock completely unharmed.
Stupid: duh, yeah i'm all right.luckly riz had some rope on her and dropped it to stupid. he then grabbed it and the two pulled him up sucessfully. they then went get wheezy and smart guy. she threw the rope out to them and both grabbed it and was pulled back safely to land. they all went back to their rest area. the others saw them.
Greasy; Ummm...
Riz: Please don't ask! An hour later,they went to go swimming in the lake. while they were swimming, riz suddendly went under for one second, when she came back up, her top was missing. she went under until it reached the top of her neck, and she covered her chest with her arms.
Riz: Oh COME ON!!!! Why does this keep happening to me EVERYWHERE we go?! she looked at the other's when she noticed somebody was missing. she knew then who did it.
Riz: GREASY!!!! I'm gonna kill him. he then came back up, waving her black top around.
Greasy: Hey guys? he then started laughing. Did you see the look on her face? that was too classic! but he didn't know that she was right there. the other's stared at him.
Greasy: What? ( he then knew what they were staring at) she's right behind me isn't she?
Psycho: ( Giggling) Yep. Stupid move grease, stupid move. She then grabbed her top from him and went underwater to put it back on. when she rose back up, she grabbed greasy by his arm and swung him fast and then let go of him which caused him to land on the ground with a loud bang.
Greasy: Ok, i deserved that. she laughed at his misery. now he knew how she felt. later on in the nightime, they all fell fast asleep, without a worry in their heads. when smart guy woke up, he saw riz who was hugging up to wheezy on his chest. he snickered. he then poked wheezy.
Smart guy: Hey Wheezy, Look down on your shirt. i think you'll be surprised. when he did, he started chuckling.
Wheezy: This is just too funny. I didn't not expect this to happen. Let's see her reaction. he then saw her eye's blinking and looked at her smirking.
Wheezy: Morning, princess. she looked slowy up with wide, freaked-out eyes at who it was.
Riz: (Getting off of him) You were cuddling to me!
Wheezy: ( Snickering) Correction, you were hugged up to me. how did you do it?
Riz: Well, how should i know? i probably moved in my sleep. she was blushing like a whole sack full of beets. they all packed up their stuff and drove off back home. riz was between smart guy and stupid. she leaned over to smart guy.
Riz: ( whispering) Just for the record, he was cuddling to me. he snickered and shook his head yes. she leaned back in her spot and sighed.
Riz: ( thinking to herself) Why oh why do i have to get all the luck for?!
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Post by Syrup on May 22, 2010 1:25:00 GMT -5
Jessica. Nice chapters.
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Post by psychojr on May 22, 2010 9:35:56 GMT -5
nice good work nice chapter
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Post by Mellow on May 22, 2010 22:17:33 GMT -5
Day 4
When they all woke up and ate breakfast, they all decided to do some cleaning around the house. slimy and flasher went to do yard work, wheezy and psycho would do the kitchen, smart guy and stupid clean the living room, while greasy and riz would do the laundry. while outside, slimy was watering the plants.
Slimy: hey flasher cut on the hose for me, will ya, buddy?
Flasher: With pleasure. he cut the hose on high, but slimy didn't know that his foot was on the hose. when he steeped off it while trying to figure out what was going on, he and the hose were up in the air.
Slimy; GET ME DOOOOOWNNN!!! flasher just walked away from him, pretending he didn't see a thing. he job was mowing the lawn. he was mowing the lawn when he stepped on a sharp rock and let go of the mower. he then saw it coming towards him. he ran all over the place while it was chasing him.
Flasher: I hate lawn mowers.
while inside, wheezy was busy scrubbing the stove when he got bumped into the oven. the door closed, and he began to feel hot. it turns out that psycho was dancing around and he didn't notice him and accidentally shoved him into the oven, closing the door, and cutting it on high. and what he also didn't notice was he knocked some slippert soap on the floor while mopping. suddently, the oven door bursted opened and wheezy was panicking because his back was on fire. at the sametime he and psycho slipped in the soap and went in different directions. wheezy landed in the sink full of dishes and water, while psycho slid and his finger went into a wall socket. he lit up and flashed like a neon sign. he finally stopped flashing and looked stunned and was smoking with his fur blackened and fluffed. wheezy was still smoking from putting his back out in the sink. he then looked at psycho angrly.
Wheezy: You little cleaning conehead!! you almost baked me a CRISP!!!! he then looked at him.
Psycho: Oh DO shut up wheezy!!! At least you're not the one with electricity coming off your fur. they then continued cleaning silently.
While in the laundry room, greasy and riz were doing laundry. riz was just finishing throwing clothes in the dryer when greasy started laughing. he held up one of her bra's and started snickering. riz was starting to think that she doing laundry with him was something she would regret doing again. she slapped greasy in his face and he hit the floor so hard, it caused a bottle of extra hot chili to land in his mouth and he began drinking it. he began to go red all over, and steam came out in many directions, and he was making a high whistling sound that was similar to a kettle on the stove. he then ran into the kitchen and drank a large pitcher of water and the redness began to fade. riz was laughing so hard, that she fell in the dryer and the door closed on her and the dryer started spinning fast. greasy came back in the room and saw that she wasn't there. after 10 minutes of looking, he gave up and opened the dryer and then riz popped out and was trying her best to regain her balance. she looked pale-green in the face and was very,very dizzy. greasy led her to the bathroom and left her there.
Riz: This is not my day.
While in the living room, smart guy and stupid were cleaning up around collections of things. while smart guy was dusting, a book fell on his foothe backed up to the wall in pain so hard, a bunch of bowling balls fell off a shelf and hit stupid on the head many times. one of the balls bounced off his belly and hit a plank of wood which had a collection of switchblades on it. the blades were flying toward smart guy. he backed up against the wall and all of them missed him. when he went to move, two more came at him. one missed his head while the last one went between his legs. he saw it and gulped nervously. stupid was still seeing tweeting birds. slimy and flasher then came in. slimy was soaking wet while flasher's jacket and fur were torn slightly. wheezy and psycho came in the room looking like their backs were on a BBQ grill. greasy was still panting and drinking water, while riz came in and still looked pale-green in the face and was holding on to a doorway. stupid had a long bump on his head while smart guy's foot was blinking red and swelling, and was shaking.
Smart Guy: Well this was just peachy.
Riz: I know what you mean. She then began to gag and ran to the bathroom.
Greasy: We all need a vacation.
Slimy: You'd better believe it, grease.
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Post by Syrup on May 23, 2010 0:37:21 GMT -5
This is why I love toons. Nice chapter.
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Post by Mellow on May 23, 2010 1:39:31 GMT -5
Day 5
they all took gresy's advice and went to a amusment park. Psycho had won a pet goldfish in a ring-tossing game and was dancing around when his fish landed into a shooting range.
Psycho: oh my gosh! Hold your fire, Hold your FIRE! the fish made it out safely psycho ran in the middle of the range.
Psycho: That was a close one. Okay fella's, FIRE AWAY! he then regretted saying that cause the shooters pointed their guns at him and blasted him full of holes. he crawled out coughing smoke, full of holes, and carrying his fish. Stupid had bought a baloon for wheezy to repay him for tieing his shoes. wheezy just walked off.
Wheezy: ( to himself) I get the same joke from him everytime i tie his shoes. his driving me insane.
Riz: Wheezy, Wheezy. you forgot something. she handed the baloon to him. he stared at it and took his cigarette and stuck it to it, which made it pop. riz yelped and jumped up. wheezy began to laugh.
Wheezy:(chuckling) What's the matter, toots? Afraid of a little....Pop?! riz rolled her eyes and walked off. After 5 minutes of walking they found a game they could all enjoy. it was a pie-throwing game where you had to throw a pie at someone and hit them in their face. all 8 grabbed 8 pies and threw it at someone and they alll made it. after that they got on the ferris wheel. Stupid was whimpering while wheezy just ignored him, greasy was spying for girls while smart guy meditaded, slimy and flasher were playing i spy, and riz and psycho just stared at the clouds in the sky. as they were getting off, there were fast moving gears under the ride. just as psycho was getting off he lost his balance and fell in the gears. he was halfway pulled in when he grabbed a seat to hold on to.
Psycho:YYYYAGHHH!!!!! riz and the other's saw him. they stopped it and pulled him out. after 5 minutes of giving him a break,they went on a rollercoaster. Wheezy and riz were at the front, smart guy and psycho were second, greasy and stupid were third, and slimy and flasher were last. as they were going up hill, stupid whimpered, and wheezy was slowly getting a worried-scared look on his face.
Wheezy: I'm gonna re...gret (Going down fast) THIIIIISSS. Riz and the other's screamed in fear and excitment, while wheezy had fear in his eye's, as they were going up a second hill, riz saw his nervous look and grabbed his hand to calm him down. he looked at her.
Wheezy: thank you(Going down again) RIIIIZZZZ! they went sideways, upsidedown, and other ways. Then there came the dip, which was a deep drop. they all gulped nervously, then they were dropped.just as they were turning sideway's, riz suddendly was thrown out of her seat and was holding onto the bar.
Riz: HELP MEEE! It kept spinning faster and faster. the other's panicked.
Wheezy: GRAB MY HAND! she grabbed his hand and was pulled back into the seat she was in. when they got off 3 minutes later, she went to hug wheezy for saving her. he blushed a little, but was happy.
Riz: I think we'll skip the rollercoaster's next time.
Wheezy: Yep.
Psycho: You'd better believe it.
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Post by Mellow on May 23, 2010 2:25:22 GMT -5
Day 6
The next day, they were all making an apple pie, but with everyone's help. all they needed really was apple's. riz had bought 20 no-fruits with the money she earned from her job. she, wheezy, stupid, and psycho were gonna whack them until they were nothing but apples.
Riz: Ready, Get set......( pulling the rope to activate them) GO! they all began whacking them and they came up apple's. psycho was whacking when he stopped.
Psycho: Uhhhh...
Wheezy: Oh my golly, What the heck is that, riz? the thing jumped up and hissed at the four people.
Riz, Stupid, Wheezy, Psycho: AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! the creature squirted some yellow liquid from it mouth seven times and jumped on stupids face and stuck there.
Stupid:(muffled) Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.Riz tried hitting it off, but it didn't work.
Stupid: ( Trying to pull it off) Uhhhhhhh.Elp meeee,ELP! He was freaking out when he finally pulled off and it flung into a dark corner behind two crates. Stupid returned gasping for breath with wide eye's and was releived. they heard the creature scream.
Riz: I think we have enough apple's
Wheezy: Ditto.
Psycho: Yep.
Stpid: Yes, i agree with her. those things are scary. they continued with the recipe, and after 20 minutes of baking, everyone went outside to eat. they saw a bunch of blue birds arguing on a line only to be stopped by a loud call. they all saw a big blue bird.
Smart Guy: That's one big bird. the other birds started to puff out their feather's in a goofy way and the birds were laughing until the same call was heard. they looked at the bird again, and they saw the little one's move farther down. the big one flew over and sat down in the middle, and when it sat down, the line was drooping, causing the liitle birds to go down farther. they all started chirping angrly at the big bird. one of them pecked it in it's side.
Big Blue Bird: ( in pain and surprise) AAAGH! the bird turned upside down, and the birds were even angrier. one at the end had pecked the big one's toe and felt it go loose. the two birds that were at it's feet were smiling a devious smile. they both started pecking at its feet. a bird beside them started making the other's cheer a chant.
Bird: eh oh, eh oh(Others joining in) haw,haw,haw,haw.
Even the big one cheered.
Big One:Caw,caw caw caw.
Riz just fell off of the steps laughing at their chant. when they came to the last one, the bird who made the other's cheer looked down with wide eye's. he saw what might happen. he turned to the one beside him.
Smart Guy: Do ya think we should tell em?
Riz: Nah. I think that one already figured it out.
Bird: Eh eh eh, eh EH!! he used his feather to point down at the ground. the other's looked down and saw what he meant. they started calling, panicking the two to stop. two birds beside them hit their sides and and made them look down. they saw the ground with wide eye's and was about to chirp smething when they were all shot up in the air.
Riz just stared at what happened. they all went inside before it got funny.
Riz: that was a pretty, cute and funny chant they did out there.
Smart Guy: Talk about a crazy day again.
Riz: Not to worry. it should be better by tomrrow. You'll see. he smiled. riz was a somewhat person who could add a positive side to almost anything, and it would work sometimes. this day was just out of the ordinary for them.
A little hint about the next day. It gets serious. just giving you all a clue.
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Post by Mellow on May 23, 2010 3:00:10 GMT -5
Day 7 part 1
Riz was getting ready for her job. she worked at a local nightclub in the middle of town. she ran out and was wearing a fushia shirt that had one strap on het left side, black skirt, turquiouse high-heels, her black leather jacket, and black bowler cap with a hot pink stripe on top. she invited the toon patrol over to eat there. they said they would meet her there.
Riz: See ya there guys.
Greasy: Bye.
Riz( sticking her thumb out) Hey Benny.
Benny: you call a cab or what/ where to?
Riz: To that nightclub that opened up a couple monthes back. The Classy Club.
Benny: No prblem. they drove off to the middle of town to the club.
Riz: Thanks benny.
Benny: No problem, Riz. he then drove off and she ran inside to change into her uniform. the toon patrol arrived moments later and walked in. they sat at a table and waited on her. she then came over to them. she was wearing a glittery strapless blue bikini top with a matching bottom, a hair-band with 5 peakcock feather's on it, a diamond neckalece, and hoop earrings. when they saw her, smart guy's jaw dropped, psycho's tongue hung out his mouth staring at her appearence, Wheezy, Greasy, and Stupid couldn't help but whistile at her.
Stupid: Hee hee heh heh.. your such a purty peakcock, riz. she blushed at what he said.
Riz: Thanks stupid, but i'm not a bird, i'm a girl from Las Vegas. ya see, my boss will put a theme for what we will where and this was my theme. Las Vegas. And guys, please stop staring at me like that.
All: Sorry.
Greasy: Makes sense. She got their orders written down and went to the kitchen. as she was walking by , her boss came up to her.
Boss: You will perform tonight, dear. You'll sing that song by jessica rabbit.
Riz: Ok, just let me tell my friends. she told them.
Riz: And if you see me charm anyone, that's the way i get paid extra. makes sense kinda, right?
Smart Guy: makes perfect sense. she ran off to get ready. when she got done after 5 minutes, she waited by the curtain. as she was, there was a table where 5 teenage weasels sat at. They were all 13 in human years, each of them wore leather jackets with the letter of their names sewn on their left side, they all had dark brown fur, expect for one who had black fur, all had spikey hair, expect for the one who had slick black hair with red in it. when it was time for the next act, three of them went near the stage to see the girl, while the black one whose name was flare was still sitting down in his seat. he then looked over at one of the weasels, whose name was michael, and saw him squirting men's perfume all over him self. he was talking to his friend, gabby, who worked at the club.
Flare: what's with all the boys?
Gabby: No of the boys ever miss a night when the girl of the toon patrol performs.
Flare: Got a thing for a weasel girl, huh? when everyone got quiet, a spotlight hit the curtain.
Riz: (Singing) " You had plenty money nineteen twenty-two..... she stepped from behind the curtain, wearing a backless and strapless glittery purple dress with a long split on the left side, long black gloves, diamond necklace, and purple pumps. there were whistles, wolfcalls, and shouts from the boys. Flare stared at her with wide eye's and his mouth open.
Riz: " You let other women make a fool of you.. Why don't ya do right.. like some other men.. do.... she walked up to one of the weasel boys whose name was jason. he stared at her leg."Get outta here..(kicking him into his seat gently) get me some money too....." You're sittin' down and wonderin' what it's all about, if you ain't got no money they will put you out. why don't ya do right... like some other men do.... she came up to a second weasel who was standing at her. his name was rick. "Get outta here, ( Pushing him back) Get me some money too.....
Flare: (Leaning over to gabby) She lives with the toon patrol?
Gabby: Yeah. she was an orphan and they took her in. she's a lucky girl to be alive. she closed his mouth up and walked away. riz was now walking down the walkway of the stage.
Riz: (Walking) Now if you had prepared twenty years ago, you wouldn't be a-wanderin' now from door to door. a third weasel whose name was clyde stood up as she was passing by. " why don't ya do right....( sticking her hand on his face and pushing him back into his seat) like some other men do..... She now was walking off the walkway when michael grabbed her hand to help her down. she walked behind his chair.
Riz: (Tussling his hair) Get outta here.., get me some money too... she closed his mouth up and walked to where flare was. she sat down on his lap.
Riz: ( Calmly) Get outta here, get me some money too.... she leaned near his face. he went to kiss her, but was pushed back by her. she got off him and sat on the stage. " Why don't ya do right...... she turned over to flare. "Like some other men...... she grabbed him by his jacket collar and pulled him near her face. he gulped nervously while staring at her. " Do.......... she let go of him and walked to the stage with the curtains closing behind her. Everyone whistled, applauded, and cheered. flare just sat there with his eye's still wide and mouth open. he never felt a feeling like this before. he and his buddy's went back to their hideout.
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Post by Syrup on May 23, 2010 18:35:56 GMT -5
Nice chapters. Aha, wow, she must look hot to get them all interested.
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Post by psychojr on May 23, 2010 19:25:20 GMT -5
nice chapters
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